Skriptz vs OneStepBeyond
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
3-0 = KO

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 03-31-05 at 05:30 PM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.

Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-29-05 05:32 PM.

OneStepBeyond has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-29-05 05:32 PM.

half of RV im sure they positively don't give a fuck what we spittin,
cuz half RV likes my shit, the other half knows 'skriptz' is 'prewritten',
and i know prewritten punches are played, but hey, it makes perfect sense,
but when i 'post up' my verse you'll get 'clowned'like circus tents,
i bet you think battlin me that your the shit, and verses that yours is sick,
and your 'killer' skill is the equavalent to a motha fuckin low budget horror flick,
i saw your past battles... wwwweeeeeaaaaakkkkk.... so this has to match,
only time im throwin you out a 'win though' is if theres gonna be shattered glass..*

*win though sounds like window... meh

just tyrin somethin different

uppin.............................................

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

one step beyond
half of RV im sure they positively don't give a fuck what we spittin,
cuz half RV likes my shit, the other half knows 'skriptz' is 'prewritten',
and i know prewritten punches are played, but hey, it makes perfect sense,
but when i 'post up' my verse you'll get 'clowned'like circus tents,
i bet you think battlin me that your the shit, and verses that yours is sick,
and your 'killer' skill is the equavalent to a motha fuckin low budget horror flick,
i saw your past battles... wwwweeeeeaaaaakkkkk.... so this has to match,
only time im throwin you out a 'win though' is if theres gonna be shattered glass..*

*win though sounds like window... meh

liked ur punches
good lyrical choices
nice personals
iight structure
elevate a lil bit more & u b pretty good
8.5/10

skriptz
You’re getting fooled all around…
…like some1 did a magic-trick
You say your punches are hard…
…but they’re looking like shit
Just leave RV…go on…just quit
You wish you had a dope crew…
…once newbs started leaving it
Cut your tongue off…
…spitting game is not your fame
Comparing wackness to you…
…there both the same
Your styles & punches are wack…
…and so are you
& you’re only winning battles against newbs…
…cuz I had voted for you

iight punches...not 2 many of em doe
structure was real simple and easy 2 read
lines and lyrics were sort of weak
elevate more
7.5/10
no hate skriptz

v/1stepbeyond

ay yall cud u plz check out my battle vs. thekid523 and showtime
please leave good adequate feedback and a vote 4 da betta battler
holla back!

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^why are u always voting on my battles?

im votn on every1 battles
i need battle credits so i vote on ppls battles
ssrry 4 freepostin

p.s like ur sig...tyte as shit

uppin.............................................

Voted For: Skriptz

Haha...no real contest here. Onestep came decent...he's halfway there...but not nearly on Skriptz's level...structure was stretched for OneStep...that threw the flow off...just keep elevatin'...everybody gets better...Skriptz...not the hardest I've seen from you...but hard enough. Dope punches...closer was dope haha...nice work. No hate. Just elevate.

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limited edition... you've got to be kiddin...... he's serious isn't he?

^wha u talkin bout...ur vote was a joke...

uppin

Yes, I'm serious...and if you have anything to say, set it up...biotch.

uppin this shit

uppin... and yes i am battling limited edition....

This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

this was a decent verse....tht win though was kinda catchy...it was meh like u said

uppin this battle mayn

Voted For: Skriptz

OSB:

half of RV im sure they positively don't give a fuck what we spittin,
cuz half RV likes my shit, the other half knows 'skriptz' is 'prewritten',
^^decent 4/10
and i know prewritten punches are played, but hey, it makes perfect sense,
but when i 'post up' my verse you'll get 'clowned'like circus tents,
^^good meta 6/10
i bet you think battlin me that your the shit, and verses that yours is sick,
and your 'killer' skill is the equavalent to a motha fuckin low budget horror flick,
^^2nd line was forced but ok 3/10
i saw your past battles... wwwweeeeeaaaaakkkkk.... so this has to match,
only time im throwin you out a 'win though' is if theres gonna be shattered glass..*
^^good meta work on your structure 5/10

Overall: 18/40 (45%)

Skriptz:

You’re getting fooled all around…
…like some1 did a magic-trick
You say your punches are hard…
…but they’re looking like shit
^^Ok 4/10
Just leave RV…go on…just quit
You wish you had a dope crew…
…once newbs started leaving it
^^good bar 6/10
Cut your tongue off…
…spitting game is not your fame
Comparing wackness to you…
…there both the same
^^ok 4/10
Your styles & punches are wack…
…and so are you
& you’re only winning battles against newbs…
…cuz I had voted for you
^^ehh decent 5/10

Overall: 19/40 (48%)

Vote: Skriptz

Wack battle OSB almost had it if he would have dropped a better bar than his opener

Return the favor with an honest vote on a battle in my sig!

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uppin this shit

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

meh, i liked OSB's verse better, he attempted more complex punches, and they were more creative....skriptz, your stuff was just real basic, nothing to them really....comparing whackness line was good, but everything else was whack or too basic....no offense, but you dont seem to try anyone........onestep, nice stuff, laughed out loud at the horror movie one....and finisher was done...everything else was decent, but enough to take this one easily, keep up

v/onestepbeyond

uppin.............................................

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

Vote=OneStep

the window line took it for one step..skriptz didnt really even throw a punch at him or contain any wordplay metas or multis shizzle was weak tho all around seen better from you one step

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

yo i tink onestepbeyond won diz becauz not only wuz his punchez and da wordplay real good flowing an effective but diz skriptz dude had like 4 linez in ay line lyke wut da fukk is dat yo???????i know u said no shitty votez becuz of da structure, bit it iz da main reazon u lost yo itz jst horribl an da linez are less effective an creative cuz o like 4 linez in da verse u need ta doi linez lykje diz watch

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lyke dat iz yo, yo personalz wuz okay, not much originality in yo verse my mayn skriptz but onestep took diz for da better flow an harder punchlinez in hiz personals

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uppin.... im pretty sure the vote count is fucked up.....

Voted For: Skriptz

You’re getting fooled all around…
…like some1 did a magic-trick
You say your punches are hard…
…but they’re looking like shit
5...not feelin this...too basic!!
Just leave RV…go on…just quit
You wish you had a dope crew…
…once newbs started leaving it
4...nah, this is weak yo!!
Cut your tongue off…
…spitting game is not your fame
Comparing wackness to you…
…there both the same
4...played concept, and basic vocabs still!
Your styles & punches are wack…
…and so are you
& you’re only winning battles against newbs…
…cuz I had voted for you
6...prolly ya best bar!!!

OVERALL: 19/40


half of RV im sure they positively don't give a fuck what we spittin,
cuz half RV likes my shit, the other half knows 'skriptz' is 'prewritten',
0...BOOOO!!! no points for pre-writ lines!!! not from me anyway!!!!
and i know prewritten punches are played, but hey, it makes perfect sense,
but when i 'post up' my verse you'll get 'clowned'like circus tents,
4...ok i give you the 4 for the 2nd line, the 1st line referred to the previous pre-writ bar but this aint a pre-writ bar in general so you get some points!!!
i bet you think battlin me that your the shit, and verses that yours is sick,
and your 'killer' skill is the equavalent to a motha fuckin low budget horror flick,
6...decent meta, nice line!!!
i saw your past battles... wwwweeeeeaaaaakkkkk.... so this has to match,
only time im throwin you out a 'win though' is if theres gonna be shattered glass..*
7...decent closer, gud meta again!!!

OVERALL: 17/40

ok i am honestly shocked.......pre-written shit is soooooo gay and if anyone reads this know that i do not give points for direct pre-writ barz, they are gay!!!! the only reason i give this to skriptz is cuz he didnt drop no pre-writ lines...played concepts are gay but pre-writ shit is sumthin else!!!!

don't do it kiddies!!!!

V/ - Skriptz

This was feedback posted for Skriptz
 

basic ass rhymes dude elevate your vocabulary just consrtuctive critisism no hate

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

v/ Onestepbeyond

no not cuz of scriptz structure......onestep had a better all around verse.......both were kinda weak.......but it looks like scriptz ain really try hard on purpose.......lacked creativity, no punches, blah personals, wordplay was aight........onestep's wasnt much betta but his lines hit harder than scriptz

OPENER: scriptz
MIDDLE: beyond
CLOSER: scriptz

return da favor......{me vs. tycoon, diman, ovdose, verbal, freestyle-king, etc.} ne one...

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This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
 

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Voted For: OneStepBeyond

You’re getting fooled all around…
…like some1 did a magic-trick
You say your punches are hard…
…but they’re looking like shit
Eh.......unoriginal....
Just leave RV…go on…just quit
You wish you had a dope crew…
…once newbs started leaving it
Eh..........
Cut your tongue off…
…spitting game is not your fame
Comparing wackness to you…
…there both the same
ok..........
Your styles & punches are wack…
…and so are you
& you’re only winning battles against newbs…
…cuz I had voted for you
ok closer.......

half of RV im sure they positively don't give a fuck what we spittin,
cuz half RV likes my shit, the other half knows 'skriptz' is 'prewritten',
ok.........
and i know prewritten punches are played, but hey, it makes perfect sense,
but when i 'post up' my verse you'll get 'clowned'like circus tents,
good.....
i bet you think battlin me that your the shit, and verses that yours is sick,
and your 'killer' skill is the equavalent to a motha fuckin low budget horror flick,
good.....
i saw your past battles... wwwweeeeeaaaaakkkkk.... so this has to match,
only time im throwin you out a 'win though' is if theres gonna be shattered glass..*
nice closer...

OSB had a great closer, more control of his verses, even addressing his played line and turning it into a rejoinder/set-up for the next verse. Better punches on his half.

Skriptz, OK spit, it would take out most herb verses, but against a spit with complexity and decent punches, it really doesn't hold any ground. Not bad, just not enough weight behind the punches, and some were kind of played.

RTF

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

I think that OneStepBeyond got this battle because i feel that OneStepBeyond came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt OneStepBeyond got it was effective and was on point Skriptz you should of been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to OneStepBeyond good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to OneStepBeyond and flow and structure i'll give to OneStepBeyond.

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Voted For: Skriptz

Skriptz.......
You’re getting fooled all around…
…like some1 did a magic-trick
You say your punches are hard…
…but they’re looking like shit
Decent...hit ok...nothin special....4/10

Just leave RV…go on…just quit
You wish you had a dope crew…
…once newbs started leaving it
decent personal here...6/10

Cut your tongue off…
…spitting game is not your fame
Comparing wackness to you…
…there both the same
nice...5/10

Your styles & punches are wack…
…and so are you
& you’re only winning battles against newbs…
…cuz I had voted for you
6/10

overall.......21/40


OSB...........
half of RV im sure they positively don't give a fuck what we spittin,
cuz half RV likes my shit, the other half knows 'skriptz' is 'prewritten',
kinda played on the skriptz thing...3/10

and i know prewritten punches are played, but hey, it makes perfect sense,
but when i 'post up' my verse you'll get 'clowned'like circus tents,
i liked this....6/10

i bet you think battlin me that your the shit, and verses that yours is sick,
and your 'killer' skill is the equavalent to a motha fuckin low budget horror flick,
ok...4/10

i saw your past battles... wwwweeeeeaaaaakkkkk.... so this has to match,
only time im throwin you out a 'win though' is if theres gonna be shattered glass..*
liked it....6/10

overall.....19/40

Voted For: OneStepBeyond

votin for One

one gets my vote due to harder punches and more creative use of multies

One
ya punches were nice and hard hittin and very creative
ya had a hot flow with a nicely layed out structure
ya wordplay and personals were tight as well
didnt see many multies though try to get them in ur verse man

Skripts
ya punches wernt as strong as they should have been
n your personals well i didnt even see any worth menting
you had a good flow but it was made easy due to ur structure set up
didnt see any multies
u didnt come as hard as u usually do

vote goes to One

better punches, creative wordplay



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