unregistered vs da Illest!!
 

Battle Rules:

10 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-02-05 at 11:25 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

DQ'ed.. this line:

Im chasing a girl..so he wont be taking it well
when i treat him like a turtle n put his face in a shell

is basically the same as a line used in the Jae Millz vs. Murda Mook audio battle

da Illest!! has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-30-05 11:37 AM.

Unregistered has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-31-05 02:27 AM.

No chance of loss if your lyrics are as played as ya name is
It’ll be even easier if ya styles as fucked up as ya anus
Your weak so any damage done is minimal
And your only good record is your criminal
Fucka fake persona dont try to be hard bitch
When your mom calls you special she means retarded
My words leave you broken hearted worse than big pun
Ya posts ya verses and even your sigs dumb
Could mistake me for a vet cause I just put this bitch down
You couldn’t win one if this was out of 66 rounds

good luck man.....................................

ya miniscule, im in 1st place n this hoes little..skill? u show little
his in between but being at da tops like n over-cooked egg..theirs no middle!!!
Im chasing a girl..so he wont be taking it well
when i treat him like a turtle n put his face in a shell
I'll kick ya ass from here to next june...leave u wit flesh wounds
coz it obvious you aint fa real(pharil) just like da neptunes!!
You battle wack mcees coz your just a noob son!!
win??..u cant come on wit a name like dat n expect not to loose one!!..
You'll never be me...so I guess da truths scary
when it comes 2 ya teeth i'll dent-all(dental) so you'd best believe in da tooth fairy...peace

uppin this.........................................

fuck it's hard as to get votes these days :'(...........

jea................................uppin it all votes will be returned

Voted For: Unregistered

Quote:

Fucka fake persona dont try to be hard bitch When your mom calls you special she means retarded

^^ that was ight..

6/10 more fluent & direct than ilelsts verse

RespecK
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fuck man if you dnt understanding it then dont fucking vote...u prolly dont even know wot wordplay is u lil faggot....that vote should be dq.

lol pm strobe to get that vote DQ'd if you want I cant be stuffed though cause he voted for me lol ;)

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upping this for the very last timeeeeeeee uppppppp

lol upppppppppppppppppppppppppt votes will be returned....tis like no1 votes thesedays anymore

uppppppppppiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnngggggggg for the 2nd last time

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ima start voting on sum battles to rtf ite............................................... ........

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Voted For: da Illest!!

Flow: Blah Its Text
Punches: Da Illest
Personals: Unregistered
Wordplay: Daillest
Metas: Tie
Multis: Daillest
Enjoyment: Blahhhhhhhhh

Vote: Daillest

Explanation: He had som semi ok wordplay eh punches as well as metas that edged out anything unregistered threw out there .. need to get more personal and play off eachothers names tho .. iono stay elevating .. stay up .. 1

ite thx man uppin this all votes will be returned.......................................... ..............

This was feedback posted for da Illest!!
 

Voted For: da Illest!!

Regis, bad punches and bad personals. all you did wuz state, you didnt make it a punch. work on your punches and personals. only decent line was the first one. your retarded line didn't rhyme.

da, not a good verse either. your punches were weak and i didnt really find any personals. your metas were bad, and your multis were forced. work on your basics before tryin more complicated stuff. you insulted yourself with the newb line.

v-da illest

What is this true illest if so thats not very ill of you :nono:

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uppping this battle again god damn lazy motha fuckaz not returning votes

cmon uppin.................wtf i didnt bite shit, I typed that shit up there n then, it came off the top. So wot maybe that punch has been used before but dont mean ive bitten it........

tsk tsk, I just heard that muder mook vs jay millz battle

you bit that turtle line and that pharil line

It doesnt matter if you didnt bite it word for word you stole the concept and the rhyme you plagiarizing theif.

Now go make an alias fag.

fuck you i aint even heard that battle before u chump. that bullshit i mean their common concepts they prolly been used like 100 times. They aint the only ones to make dat concept up u know. i aint getting banned for that coz thats bollox i didnt bite shit now up da votes as normal........................................

Voted For: da Illest!!

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=184675
^^^vote

Ight...neother of you guys had punchlines that amazed me.Unregistered I don't like that line bout Big Pun dawg.I reccomend you don't use lines like that in real life.This is one net battling so it not real but just don't use it.U both could add a lil more complexity to ur rhymes.I don't just mean vocab. I mean add some quality methaphor and shit.The best line out this whole verse was da illest 's last one and it was pretty weak.No hate dawgs.

Vote-Da illest