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MaRVJay1009 vs .K.onfliktz
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10 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 200 Check in by: 03-30-05 at 09:05 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
im here fam lets get it goin..........
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aiightz lez do this..................................
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check in nigga............
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nigga u too....LMFAO....LMFAO........................
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lol i hate checkin first and waistin my bars....dis shit is gonna close soon
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.K.onfliktz has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-30-05 08:54 PM.
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MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-30-05 08:56 PM.
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he's a bitch....
so ima spray at dis broad...then leave layed in a dark hearse... ur wack fam u like da "sneaker" no1 would pay 4 a "KON-verse" let kon keep playin tuff ima have da snap dat clown's kneck.. i'll put my "nikes on ya spine" datz whut i call a "back ground CHECK" ya roster weak i merked all dem whores in ya fagget team..... u a criminal? no only time "FEDS came 2 ya house" u "ordered da magazine" kon is really overrated..he like da rest all dez vets r see thru.. ima call u "john" now u not a "legend" u 1 of dem "ordinary ppl" all i do dismantle men...marv? kon u know u cant handle him... if i cum where u "from:" u'll be like dat "piston" cat u gon "R.i.P in hamilton" ...nuff said if u dont get nothin dont vote |
This herb "hungry" fag Better Re-"boot", Cuz Kon'll turn ya kicks into "tim" "bits"..
lost the "weight Loss" lotto by a number,So jea You can say marv "missed" "fit".. "shootin Bars" like terminator, He "servin" free "shots" So Ima burn-dis-"weightor".. Tries Flirtin wit "big" guys..but connects wit more "foot" "balls" then Oakland Raiders.. Kids the Nerd of rapverse...Have em surrounded by blue...like he Scrapped cops.. Why u makin Negative threads about Rv..when its in ya name...... in Cap Locks!!.. Him havin money? thats a Nightmare..I see More bills Then the microsoft network.. Kidz gettin owned like Jersey At Miama...So you can consider this.."Net" "merked".. Blow Marv through his rooftop..have 'em runnin top of his house like a satelite dish.. Still hasnt matured yet..sh..betta watch my language......That Dude Marv is Ishhh |
thats some horrific fuckin structure holy shit
This herb "hungry" fag Better Re-"boot", Cuz Kon'll turn ya kicks into "tim" "bits".. lost the "weight Loss" lotto by a number,So jea You can say marv "missed" "fit".. "shootin Bars" like terminator, He "servin" free "shots" So Ima burn-dis-"weightor".. Tries Flirtin wit "big" guys..but connects wit more "foot" "balls" then Oakland Raiders.. Kids the Nerd of rapverse...Have em surrounded by blue...like he Scrapped cops.. Why u makin Negative threads about Rv..when its in ya name...... in Cap Locks!!.. Him havin money? thats a Nightmare..I see More bills Then the microsoft network.. Kidz gettin owned like Jersey At Miama...So you can consider this.."Net" "merked".. Blow Marv through his rooftop..have 'em runnin top of his house like a satelite dish.. Still hasnt matured yet..sh..betta watch my language......That Dude Marv is Ishhh |
finally...uppin 4 some votes now
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
all i do dismantle men...marv? kon u know u cant handle him... if i cum where u "from:" u'll be like dat "piston" cat u gon "R.i.P in hamilton" All I Can Say Iss Damn, Mih Nigga Marv Iss Bacc Punches-Marv,Had More Punches Openor-Marv,Had Some Hot Shit Personals-Marv,Had Personals To Structure-None Multies-None Vocab-None Wordplay-Marv,Killed Him With That Closer-Marv,Lmao Mih Nigga Iss Bacc Marv Took Thiss All The Way He Came Strong And Finished Stronger So He Get The W For Thiss /V Marvjay1009............. Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
u didnt explain mine so therefore that is dq'd
and u broke it down with one line..fagget.... Dq'd learn how to vote u fuckin herb |
This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
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^^^fam stop checkin da fukkin polls in all my battles dat shit is gettin gay
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
so ima spray at dis broad...then leave layed in a dark hearse... ur wack fam u like da "sneaker" no1 would pay 4 a "KON-verse" ^^^ Like da opener pretty thoughtful let kon keep playin tuff ima have da snap dat clown's kneck.. i'll put my "nikes on ya spine" datz whut i call a "back ground CHECK" ^^^ha ha ya roster weak i merked all dem whores in ya fagget team..... u a criminal? no only time "FEDS came 2 ya house" u "ordered da magazine" ^^ HUH? kon is really overrated..he like da rest all dez vets r see thru.. ima call u "john" now u not a "legend" u 1 of dem "ordinary ppl" ^^O.K all i do dismantle men...marv? kon u know u cant handle him... if i cum where u "from:" u'll be like dat "piston" cat u gon "R.i.P in hamilton" ^^^ Very nice closure very creative marvjay1009- da opener was pretty creative and i liked it,nice punches throughout the whole verse. Heres sum stuff u need 2 work on....work on more word choice, elevate sum more and yo will be a pretty nice emcee. I liked all da disses and creativity u used throughout ur verse overall 8.5/10 .K.onfliktz This herb "hungry" fag Better Re-"boot", Cuz Kon'll turn ya kicks into "tim" "bits".. lost the "weight Loss" lotto by a number,So jea You can say marv "missed" "fit".. ^^ Nice opener "shootin Bars" like terminator, He "servin" free "shots" So Ima burn-dis-"weightor".. Tries Flirtin wit "big" guys..but connects wit more "foot" "balls" then Oakland Raiders.. ^^ lol very creative nice word choice Kids the Nerd of rapverse...Have em surrounded by blue...like he Scrapped cops.. Why u makin Negative threads about Rv..when its in ya name...... in Cap Locks!!.. ^^ Nice Him havin money? thats a Nightmare..I see More bills Then the microsoft network.. Kidz gettin owned like Jersey At Miama...So you can consider this.."Net" "merked".. ^^basic Blow Marv through his rooftop..have 'em runnin top of his house like a satelite dish.. Still hasnt matured yet..sh..betta watch my language......That Dude Marv is Ishhh ^^ average closure .K.onfliktz i liked ur verse as well this was a very close battle u had so many puches that were well thought off i liked ur rhymes and word choice no hate u tried 2 fit alot of lyrics in one line which made the lines get crammed up a bit work on fixin dat n u b str8 my v/marvjay1009 |
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dam niggaz is sleepin on dis shit hard
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
so ima spray at dis broad...then leave layed in a dark hearse... ur wack fam u like da "sneaker" no1 would pay 4 a "KON-verse" DOPE OPENER et kon keep playin tuff ima have da snap dat clown's kneck.. i'll put my "nikes on ya spine" datz whut i call a "back ground CHECK DOPE LINE KONFLICTZ YOUR VERSE WAS HARD TO FOLLOW STRUCTURE WAS WAY OFF AND I WASNT FEELIN YOUR FLOW U HAD GOOD LINES JUST WASNT FEELIN IT WHEN IT WAS TOGETHER SO VOTE =MARV Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
Kon This herb "hungry" fag Better Re-"boot", Cuz Kon'll turn ya kicks into "tim" "bits".. lost the "weight Loss" lotto by a number,So jea You can say marv "missed" "fit".. Decent opener, could have been worded better "shootin Bars" like terminator, He "servin" free "shots" So Ima burn-dis-"weightor".. Tries Flirtin wit "big" guys..but connects wit more "foot" "balls" then Oakland Raiders.. sorry not really feeling this Kids the Nerd of rapverse...Have em surrounded by blue...like he Scrapped cops.. Why u makin Negative threads about Rv..when its in ya name...... in Cap Locks!!.. decent , could have been better Him havin money? thats a Nightmare..I see More bills Then the microsoft network.. Kidz gettin owned like Jersey At Miama...So you can consider this.."Net" "merked".. decent, Blow Marv through his rooftop..have 'em runnin top of his house like a satelite dish.. Still hasnt matured yet..sh..betta watch my language......That Dude Marv is Ishhh Sorry not feeling this Marv so ima spray at dis broad...then leave layed in a dark hearse... ur wack fam u like da "sneaker" no1 would pay 4 a "KON-verse" Decent Opener let kon keep playin tuff ima have da snap dat clown's kneck.. i'll put my "nikes on ya spine" datz whut i call a "back ground CHECK" Ha ,nice ya roster weak i merked all dem whores in ya fagget team..... u a criminal? no only time "FEDS came 2 ya house" u "ordered da magazine" decent kon is really overrated..he like da rest all dez vets r see thru.. ima call u "john" now u not a "legend" u 1 of dem "ordinary ppl" Decent all i do dismantle men...marv? kon u know u cant handle him... if i cum where u "from:" u'll be like dat "piston" cat u gon "R.i.P in hamilton" Okay closer , could have been better overall this was an okay battle but ima have to give this one to Marv , to me he came harder , his punchlines were hitten harder and he had some okay personals , overalll keep it up both.but kon just didnt come hard enough ...Pz. |
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here we go with dis shit......if u gon bitch about votes at least upp da battle
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This was feedback posted for .K.onfliktz
cant vote so checkin da polls.............................
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This was feedback posted for .K.onfliktz
[Id say marv got this.. he had the fluent verse with no really forced punches (lyke kon had)..
but i dont have enough posts to vote.. so yea.. RespecK 1 |
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Voted For: MaRVJay1009
Kon's structure was fucked, and all those quotation marks were just, ugh you guys should put a stop to that, everyone can read, and if you have an i.q. slightly above mental retardation, I'm sure they can make empahsis in the right places LoL. I felt that marvs verse, hit harder in punches, and flowed a lot better, Kon's verse was still good though. I'm voting marv for the better punches and personals. Good battle you two. |
Voted For: MaRVJay1009
.K.onfliktz - Good spit man, you punches were hitten hard and you had good wordplay. Best Line - This herb "hungry" fag Better Re-"boot", Cuz Kon'll turn ya kicks into "tim" "bits".. lost the "weight Loss" lotto by a number,So jea You can say marv "missed" "fit".. Worst Line - Blow Marv through his rooftop..have 'em runnin top of his house like a satelite dish.. Still hasnt matured yet..sh..betta watch my language......That Dude Marv is Ishhh MaRVJay1009 - Great spit man, flowed well.. punches connected hard, and your wordplay was crazy ill. Best Line - so ima spray at dis broad...then leave layed in a dark hearse... ur wack fam u like da "sneaker" no1 would pay 4 a "KON-verse" Worst Line - kon is really overrated..he like da rest all dez vets r see thru.. ima call u "john" now u not a "legend" u 1 of dem "ordinary ppl" OVERALL - Good battle here, both came hard with the punches and personals. I think Marv won this battle with his hard hitten punches good flow, and niice play on words. Kon you verse didnt flow all that well, but you had some decent punches in it. Vote - MaRVJay1009 |
okay uppin 4 some votes
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