Tstorm vs Evolution
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 = KO

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 03-27-05 at 06:28 PM

Must drop verse in 25 minutes after check in.

Evolution has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-26-05 06:31 PM.

Tstorm has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-27-05 05:20 AM.

Theres no chance of this guy ever learning how to write..
educations lacking..but this guy cnt even tell black from white
Ya skills are lacking, and as a rap artist you a fake..
havin ya lines in the gutter..is the only time ull see "Grate"
crunchin numbers is the only time this guy seen a "nine"
He Rhymes like a "period"..coz he never comes on time
called evolution coz hell never reach what he needs to be..
if you feel the need for talent....then "Evolve" into me!

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Voted For: Tstorm

This battle was one sided tstorm took it cuz he actually had punches and personals evolution was just rambling on and your closer failed to do anything as where in the contrast Tstorm's closer sealed the deal and Knocked you out best line in the battle


called evolution coz hell never reach what he needs to be
^^^^^good personal right there^^^^^^^

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Voted For: Tstorm

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Tstorm
Theres no chance of this guy ever learning how to write..
educations lacking..but this guy cnt even tell black from white
......Nice Opener.......
Ya skills are lacking, and as a rap artist you a fake..
havin ya lines in the gutter..is the only time ull see "Grate"
..:: Nice ::..
crunchin numbers is the only time this guy seen a "nine"
He Rhymes like a "period"..coz he never comes on time
...::: Nuttin specail Couldve said somethin hotta LOL :::...
called evolution coz hell never reach what he needs to be..
if you feel the need for talent....then "Evolve" into me!
...::: Nice Closer :::...

...::: Overall :::...
You Did fairly Um all ya bars Had soem good contact except that one where you said somethin bout crunchin numbers?.....wasnt feelin that too much but overall you take this battle and you did good

Evolution
Look kid, don’t mean to hurt you, but you suck & quit rapping, too
Because once you drop your verse, RV will be laughing at you
..:: Nope, Lets Try agian ::..
Your known for being wack, since all you do is do shit-talking
Couldn’t know what a punchline is, even if it hit your noggin
..:: Not tryin to Hate but That Line .,.....Played ... Sorry ::..
I stay looking at your other verses, and the shits starting to fade
But I can already predict that your whole shit is gonna be played
..:: MAke a punch outta ya disses Mayne Itll Help You out Alot much more ::..
This bitch is not on my level, cuz I’m just speaking the truth
Said he came can make the crowd cheer...
...............................................yea making them cheer boo’s
..:: Nope ::..

..:: Overall ::..
I wasnt feelin ya verse to much you didnt have ANY punchez you jus made some disses and they didnt really have a good impact i think that you should atleast try to mix ya verse with metaphors and stuff bcuz that is what is lacked outta ya verse

My Vote - ..:: Tstorm ::..


.....:::: RTF Or I will get my vote taken outta this battle ::::....[/b]

Linx in my sig Thanx

Voted For: Evolution

tstorm
well your stucutre was pretty good, yoru flow was pretty decent, but your personals you didnt have much. your wordplay (finishing lines) they just were not hitting at all. the punches overal just were weak, i wasnt feelign your drop at all yo. 1

Ev
uh nice stucutre mayn. good flow and a decent syllable count. but really i liked was the punchlines the finishing lines were good some nice wordplay. this was one sided by far. keep doing ya thing. hope to see some of ya battles in the future. peace

RTF is ya have enough psots. linsk in the sig

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Voted For: Tstorm

evolution


Look kid, don’t mean to hurt you, but you suck & quit rapping, too
Because once you drop your verse, RV will be laughing at you
Your known for being wack, since all you do is do shit-talking
Couldn’t know what a punchline is, even if it hit your noggin
I stay looking at your other verses, and the shits starting to fade
But I can already predict that your whole shit is gonna be played
This bitch is not on my level, cuz I’m just speaking the truth
Said he came can make the crowd cheer...
...............................................yea making them cheer boo’s

not dat good of a verse
use more punches
enhance ur vocab
betta structure
6.5/10

t storm
Theres no chance of this guy ever learning how to write..
educations lacking..but this guy cnt even tell black from white
Ya skills are lacking, and as a rap artist you a fake..
havin ya lines in the gutter..is the only time ull see "Grate"
crunchin numbers is the only time this guy seen a "nine"
He Rhymes like a "period"..coz he never comes on time
called evolution coz hell never reach what he needs to be..
if you feel the need for talent....then "Evolve" into me!

liked sum of ur punches not 2 many punches doe
elevate sum more
work on vocab as well
overall better verse den evolution-no hate evolution
tstorm-7.5/10

my v/ tstorm

ay yall check out my hot battle vs. The kid 523
elaborate da battle and holla back wit a vote 4 da betta battler please

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wtf?chief....lol


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Voted For: Tstorm

Tstorm- I didnt get most of the wordplay in your verse. Had a few pretty dope lines though like that period one and the first line. Imma have to say you took this one pretty easily.

Evolution- No offence but not much creativity in that verse, you need to add some wordplay and up your skills with punches but your flow and structures ok I geuss.

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fucks sake..leave the goddamn votes..

no point drawing it out.

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Voted For: Evolution

Look kid, don’t mean to hurt you, but you suck & quit rapping, too
Because once you drop your verse, RV will be laughing at you
^^concepts really played evo....u know that...lol
Your known for being wack, since all you do is do shit-talking
Couldn’t know what a punchline is, even if it hit your noggin
^^weak n simple fam
I stay looking at your other verses, and the shits starting to fade
But I can already predict that your whole shit is gonna be played
^^ya vowel count was off..killed tha flow
This bitch is not on my level, cuz I’m just speaking the truth
Said he came can make the crowd cheer...
...............................................yea making them cheer boo’s
^^best line n it was eh.............
nothin really stood out cept ya closer........shouldve gotten more personal or something in this man........weak verse
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Theres no chance of this guy ever learning how to write..
educations lacking..but this guy cnt even tell black from white
^^the link was weak(fake personal in my opinion)
Ya skills are lacking, and as a rap artist you a fake..
havin ya lines in the gutter..is the only time ull see "Grate"
^^it shouldve been "seem" great...in this context its not even a direct punch to your opponent
crunchin numbers is the only time this guy seen a "nine"
He Rhymes like a "period"..coz he never comes on time
^^lmao, nah...kiddo...ASK YA MOMS...LOL..THIS IS ALL WRONG
called evolution coz hell never reach what he needs to be..
if you feel the need for talent....then "Evolve" into me!
^^WEAKL CLOSER.
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well i thought for sure you had this but you came really weak in this compared to the last battle i just read of yours..
i gotta go with evo on this..even though i didnt even like his verse either............guys gotta bring it harder than this in the future..this was some weak shit
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RTF if ya want.......

Voted For: Tstorm

T Storm took this battle
Storm
Good punches and a couple aight personals...
there were no multies or any outstanding rhymes but the punchlines got this for you...
i liked the grate line, the period line and the evolve line. those were all pretty hot and made ur verse stand out better...

Evolution
your verse was very basic... there were no real punchlines except maybe for the last one... if that was a punch, then it was really weak... but anyways,there was nothing special at all about your verse so it feel short to Storm's.

V/ T STorm
RTF!!!
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=184736

Voted For: Tstorm

Flow: Blah
Punches: Storm
Personals: Storm
Wordplay: Storm
Metas: Tie
Multis: Blah
Enjoyment: Blah

Vote: Storm

Explanation: Storm Got This He Came More Personal And Out Weighed Everything Evo Could Throw At Him

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=185205
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=184957
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=185213
return the favor plz both of you and vote on my battles honestly

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Voted For: Tstorm

both were played out....didnt enjoy the battle dat much.....Going with Tstorm because his rhymes a are lil unique......butother than that da battle was wack

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fuck.
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piss.
cock,,,,,,,,,,,,,,anyone know how to fucking vote?..

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Voted For: Tstorm

pretty disappointed in both you guys...no hate...

tstorm...ya used the whole "lacking" thing in back to back lines....makes it seem like ya couldn't find any other ideas to dis him...the "gutter/grate" line has been used b4 and yours was the worst use of it i've seen so far... the period line is played... ya closer was ya best line... good play on his name... prolly done b4 but i never saw it... so good one.

evolve...

where's ya personals? this was a basic drop that coulda been spit at anyone on RV... the whole thing was filler.. no dope lines...the only thing ya did good was predict that Tstorm was gonna use some played lines... that's the only thing i can really give you points for... ya verse bored me almost to tears...

T...consider yaself lucky... if he had even one or two good lines in his verse you woulda lost... you came wack... but evolve was worse.

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