Young Blaze vs the kid 523
 

Battle Rules:

6 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-27-05 at 08:33 PM

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the kid 523 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-27-05 08:12 PM.

Young Blaze has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-27-05 08:15 PM.

Ill leave Young Blaze paralyzed for days
Leave RV bitch this shit aint made for gays
How the fuck are you undefeated,
Blaze did good the first battle, now your just repeatin it
Battled 8 noobs, good job, you beat em all
You stepped up bitch, but for u its gonna be a hard fall
Im a rookie, but my flow is among the pros
Can't believe im battling .w this Light Weight ho
Act up bitch, ill hit you with my 9 millimeter
Ill take you on a tour, bitch call me your leader
When this battle is finally over, yo bitch dont pout,
I think i just made Young Blazes flame go out

Youngs Born To Kill, Light Vs Heavy damn I Burn Ya Fat Mor Then A George Foremen-Grill/
Defining Ill Flows, Ima Allwayz Come Back To Hit This pussy Like Boomerang Dil-Dos/
Ill "pour in and score", put "four in your door" when my rhymes tore in to Show-gore/
u couldnt "turn tables", if u were "funkmaster flex"in a Furniture store/
This kids-a-threat? I'll dip-his-neck ,in his own scrpits-n-setz/
Dont shout-wit-bursts,Print-out-my-verse ,maybe then ud rip-my text/
ya chest left imprinted-with-heat, ur heart's skippin-a-beat/
so dope this bitch is in rehab tryna kick his addiction-to-me/
I'm written these lines to reside in ya eyes, u recyclin lines/
probably caught a CHIPPED TOOTH from BITIN those rhymes./
"Blazes the nicest"..thats what people be tellin me/
i must be sellin WEED...cuz this mothafucka kid just took L from ME/

uppin this shit for more votes....................

yo that shit meant that he did good on his first battle, but hes repeatin the same shit

Voted For: Young Blaze

this was a one sided battle.....no punches from the other kidd.....good shit young blaze.....doesn't look like you need to bring anything more or even at all....Vote:YB.
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ps....get on AIM young blaze

fuckin hate voter ^ fuck u bitch

how was that a hate Vote?.............................

na this kid chaos fuckin hates me.. kid always has suttin bad to say even if otha ppl say its mad good hes always like na it sucks fuck u chaos

Voted For: Young Blaze

young blaze
Youngs Born To Kill, Light Vs Heavy damn I Burn Ya Fat Mor Then A George Foremen-Grill/
Defining Ill Flows, Ima Allwayz Come Back To Hit This pussy Like Boomerang Dil-Dos/
Ill "pour in and score", put "four in your door" when my rhymes tore in to Show-gore/
u couldnt "turn tables", if u were "funkmaster flex"in a Furniture store/
This kids-a-threat? I'll dip-his-neck ,in his own scrpits-n-setz/
Dont shout-wit-bursts,Print-out-my-verse ,maybe then ud rip-my text/
ya chest left imprinted-with-heat, ur heart's skippin-a-beat/
so dope this bitch is in rehab tryna kick his addiction-to-me/
I'm written these lines to reside in ya eyes, u recyclin lines/
probably caught a CHIPPED TOOTH from BITIN those rhymes./
"Blazes the nicest"..thats what people be tellin me/
i must be sellin WEED...cuz this mothafucka kid just took L from ME/

liked ur punches
lotz of nice lyrics
good structure
iight elevation
8/10

kid 523
IP:


Ill leave Young Blaze paralyzed for days
Leave RV bitch this shit aint made for gays
How the fuck are you undefeated,
Blaze did good the first battle, now your just repeatin it
Battled 8 noobs, good job, you beat em all
You stepped up bitch, but for u its gonna be a hard fall
Im a rookie, but my flow is among the pros
Can't believe im battling .w this Light Weight ho
Act up bitch, ill hit you with my 9 millimeter
Ill take you on a tour, bitch call me your leader
When this battle is finally over, yo bitch dont pout,
I think i just made Young Blazes flame go out

not 2 many punches-work on dat
fix structure a lil bit
elevate sum more
only a few punches- more punches at opponent is needed
7/10
no hate kid523

my v/young blaze

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Voted For: Young Blaze

Aii This iS what It Is

Explanation

Young Killed this battle basically I think That He hade some lines that i wish i could use LOL I know it sounds gay but mayne dude Really lives up to the name ....And I Think That He really supplies Original Lines np played stuff and No basic disses Like

Niggas get Blazed by Young blaze
Twist deez niggas like they was in a maze

Now if somebody wouldve said that i wouldve Be like This:
:spit: .......................... :laugh: ................ :roll:


So Basically The kid you need to elevate Jus a lil bit more bcuz you got talent already you jus need to Up yo talent

And Young Blaze

FIX THAT DAMN STRUCTURE :laugh:

Peace

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Voted For: Young Blaze

checkin this shit out..........not bad heeya.........