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MarvJay1009 (1-0) vs. sdizzle (1-0)
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checkin in.........
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boston trumps NY....... and thats everyday
only thing queens niggaz run is far far away a net loser, kids got rv tattoo'd in his name, shit his verses.. got more funny symbols than the spanish language quote here, quote there..makes it hard to feel ya ur lines stay stretched longer than coke dealers *does marv jay stretched style.. except with a good punch* kids a loner, never seen drugs... hes finished if i gave him a brick.. .......... hed build a wall and lock himself in it |
look....
dogg im sick!...shit i dont even know dis kid n he's on my dick..... when dis is ova he go do like his "title",make a thread sayin im GONE i QUiT cuzz dat stainless i clap...a put u in a "BaG" like ya frame's a dyme sack... yeah im in "millitary minds",& ya moms just a hoe dat give's "brain in iraq".... fam how could u eva say dat ur sick??...i was laughin when i peep'd ur shit.. its all SHiT!!..and ya punches like da "kitchen sink" all u do is "FORCE-iT".. u dont do audio's fam...ur a karaoke mc so keep puttin flows on cheap... cuzz ya album's like cats dat got "LiFE iN JaiL" it got "no release date".... 1st bar-look at his title its say GONE I QUIT... |
meh its clear sdizzle got this... he had punches and some personals.. nice flow.. on the other hand marvjay hand no flow... and some decent punches but nothing really hard hitting nah what im saying..
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sdizzle
boston trumps NY....... and thats everyday only thing queens niggaz run is far far away decent a net loser, kids got rv tattoo'd in his name, shit his verses.. got more funny symbols than the spanish language …nah quote here, quote there..makes it hard to feel ya ur lines stay stretched longer than coke dealers decent punch kids a loner, never seen drugs... hes finished if i gave him a brick.. .......... hed build a wall and lock himself in it okay, could’ve been harder MARVJay1009 dogg im sick!...shit i dont even know dis kid n he's on my dick..... when dis is ova he go do like his "title",make a thread sayin im GONE i QUiT persona was good, punch was okay cuzz dat stainless i clap...a put u in a "BaG" like ya frame's a dyme sack... yeah im in "millitary minds",& ya moms just a hoe dat give's "brain in iraq".... weak punch fam how could u eva say dat ur sick??...i was laughin when i peep'd ur shit.. its all SHiT!!..and ya punches like da "kitchen sink" all u do is "FORCE-iT".. uhhh decent u dont do audio's fam...ur a karaoke mc so keep puttin flows on cheap... cuzz ya album's like cats dat got "LiFE iN JaiL" it got "no release date".... nope v/ MARV |
uhhh this was actually close cuz sdizzle came as wack as Marv..
a net loser, kids got rv tattoo'd in his name, shit his verses.. got more funny symbols than the spanish language (pretty good meta and punch) Vs. fam how could u eva say dat ur sick??...i was laughin when i peep'd ur shit.. its all SHiT!!..and ya punches like da "kitchen sink" all u do is "FORCE-iT".. (punch was wack but good meta) So i think i gotta give this to Sdizzle because he actually had a decent punch and a good meta while Marv only had a good meta and no hard punches. Vote: Sdizzle |
boston trumps NY....... and thats everyday
only thing queens niggaz run is far far away funny, nice opener! a net loser, kids got rv tattoo'd in his name, shit his verses.. got more funny symbols than the spanish language NO! not feelin this! quote here, quote there..makes it hard to feel ya ur lines stay stretched longer than coke dealers pretty gud! kids a loner, never seen drugs... hes finished if i gave him a brick.. .......... hed build a wall and lock himself in it not bad....... dogg im sick!...shit i dont even know dis kid n he's on my dick..... when dis is ova he go do like his "title",make a thread sayin im GONE i QUiT nice personal, gud opener! cuzz dat stainless i clap...a put u in a "BaG" like ya frame's a dyme sack... yeah im in "millitary minds",& ya moms just a hoe dat give's "brain in iraq".... alright punch! fam how could u eva say dat ur sick??...i was laughin when i peep'd ur shit.. its all SHiT!!..and ya punches like da "kitchen sink" all u do is "FORCE-iT".. nice!! gud multi, nice meta!! u dont do audio's fam...ur a karaoke mc so keep puttin flows on cheap... cuzz ya album's like cats dat got "LiFE iN JaiL" it got "no release date".... bleh!! weak closer! V/- MarvJ |
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^ its a simile :)... similes use like or as, metaphors are a direct comparison sdizzles mad monkeyish today is a metaphor sdizzle is like a monkey today is a simile see? |
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be4 u dickride da nigga cuzz he koed ya stupid ass last week..."a net loser, kids got rv tattoo'd in his name, shit his verses.. got more funny symbols than the spanish language" sombody tell me did dat ryhme???? |
boston trumps NY....... and thats everyday
only thing queens niggaz run is far far away a net loser, kids got rv tattoo'd in his name, shit his verses.. got more funny symbols than the spanish language quote here, quote there..makes it hard to feel ya ur lines stay stretched longer than coke dealers \ yo, this is the definition of simple. i dont understand why sdizzle came like this, but the hottest line in this was the queens and running far away. the drug dealer line was played the spanish symbol line wasnt good. i guess he really didnt care anymore. , , dogg im sick!...shit i dont even know dis kid n he's on my dick..... when dis is ova he go do like his "title",make a thread sayin im GONE i QUiT cuzz dat stainless i clap...a put u in a "BaG" like ya frame's a dyme sack... yeah im in "millitary minds",& ya moms just a hoe dat give's "brain in iraq".... fam how could u eva say dat ur sick??...i was laughin when i peep'd ur shit.. its all SHiT!!..and ya punches like da "kitchen sink" all u do is "FORCE-iT".. / marv shit was good, but the 1st line was kinda predictable personal, and the force it line was forced. the brain in iraq line was good. overall marv got better shit, and it was kinda stretched but he came harder than sdizzle v/marv |
quote here, quote there..makes it hard to feel ya
ur lines stay stretched longer than coke dealers kids a loner, never seen drugs... hes finished if i gave him a brick.. .......... hed build a wall and lock himself in it vs. NOTHING Dizzle is seriously being dicked out of this battle.. I don't give a fuck what anybody says.. MarvJay lost, and if you think he won then you're either a dickrider or fucking retarded. Vote - Sdizzle. |
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*cough* says nothing but nods in agreement *cough* also... name, shit language rhyme perfecty *cough* sad thing is all my lines were true.... quote here quote there *cough* *leaves thread* |
fam u could barley make ya words ryhme.....u had da study me da write a 8 line verse i neva seen ya seen till we had da battle
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dis vote doesn't count...dis kid is madd cuzz i called him a homo sexual which is true |
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Except he didn't get KO'd. I would know, it's part of my mod job to count the votes. Quote:
Well yeah, because the common pronunciation of the word language is "lan-gwidge", which rhymes with "name, shit". But speaking of not rhyming... Quote:
V//sdizzle |
doesnt really matter whether it was a simile or meta, it was still gud
plus one of ure barz didnt even fuckin rhyme so u still fuckin lose, how anybody is sayin that u win is beyond me |
u gonna delete my posts after this.............but first.............
"language" dont rhyme with "name shit" "uage" pronounced "wijj" don't really rhyme wit "shit" and "lang"....how the fuck does that rhyme with "name" |
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I don't even know where you called me a "homosexual." I voted honestly. Just because not everybody here is all up on your dick, doesn't mean when I drop a vote for somebody else you have the right to DQ it. You didn't have anything close to good. Live with it. Come better next time. Don't bitch at me because you spit ass in this battle. My vote stands. |
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Lol I wonn't delete it, but it just depends how you pronounce it. I caught the rhyme. |
lol... can u delete ever free post here please
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whut da fukk is da score...wet willy's vote dont he didn't explain it..and mimesis cuzz he didn't explain it
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FUCK THAT
all ur votes dont count cuz there not for me... that ok? didn't think so |
SDizzle
boston trumps NY....... and thats everyday only thing queens niggaz run is far far away nope a net loser, kids got rv tattoo'd in his name, shit his verses.. got more funny symbols than the spanish language eh.. quote here, quote there..makes it hard to feel ya ur lines stay stretched longer than coke dealers played kids a loner, never seen drugs... hes finished if i gave him a brick.. .......... hed build a wall and lock himself in it good MarvJay1009 dogg im sick!...shit i dont even know dis kid n he's on my dick..... when dis is ova he go do like his "title",make a thread sayin im GONE i QUiT ok cuzz dat stainless i clap...a put u in a "BaG" like ya frame's a dyme sack... yeah im in "millitary minds",& ya moms just a hoe dat give's "brain in iraq".... ok fam how could u eva say dat ur sick??...i was laughin when i peep'd ur shit.. its all SHiT!!..and ya punches like da "kitchen sink" all u do is "FORCE-iT".. eh... u dont do audio's fam...ur a karaoke mc so keep puttin flows on cheap... cuzz ya album's like cats dat got "LiFE iN JaiL" it got "no release date".... bad punch..and it didnt rhyme Vote = MarvJay |
by the way
9th.... if i happen to lose, sign me out... Alright *this is not swaying, im just telling 9th something* And that's why I edited this post :) |
Yo, dizz, I'm sorry so many people are all up on Marv's dick here. You did win.
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by the way its 4-4
meh... i didn't get a ko last week ... and im obviously not getting the ko this week :( my ranking isn't going to be perfect |
I voted fairly...I dont kno either of these two..but i saw Sdizzle on Rapblock before
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whut?...its 4-2...memisis and flow r da only votes u got...wet willy didn't even vote
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lol u have no say on what votes count dont u understand that? 4-4 playboy |
and u have no say fagget...4-2.....4 ppl didn't even vote 4 ya dumb ass..wet willy's was a comment
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lol
4-4 do u not understand its by mere luck u even have 4 votes so its a tie right now 4-4 FOUR - FOUR and lol @ not counting wet willy cuz he didn't phyisically say v/ i dont say v/ sometimes.. ill just put the name so fuck what u say, ur words carry no bearing at all |
YO R U RETARDED??? LIKe SERIOUSLY......name da ppl dat voted 4 ya dumb ass??..wet willy*which dont count*...mimesis,flow intel datz it.....ass hole
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boston trumps NY....... and thats everyday
only thing queens niggaz run is far far away ......No a net loser, kids got rv tattoo'd in his name, shit his verses.. got more funny symbols than the spanish language NO! quote here, quote there..makes it hard to feel ya ur lines stay stretched longer than coke dealers Um ok here i guess kids a loner, never seen drugs... hes finished if i gave him a brick.. .......... hed build a wall and lock himself in it um...this was ok dogg im sick!...shit i dont even know dis kid n he's on my dick..... when dis is ova he go do like his "title",make a thread sayin im GONE i QUiT nice personal cuzz dat stainless i clap...a put u in a "BaG" like ya frame's a dyme sack... yeah im in "millitary minds",& ya moms just a hoe dat give's "brain in iraq".... Ok Punch fam how could u eva say dat ur sick??...i was laughin when i peep'd ur shit.. its all SHiT!!..and ya punches like da "kitchen sink" all u do is "FORCE-iT".. One of ya best linez u dont do audio's fam...ur a karaoke mc so keep puttin flows on cheap... cuzz ya album's like cats dat got "LiFE iN JaiL" it got "no release date".... The fuck was this? this battle was kinda wack but ima have 2 give it 2 Marv V/- MarvJ |
P-Q-R-S-Dizzle
boston trumps NY....... and thats everyday only thing queens niggaz run is far far away haha.... i liked this opener, had me crackin up a net loser, kids got rv tattoo'd in his name, shit his verses.. got more funny symbols than the spanish language approximate rhyme is not that good, coulda been worded better with "funny symbols" quote here, quote there..makes it hard to feel ya ur lines stay stretched longer than coke dealers quote here, lol..... alil played, but aight *does marv jay stretched style.. except with a good punch* kids a loner, never seen drugs... hes finished if i gave him a brick.. .......... hed build a wall and lock himself in it really liked this line! even tho i sed somethin like this before, but that was in a topical track Marv: dogg im sick!...shit i dont even know dis kid n he's on my dick..... when dis is ova he go do like his "title",make a thread sayin im GONE i QUiT .... ehh ok opener, lil stretched and not hard-hittin cuzz dat stainless i clap...a put u in a "BaG" like ya frame's a dyme sack... yeah im in "millitary minds",& ya moms just a hoe dat give's "brain in iraq".... .....ok..... first line was an ok similie, but the punch wasnt very hard hittin again, yo momma shit has been played since before i was born... fam how could u eva say dat ur sick??...i was laughin when i peep'd ur shit.. its all SHiT!!..and ya punches like da "kitchen sink" all u do is "FORCE-iT".. this was ur only decent line to me, nice multies in it with a decen punch u dont do audio's fam...ur a karaoke mc so keep puttin flows on cheap... cuzz ya album's like cats dat got "LiFE iN JaiL" it got "no release date".... wtf??? that was bad, no rhymin at all, woulda been decent if it was anywhere close to rhymin.... shoulda kept it at "no release".. bad closer lost u the battle Decent battle...... but S-dizzle got this, opener and closer were both real nice for him, while ur weakest lines were ur opener and closer..... sdizzle squeaks by in my book..... v/sdizzle |
damn... its 5-5...... goin down to the wire
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wow i guess ome cats didnt get the wordplay of dizzles last line.......or they just stupid and cant recognize a good punch
quote here, quote there..makes it hard to feel ya ur lines stay stretched longer than coke dealers kids a loner, never seen drugs... hes finished if i gave him a brick.. .......... hed build a wall and lock himself in it vs. nothin of marv please try and show some sort of creativity in ya verse at least dizzle had some wittyness, honeslty i could have qouted sdizzles who verse in comparision to marvs. marv you gotta step up ya game or somethin......his personals were better, and his punches hit harder enough said. he just came harder v/sdizzle |
its either 6-5 me
OR... OR its 5-0 nothing, cuz aparently anyone who votes for me doesn't count |
its 5-4......fam....wet willy's vote still doesn't count....new method im sorri i dissed u fam lol i knew u was gon find a way 2 pay me back
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