Invektive vs MaRVJay1009
 

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10 - 12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No Dickriding

Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 04-02-05 at 10:09 PM

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Closed - Expired / old battle win

im waitin man...lets go u got 4 days da prewrite fam lol

Invektive has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-30-05 10:40 PM.

LOL i prewrite???...seriously kid...i wouldnt waste my time prewriting on you....


Marv in hip hop?..you wouldnt get cake from it..If rap was your birthday fool
I could drop a buncha shitty non-hitting punches…...and call it wordplay too
Nobody’s feelin your style faggot…just retire…itll be dope if that time came
You claim you “shit on RV” in your OM…and only mentioned like 9 names
He PM’ed me to be his partner..hesitated..didn’t think the fag seemed worthy
And clearly you came with the weakest verse we had in the tag team tourney
You the only person feelin Marv...cause truly your not the least bit witty bitch
Look “hard”..but you soft on the inside..I compare to Mickey D’s crispy strips
You claim you “Amerikaz Nightmare”…yea…maybe if you scared a nerd or 2
you claim the whole US is afraid of Marv..and only like .02% has heard of you
HA..you said you was top 5 on Rv in text in the post if just read of yours kiddo
But you have 5 losses...and last time I checked…Five Plus One Equals Six yo

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-31-05 04:03 PM.

go head fag hate me then 18 wins...so now u da sickest lame???
alias is IKE u lose 2 SKEPTiKUL which hurt ya record so u switchd ya name!
^all of its true!...marvjay's da dopest head on RV accordin 2 u
............remember when u pre wrote 4 ghoste&blackmagic???
2 of da worst mc's,you showed me ya verse on aim 4 days be4 it was due!
fukkin with me u'll be shot stuck in a tree & u gon die from ya wounds.
4get dis "site" ima cum 2 ya crib & put ya "eyes" on da "blind(s)" in ya room
bleedin from da face,he's a snitch known in hood 4 screamin 2 da jake's
dis niggaz parents were gon name him "typo" cuzz he was a "mistake"
T.E dont luv u stop suckin ya crew,fake personals in ya verse nuthin is true
should of made ya name "CRiP" cuzz u only spit sick 1nce in da "BLUE"
you been exsposed prick ya done,might as well go get ya gun.
chances of u gettin a W,like "jenny craig turnin catholic","slim 2 nun"

lol @ me prewriting....fake ass personal...i just had done my verse up quick...lol then i showed it to you....your one funny guy....

This was feedback posted for Invektive
 

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This was feedback posted for Invektive
 

Marv came a lil bit hard, but his flow was off. I dunno who guna take this. Invek came hard at the beginning, then fell off near the end. Marv was lacking at the beginning, but then picked it up near the end, so I dunno.

And marv bitches about hella votes, cause he did have 9 losses a few days ago.

lol whut i neva even had 6 losses homie stop watchin me....lol@9 losses

This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

Checking Polls.....nice shit Marv ur verse made me not even want to read his i started to read it but quit.....~1~ i think u got it

Voted For: Invektive

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^ meant to check polls......sorry.................

lol ur a funny dude its all hood tho........

Still 0-0...fucka voters these days...upping this crew battle.

goodlookin fam....damm niggaz is not tryin da vote

Good Call...I'll keep upping this battle for you guys if you want...

We have allready won 3 of the 5 battles...so this battle and Given Lights don't really matter towards the crew battle any more, but this is a good battle...voters need to vote.

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Invektives quite busy so I will up this for him...

Voted For: Invektive

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^^ fuck get that removed.. god damn it............

yo u a fukkin fagget ass nigga

if it dont matter no more...just get it taken off...cause nobodys voting..and it takes like 2 months to get it over with in EFL

This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

oh man jay that last line boosted ya verse alot
invek nasty fucking verse, checking polls

damm dis is crazee i hate dis fukkin site 4real...............

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Invektive:

Marv in hip hop?..you wouldnt get cake from it..If rap was your birthday fool
I could drop a buncha shitty non-hitting punches…...and call it wordplay too
^^no 2/10
Nobody’s feelin your style faggot…just retire…itll be dope if that time came
You claim you “shit on RV” in your OM…and only mentioned like 9 names
^^decent personal 4/10
He PM’ed me to be his partner..hesitated..didn’t think the fag seemed worthy
And clearly you came with the weakest verse we had in the tag team tourney
^^decent 4/10
You the only person feelin Marv...cause truly your not the least bit witty bitch
Look “hard”..but you soft on the inside..I compare to Mickey D’s crispy strips
^^lmao good bar and meta 8/10
You claim you “Amerikaz Nightmare”…yea…maybe if you scared a nerd or 2
you claim the whole US is afraid of Marv..and only like .02% has heard of you
^^good bar 6/10
HA..you said you was top 5 on Rv in text in the post if just read of yours kiddo
But you have 5 losses...and last time I checked…Five Plus One Equals Six yo
^^no 3/10

overall: 27/60 (45%)

MarvJay1009:

go head fag hate me then 18 wins...so now u da sickest lame???
alias is IKE u lose 2 SKEPTiKUL which hurt ya record so u switchd ya name!
^^decent personal 5/10
^all of its true!...marvjay's da dopest head on RV accordin 2 u
............remember when u pre wrote 4 ghoste&blackmagic???
2 of da worst mc's,you showed me ya verse on aim 4 days be4 it was due!
^^woah stretched and wack 1/10
fukkin with me u'll be shot stuck in a tree & u gon die from ya wounds.
4get dis "site" ima cum 2 ya crib & put ya "eyes" on da "blind(s)" in ya room
^^ehh decent metas 5/10
bleedin from da face,he's a snitch known in hood 4 screamin 2 da jake's
dis niggaz parents were gon name him "typo" cuzz he was a "mistake"
^^ehh 3/10
T.E dont luv u stop suckin ya crew,fake personals in ya verse nuthin is true
should of made ya name "CRiP" cuzz u only spit sick 1nce in da "BLUE"
^^finally a good bar 7/10
you been exsposed prick ya done,might as well go get ya gun.
chances of u gettin a W,like "jenny craig turnin catholic","slim 2 nun"
^^good closer 7/10


Overall: 28/60 (47%)

Vote: MarvJay

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

go head fag hate me then 18 wins...so now u da sickest lame???
alias is IKE u lose 2 SKEPTiKUL which hurt ya record so u switchd ya name!
^^weak opener,6.5/10
^all of its true!...marvjay's da dopest head on RV accordin 2 u
............remember when u pre wrote 4 ghoste&blackmagic???
2 of da worst mc's,you showed me ya verse on aim 4 days be4 it was due!
^^holy stretched, funny personal 6.5/10
fukkin with me u'll be shot stuck in a tree & u gon die from ya wounds.
4get dis "site" ima cum 2 ya crib & put ya "eyes" on da "blind(s)" in ya room
^^weak fam....6/10
bleedin from da face,he's a snitch known in hood 4 screamin 2 da jake's
dis niggaz parents were gon name him "typo" cuzz he was a "mistake"
^^simple, decent though...7/10
T.E dont luv u stop suckin ya crew,fake personals in ya verse nuthin is true
should of made ya name "CRiP" cuzz u only spit sick 1nce in da "BLUE"
^^nah.....5/10
you been exsposed prick ya done,might as well go get ya gun.
chances of u gettin a W,like "jenny craig turnin catholic","slim 2 nun"
^^lol,.best line outta ya verse..8/10
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marv, ya shits was stretched n barely flowed man, ya punches were really iffy, you did have some inners n atempted multi's that helped ya flow out a lil..but it didnt seem like you spent more then 10 minutes on your entire verse, no beef bro, just callin it how i read it.........39/60
Marv in hip hop?..you wouldnt get cake from it..If rap was your birthday fool
I could drop a buncha shitty non-hitting punches…...and call it wordplay too
^^lol, but it stretched beyond belief....6/10
Nobody’s feelin your style faggot…just retire…itll be dope if that time came
You claim you “shit on RV” in your OM…and only mentioned like 9 names
^^meh,...wasnt feeling the punch..5.5/10
He PM’ed me to be his partner..hesitated..didn’t think the fag seemed worthy
And clearly you came with the weakest verse we had in the tag team tourney
^^umm, wheres the wit??...5/10
You the only person feelin Marv...cause truly your not the least bit witty bitch
Look “hard”..but you soft on the inside..I compare to Mickey D’s crispy strips
^^gettin better 7/10
You claim you “Amerikaz Nightmare”…yea…maybe if you scared a nerd or 2
you claim the whole US is afraid of Marv..and only like .02% has heard of you
^^nice...8/10
HA..you said you was top 5 on Rv in text in the post if just read of yours kiddo
But you have 5 losses...and last time I checked…Five Plus One Equals Six yo
^^got it...6.5/10

invek, your shit was stretched way bad too,....why ??..
you had a couple punches that was ok, one connected good(.02% has heard of you)but other then that you both have simular styles...n stretch ya SHIT way to far, no inners which doesnt help ya flow at all.....it seemed you rushed ya verse also...38/60
this was close, you both had some decent stuff in ya verses, this could really swing either way in the end...
personally i was just feelin marvs a lil more
return the favour(its just an openmic)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=185362

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Aight Check IT..

MarvJay: 7/10
You Had Personals all Throughout This Verse With Some Nice Hitting Punches. Your Vocab Wasn't Much, and Structure Is Stretched but The Verse Was Nice. Punches and Personals Won This For You.

Invekitive: 5/10
You Tried Personals but The Set-Up and Overall Punches Weren't Hitting Hard. You Need To Get Your Concepts and Directions Through Ya Verse Originized With Better Presence. Stretched Lines As Well...Not Much Vocab.

Overall Vote: MarvJay For Better Punches and Personals.

~R~

ko??? or we gotta go da 5 fam...................................

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