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MaRVJay 03-31-05 02:30 PM

Kesse vs MaRVJay1009
 
Battle Rules:

10-12 lines...
3 votes=tko
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

voter's pleez explain ya shit..all votes will be returned

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 04-01-05 at 02:30 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Win by 3-0 KO

System 03-31-05 03:26 PM

Kesse has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-31-05 03:26 PM.

Germ 03-31-05 03:35 PM

what kinda name is marvjay1009, pretty damn whack, but thats a given
but it seems hes also gay, having a fetish for guys ending in simmmons
why you living, its like the intelligent switch is turned off in his brain
its insane... marvs more drawn to spelling errors, than a moth to a flame
americas nightmare?, some scare, threating people with skill you never had
people arent afraid cause youre dangerous, your whackness is just that bad
you must be mad, all cussin' and sad...youre thinking this was a mistake
but too late, im stealing this battle, you can do nothing but fist shake
you dont have what it takes, so you trash herbs, like a scolding gardener
we know youre fake, and couldnt strike rich, if he was your bowling partner
a win, i know you want'er, but keep hunting newbs, for you thats fair game
cause the closest you'll be to big on 'RV'... is the capitals in your name

System 03-31-05 03:51 PM

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 03-31-05 03:51 PM.

MaRVJay 03-31-05 04:10 PM

act up fag...

i'll have ya body missin,y dis guy-keep-spittin?,dont say dat i-be-trippin
you suck kesse aint shit without dat "RED BULL" like "scottie pipen"
'kesse is dope' datz whut a FEW say,but i honestly i think you gay
i took a trip 2 CaNaDa & like "toronto" kesse mother "BLEW-Jay"
dont believe nun of dis guy lines,u'll still be on RV when im signed
pickin on newbie's,its sad you battled Armada Da 187 5 TiMES!
i hope u gain a lesson...you cant rap dogg change profession's
u give ppl "RV $" 2 vote 4 you other wise they wont "Pay attention"
5-0 me afta our verses drop..herb just stop! u like virgin cock
the establishment had 3 battles & da only 1 u were in was V.S NOK..LOL
he cant freestyle ya bar's r pre written gota write? fam damm
afta i kill you red bull gon be sad he "lose touch" w/ his "right hand" man

nuff said....

1st bar...scottie pipen played 4 da bulls..u know dat & kesse's leader is red bull ya'll know him
2nd bar....u heard of da baseball team da blue jay's well im tryna say him mother blew me..u'll get it
3rd bar....he battled armada like 5 times...and he's a noob
5th bar....i was in da the establishment from da beginnin & in all da battles..since NOK was wack red bull let kesse battle against dem

Germ 03-31-05 04:20 PM

nice drop nigga...haha, couple fake personals in there, but whatever, gl yo

Vamoose 03-31-05 04:24 PM

This was feedback posted for Kesse
 
He doesnt newby bash, he battles everyone. Just pointing that out.

J-Roc 03-31-05 04:35 PM

This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 
Marv...

Kesse didn't battle in NOK battle...that's a fake personal.
Kesse didn't battle Armada Da 187 5 times, Armada ducked 4 times.

Other than that...good verse...

Kesse good verse as well man, like the bowling line and the ending was a good punch..

be a close battle.

MaRVJay 03-31-05 04:39 PM

^^^dis is ya first post fam........how would u know his whole life??????

J-Roc 03-31-05 04:42 PM

This is Red Bull....I'm at a friends who just joined up hahahaha forgot to sign on my name yo....

Adam 03-31-05 04:54 PM

This was feedback posted for Kesse
 
Polls.............................................

Close battle. Be interesting.

MaRVJay 04-01-05 12:48 AM

lol dis guy watches all my battles....

Germ 04-01-05 09:06 AM

huh?...........uppin..............................

MaRVJay 04-01-05 11:32 AM

ya boy red bull watches all my battles fam................

Diet Coke 04-01-05 12:56 PM

This was feedback posted for Kesse
 
Checkin the polls.................................

Armada Da 187 04-01-05 04:49 PM

This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 
wanna check do polls!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

MaRVJay 04-01-05 08:21 PM

lol why do niggaz check polls all fukkin day and kesse i like how u voted 4 ya man

Germ 04-02-05 02:53 PM

^ haha, yeah, my bad.........bout you know how TE is, dope........uppin

MaRVJay 04-02-05 10:11 PM

lol nah not really fam marvjay is dope

MaRVJay 04-03-05 09:00 PM

awww man dis shit will neva close

Germ 04-04-05 02:00 AM

no kidding........fuckin peeps sleepin........uppin

Germ 04-04-05 02:32 PM

uppin............................................. ....

Germ 04-04-05 10:56 PM

uppin............................................. .........

Kawn Flixx 04-05-05 02:28 AM

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

This was a pretty decent battle but ima have to hand this one to MarvJay

Kesse
what kinda name is marvjay1009, pretty damn whack, but thats a given
but it seems hes also gay, having a fetish for guys ending in simmmons
Started out good but sorta died at the end
why you living, its like the intelligent switch is turned off in his brain
its insane... marvs more drawn to spelling errors, than a moth to a flame
Decent , Koo multies
americas nightmare?, some scare, threating people with skill you never had
people arent afraid cause youre dangerous, your whackness is just that bad
Decent ,really feeling it
you must be mad, all cussin' and sad...youre thinking this was a mistake
but too late, im stealing this battle, you can do nothing but fist shake
Not feelin this
you dont have what it takes, so you trash herbs, like a scolding gardener
we know youre fake, and couldnt strike rich, if he was your bowling partner
Naw,
a win, i know you want'er, but keep hunting newbs, for you thats fair game
cause the closest you'll be to big on 'RV'... is the capitals in your name
Haha! nice closer

Explanation: Kesse you had a pretty decent verse , some lines were good at the beginning then sorta died out , the best line was your closer i was really feeling that , overall pretty decent verse..keep it up

Marv
i'll have ya body missin,y dis guy-keep-spittin?,dont say dat i-be-trippin
you suck kesse aint shit without dat "RED BULL" like "scottie pipen"
Decent opener
'kesse is dope' datz whut a FEW say,but i honestly i think you gay
i took a trip 2 CaNaDa & like "toronto" kesse mother "BLEW-Jay"
LOL!,nice
dont believe nun of dis guy lines,u'll still be on RV when im signed
pickin on newbie's,its sad you battled Armada Da 187 5 TiMES!
LMAO!, NICE personal
i hope u gain a lesson...you cant rap dogg change profession's
u give ppl "RV $" 2 vote 4 you other wise they wont "Pay attention"
Nice , really feelin this
5-0 me afta our verses drop..herb just stop! u like virgin cock
the establishment had 3 battles & da only 1 u were in was V.S NOK..LOL
Decent personal could have been better
he cant freestyle ya bar's r pre written gota write? fam damm
afta i kill you red bull gon be sad he "lose touch" w/ his "right hand" man
lol, nice closer

Explanation:Pretty cool verse marv, you took this battle you had nice punchlines that were really hitten hard and making there mark ,overall nice verse keep it up ]

Vote-MarvJay1009


Crew vote removed

Germ 04-05-05 01:50 PM

^ sorry marv, i wont be too picky with votes here, but you were in that dudes crew bout 3 days ago, so, plus, i dont like him, haha, uppin

MaRVJay 04-05-05 06:39 PM

lmaooo wow whut type of shit is dat i was in his crew like a week ago so dat means he cant vote 4 me??...get da fukk out here niggaz do anything not 2 lose

Germ 04-05-05 06:53 PM

nah, i dont really care....about votes too much, but you were in his crew, actually like 4 days ago because you wanted to battle us, so, as long as its not crew votes, or im not really goin to give a damn

Germ 04-06-05 11:58 AM

uppin.............................................

M&rk 04-06-05 01:16 PM

This was feedback posted for Kesse
 
checkin polls, but kesse first two bars are some of the worst i've ever seen

MaRVJay 04-06-05 02:41 PM

lmaooooo^^^^^wow....but yo he's not in my crew there 4 its not a crew vote...so dat was bullshit so if sombody dat was in da establishment vote's its gonna get taken away....votes r comin slow and u wanna go get em removed

YOUNG_CITY 04-06-05 09:54 PM

Voted For: Kesse

ohhh. this was a good battle. its about time. i was feeling kesses more though. this was close. ima break it down.
kesse-u had good structure, very clean type verse, and everything seemed in place. yo verse flowed well together. funny, good diss personals. some goood punches, and mettas. i was feelin tha opener, but the closer was a lil weak to me, but in between was dope. (the body). i was feeling ur verse.
marv-u had good structure, but ur verse just seemed messy and poorly organized. just look at it and tell. good diss personals, but not as strong as kesse i think. better punches, but lightweight on the mettas. ur opener was soft so was ur closer, but i was feeling yo body also. wordplay was also decent in this one.
overall-i think kesse took it by a hair in my vote. just came out harder, and dissed marv better...

v/kesse

no hate

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Germ 04-06-05 11:35 PM

thats because that dude is a queer faggot....and so is picture perfect....queer ass, thats why you have 20 losses.....marv man, you were on the roster like 2 days before his vote, thats just rules man....uppin

MaRVJay 04-07-05 11:56 AM

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MaRVJay 04-08-05 02:13 AM

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Germ 04-08-05 04:43 PM

up................................................ .......

The Black Plague 04-08-05 04:57 PM

This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 
Chekkin the polls nice battle ya'll

Would vote but kesse in da crew

....Gone.... 04-08-05 05:04 PM

This was feedback posted for Kesse
 
Just checking this out.....................hot battle

MaRVJay 04-09-05 02:13 AM

damm we got 3 pages already and no votes

NewKid 04-09-05 04:40 PM

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

aight u got 2 b retarded if u think marv lost dis nigga had betta punches his shit was eazy 2 read he had mad ill wordplay in his verse all his lines followed each other nigga just all out killed dis nut

kesse shit was basic he had sum aight punches nothin sikk he shit was eazy 2 read had some wordplay not like marv verse but i he had sum he aint have no sikk personals like marv dey was basic

marv took dis cuz he came harder n he put more effort n 2 hiz punches

¤ÐÅž¤ 04-09-05 07:37 PM

Voted For: MaRVJay1009



what kinda name is marvjay1009, pretty damn whack, but thats a given
but it seems hes also gay, having a fetish for guys ending in simmmons
^^weak opener kesse...
why you living, its like the intelligent switch is turned off in his brain
its insane... marvs more drawn to spelling errors, than a moth to a flame
^^not hitting hard at all
americas nightmare?, some scare, threating people with skill you never had
people arent afraid cause youre dangerous, your whackness is just that bad
^^decent but simple
you must be mad, all cussin' and sad...youre thinking this was a mistake
but too late, im stealing this battle, you can do nothing but fist shake
^^flow fell off.....
you dont have what it takes, so you trash herbs, like a scolding gardener
we know youre fake, and couldnt strike rich, if he was your bowling partner
^^wasnt feeling it
a win, i know you want'er, but keep hunting newbs, for you thats fair game
cause the closest you'll be to big on 'RV'... is the capitals in your name
^^decent...but not enough ta make up for the other bars...
.
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i'll have ya body missin,y dis guy-keep-spittin?,dont say dat i-be-trippin
you suck kesse aint shit without dat "RED BULL" like "scottie pipen"
^^good flow....good opener n personal
'kesse is dope' datz whut a FEW say,but i honestly i think you gay
i took a trip 2 CaNaDa & like "toronto" kesse mother "BLEW-Jay"
^^ohhh damn...lol..i liked that...lol
dont believe nun of dis guy lines,u'll still be on RV when im signed
pickin on newbie's,its sad you battled Armada Da 187 5 TiMES!
^^lol,nice jay
i hope u gain a lesson...you cant rap dogg change profession's
u give ppl "RV $" 2 vote 4 you other wise they wont "Pay attention"
^^ehh.......not really feeling it
5-0 me afta our verses drop..herb just stop! u like virgin cock
the establishment had 3 battles & da only 1 u were in was V.S NOK..LOL
^^ouch........
he cant freestyle ya bar's r pre written gota write? fam damm
afta i kill you red bull gon be sad he "lose touch" w/ his "right hand" man
^^closer fell off..but it was still decent.
.
to me this was way one sided...kesse you got merked by personals kiddo,jay 2 dope bars..n only 2 bars i wasnt feeling...nice job...better then ive seen from you in the past
kesse...none of ya punches was hittin man....
but hionestly you wouldve been hard pressed to beat that verse on a good day.....
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RTF.........IN THE SIG


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