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Dejur vs Zions Desciple *Hot Shit*
30 bar max....
No Crew voting... First to 4 votes wins...3-0 is tko... Lets all hop off tha dicksaddle...and have a nice smooth ride...... |
Verses due.....by 12 p.m......Tonight....Rapbattles Time......
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checkin in ...I'll post later..I'm busy
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you takin to long Zion so i'll spit first:
Round 1: You should teach at tha Circus,you so wack, you got somethin to show-Clowns//I'm on ur elevator of success,but you'll never elevate, so ,~Its about to go Down~//I'm Heavyweight, Ur ~four~ pounds.....with ~three~ Bars....given your ~two~ cents// well ~one~ more word out of you,No ones Buyin, like Green-Cars with Blue-Tents// WTF?? I'm L.M.A.O when I catch-you//Cuz ur wack bars got everyone here L'in.O.L at-you//.........l.m.f.a.o see My word play is Perfect to dislay-on-Herbs// given a hand job to wordsworth is Tha only way you'll ever play-with-words//I display more action than Ad-verbs//and serve,Zion becuz he WACK.......//I'm servin it raw,Zion gets mad and says"Take it Back"//......but its to late, so he takes his meal//Its so raw he ~Throws up~..... Well now atleast, your spitten somethin thats ~Ill~//........ You gonna Pay for misrepresentin~Zion~,without a flow thats-tyte//~BoB Marley~?? your more like BoB Barker...cuz U gonna Pay..Tha Price...its write(right)//........ Beef??f*ck i'll play tha Iron-chef//you say"I-am-Tha-best"//but couldnt hold up, if u had iron-flesh// Count me out?? not even if Albert Einstein was tha ref//and your Girl's tired of Wack..So she stay I.M'en-me-to-death// *aiight let me take a deep breath* ~Zion~ coulnt shine even if u ate 100 watt lights//Coulnt ~Punchlines~ even if your gloves had pin-stripes//Couldnt be more aqward, if u went to a Pather rally, in all white//your a dude in a party thats full of dykes//you showed that you was *dick*....now all night....You cant find nothin good to ~bite~// How dare you try to Battle against these 25 bars of raw//You know u aint right...I see your style as more of a southpaw/// aiight thats 25 bars...oyea a southpaw is a left handed boxer fo those who dont know boxing uppin for Zion..remember there due by 12 |
yo DeJureThaRaw
i was feeling that post.... i will vote once that other guy drops but shit urs will be hard to beat.. one luv |
MEDIC!!MEDIC!! this kid needs assistance and medical attention!!/
I've ripped thru his verse with PERSISTENCE and legible INFLICTIONS!!/ Causing him to fold in submission like loose leafs in sleeper holds/ So u'll never be exposed like weed the way i keep ya closed/ Beat the PRO? I'll have u seeing more rings than a pack of racoons/ only time you coming with heat is blowing hot air in a bag of balloons/ wrapped in cocoons, u still wouldnt deveelop with skills and majestics/ U'll catch more flutters in your stomach reading this verse than butterflies digested/ I've had more hassles with my dick in the event of trying to CARESS IT!!!/ You're pathetic, adn there's no safeguards from me even if over protected/ Should i continue?..(background)HELL fuckING YEAH!!.. (Background fan) Dejur couldnt pump fake even if he played basketball w/ a 12 guage/Zions got too much punches that would REARRANGE DA fuck out of this G's rib cage.. (Another Fan) Obey Zion's sovereignty or watch as ya level of poverty drops/You can find Dejur's verse next to the "Small Pecker Condoms" at novelty shops... (Crowd:..HAHHAHAHA..) Ahem Ahem(ick...*pulls out piece of Dejur's moms pubic hair from teeth* I flip like a key/Lyrically..drug dealers tell me Im Dope/ U cant rock it alone...let alone mkae claims we're in the same boat/ Rappin with no soul theres no chance to revive ya speech/ Ya rhymes deceased, as your vital signs decrease / You'll be screaming like a HINDHU lyricists" i dont want no BEEF!"/ .Zion.rams javelins in ya abdomen ...so faggot stop ya Babbling Before I... mess up both ur FOCAL LENS like STEVEY WONDER n RAY CHARLES battleing..... Time to end it.... YOU FRAGILE-BOY...I'll disrespect you for -days...You wont get a vote/ Cause rapbattles.com has never showed support to GAYS/ You f**kING HOMO...I should record this ass beatin, and use it for my PROMO/ while you rockin Go=go's at yo=shows wit' lipstick and "soul=glow"/ I EXPOSeD YOU...killed your co*ky talk...and stupid NONSENSE/ And you comin out?...of What...a Booth-or-Closet? I'll Bruise you OFTEN..spittin Rude-n-Shocken....I'm Losin?...STOP IT/ Cause I'm bad for ya health, I"LL REROUTE YOUR VEINS AND MAKE YA HEART PUMP BLOOD BACK TO ITSELF...... |
aiight uppin for votes
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zions took this battle, had better flow and multis, other boy was hot to, hard to decide but i picked zions
YOU FRAGILE-BOY...I'll disrespect you for -days...You wont get a vote/ Cause rapbattles.com has never showed support to GAYS/ ^ hot, thats hot vote=zion |
DAMN ZION HE CAME OUT HELLA HARD BUT YOU STARTED TO FADE OFF AT THE END,,, DEJUR WAS MORE CONSISTANT WITH HIS SHIT... BUT THE BATTLE WAS ALMOST EVEN YET MY VOTE GOES TO DARAW..
VOTE=DejureThaRaw NICE BATTLE BY BOTH WORD UP FOR REAL...ONE |
lol aiight.....vote 1-1 UPPIN
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1-1 uppin
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votes?
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VOTE:deja
PUNCHES:deja FLOW:zion MULTIS:zion METAPHORES:deja FUN:deja I think u both came almost same marginal differences in both ya performances. but for me deja had some better lines "swallowing bulps" was damn funny lol. peace |
2-1 me uppin
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oh hows chino xl by the way?
you are him aren't you? its cool how you bit the stevie wonder concpet. fucking herb. |
Who da fuck is China?......gtfo out of here Adapt....*shakes head* "its sad to see whack emcees hatin on Ill ones...*
fuckn garbage ass nigga |
it was a close battle but i think raw took it by a close one. he had better punches but barely, u both had decent ones but wut lost it for zions was the background fans, wasnt feelin it at all, if he would have had suttin else in there he might have won.
You should teach at tha Circus,you so wack, you got somethin to show-Clowns//I'm on ur elevator of success,but you'll never elevate, so ,~Its about to go Down~// decent VOTE=DeJureThaRaw |
3-1 me uppin
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need votes
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just one more vote people
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ZION MOST DEFINITELY. i LOVED THE HINDU LINE ABOUT WANTING NO BEEF. LMAO!
HIS FLOW WAS BETTER AND WAS MORE CREATIVE WITH MORE SUBJECTS IF U KNOW WAHT I'M SAYIN. VOTE-ZION p.s, this ain't no hate vote. I love dejure! cu later bigboy ;) |
3-2...could zion be makin a comeback???/......UPPPIN
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Hope Not..lol...uppin for vote
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UPPPIN damn....
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ok here we go
both verses where ok de jure i didnt like them simple punches that you had around the frist bars and mid but overall you had some nice ones those zion i liked his verses betta cuz he had combined vocab, multies and punches in a well way wordplay=both vocab=zion punches=both flow=ziom my vote goes to zion need more explanation just holla back |
thas 3-3....uh oh
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Who Bit What? Well Thats Messed Up...Haha Adapt If You See This I Wanna Battle You...Hollar Homie
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Zion - Nise overall flow with good wordplay and strong metaphores.. Straight verse..
Dejure - Wordplay Off the Hook, Good Punches and Had a Strong beat. Overall - Hard Choice but Dejure took it |
Nah yo......Thats SHADY AS FUCK!!!......5 post?...all of tha sudden when its 3-3...a newbie comes in and votes for you...shady shady shady....if that vote counts im closin deleteing this whole thread.......vote count 3-3...
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strong beat??!!! this fool thinks he's reading beats lol.
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lmao.....MODS, i want an IP check on Dejuraw.....im not tryna hate playa but...thats just shady....and if i was in ur position i would be agitated too winnin 3-1....and all of the sudden its 3-3.......MODS if any of yall have time i want an IP check on Scope and Dejuraw......
votes stay 3-3 |
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