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Complexity - L.I.
Complexity By: L.I. ...The Return Has Begun... Yah boy is back metaphorically and killin em hard People’s verses are soft and tender like feelin them scars Peeps topping me lyrically? Front & end up dead man My rhymes stuck on baller’s minds like a headband Traffic in the rap game but with me back RV’s still cured Mess with me and get passed by more than highway billboards Respect is rising to the best and I’m lovin it like Pharell tones Fake vets are getting less service than modern day cell phones Everyone comes to me for help just like I’m a loan filter Yall know that L.I. stacks more bricks than a home builder Quick and sly in my battles, I’m rising to the top without yall Shit, I’ll dodge yah shots like a kid who’s a virgin to alcohol The revolution has started and will remain as long as time could last All the fakes are getting signed off more than an AOL collapse Wordplay’s the key with me so see I spit it without tiredness Some of the greats are connected to wackness, me—I’m wireless I circle around my enemies, fuck with me and they’ll find yah hurt C.A.L.I. can front but my single bar’s figure, eight his entire verse! Smoked like cigars, just live in peace with a desire to fetch shit dog It’s fucked up how people wanted Tha Cuban’d for being homosexual Established most of RV and still am reigning and aiming to cop shit I handed out the key to wittiness but more than 95% of yall dropped it On top of this place and I kill the fakes who front by choice Everyone screams out my name cept for haters…they lost their voice Equality of net nerds is obvious, my skills haven’t been fondled Half of yall nerds match-up size-wise……thanks to McDonalds Put on yah glasses to view my text and read through the best of the ill L.I.’s a man of vision while yall are struggling to see strands of skill I straight run over vets in my path, I’m sure my skill exceeds fiyah The race for the dopest is too close to call but me, I’m on speed dial CALI get rode by newbies on AIM, he'll get the boot like Italy It’s obvious he wins by how he connects with his voters…literally |
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Upping for some feedback.
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Respect is rising to the best and I’m lovin it like Pharell tones
Fake vets are getting less service than modern day cell phones ^^So tru.... Welcome back and rep the Ghosts in yo Sig fam |
Fashizzle dizzle....upping for more feed back
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dayum. This is dope. had alot of lines I liked.
CALI get rode by newbies on AIM, he'll get the boot like Italy It’s obvious he wins by how he connects with his voters…literally Very funny. hahaha. Ill Wordplay’s the key with me so see I spit it without tiredness Some of the greats are connected to wackness, me—I’m wireless Str8..... I liked this line alot. I like reading your drops like I do Phennix's songs.. lol Keep em coming.. |
Word thanks...upping...
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can ya return the fav holmes.
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Fasho I got you...upping
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L.I. back and already droppin the hot shit!!!!!
This was pure dopeness as expected!!!! Flow on point...............vocab was decent, a lot of funny ass lines in there and a lot of truth spoken to. that shit about CALI was nice, had me laughin yo!!!! keep up this shit man!!! Gud to have you back on RV, not a lot of respectable heads left!!!! |
damn this was dope...I liked the wordplay and flow, structure was on point...keep up wit the ill drops bruh...rtf on sumthin lol...8.5/10
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damn man.. you with your metaphors!! shyt.. you never get rusty huh!!! I luv your metaphors in here.. you finally use only okay vocab instead of great ones lol.. but once again.. that wasn't needed due to your metaphors.. oh this is I. Mind.. wanna re-match ;)..
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Word thanks. Upping.
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Pretty good shit, nice drop, cept I thought you left the site for good? oh well, the comeback has begun then I guess, lol, like how you got on C.A.L.I, good shit, nice verse, liked this line the most:
Quick and sly in my battles, I’m rising to the top without yall Shit, I’ll dodge yah shots like a kid who’s a virgin to alcohol overall good drop, nice way to comeback... 7.5/10 return the favor in the sig.... |
I'll hit it up another time. I'm tired as fuck right now. But believe me Ill hit it up thanks for the feedback. Peace
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Bump. This. Up. There.
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definately had some good lines in there...killed it wit metas and wordplay...and personals....I actually read it all...it kept me interested...
dont know you...but ur consistent.......................................s o far uppin...rtf on my name |
You don't know me? =\ just look up L.I.
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lol L.I. just got back and already rippin on cali
nice shit man gettin them personals in there now i love wordplay and i saw alot in here nice shit consistant verse throughout when i saw the title i though it was going to be a topical open mic but then i was like ahhh lol nice shit man, glad your back |
Damn L.I welcome back , dope peice
I was really feeling it alot.. Your structure was good .. You had lots of feeling , and nice emotions in ya drop You really took time to make this good , and it show'd Overall this was a dope peice... and glad to have you back and hope to see another OM' from you later on |
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Best hit one up :shoot: .... :thumbup: |
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i like ur writing style...but, with lines this extended, u need more internal multies to hold my interest...personally
ne way...good flow...strong word choice I liked it 1 |
Word....upping.......................
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this was nice L.I, creative n put together well, i agree with Q
it would help ya flow out if ya had more inners in there,but hey...i think everyone knows you top shelf when talents mentioned on rv.... stay up man...this shit was a real good read...n i liked the personals funny shit all around....appreciate it if ya RTF.....PZ |
Damn i ain't got nothin to say but I.L. is at it again keep it up playa
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word..........................upping
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pretty decent piece...
...flow was kinda good here some was a lil too long tho... ...had some punches in there that was aight, but overall decent... ...drop though...7/10 |
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