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Dumb-D-Dumb 03-29-05 02:30 PM

DAZZLE vs Dumb-D-Dumb
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-01-05 at 02:30 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 03-29-05 05:02 PM

Dumb-D-Dumb has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-29-05 05:02 PM.

System 03-31-05 12:22 PM

DAZZLE has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-31-05 12:22 PM.

DAZZLE 03-31-05 12:44 PM

Ima "beat" this bitch harder than I "beat a drum"...
You admit your thick......your "dumber than dumb"!!!
These lines are priceless.....kinda like a packed treasure chest....
This aint a contest, you couldnt be "posotive"...if you had a blood test!
Only live with your mum and not your dad..... whats up you only love her?
You must have bad family problems....if you'd snitch on your own brother!

Dumb-D-Dumb 03-31-05 06:19 PM

yo yo...

my bro peeped your battle, and LE says you spit shit
only way you "dazzle"........ is the glitter on ya lipstick
pmed me to call me out, but you don't seem energetic
cuz your skill is basically what you are, just plain pathetic
pmed me again, you dropped six lines, just for me to chew through
truth is, I know feather pillows that hit harder than you do

blah quick gl

DAZZLE 04-01-05 08:19 AM

uppin .

Dumb-D-Dumb 04-01-05 02:30 PM

upin for votes.....common on people VOTE..........

DAZZLE 04-04-05 12:22 PM

yeah, lets get this shit poppin...................

Oz™ 04-07-05 03:49 PM

Voted For: DAZZLE

punches-dazzle
personals-dazzle
multis-none
wordplay-none
creativity-none
enjoyment-none
vote-dazzle

Kin*Ethic™ 04-07-05 05:30 PM

Voted For: DAZZLE

Flow: Blah
Punches: Tie
Personals: Dazzle
Metas: Dazzle
Multis:Tie
Enjoyment: Both

Vote: Dazzle

Explanation: Both were ok .. dazzle came way more personal thats why basically he gets my vote .. should be a close match .. plz return the favor with some honest votes

DAZZLE 04-08-05 08:07 PM

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp .

M.C. Blasphemy 04-08-05 09:42 PM

Voted For: Dumb-D-Dumb

My vote goes to Dumb-D-Dumb though you both had some nice hits, Dazzle you kinda lost me when it came to the last two lines

vote Dumb-D-Dumb

Dumb-D-Dumb 04-11-05 02:26 PM

Upin for votes......................................

Verbal 04-19-05 05:27 PM

Voted For: DAZZLE

Ima "beat" this bitch harder than I "beat a drum"...
You admit your thick......your "dumber than dumb"!!!
These lines are priceless.....kinda like a packed treasure chest....
This aint a contest, you couldnt be "posotive"...if you had a blood test!
Heard both these bars before, almost identical, but I'll still give a nod for the wordplay..
Only live with your mum and not your dad..... whats up you only love her?
You must have bad family problems....if you'd snitch on your own brother!
Great personals...

my bro peeped your battle, and LE says you spit shit
only way you "dazzle"........ is the glitter on ya lipstick
Eh....
pmed me to call me out, but you don't seem energetic
cuz your skill is basically what you are, just plain pathetic
OK....
pmed me again, you dropped six lines, just for me to chew through
truth is, I know feather pillows that hit harder than you do
Played, but still aight..

Vote-Dazzle on those last two personals...actually not a bad battle, I wouldn't mind seeing a rematch in the future...

RTF if you can...

DAZZLE 04-19-05 05:32 PM

ight thanks, i will rtf asap .....

B Weezy 05-19-05 01:49 PM

Voted For: DAZZLE

DAZZLE - you were weak but better than Dumb-D-Dumb... you punchlines hit and your structure was iiight... your flow was better than Dumb-D-Dumb..keep working hard. 5/10

Dumb-D-Dumb - you were WEAK..i cant even understand your freestlye....your punchlines and flow was sorry..your structure is bad 2/10

josh654789 05-20-05 03:31 PM

This was feedback posted for Dumb-D-Dumb
 
dont feel like votin, but i liked your verse better. it just seemed to flow more.

K-Trini 05-21-05 08:28 AM

Voted For: Dumb-D-Dumb

Ima "beat" this bitch harder than I "beat a drum"...
You admit your thick......your "dumber than dumb"!!!
^^c'mon...gotta do better than dat
These lines are priceless.....kinda like a packed treasure chest....
This aint a contest, you couldnt be "posotive"...if you had a blood test!
^^wak
Only live with your mum and not your dad..... whats up you only love her?
You must have bad family problems....if you'd snitch on your own brother!
^^well,a decent personal

Conclusion-When a guy has a name like dumb-d-dumb,you gotta rip it badly.That 2nd punchline was too basic.The 3rd punch at least hit because it was a personal.

my bro peeped your battle, and LE says you spit shit
only way you "dazzle"........ is the glitter on ya lipstick
^^decent
pmed me to call me out, but you don't seem energetic
cuz your skill is basically what you are, just plain pathetic
^^wak,flow was good
pmed me again, you dropped six lines, just for me to chew through
truth is, I know feather pillows that hit harder than you do
^^played out and too basic.

Conclusion-uR problem is not having enough personals.Ur 1st bar was the best in this whole battle.THis was a weak battle.That last line us played out as fuck.Eminem himself used a line like dat in a freestyle.Off cource...he used the line better and made it hit harder.Weak verse,but ya still won.

Vote-Dumb~1~

Daubs 05-21-05 08:29 AM

This was feedback posted for DAZZLE
 
word to my alias, damn you dope son...............

Daubs 05-21-05 08:32 AM

and K your thick son, now take your ass to frot lines.

Sik Wit It 05-22-05 02:22 PM

Voted For: Dumb-D-Dumb

my bro peeped your battle, and LE says you spit shit
only way you "dazzle"........ is the glitter on ya lipstick
—1st line was wack, 2nd was okay
pmed me to call me out, but you don't seem energetic
cuz your skill is basically what you are, just plain pathetic
—decent
pmed me again, you dropped six lines, just for me to chew through
truth is, I know feather pillows that hit harder than you do
—ur best line here



Ima "beat" this bitch harder than I "beat a drum"...
You admit your thick......your "dumber than dumb"!!!
—wackness
These lines are priceless.....kinda like a packed treasure chest....
This aint a contest, you couldnt be "posotive"...if you had a blood test!
—okay, weak though here
Only live with your mum and not your dad..... whats up you only love her?
You must have bad family problems....if you'd snitch on your own brother!
—1st line was wack, 2nd got it

overall – even though both verses were weak..
dumb-d-dumb took this one, came more consistent
in this battle, had harder punches, used personas (both)
flows were good & the flows were good,

TuNiT 05-23-05 06:21 AM

Voted For: DAZZLE

diz wuz not a nice battl i relly wuznt feeling either verse but if u put a gun 2 my hed id vot fo DAZZLE becuz he had da moe creative linez an he used personalz


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