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LyricalMa$tamind vs .MixTape.
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15 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting house rules 1 verse only :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 04-03-05 at 03:00 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
.MixTape. has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-31-05 02:02 PM.
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You better watch what the fuck flies outta ya mouth...
Or I'ma hijack a plane and fly it into your house... Burn your apartment with your family tied to the couch... And slit your throat, so when you scream, only blood comes out... I doubt that there could ever be... A more wicked MC... Cuz AIDs infested child molesters aren't sicker than me... Claim your on top and that your an MC... Sorry kid, but thats just a dream that will never be your reality... Also say your hard? Rugged and rough?.. Your just a joke, oh my god I call your fucking bluffs... When you think you sold over 2 mil records, your think you mad the cut?.. That just shows over 2 million people are dumber than fuck... So grab your pen and paper for one last time... And create a freestyle that might actually rhyme... |
LyricalMa$tamind has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-31-05 02:12 PM.
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Quickly I'll murk this gay, Put him in a plastic bag like hes purple haze
Ma$tamind will 'whip this bitch into shape,.........So basically he's 'Circle, K' Beatin me?, Whateva ur 'sniffin is false', Cuz every one 'Nose ur lying' Cuz battlin me's a 'bad call',..Especially if I got my 'phone on silent' U can try an get close, but .Mixtape,..U'll just die with your hopes I mean c'mon now,...Your losses are gon be as high as my posts I'm stopping your files, Step in my shoes, And u'll be walking for miles This kids 'garbage',... Just call me trash lid, Cuz I'm 'topping his style' I'm ripping this lame hoe, Viciously 'reverse ok' an quickly give 'K-O's Kids wack, He couldn't stop from loosing.. if he literally sway'd votes Son, Just surrender the match, We already know who the winner is fag So why should I take your life,.. When text battling on the internet has I'm defeating this cunt, get off dis site,.. you da weakest of the bunch He's fuckin horrible, I Felt so sorry for this bitch,...I PM'd him a punch So itz now safe ta say dat i murked dis chump.....like a mah fuckin lion does to itz prey for lunch HOLLA! .Mixtape.=MURKED! |
srry....da last line ran longer dan i expected it 2
wen i wuz writin my verse it wuz at 15 lines but wen i posted it da lines were stretched out and itz 16 lines srry 4 goin ova any way come on ppl we need votes 4 dis battle holla back wit good feedback and a vote 4 whoeva ya'll think won |
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come on n vote on dis battle
yall kno who won jus vote wit adequate feedback and a vote 4 who u think won i murked dis kid jus vote 4 who u think won |
uppin dis shit we still need votes 4 dis battle
holla back wit adequate feedback and a vote 4 who u think won i murked dis kid so vote 4 who u think won |
come on ppl we need votes holla back wit adequate feedback a vote
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uppin dis shit 4 sum votes yall
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uppin 4 suum votes yall come on
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Voted For: .MixTape.
i think .mixtape. got this one <center>Mixtape Had better structure and his lines were even His personals were good and hit hard Multis came thru for him coz they sounded pretty good Best line:Or I'ma hijack a plane and fly it into your house... Burn your apartment with your family tied to the couch... And slit your throat, so when you scream, only blood comes out... <center>Ma$tamind once again structure is off like mixtape said in his last line:create a freestyle that might actually rhyme... personals were good punches were very good |
This was feedback posted for LyricalMa$tamind
Checkin tha mufuckin threads niggas...............
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come on yall
read da verses b4 voting leave adequate feedback and vote |
Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind
.Mixtape: You better watch what the fuck flies outta ya mouth... Or I'ma hijack a plane and fly it into your house... ^^WEAK OPENER Burn your apartment with your family tied to the couch... And slit your throat, so when you scream, only blood comes out... ^^^DECENT PUNCH I doubt that there could ever be... A more wicked MC... ^^^NAH Cuz AIDs infested child molesters aren't sicker than me... Claim your on top and that your an MC... ^^^FIRST LINE WAS GOOD..SECOND WAS WEAK Sorry kid, but thats just a dream that will never be your reality... ^^^????? Also say your hard? Rugged and rough?.. Your just a joke, oh my god I call your fucking bluffs... ^^^WEAK When you think you sold over 2 mil records, your think you mad the cut?.. That just shows over 2 million people are dumber than fuck... ^^^NOPE So grab your pen and paper for one last time... And create a freestyle that might actually rhyme ^^WEAK CLOSER... mastamind: Quickly I'll murk this gay, Put him in a plastic bag like hes purple haze Ma$tamind will 'whip this bitch into shape,.........So basically he's 'Circle, K' ^^^^DIDN'T GET IT Beatin me?, Whateva ur 'sniffin is false', Cuz every one 'Nose ur lying' Cuz battlin me's a 'bad call',..Especially if I got my 'phone on silent' ^^^FIRST LINE WAS DOPE...SECOND WAS OKAY U can try an get close, but .Mixtape,..U'll just die with your hopes I mean c'mon now,...Your losses are gon be as high as my posts ^^^GOOD PUNCH I'm stopping your files, Step in my shoes, And u'll be walking for miles This kids 'garbage',... Just call me trash lid, Cuz I'm 'topping his style' ^^WHOO...HOTT SHIT I'm ripping this lame hoe, Viciously 'reverse ok' an quickly give 'K-O's Kids wack, He couldn't stop from loosing.. if he literally sway'd votes ^^FIRST LINE WAS HOTT...SECOND FUKKED IT UP Son, Just surrender the match, We already know who the winner is fag So why should I take your life,.. When text battling on the internet has ^^^LMAOOOO..FUNNY SHIT I'm defeating this cunt, get off dis site,.. you da weakest of the bunch He's fuckin horrible, I Felt so sorry for this bitch,...I PM'd him a punch ^^WEAK So itz now safe ta say dat i murked dis chump.....like a mah fuckin lion does to itz prey for lunch ^^OKAY NUFF SAID....MIXTAPE CAME REAL WEAK NO PERSONALS FROM EITHER OF YA'LL BUT MASTAMIND CAME WITH SOME CREATIVE SHIT SHIT... RETURN DA FAVOR YA'LL LINKS R IN MY SIG..AND PLEEZ EXPLAIN YA SHIT LIKE I DID 4 YA'LL...1 |
This was feedback posted for LyricalMa$tamind
checkin pollz 4 mah guy.............................
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thanx 4 da vote
still uppin come on n vote |
Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind
eh blah battle- Lyrical- you had an alright verse your getting better in your spits.. your punches werent that bad and you had way better vocab...i liked your personals and shit i liked the "he's fuck'n horrible, i Felt so sorry for this bitch,...I PM'd him a punch ha that was actually sorta funny .. overall and alright verse work on your punches some more Mix -um you need some work . i thought you could have done alot more with it. but anyways i'll break it down. you need work on your punches you had some alright stuff like the aids line that was a lil played but it was still good. work on your struct. diss on him more though you were talkin bout records and shit... uhh you got a lil lost . next time just stay on who your facing Vote//lf for droppin a better verse |
thax 4 da vote
still uppin dis shit |
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sum votes please holla back |
Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind
Flow: Blah Punches: LyricalMa$tamind Personals: LyricalMa$tamind Wordplay: LyricalMa$tamind Metas: LyricalMa$tamind Multis: LyricalMa$tamind Enjoyment: LyricalMa$tamind Vote: LyricalMa$tamind Explanation: LyricalMa$tamind got this pretty easily .. he actually came with a punch .. and mixtape was just blah nothign really hard hitting at all.......Stay Up Tho & Keep Elevating ...1 |
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uppin this thing.. n thanks for the vote shells...
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This was feedback posted for LyricalMa$tamind
checkin the polls
aight just checkin |
uppin...................
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Voted For: LyricalMa$tamind
this was very much one sided...nothin out of the ordinary but mix aint even really have decent punches at all...both need to up ya vocab n wittyness....but w/e.....LM...GOT THIS |
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