†Syck Intent† vs Wicked One
 

Battle Rules:
5 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
+100 Posts to Vote.
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~Ghost~

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Check in by: 03-25-05 at 11:49 AM

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â€-Syck Intentâ€- has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-24-05 03:09 PM.

*In the rules it sayz 5 lines. I meant to say 10. ~Ghost~

Wicked One has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-24-05 03:30 PM.

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~*Warm Up*~
-....{Crack} and kill... attackin' Wicked One and destroyin' wit verbal tactic assassin {skillz}....,
....{i'm} passin' pillz...to end his life...cuz after this battle his pride is hurt like angry pimps back slappin' {shieldz}....!-

~*End His Life*~
-....{sendin'} rhymes...aimed for his dome...answerin' his death wish in the knick of {tyme}....,
....{givin'} this fag holy scriptured lines...he don't do audio cuz you hear more cracking in his voice than bending {spines}!-

-....{i'm} a starving heathing...cut ya lungs wit scalpels...now there scarred an' hard fo' {breathin'}...,
....{no} more tyme fo' reasonin'....now i'm sendin' hard punches that hit ya screen...and leave ya Computa monitor {bleedin'}....!-

-....{sum} people call me crazi...but Wicked's weak rhymes are far from fazin' me...he's {lazy}....,
....{Besides} ya rhymes scheme is FUCKED...underveloped like Premie {babies}....!-

~*Finish Him*~
....{Syck} is real, flippin' drugs monday thru sunday, this fag Wicked One is sweeter than {HoN-Ay}....,
....{And} battlin' ain't ya thing...so put on ya cute lil' outfit, and go to BET to {"Rip The Runway"}....,

*Shieldz...like night shields...don't get it don't vote.
**When bones break they crack...imagine what the spine sounds like.
***Self-Explanitory.
****Premature babies. don't get it don't vote.
*****Rip The Runway is the modeling show for BET.

Voted For: Wicked One

Syck Intent...yo u gotta work on that structure cuz it is not that gud at all. the lines are too stretched which is fuckin up ure flow. u got gud vocab and shit and u can be creative wit gud personals but that structure is lettin u down. i think ure punches were gud, some hittin hard, others not but overall u were mediocre......6/10

Wicked One...ure structure is simple and shit which i like but u need to get ure lines more closer wit the same length and shit. ure vocab was aight, ure punches were there but like syck intent they weren't consistent. some were weak and some were gud. i think really u were mediocre to, both y'all were similar wit quality of punches, u just beat syck intent out on flow and structure.....6.5/10

plain and simple, both were inconsistent and need more elevation. especially u syck intent, cuz ure flow is off and if i can't get into the rhythm of a verse then it doesn't really stick wit me........work on that. wicked...work a little on gettin ure bars the same length and then try to elevate your punches yo!!!!!

Voted For: â€-Syck Intentâ€-

I vote for sick intent...self explanatory...better puchlines and wordplay...structure was off...

and the only other good line I liked was selling 2 50 cd's for a dollar...but better luck next time...

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Voted For: â€-Syck Intentâ€-

I was feelin both,but Im goin wit Syck on dis one.It seemed like he had more punches than Wicked.I seen where his punches were going.

Wicked-his verse was startin off good,but da end sorta got ta self glorification,nah mean.It was half-fire.

I liked dat 50 Cent joke,dat was nice.

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Voted For: Wicked One

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Voted For: Wicked One

i vote for wicked one

his shit just seemed to flow nicer, actually had decent content, this was a pretty weak battle, im not going to lie....i've seen better from wicked, SI, never seen ya before but you gotta elevate alot...like that closer was the gayest line i've ever read on rapverse.......and why the fuck do you keep using so much of these { } ??? its herbishly gay man.......elevate.........wicked, you threw some decent punches, so im giving it to you.....

v/wicked one

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Voted For: Wicked One

Well

SICK INTENT

your verse was very hard to read with all those marks and Spaces and sloppy structure man ..... Thats not what you want when your battling you should be doin Two bars then a space or Jus typing all str8 down two bars Aligned or smethin like that but yo verse was still Not hitting or connecting you jus came with some basic threats which was not all that you need .....So im jus sayin i hope that you elevate ......But yet i dont think that you took this battle
Sorry

Wicked One

Aii You Had a Good example of how a verse should be which is a nice opener and then Some Good bars in between then giving it to the openent hard at the end so That was a good example of how a verse should be far as your punchz go my Fav one was the one before the last Very Original man keep up the good work

PLEASE!!!!

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Voted For: Wicked One

holy shit LMAO..wtf happend to 5 lines??
first of all syck intent u got to calm down wit all dat **)(_--0 shit....that makes ur verse like it make u not want to read that shit...
wicked-that 50 cent shit was a lil funny i might have to bite dat lol...wicked u kept ur verse nice simple complex.....ur vocab was there.....ur punches hit good..overall good verse..syck intent u have da ability to have a dope verse but ur structure was FUCKED UP...you got to make it legible for the reader not for ya-self u got to get us to like it..dont believe dat bullshit about if u like it dats all dat matters...who eva u tryin 2 impress u got to do it for..hope that helps you out in future battles....good battle ~1~