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K.ontroverz.Y 03-30-05 08:35 PM

MaRVJay1009 vs .K.onfliktz
 
Battle Rules:

10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 03-30-05 at 09:05 PM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

MaRVJay 03-30-05 08:37 PM

im here fam lets get it goin..........

K.ontroverz.Y 03-30-05 08:39 PM

aiightz lez do this..................................

MaRVJay 03-30-05 08:47 PM

check in nigga............

K.ontroverz.Y 03-30-05 08:48 PM

nigga u too....LMFAO....LMFAO........................

MaRVJay 03-30-05 08:52 PM

lol i hate checkin first and waistin my bars....dis shit is gonna close soon

System 03-30-05 08:54 PM

.K.onfliktz has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-30-05 08:54 PM.

System 03-30-05 08:56 PM

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-30-05 08:56 PM.

MaRVJay 03-30-05 09:11 PM

he's a bitch....

so ima spray at dis broad...then leave layed in a dark hearse...
ur wack fam u like da "sneaker" no1 would pay 4 a "KON-verse"
let kon keep playin tuff ima have da snap dat clown's kneck..
i'll put my "nikes on ya spine" datz whut i call a "back ground CHECK"
ya roster weak i merked all dem whores in ya fagget team.....
u a criminal? no only time "FEDS came 2 ya house" u "ordered da magazine"
kon is really overrated..he like da rest all dez vets r see thru..
ima call u "john" now u not a "legend" u 1 of dem "ordinary ppl"
all i do dismantle men...marv? kon u know u cant handle him...
if i cum where u "from:" u'll be like dat "piston" cat u gon "R.i.P in hamilton"

...nuff said if u dont get nothin dont vote

K.ontroverz.Y 03-30-05 09:34 PM

This herb "hungry" fag Better Re-"boot", Cuz Kon'll turn ya kicks into "tim" "bits"..
lost the "weight Loss" lotto by a number,So jea You can say marv "missed" "fit"..
"shootin Bars" like terminator, He "servin" free "shots" So Ima burn-dis-"weightor"..
Tries Flirtin wit "big" guys..but connects wit more "foot" "balls" then Oakland Raiders..
Kids the Nerd of rapverse...Have em surrounded by blue...like he Scrapped cops..
Why u makin Negative threads about Rv..when its in ya name...... in Cap Locks!!..
Him havin money? thats a Nightmare..I see More bills Then the microsoft network..
Kidz gettin owned like Jersey At Miama...So you can consider this.."Net" "merked"..
Blow Marv through his rooftop..have 'em runnin top of his house like a satelite dish..
Still hasnt matured yet..sh..betta watch my language......That Dude Marv is Ishhh

K.ontroverz.Y 03-30-05 09:35 PM

thats some horrific fuckin structure holy shit

This herb "hungry" fag Better Re-"boot", Cuz Kon'll turn ya kicks into "tim" "bits"..
lost the "weight Loss" lotto by a number,So jea You can say marv "missed" "fit"..
"shootin Bars" like terminator, He "servin" free "shots" So Ima burn-dis-"weightor"..
Tries Flirtin wit "big" guys..but connects wit more "foot" "balls" then Oakland Raiders..
Kids the Nerd of rapverse...Have em surrounded by blue...like he Scrapped cops..
Why u makin Negative threads about Rv..when its in ya name...... in Cap Locks!!..
Him havin money? thats a Nightmare..I see More bills Then the microsoft network..
Kidz gettin owned like Jersey At Miama...So you can consider this.."Net" "merked"..
Blow Marv through his rooftop..have 'em runnin top of his house like a satelite dish..
Still hasnt matured yet..sh..betta watch my language......That Dude Marv is Ishhh

MaRVJay 03-30-05 09:38 PM

finally...uppin 4 some votes now

Cinema 03-30-05 10:41 PM

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

all i do dismantle men...marv? kon u know u cant handle him...
if i cum where u "from:" u'll be like dat "piston" cat u gon "R.i.P in hamilton"

All I Can Say Iss Damn, Mih Nigga Marv Iss Bacc

Punches-Marv,Had More Punches
Openor-Marv,Had Some Hot Shit
Personals-Marv,Had Personals To
Structure-None
Multies-None
Vocab-None
Wordplay-Marv,Killed Him With That
Closer-Marv,Lmao Mih Nigga Iss Bacc

Marv Took Thiss All The Way He Came Strong And Finished Stronger So He Get The W For Thiss

/V Marvjay1009.............

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K.ontroverz.Y 03-30-05 10:42 PM

u didnt explain mine so therefore that is dq'd

and u broke it down with one line..fagget....

Dq'd learn how to vote u fuckin herb

Adam 03-31-05 12:19 AM

This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 
Polls.............................................

MaRVJay 03-31-05 09:58 AM

^^^fam stop checkin da fukkin polls in all my battles dat shit is gettin gay

MaRVJay 03-31-05 01:34 PM

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LyricalMa$tamind 03-31-05 02:11 PM

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

so ima spray at dis broad...then leave layed in a dark hearse...
ur wack fam u like da "sneaker" no1 would pay 4 a "KON-verse"
^^^ Like da opener pretty thoughtful
let kon keep playin tuff ima have da snap dat clown's kneck..
i'll put my "nikes on ya spine" datz whut i call a "back ground CHECK"
^^^ha ha
ya roster weak i merked all dem whores in ya fagget team.....
u a criminal? no only time "FEDS came 2 ya house" u "ordered da magazine"
^^ HUH?
kon is really overrated..he like da rest all dez vets r see thru..
ima call u "john" now u not a "legend" u 1 of dem "ordinary ppl"
^^O.K
all i do dismantle men...marv? kon u know u cant handle him...
if i cum where u "from:" u'll be like dat "piston" cat u gon "R.i.P in hamilton"
^^^ Very nice closure very creative

marvjay1009- da opener was pretty creative and i liked it,nice punches throughout the whole verse. Heres sum stuff u need 2 work on....work on more word choice, elevate sum more and yo will be a pretty nice emcee. I liked all da disses and creativity u used throughout ur verse
overall 8.5/10

.K.onfliktz
This herb "hungry" fag Better Re-"boot", Cuz Kon'll turn ya kicks into "tim" "bits"..
lost the "weight Loss" lotto by a number,So jea You can say marv "missed" "fit"..
^^ Nice opener
"shootin Bars" like terminator, He "servin" free "shots" So Ima burn-dis-"weightor"..
Tries Flirtin wit "big" guys..but connects wit more "foot" "balls" then Oakland Raiders..
^^ lol very creative nice word choice
Kids the Nerd of rapverse...Have em surrounded by blue...like he Scrapped cops..
Why u makin Negative threads about Rv..when its in ya name...... in Cap Locks!!..
^^ Nice
Him havin money? thats a Nightmare..I see More bills Then the microsoft network..
Kidz gettin owned like Jersey At Miama...So you can consider this.."Net" "merked"..
^^basic
Blow Marv through his rooftop..have 'em runnin top of his house like a satelite dish..
Still hasnt matured yet..sh..betta watch my language......That Dude Marv is Ishhh
^^ average closure

.K.onfliktz
i liked ur verse as well
this was a very close battle
u had so many puches that were well thought off
i liked ur rhymes and word choice
no hate
u tried 2 fit alot of lyrics in one line which made the lines get crammed up a bit
work on fixin dat n u b str8

my v/marvjay1009

MaRVJay 04-01-05 12:55 AM

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MaRVJay 04-01-05 11:39 AM

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MaRVJay 04-02-05 10:09 PM

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MaRVJay 04-03-05 10:09 PM

dam niggaz is sleepin on dis shit hard

Murdah.txt 04-03-05 10:36 PM

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

so ima spray at dis broad...then leave layed in a dark hearse...
ur wack fam u like da "sneaker" no1 would pay 4 a "KON-verse"
DOPE OPENER
et kon keep playin tuff ima have da snap dat clown's kneck..
i'll put my "nikes on ya spine" datz whut i call a "back ground CHECK
DOPE LINE
KONFLICTZ YOUR VERSE WAS HARD TO FOLLOW STRUCTURE WAS WAY OFF AND I WASNT FEELIN YOUR FLOW
U HAD GOOD LINES JUST WASNT FEELIN IT WHEN IT WAS TOGETHER SO VOTE =MARV

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Kawn Flixx 04-04-05 12:41 AM

Voted For: MaRVJay1009


Kon
This herb "hungry" fag Better Re-"boot", Cuz Kon'll turn ya kicks into "tim" "bits"..
lost the "weight Loss" lotto by a number,So jea You can say marv "missed" "fit"..
Decent opener, could have been worded better
"shootin Bars" like terminator, He "servin" free "shots" So Ima burn-dis-"weightor"..
Tries Flirtin wit "big" guys..but connects wit more "foot" "balls" then Oakland Raiders..
sorry not really feeling this
Kids the Nerd of rapverse...Have em surrounded by blue...like he Scrapped cops..
Why u makin Negative threads about Rv..when its in ya name...... in Cap Locks!!..
decent , could have been better
Him havin money? thats a Nightmare..I see More bills Then the microsoft network..
Kidz gettin owned like Jersey At Miama...So you can consider this.."Net" "merked"..
decent,
Blow Marv through his rooftop..have 'em runnin top of his house like a satelite dish..
Still hasnt matured yet..sh..betta watch my language......That Dude Marv is Ishhh
Sorry not feeling this

Marv
so ima spray at dis broad...then leave layed in a dark hearse...
ur wack fam u like da "sneaker" no1 would pay 4 a "KON-verse"
Decent Opener
let kon keep playin tuff ima have da snap dat clown's kneck..
i'll put my "nikes on ya spine" datz whut i call a "back ground CHECK"
Ha ,nice
ya roster weak i merked all dem whores in ya fagget team.....
u a criminal? no only time "FEDS came 2 ya house" u "ordered da magazine"
decent
kon is really overrated..he like da rest all dez vets r see thru..
ima call u "john" now u not a "legend" u 1 of dem "ordinary ppl"
Decent
all i do dismantle men...marv? kon u know u cant handle him...
if i cum where u "from:" u'll be like dat "piston" cat u gon "R.i.P in hamilton"
Okay closer , could have been better

overall this was an okay battle but ima have to give this one to Marv , to me he came harder , his punchlines were hitten harder and he had some okay personals , overalll keep it up both.but kon just didnt come hard enough ...Pz.

MaRVJay 04-04-05 01:54 AM

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MaRVJay 04-04-05 01:07 PM

here we go with dis shit......if u gon bitch about votes at least upp da battle

MaRVJay 04-05-05 07:29 PM

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Young Drama 04-05-05 08:04 PM

This was feedback posted for .K.onfliktz
 
cant vote so checkin da polls.............................

Zuluflow 04-06-05 03:31 AM

This was feedback posted for .K.onfliktz
 
[Id say marv got this.. he had the fluent verse with no really forced punches (lyke kon had)..

but i dont have enough posts to vote.. so yea..

RespecK
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MaRVJay 04-06-05 02:27 PM

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Given Light. 04-06-05 10:02 PM

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Kon's structure was fucked, and all those quotation marks were just, ugh you guys should put a stop to that, everyone can read, and if you have an i.q. slightly above mental retardation, I'm sure they can make empahsis in the right places LoL.

I felt that marvs verse, hit harder in punches, and flowed a lot better, Kon's verse was still good though.

I'm voting marv for the better punches and personals.

Good battle you two.

GKillaz05 04-07-05 09:18 AM

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

.K.onfliktz - Good spit man, you punches were hitten hard and you had good wordplay.

Best Line - This herb "hungry" fag Better Re-"boot", Cuz Kon'll turn ya kicks into "tim" "bits"..
lost the "weight Loss" lotto by a number,So jea You can say marv "missed" "fit"..

Worst Line - Blow Marv through his rooftop..have 'em runnin top of his house like a satelite dish..
Still hasnt matured yet..sh..betta watch my language......That Dude Marv is Ishhh

MaRVJay1009 - Great spit man, flowed well.. punches connected hard, and your wordplay was crazy ill.

Best Line - so ima spray at dis broad...then leave layed in a dark hearse...
ur wack fam u like da "sneaker" no1 would pay 4 a "KON-verse"

Worst Line - kon is really overrated..he like da rest all dez vets r see thru..
ima call u "john" now u not a "legend" u 1 of dem "ordinary ppl"

OVERALL - Good battle here, both came hard with the punches and personals. I think Marv won this battle with his hard hitten punches good flow, and niice play on words. Kon you verse didnt flow all that well, but you had some decent punches in it.

Vote - MaRVJay1009

MaRVJay 04-07-05 11:37 AM

okay uppin 4 some votes


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