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LyricalMa$tamind vs ! ShowtimE !
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting lets get it cracken Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 03-31-05 at 07:37 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
! ShowtimE ! has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-28-05 07:38 PM.
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LyricalMa$tamind has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-28-05 07:43 PM.
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kid youre a newb about to get fucked/so im about to mount/
the only positive for you in this battle/is increasing you post count/ personals galore whore/only time your hot is in a sauna/ and wit da heat i pack/ it'll have ya body feelin colder/ i warned ya/dont fuck with a textcee who rips while stayin profound/ i try to help i took him to the fountain of intelligence and he fuckin drowned/ kids intellectually retarted/ minds set off of verses in the open/ spiritually prayin cuz its 'Easter'/ lyrically wishing and hoping/ blah at you cuz kid ya rhymes is pittiful dey not considered good/ kid, walkin into harlem is the only time u gettin 'claps' from da hood/ ya claim ya packin heat/but ya ain't hot enuff to raise the yeast/ claimin New York in ya profile/ but ain't no one like you in the east/ i took all ya lines into consideration....yeah even the ones you bit/ they came up like added toilets...it all equaled shit/ i knew u cudnt spit by ya name 'Showtime'/ i kno u got ya pad n pen ready 2 bite of deez lines/ My viscious rhymes fill and wrap your brain like lyrical vines/ Palestinian bombs couldn't phase my adamantium rhymes/ Spittin psychological testaments that wipe out tenements without hesitance/ Envy's evident while you're regrettin facin this one-man armored regiment/ street sweeperz, mackz n 44's limit ya lifeline wit no doubt/ 22 lines to murk u/ bitch now im out HOLLA! |
iight deres my verse
get urz posted so we can have votes on dis battle |
lets get this shit poppin, Lyrical Mastamind...
your name is fake it should be, Lyrical Disaster-Time... now the beast has emerged, teachin you to plot the blueprint... you must be a square, you and the winners circle arent congruent... i just robbed this win from you, like a lyrical criminal... my rhymes will have you see the light, like a biblical miracle... its almost over, so open your eyes and see... your girl bends backwards for you, and forwards for me... ill leave your spine ruptured, show you how i attack tracks and scorefast... call me a weather man, when i put your ass into four-casts... you could drop your spits at a circus, and still wouldnt be in-tents... i spit licks with anger, while you only leave them suspenseless... when everybody hears you, they dont know that your talkin... because your nothing, your name wont even be on your coffin |
uppin dis shit yall
good battle holla back wit good feedback and votes |
Voted For: ! ShowtimE !
my vote is going to have to go to showtime, because he had some harder punches although lyrical had some nice punchlines too, i think showtime won..close battle though Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
uppin for some votes
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Voted For: ! ShowtimE !
showtime~nice verse, i thought it was witty,your vocabulary was good here, nice punches, very creative, refreshing to see different types of punches, they stand outyou had some effective personals here, i like the biblical miracle bar, i believe its the 3rd bar,and the 4th bars, i thought were your best, but i liked how you took risks with your vocab..overalll good drop.1 lyrical~your opener was decent,i thought could have been stronger, you had some personals here,but i just dont think you tried hard, you used a lot of filler words, instead of punches,i'm not hating at all,i'm just stating the style that i like, it also seems you used a lot fo filler in your verse, and your spelling wasnt that great, i think this is more of an audio type drop..because of the brackets of where you cut it off and the structure of it, although i liked your rhyme scheme and what you were going for, i'm going to vote showtime for a more creative,overall well put together verse....keep it up.1 |
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Voted For: ! ShowtimE !
! Showtime ! gets my vote, flow was just sick, u gotta win this. ~1 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: ! ShowtimE !
In this case less is more more harder hittin peronals even tho the punches were played I prefered this structure the punches are more direct the other lacked quick wit Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind
wayyy betta metaz...betta structure also....i felt lyrical owned show wit this 1...EZ Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: ! ShowtimE !
Flow: Blah Punches: Tie Personals: Neither Wordplay: Showtime Metas: Showtime Multis: Showtime Enjoyment: Blah Even Vote: Showtime Explanation: Pretty Even Battle The Line Which Did It For Me Was The Weatherman Line That Was Pretty Creative .. Pretty Even Battle Neither Had Anything Hardhitting Personally ........ Stay Elevating .. Stay Up .. 1 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: ! ShowtimE !
Man, your verse was short, but tight as hell. Better punches and lyrics. Word up! Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind
both ya shit sukked lol but this nigga took it he had betta punches n he put more effort n 2 his verse dont do / dat shit is wakk he had sum ok personals nothin spectacular but he tried so he gets mah vote 4 dat both yall need 2 elivate a whole bunch have sum better strukture n punches den battle ova lol lyrical master mind took this |
thanx 4 da vote and feedback i will use it in future battle
ay all still uppin dis shit! |
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