The Black Plague vs final
 

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The Black Plague has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-24-05 07:13 PM.

I’l drop you so easy leave ya’ll thinking “wheres the beef” like commercials*
Kid u must me masochistic since u battled me, cuz u askin me to hurt you**
If good hygiene meant good rhymes, you would only be showerin once a week
Only difference between you and a fridge is it don’t fart when u pull out the meat
Takin this win wasn’t much of a feat, so I wont brag about it after I beat you
Honestly, you were through before you could say “hi plague, nice to meet you”
You must be a constipated ass fart, cuz you claimin “you can’t pass me”***
hop off 9th’d dick, u aint shit.. To him, u just a Mexican piece of ass meat



*While back Wendy's did commercials, and that old lady says "wheres the beef"
**Masochists are people who like to hurt themselves
***Siggy says "final- you can't pass me"

final has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-25-05 11:36 AM.

plagues rhymes aint complex, theyre simplistic...and personally
i think his crew initials stand for Lacking All Diversity
hes not set out to be a rapper, thats no lie its a known fact
title says he speaks the truth so his whole verse should say "IM WACK"
and does he like girls? nah...plague is not what he seems
invitin ya boy to play musical chairs...with 1 seat
and he might be 18...but he hasnt gone through as much as he should
like getting respect from others...or beating someone good

Voted For: final

pretty easy battle to call

Black Plague, honestly i thought ure verse was weak and thats it. ure opener was decent and then u fell off through the rest of the verse. i mean ure constantly talkin about ass and farts, u need to stop that shit yo. and ure rhymin was basic, couple of weak multies and the personals were not gud either, they mainly callin him a fart and tlkin about ass again. overall really weak from u, i expected better - 4/10

final, ure shit was not much better, clearly neither of u was tryin in this battle. ure rhymin was basic to but at least u didnt spend all ure time tlkin about ass. personals were better, nice opener and i liked the play off of his crew initials. next bar was pretty gud, i liked the I'M WACK shit!!!! gay shit is played, but the musical chairs line got me laughin so u got away wit dat. the closer was aight, cud've been better but overall ure verse was better. - 6/10

overall both was weak, i mean both came consistent, final was consistent with his punches, all fairly average, and black plague was just consistent in tlkin about ass. that is why i think final took this battle hands down.

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Voted For: The Black Plague

The Black Plague......
I’l drop you so easy leave ya’ll thinking “wheres the beef” like commercials*
Kid u must me masochistic since u battled me, cuz u askin me to hurt you**
ehh decent opener...4/10

If good hygiene meant good rhymes, you would only be showerin once a week
Only difference between you and a fridge is it don’t fart when u pull out the meat
lol..i laughed when i read this...8/10 for humor

Takin this win wasn’t much of a feat, so I wont brag about it after I beat you
Honestly, you were through before you could say “hi plague, nice to meet you”
ehh decent...4/10

You must be a constipated ass fart, cuz you claimin “you can’t pass me”***
hop off 9th’d dick, u aint shit.. To him, u just a Mexican piece of ass meat
liked the set up...punch was ok....5/10

overall........21/40

Final.........
plagues rhymes aint complex, theyre simplistic...and personally
i think his crew initials stand for Lacking All Diversity
decent personal here...5/10

hes not set out to be a rapper, thats no lie its a known fact
title says he speaks the truth so his whole verse should say "IM WACK"
nice punch here...6/10

and does he like girls? nah...plague is not what he seems
invitin ya boy to play musical chairs...with 1 seat
decent.....5/10

and he might be 18...but he hasnt gone through as much as he should
like getting respect from others...or beating someone good
ehh again decent..i think you could have came with a stronger closing...4/10

overall....20/40

this was a good battle...but i believe plague got it...the humor in that one punch is what go it for him in my opinion...honestly this battle could go either way...i think final stayed more consistent with his verse...plague you didnt come as dope as a couple of the battles ive seen you in before...but i believe its still enough to get you this win...but like i said...this will prolly be a 4-5 battle...no telling who will win...i give it to plague for humor factore...about even structure...wordplay - there wasnt a whole lot from either one...punches from both sides were good...final may have came with the more consistent punches...but the one or 2 of plagues edged finals best in my opinion...plague please RTF in my battle against Flow Intelligent.....thanks...

This was feedback posted for The Black Plague
 

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This was feedback posted for final
 

final took this one in my category. i dont know if i can vote on this or not. i might be blacklisted

oops. I meant to click vote.
well, i'll go get that changed. I voted for final, becuase I felt you came harder in personals that turned into good diss punches and mettas. you verse was nice. structure was a lil on and off, and flow was also, but overall, i was feelin yo verse. i think you should work on consistency. you need just a lil bit harder punches in ur next one. yo opener was nice. good wordplay, and vocab, and i think you took this one.
TBP-yo had a nice verse, but to be honest, i wasnt feeling it. i think yo tried to come too hard, n tried too hard to make us feel what wasnt there. yo gota meat us half wit tha punches if you dont meet us at all. ur vocab was igt, just a lil rusty. if masochistic means that you like yo hurt YOURSELF, then why would he be asking for you to hurt him? shit didnt land right. i think you were on the right page wit that, you just found a brick wall, and tried to barge thru it, but it didnt work. elevate on that. ur structure was on point, til near tha end, it started to lack. i think you wouldve easily had took this battle if you wouldnt have had those minor fuck ups effect you.
overall-not a close battle to me. i had to give this to final, cause i was feelin his drop way more....


v/final

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Voted For: The Black Plague

plagues rhymes aint complex, theyre simplistic...and personally
i think his crew initials stand for Lacking All Diversity
weak punch
hes not set out to be a rapper, thats no lie its a known fact
title says he speaks the truth so his whole verse should say "IM WACK"
decent
and does he like girls? nah...plague is not what he seems
invitin ya boy to play musical chairs...with 1 seat
wack
and he might be 18...but he hasnt gone through as much as he should
like getting respect from others...or beating someone good
…nope, weak punch here



I’l drop you so easy leave ya’ll thinking “wheres the beef” like commercials
Kid u must me masochistic since u battled me, cuz u askin me to hurt you
decent
If good hygiene meant good rhymes, you would only be showerin once a week
Only difference between you and a fridge is it don’t fart when u pull out the meat
weak punch here
Takin this win wasn’t much of a feat, so I wont brag about it after I beat you
Honestly, you were through before you could say “hi plague, nice to meet you”
pretty decent
You must be a constipated ass fart, cuz you claimin “you can’t pass me”
hop off 9th’d dick, u aint shit.. To him, u just a Mexican piece of ass meat
don’t know if he is Mexican, kinda get this line, it was aight tho…

compose – you had an aight drop, almost weak punches throughout the whole
thing tho…ur structure was aight & the vocab was okay too, should’ve added some
personas in there, & harder punches, & you prolly would’ve won…

tbp – you had an aight drop too, some punches weren’t as hard as I thought they
would be…your vocab was good, structure was aight here, could’ve added more
personas in there, not your best battle, seen better, but overall you came decent

This was feedback posted for final
 

damn i just noticed i can't vote..it was close but compose edged it out a lil...imma leave feed anyhow.....
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I’l drop you so easy leave ya’ll thinking “wheres the beef” like commercials*
Kid u must me masochistic since u battled me, cuz u askin me to hurt you**
^^decent opener...weak punch though
If good hygiene meant good rhymes, you would only be showerin once a week
Only difference between you and a fridge is it don’t fart when u pull out the meat
^^rofl...funny shit(srry fam)
Takin this win wasn’t much of a feat, so I wont brag about it after I beat you
Honestly, you were through before you could say “hi plague, nice to meet you”
^^nah, more filler then anything
You must be a constipated ass fart, cuz you claimin “you can’t pass me”***
hop off 9th’d dick, u aint shit.. To him, u just a Mexican piece of ass meat
^^good concept in ya first line but its worded like your dissin yaself...2nd line ruined it....
you did have a funny ass bar though...decent plague
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plagues rhymes aint complex, theyre simplistic...and personally
i think his crew initials stand for Lacking All Diversity
^^i dont know what crew hes in...but decent
hes not set out to be a rapper, thats no lie its a known fact
title says he speaks the truth so his whole verse should say "IM WACK"
^^nice....feeling it
and does he like girls? nah...plague is not what he seems
invitin ya boy to play musical chairs...with 1 seat
^^rofl......k, that ties your gay jokes up...lol
and he might be 18...but he hasnt gone through as much as he should
like getting respect from others...or beating someone good
^^decent closer.....
just more consistent final/compose...
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not voting just feedback...RTF IN THE SIG

Skriptz... U want me to RTF?? If u got any open battles jus drop a link

Voted For: The Black Plague

This was a pretty weak battle but black took this one

Black
I’l drop you so easy leave ya’ll thinking “wheres the beef” like commercials*
Kid u must me masochistic since u battled me, cuz u askin me to hurt you**
Decent opener , could have been worded better
If good hygiene meant good rhymes, you would only be showerin once a week
Only difference between you and a fridge is it don’t fart when u pull out the meat
Not feeling this
Takin this win wasn’t much of a feat, so I wont brag about it after I beat you
Honestly, you were through before you could say “hi plague, nice to meet you”
Decent
You must be a constipated ass fart, cuz you claimin “you can’t pass me”***
hop off 9th’d dick, u aint shit.. To him, u just a Mexican piece of ass meat
He's Mexican? word..lol... decent closer

Compose
plagues rhymes aint complex, theyre simplistic...and personally
i think his crew initials stand for Lacking All Diversity
Nice opener
hes not set out to be a rapper, thats no lie its a known fact
title says he speaks the truth so his whole verse should say "IM WACK"
Not feeling this one , could have been alot better
and does he like girls? nah...plague is not what he seems
invitin ya boy to play musical chairs...with 1 seat
Decent
and he might be 18...but he hasnt gone through as much as he should
like getting respect from others...or beating someone good
Could have been better,okay


overall- this was a close battle but imahave to hand this one to black ,he came alittle harder to me , and used some okay personals , final just came alittle to weak, and thats why he lost ..

vote- Black

Aiite uppin this ya'll.. Drop some votes and i'll return the favor

^yea rtf for me...since my battles are gettin slept on

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Voted For: The Black Plague

v/ TBP

It was a close battle but honestly plague came through with punches. punches win battles, and plague had better harder ones. compose's was funnier, and had meta's but you need to have multis personals punches, flow, and similies to win a battle and tbp was better in these catergories. good battle no hate.

Voted For: final

Compose:

plagues rhymes aint complex, theyre simplistic...and personally
i think his crew initials stand for Lacking All Diversity
^^good bar nice personal 7/10
hes not set out to be a rapper, thats no lie its a known fact
title says he speaks the truth so his whole verse should say "IM WACK"
^^another good bar 6/10
and does he like girls? nah...plague is not what he seems
invitin ya boy to play musical chairs...with 1 seat
^^ fire bar real original 10/10
and he might be 18...but he hasnt gone through as much as he should
like getting respect from others...or beating someone good
^^ehh ok 4/10

overall: 27/40 (68%)

TBP:

I’l drop you so easy leave ya’ll thinking “wheres the beef” like commercials*
Kid u must me masochistic since u battled me, cuz u askin me to hurt you**
^^good metas wack punches 5/10
If good hygiene meant good rhymes, you would only be showerin once a week
Only difference between you and a fridge is it don’t fart when u pull out the meat
^^ lmao good bar 8/10
Takin this win wasn’t much of a feat, so I wont brag about it after I beat you
Honestly, you were through before you could say “hi plague, nice to meet you”
^^no 3/10
You must be a constipated ass fart, cuz you claimin “you can’t pass me”***
hop off 9th’d dick, u aint shit.. To him, u just a Mexican piece of ass meat
^^whats with all this talk of meat ? 4/10

overall: 22/40 (55%)

Vote: Compose

Aiite upppin thanks for the votes

Voted For: The Black Plague

aight battle but final has came harder b4

compose-seems like your verse jsut didnt have anything really that good in it...the only punches that came close to hitting were the 2nd and 4th lines...coodve improved on tons of stuff, like multies, punches, werdplay, opener, closer, and vocab...3/10

TBP-loved your verse... my favorite line was the one bout farting after takin the meat out, that was nice...you also had alright vocab...the only things i didnt like about your verse was that they coodve had more multies and9 it also seemed like it got worse as the end of it approached...nice verse though...6/10

v/ the black plague

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