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OneStepBeyond vs Limited Edition
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6 - 12 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 04-02-05 at 01:13 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
OneStepBeyond has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-30-05 02:58 PM.
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you must be stupid as them cuz to beat me ya need you and a friend,
you no showed on my alias and i won't blame you if you do it again,* im bringin punchlines when its crunchtime till your ass is all depressed, Limited Edition?!?! yeah right.... when lyrically your just like all the rest, read this and be pissed off...oh well.. but i just want it took all intense, you bein seein more 'posts against you' than bein pushed on a fence, i don't about you votin for skriptz.. meh.. so i'll be takin both ya lives, us battling is 'point'less... like 2 men... both with broken knives... lemme finish it real quick... i bet ya callin me a herb... i don't care... but no need to give you the best of luck, cause ya battlin a noob for wins or losin to a noob, either way your rep is fucked.. |
Limited Edition has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-30-05 10:04 PM.
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A'yo...
Bringin' heat with you..? Bitch you just best begone... I will say you ain' wack at all...your 'OneStepBeyond'... That's fact, ain' opinion...thats just your evalutation.. 'Cause bein' dope is one step beyond your imagination... You pursuin' a dream...well let me enduce a nightmare... Only if I was as wack as you, would make this fight fair... What the fuck is 'S-Bury'? Oh wait...I get it that's great... The only beef you could bring...is a fuckin' Salsbury steak... Dawg before you step up...better get some practices... Because your losses like ya name...'JustAsPackedAsThis'... Blah quick ten... |
Voted For: OneStepBeyond
aiyo....what i saw limited edish >Bringin' heat with you..? Bitch you just best begone... I will say you ain' wack at all...your 'OneStepBeyond'... -nice play off the name, set up coulda been better 7/10 >That's fact, ain' opinion...thats just your evalutation.. 'Cause bein' dope is one step beyond your imagination... -kinda already did a name joke...not bad 4/10 >You pursuin' a dream...well let me enduce a nightmare... Only if I was as wack as you, would make this fight fair... -meh, played concept, set up was nice 6/10 >What the fuck is 'S-Bury'? Oh wait...I get it that's great... The only beef you could bring...is a fuckin' Salsbury steak... haha, i laughed....8/10 >Dawg before you step up...better get some practices... Because your losses like ya name...'JustAsPackedAsThis'... -meh, not feelin it 5/10 overall: 30/50....not bad, thought some of your lines coulda been better, different wordplay woulda made them more effective, but overall, you came with some decent, creative punches, this was close, one of the reasons you lost some, because you played off his name twice, in two bars, it was kinda herby, ahha, no offense........but pretty good verse man OSB >you must be stupid as them cuz to beat me ya need you and a friend, you no showed on my alias and i won't blame you if you do it again,* -set up was whack but personal was nice 7/10 >im bringin punchlines when its crunchtime till your ass is all depressed, Limited Edition?!?! yeah right.... when lyrically your just like all the rest, -decent 6/10 >read this and be pissed off...oh well.. but i just want it took all intense, you bein seein more 'posts against you' than bein pushed on a fence, haha, i laughed here, creative 8/10 >i don't about you votin for skriptz.. meh.. so i'll be takin both ya lives, us battling is 'point'less... like 2 men... both with broken knives... bahh, not feelin it 4/10 >i bet ya callin me a herb... i don't care... but no need to give you the best of luck, cause ya battlin a noob for wins or losin to a noob, either way your rep is fucked.. coulda been worded better, but nice finisher 7/10 overall: 32/50.....word, this was a close battle, i was feelin yours more OSB, both had your notables, both had your write-offs, but i think OSB sneaked this one out with harder punches and keeping it more consistent......it was close, so thats what it came down too, good battle v/OneStepBeyond......word, rtf if ya could, glockoma battle if ya get the time |
Voted For: Limited Edition
Bringin' heat with you..? Bitch you just best begone... I will say you ain' wack at all...your 'OneStepBeyond'... gud attempt at a personal on his name, i wasn't really feelin this one though. That's fact, ain' opinion...thats just your evalutation.. 'Cause bein' dope is one step beyond your imagination... lmao!! funny shit!! better play off his name!! You pursuin' a dream...well let me enduce a nightmare... Only if I was as wack as you, would make this fight fair... kinda played concept, but still pretty gud!! What the fuck is 'S-Bury'? Oh wait...I get it that's great... The only beef you could bring...is a fuckin' Salsbury steak... decent, got a laugh outta me!! Dawg before you step up...better get some practices... Because your losses like ya name...'JustAsPackedAsThis'... nice closer!!! you must be stupid as them cuz to beat me ya need you and a friend, you no showed on my alias and i won't blame you if you do it again,* pretty gud, link was nice im bringin punchlines when its crunchtime till your ass is all depressed, Limited Edition?!?! yeah right.... when lyrically your just like all the rest, not feelin this personal, cud've been done differently to be more affective!! read this and be pissed off...oh well.. but i just want it took all intense, you bein seein more 'posts against you' than bein pushed on a fence, decent, nice meta in there to i don't about you votin for skriptz.. meh.. so i'll be takin both ya lives, us battling is 'point'less... like 2 men... both with broken knives... vocab was choppy, not feelin it!! i bet ya callin me a herb... i don't care... but no need to give you the best of luck, cause ya battlin a noob for wins or losin to a noob, either way your rep is fucked.. admittin ure a newb, not gud!!! overall Ltd took this with ease, he started off weak but came together and dropped some dopeness, especially liked the 2nd personal on his name, shit had me laughin. Onestep, opened hot wit the link and shit but then ure vocab went off and ure punches just lost affect and didnt really connect yo. both y'all came pretty basic with some spots of hotness, Ltd was just more consistent with his shit so he gets my vote. P.S. - Yo, return the fave on my battle wit Jimmy Pocketz......the link is in my siggy!!!!! |
Voted For: Limited Edition
This was a tough one to vote on but in the end L.E. took it. OSB your lines didn't connect that hard you had a few good job with the no show thing. I felt your metas were a bit basic and in some lines you were missin words or you worded your lines wrong plus they were a bit stretched....Intense and rest don't rhyme and your end rhymes were basic KNIVES LIVES heard it a million times. Your last line you insulted yourself you called yourself a newb. My favorite line of yours was... you bein seein more 'posts against you' than bein pushed on a fence very creative :thumbup: LE i liked your rhyming technique syllable compound is off the hook very good i like seein that it's not repetative like regular shit. Good job usin his name against him gave you the uper hand on the personals you also flowed better structure was on point easy to read and a nice closer that added the final punch favorite line.... I will say you ain' wack at all...your 'OneStepBeyond' Good job :thumbup: VOTE/ Limited Edition Return the favor honest votes only link in sig take your time so it doesn't get DQ'ed |
i bet ya callin me a herb... i don't care... but no need to give you the best of luck,
cause ya battlin a noob for wins or losin to a noob, either way your rep is fucked.. noone seems to notice that i said i bet your callin me a herb.. as in he thinks im one.. so either way his reps fucked |
and i wasn't trying to ryhme intense and rest...
im bringin punchlines when its crunchtime till your ass is all depressed Limited Edition?!?! yeah right.... when lyrically your just like all the rest rest and depressed.... did you not even fuckin read it |
Uppin' this shit....................................
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Voted For: Limited Edition
lmfao this was hella funny ight he came ok but heres how i saw it punches L.E personalls-L.E structure-L.E pretty much tha whole batle ok verse one step but need more punches in there werd Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Uppin'...please have more explain vote than Ca$pers...
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Uppin' for votes...fuckin' sleepers...............
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Uppin' for some more votes...fuckin' sleepers.....
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uppin.... and for fucks sake i said he was calling me an herb.. i was sayin in his eyes thats what i am.. therefore he'd be losing to one or battling one for wins...
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Voted For: Limited Edition
1- i bet ya callin me a herb... i don't care... but no need to give you the best of luck, cause ya battlin a noob for wins or losin to a noob, either way your rep is fucked.. ^^^ya whole verse was ass until this, and this was absolutely the best punch of the battle le- Bringin' heat with you..? Bitch you just best begone... I will say you ain' wack at all...your 'OneStepBeyond'... That's fact, ain' opinion...thats just your evalutation.. 'Cause bein' dope is one step beyond your imagination ^^you had two real embarrasing punches though so you win... and your whole verse was alot more percistant than 1's yo return the fav... link in sig Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
good verse OSB i was feelin the closer and some nice punches in there. limited edition decent verse from u too
uppin for OSB..lets get some good votes in here. |
Voted For: OneStepBeyond
votin for OneStepBeyond One step got this due to a more creative series of punches one- Flow- nice flow i kept wit it easily punches- creative i liked you opener alot personals- descent personals come a lil harder neext time strucutre nice multies- didnt see any so elevate on those i like this personal: im bringin punchlines when its crunchtime till your ass is all depressed, Limited Edition?!?! yeah right.... when lyrically your just like all the rest (creative n hard hittin Limited i think you came to basic with your verse punches- seemed a lil to basic not hard hitting personasl- hard hitting n creavtive but the punches wernt strucutre- nce n descent flow was good i kept with you if ya punches woulda been harder u woulda had him but they wernt he had strong punches n a hard hittin personal u had hard personal n punches one gets my vote be sure to RTF link below sig holla good battlew fams |
This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
nice drop osb anyways just checkin out the polls hope htis wont count asa votecuz last time it did...
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This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
checkin the damn polls on this shit rigth here...should be good lol
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Voted For: Limited Edition
OneStep- your fence ish was cool... as well as the closer was feelin that.... but other than that your structure seems a bit stretched, and you just had mediocre punches besides the ones I cited... Limited Edition- not bad... the Salisbury steak line had me laughin... and the rest were coo... had some coo nameplay in there that was augmented by a good structure and flow... Vote Limited RTF........links in sig |
Voted For: Limited Edition
Bringin' heat with you..? Bitch you just best begone... I will say you ain' wack at all...your 'OneStepBeyond'... kinda played here, but its still good That's fact, ain' opinion...thats just your evalutation.. 'Cause bein' dope is one step beyond your imagination... never seen this 1 b4, nice punch You pursuin' a dream...well let me enduce a nightmare... Only if I was as wack as you, would make this fight fair... weak punch here, not really feelin this one What the fuck is 'S-Bury'? Oh wait...I get it that's great... The only beef you could bring...is a fuckin' Salsbury steak... nice Dawg before you step up...better get some practices... Because your losses like ya name...'JustAsPackedAsThis'... decent closer overall… you had a nice drop, those punches were hardhittin all the way thru ur verse, except for 1 or you of them, but you had a nice flow, good structure, & the punches were good overall you had a nice drop… 7/10 you must be stupid as them cuz to beat me ya need you and a friend, you no showed on my alias and i won't blame you if you do it again,* weak im bringin punchlines when its crunchtime till your ass is all depressed, Limited Edition?!?! yeah right.... when lyrically your just like all the rest, wha? Wack punch here read this and be pissed off...oh well.. but i just want it took all intense, you bein seein more 'posts against you' than bein pushed on a fence, ur best line here i don't about you votin for skriptz.. meh.. so i'll be takin both ya lives, us battling is 'point'less... like 2 men... both with broken knives... the wording was wack, punch was weak overall… you had an aight drop, most of your punches were wack except for 1.. ur structure was in place, the flow was pretty decent, and some multies were aight, but overall elevate on ur punches, cuz those shits were weak no hate though.. 5/10 RTF LIMITED EDITION ON ONE OF MY BATTLES |
Voted For: Limited Edition
LE you got this easy as hell man your structure and wordplay were really nice.. i don;t even think the other guy is really on your level. but otherwise i just think that you did a very nice job with your delievery overall . you had alot of good punches and personals as well as vocab one step your verse was to basic next time upp your vocab and get more creative with your personals and punches no hate though i just think you were out of your leauge Vote..LE RTF LINK IS IN THE SIG |
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