the kid 523 vs LyricalMa$tamind
 

Battle Rules:

16 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
1 verse only
house rules

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 03-30-05 at 10:51 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

the kid 523 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-27-05 10:53 PM.

LyricalMa$tamind has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-27-05 11:13 PM.

look since your new im not even gonna slaughter you/
my rhymes like irratation they're so nice it kinda bothers you/
Look i dont kno y you think you hard cuz you gained some weight/
even if you died and ya spirit rose you still couldnt elevate/
seriously i'll lyrically eat this dude/
mad cuz his only burner(gun) is on his C.P.U/
in this battle ima prove it aint hard to get rid of ya/
The KID your wack bitch i got more flow in my signatcha/(Check my sig to see if it's true)
ya verse wont get far im sick like i spit SARS/
if ya mouths a gold reserve bitch you still couldnt spit bars/
your an unsuccessful stalker im steps ahead cuz ya bars-none/
if you was Nas reborn as Jesus you still wouldnt be God's Son/
who let this bitch on this site its a laugh its funny/
thinks he's nice with his issue of How To Rap For Dummies/
my verse jus picked'em up and slammed'em on his bottom ribs/
bitch ya whole verse was whack and weak like ya bladder is/
LyricalMa$tamind bitch rememba da name/
leave u wit no fame/ no game ur lyrics get slained/
20 lines and im out i wiped u out like a stain/

HOLLA!

19 lines*
srry i messed up replace da 20 lines for 19 at da end of da verse and errthing else iz good

hurry up n spit ur verse homie u called me out so spit and dont pussy out
HOLLA!

Lyrical Mastamind? your one step behind your time
Close your mouth bitch, stop tryna bite my lines
Ill leave your face derranged like Michael Jacksons Surgeon
Then continue to beat your bitch ass like a jealous husband
Battling me, your rockin with one of RV"s best
Hold a tec to my head bitch ur still no threat
Thinkin he an emcee, this bitch dont really know me
you can't beat me, face the facts its reality
My words are my weapon, they take the place of my knife
Why this bitch talkin shit? yo i thought he liked his life?
You spit the same shit time and time again
What makes you think this time your actually gonna win?
Dont get to closs bitch, your gonna get rocked
Because Hate it or Love it, the underdogs on top
Fuck this, my rhymes are so hot nigga there out of control
I just showed this “mastamind” he’s not $lyrically unbeatable$

uppin 4 votes yall u kno who took dis 1
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This was feedback posted for LyricalMa$tamind
 

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Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

Lyrical Mastamind? your one step behind your time
Close your mouth bitch, stop tryna bite my lines
^^^^LOL...WEAK OPENER FAM...SHIT WAS MADD BASIC
Ill leave your face derranged like Michael Jacksons Surgeon
Then continue to beat your bitch ass like a jealous husband
^^^^HUSBAND & SUREGEON BARLE RYHME..SO DAT WAS FORCED
Battling me, your rockin with one of RV"s best
Hold a tec to my head bitch ur still no threat
^^^LOL...DA FIRST WAS A LIE UR NO WHERE NEAR RV'S BEST..SECOND LINE WAS OKAY
Thinkin he an emcee, this bitch dont really know me
you can't beat me, face the facts its reality
KNOW ME & REALITY..BARELY RYHME...FIX YA RYHME SCHEME FAM
My words are my weapon, they take the place of my knife
Why this bitch talkin shit? yo i thought he liked his life?
^^^OKAY
You spit the same shit time and time again
What makes you think this time your actually gonna win?
^^WEAK
Dont get to closs bitch, your gonna get rocked
Because Hate it or Love it, the underdogs on top
^^^LOL...Y WOULD U FLIP 50 CENT'S LINE IN A BATTLE
Fuck this, my rhymes are so hot nigga there out of control
I just showed this “mastamind” he’s not $lyrically unbeatable$
^^DIDN'T RYHME....

LM:
look since your new im not even gonna slaughter you/
my rhymes like irratation they're so nice it kinda bothers you/
^^^^GOOD OPENER
Look i dont kno y you think you hard cuz you gained some weight/
even if you died and ya spirit rose you still couldnt elevate/
^^^LOL..DECENT PUNCHLINE COULD OF WORDED IT BETTA THO
seriously i'll lyrically eat this dude/
mad cuz his only burner(gun) is on his C.P.U/
^^PLAYED..
in this battle ima prove it aint hard to get rid of ya/
The KID your wack bitch i got more flow in my signatcha/(Check my sig to see if it's true)
^^I LOOKED IN YA SIG...I AINT GET IT
ya verse wont get far im sick like i spit SARS/
if ya mouths a gold reserve bitch you still couldnt spit bars/
^^^^DA SECOND LINE WAS GOOD
your an unsuccessful stalker im steps ahead cuz ya bars-none/
if you was Nas reborn as Jesus you still wouldnt be God's Son/
^^^GOOD
who let this bitch on this site its a laugh its funny/
thinks he's nice with his issue of How To Rap For Dummies/
^^^^OKAY
my verse jus picked'em up and slammed'em on his bottom ribs/
bitch ya whole verse was whack and weak like ya bladder is/
^^^WEAK
LyricalMa$tamind bitch rememba da name/
leave u wit no fame/ no game ur lyrics get slained/
20 lines and im out i wiped u out like a stain/
^^^^3 LINER'S FUKK UP YA FLOW...BUT U WIN DIS BATTLE REAL EASY

RETURN DA FAVOR LINKS IN MY SIG...& PLEEZ EXPLAIN YA VOTE

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uppin dis shit 4 votes yall come on please only 3 more votes 4 me
and 5 for thekid523
please leave good feedback and a vote 4 whoeva u thought won

Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

Lyrical- you had an alright verse work on your punches and your structure.. you had some good ideas that i thought you could have done alot more with overall ... but i liked your verse

kid- your getting alot better ... and i mean ALOT your structure was on target .. but your flow was off i thought. you had some alright punches but none that hit as hard as lyricals ... thats the only reason i think your going to lose this battle.. so elevate some more but you are getting the right ideas


overalll lyrical took this because he had a better flow and a lot better wordplay over all no hate to the kid 523 because he is getting better and working on his shit which earns him mad respect in my book..

still uppin dis shit
need 2 more votes
kid523 needs 5 more votes
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This was feedback posted for LyricalMa$tamind
 

both in the crew n both had pretty good verses kid ya had the wordplay but lyrical had heavier punches if kids punches woulda been harder this battle would be alot closer

im thinkin u 2 should close this battle freal... u both n crew n all n n it would be ashame to have one of u get a loss at the hands of ya homie n ya crew but thas ur decision

if i would vote on this ide give it to lyrical but kid held his ground n i give him props on that 2

tight battle

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we need votes
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it needs closin
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This was feedback posted for the kid 523
 

checking pollz where tha hell u at kid..............

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Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind

Flow: Blah
Punches: Lyrical
Personals: Neither
Wordplay: Neither
Metas: Neither
Multis: Neither
Enjoyment: None

Vote: Lyrical

Explanation: Eh wasnt feeling this battle at all no1 really threw a punch or anything just worthless rhyming iono .. lyrical edged it out barely and had one good concept maybe... stay elevating