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Re~Verb 03-27-05 01:08 PM

hood_dawg vs Tstorm
 
Battle Rules:

12 -16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 03-28-05 at 01:08 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

System 03-27-05 01:09 PM

Tstorm has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-27-05 01:09 PM.

System 03-27-05 01:13 PM

hood_dawg has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-27-05 01:13 PM.

Re~Verb 03-27-05 01:29 PM

Merkin.lol
 
says hes got a great rec..wow,it stands at a mighty 4 all..
i got him so green with envy..he cud pass as a fruit stall!
thinks hes got a chance of winning..plz, it just aint ya fate..
he couldnt be offensive..if he were a Jap not clearing his plate!
try again with a clean slate..and delete ya pathetic record..
reincarnated as a musical instrument..youd fail to strike a chord!
you couldnt be sick...if u were a nazi comiting human de-borture
your avy says "sr8 from hell"...i believe ya, ya styles torture!
you so wack..youll probably write ya verses more than twice
but your style wouldnt be "gripping"...if u placed it in a vice!
ya names as wack as ya lyrics..wow thas creative "hood-dawg"..
ya shit wouldnt even begin to flow..if i flushed it down the bog!
face it your stuck..worse, than a watch that fails to tick..
u cudnt "cum hard"..if u were a pedo watching a child porn flick!

Re~Verb 03-27-05 01:33 PM

says hes got a great rec..wow,it stands at a mighty 4 all..
i got him so green with envy..he cud pass as a fruit stall!
thinks hes got a chance of winning..plz, it just aint ya fate..
he couldnt be offensive..if he were a Jap not clearing his plate!
try again with a clean slate..and delete ya pathetic record..
reincarnated as a musical instrument..youd fail to strike a chord!
you couldnt be sick...if u were a nazi comiting human de-borture
your avy says "sr8 from hell"...i believe ya, ya styles torture!
you so wack..youll probably write ya verses more than twice
but your style wouldnt be "gripping"...if u placed it in a vice!
ya names as wack as ya lyrics..wow thas creative "hood-dawg"..
ya shit wouldnt even begin to flow..if i flushed it down the bog!
face it your stuck..worse, than a watch that fails to tick..
u cudnt "cum hard"..if u were a pedo watching a child porn flick!

Mentor 03-27-05 01:37 PM

you claim that you still the undefeated
butt if u ever spit shit nobody'll read it
elevate u need it but u'll never be shit
so leave rap go check anotha career
cuz too me when u rap u look queer
u so wack u cant be a studio engineer
you better live in fear when i come near
if the shit i sayin aint true then y u not in a crew
u rap in this game as if u aint got a clue
dont u see the wackest one here is you?
u probably be tryin ur best at merkin me
but the only thang u'll be good at is jerkin me

Mentor 03-27-05 03:36 PM

uppin for feed on this.............................................

Re~Verb 03-27-05 04:15 PM

upp.........

vote..n one will b returned.......

Mentor 03-27-05 04:40 PM

uppin............................................. ...................

Re~Verb 03-28-05 11:44 AM

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uppin............................................. ..........

Re~Verb 03-31-05 02:47 PM

down
 
downing........................................... .

Re~Verb 04-01-05 03:47 AM

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Re~Verb 04-01-05 05:32 PM

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L.E 04-01-05 07:23 PM

Voted For: Tstorm

Oh God...this was so so so sooooooo one sided...T-Storm actually came wit hard-hitting punches...Hooddawgz verse was...wack as shit. Barely any punches, and the ones you did have were...wack. And that should be enough said for this battle. Return the favor...my link is in my sig.

Re~Verb 04-03-05 11:07 AM

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Re~Verb 04-03-05 04:01 PM

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Re~Verb 04-04-05 12:38 PM

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Re~Verb 04-05-05 05:23 PM

votes
 
vote why dnt u vote eotfgcgcgbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Re~Verb 04-09-05 06:04 PM

carot
 
carot war words deflection tease in there wenslidale efgfort

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¤ÐÅž¤ 04-09-05 06:57 PM

Voted For: Tstorm

without a doubt tstorm got this.......you couldve dropped ya opener alone n still won this battle.......hoodz...get ya punches straight n dont group ya bars in pairs of 3 or 5....only 2...your verse was ass through n thogh.......
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tstorm some decent shit...but alot of played concepts...
you wouldve lost points for that if you battled someone with more talent...just keep that in mind.........
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RTF .in ya want

Re~Verb 04-10-05 03:21 PM

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Re~Verb 04-12-05 12:35 PM

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rooq 04-12-05 12:55 PM

This was feedback posted for Tstorm
 
wtf@needin 200 posts to vote...checkin polls...cos i'm bored.

Murdah.txt 04-12-05 01:08 PM

Voted For: hood_dawg

checkin tha polls..........................................

King Solo 04-12-05 01:18 PM

Voted For: Tstorm

you claim that you still the undefeated
butt if u ever spit shit nobody'll read it
elevate u need it but u'll never be shit
basic vocab, the whole thing was weak and played!!
so leave rap go check anotha career
cuz too me when u rap u look queer
weak again, and more played shit!!
u so wack u cant be a studio engineer
you better live in fear when i come near
the flow is about the only aight thing!!
if the shit i sayin aint true then y u not in a crew
u rap in this game as if u aint got a clue
dont u see the wackest one here is you?
don't work cuz tstorm is in a crew dumbass!!
u probably be tryin ur best at merkin me
but the only thang u'll be good at is jerkin me
weak closer and more played shit, and not even played well in ure verse!!


says hes got a great rec..wow,it stands at a mighty 4 all..
i got him so green with envy..he cud pass as a fruit stall!
aight opener, cud have been better!
thinks hes got a chance of winning..plz, it just aint ya fate..
he couldnt be offensive..if he were a Jap not clearing his plate!
pretty gud line!!
try again with a clean slate..and delete ya pathetic record..
reincarnated as a musical instrument..youd fail to strike a chord!
gud meta, but 2nd line was a little off!!
you couldnt be sick...if u were a nazi comiting human de-borture
your avy says "sr8 from hell"...i believe ya, ya styles torture!
2nd line hot!! 1st line played!!
you so wack..youll probably write ya verses more than twice
but your style wouldnt be "gripping"...if u placed it in a vice!
gud again, vice shit was clever!
ya names as wack as ya lyrics..wow thas creative "hood-dawg"..
ya shit wouldnt even begin to flow..if i flushed it down the bog!
not feelin this, rhymin was off!!
face it your stuck..worse, than a watch that fails to tick..
u cudnt "cum hard"..if u were a pedo watching a child porn flick!
cum hard shit!!! played but still makes me laugh!!

Ok, this battle was weak, hood dawg i am baffled at how u got a vote becuz ure shit was wack. no punches, no personals, u said some fake shit, the structure and flow was about the only thing gud, no vocab really, wordplay = no...multies, metas = no!! elevate ure entire game!!
Tstorm gets it for actually delivering punches and a couple of personals. the vocab was aight but cud use a little work, wordplay was gud in there, but u shud get more creative and shit, beef up punches and add more hot personals!!!

V/ - Tstorm

- Cud u hit up my battle against EscoLayde...I know you aint got the posts to vote on any others!! Links in the siggy!!!

Kin*Ethic™ 04-13-05 01:34 AM

Voted For: Tstorm

Flow: Blah who cares
Punches: Tstorm
Personals: Neither
Metas: Tstorm
Multis: neither
Enjoyment: Blah

Vote: Tstorm

Explanation: Storm got this hands down hood came with nothing really just too basic

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Re~Verb 04-14-05 04:30 PM

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Dirty Nigga 04-17-05 08:58 PM

Voted For: Tstorm

lol
not even close

Tstorm walked by, dropped lyrics, an left knowin it would be a comfortable victoy, better punches, metas, personals, flow, an overall complexcity of his verse was evidental in the lyrics, an verses....T gets the win, i'm not gonna explain any more than i already have because its really not worth it


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