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Golden Shellz vs Wicked One
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 04-05-05 at 12:50 AM Must drop verse in 2880 minutes after check in. |
Golden shellz has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-03-05 08:10 PM.
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<center>U only "underrated" coz everybody already heard wat u spitten
ill call u "Jason" coz u winning u gotta be "KIdd"ing my army's full of generals even the wicked one know that i drop more bombs than the funkmaster flex show fake "Beanie Sigel" tha only gats u pop are bootleg uzi's after readin my personals u gonna scream louder than a porno movie To see the look on ya face it makes me sad Wicked is to win as woman is without her maxi pads I should get like mimisis and add u to my "LIST" of victims why battle u? i'd get a better battle from SYSTEM |
Wicked One has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-03-05 10:42 PM.
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Ha this bitch is a no show, dont know why i spend this 10 lines...
I could give a shit...cuz iam drop anyways...prolly out gettin food for a dime... I Rip you to bits and pieces, like paper Mache creatures I rape ya thesis... Just call me the prodical child but my name aint Jesus... You claim your little words are weapons, mine are beckons... but to me, all it is, is indigestion, sharpen the blades before you step in... Do some reading and research while I make your teeth hurt... or shove you back in your mothers womb to repeat birth, but first... Blood out your ears and eyes, your intelligence is getting low on supplies... I arise one last time to stick my blade to this pint size' spine...Goodbye... |
good drop and all dat other shit but wat do u mean no-show?
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Voted For: Golden shellz
Flow: Blah Punches: Golden Personals: Neither Wordplay: Golden Metas: Golden Multis: Blah Enjoyment: Golden Vote: Golden Explanation: Golden got this he was more complex and had some good metas and came more direct .. wicked didnt really throw a punch or pack any multis thats why golden got my vote... plz return the favor and vote on my battles also Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
i dont know i thought you no-showed...so i dropped very very very weak n all......i guess i was wrong but ayo nice drop manye....peace.....
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thanks wicked and kin-ethic for da vote so uppin this battle for more votes
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iight iight uppin this battle*********************
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m'kay uppin this battle its at 0-0 now------------
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yea yea yea uppin uppin this battle---------------
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Over 100 views still no fuckin votes.....Fucking Uppppiiiinnnn......
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Voted For: Wicked One
vote goes to Wicked One because his rhyme was more enjoyable Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
well this battle is at 0-0 coz that votes gonna get disqualified so uppin
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m'kay lets wake up on dis battle iight---uppin----
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Voted For: Golden shellz
very close battle you both battles were really good but i think Golden won this cuz of this better punchlines and his better structure I enjoyed reading this battle it was really good but Golden won this wicked one keep on practicing you had a nice verse 2 vote Golden return the vote please Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Uppin............................................. ...........
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lets get some votes in here damn~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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ppin uppin for some votes people..................
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Voted For: Golden shellz
I think GS took this one with harder punches and more creativness. Wicked One, your overall verse was better, but I'ma hafto give this one to GS, cause his verse didnt seem played, and he had better personals in this one. Wicked One, your verse was all over the place, and I didn't see nothing in yo verse that made me suprised. Your verse was exactly how I thought it would be before I read it. Switch up your style a lil, and work on your structure. Lines structure was wack. But anyways, GS got this in my opinion. Just keep coming consistent in yo verses like this and you will be a dope head. ~1~ And plz RTF on battle link in sig. Only need one more vote to take it....-peace |
Aight Honest Vote.....But seriously dont say that my verse was going to be like that before you read it....cuz i know iam better then you JDot your weak as fuck seriously .....Anyways Uppppppinnnnnnn
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Uuuuuuuupppppppiiiiiiin........Will return vote................
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yo 2 pages full and none of these shits are votes c.mon now
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Voted For: Golden shellz
Wicked One: Ha this bitch is a no show, dont know why i spend this 10 lines... I could give a shit...cuz iam drop anyways...prolly out gettin food for a dime... ^^no 0/10 I Rip you to bits and pieces, like paper Mache creatures I rape ya thesis... Just call me the prodical child but my name aint Jesus... ^^decent 4/10 You claim your little words are weapons, mine are beckons... but to me, all it is, is indigestion, sharpen the blades before you step in... ^^ehh 3/10 Do some reading and research while I make your teeth hurt... or shove you back in your mothers womb to repeat birth, but first... ^^decent 5/10 Blood out your ears and eyes, your intelligence is getting low on supplies... I arise one last time to stick my blade to this pint size' spine...Goodbye... ^^no 1/10 Overall: 13/50 (26%) Golden Shellz: U only "underrated" coz everybody already heard wat u spitten ill call u "Jason" coz u winning u gotta be "KIdd"ing ^^decent 4/10 my army's full of generals even the wicked one know that i drop more bombs than the funkmaster flex show ^^no 2/10 fake "Beanie Sigel" tha only gats u pop are bootleg uzi's after readin my personals u gonna scream louder than a porno movie ^^no 3/10 To see the look on ya face it makes me sad Wicked is to win as woman is without her maxi pads ^^lol 4/10 I should get like mimisis and add u to my "LIST" of victims why battle u? i'd get a better battle from SYSTEM ^^no 4/10 Overall: 17/50 (34%) Vote: Golden Shellz |
uppin uppin dis battle its goin on too long now---
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damn i noe yall niggas are bored so just vote on dis battle damn
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upp dis battle up..we need some votes*************
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Voted For: Wicked One
voted for wicked.... honestly this battle was wack both of ya verses were off...structures were terrible but wicked yours was alil better...good multies..punchers were kind o f even.. shells closer was good...but wicked was verse was overall better..............good shit tho both ya.......... |
yo upp the shit outta this thread vote damn-------
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Voted For: Golden shellz
aightm, good stuff from both Golden: nice verse, man.... hard hittin punchlines, the closer had me like ';'oooh'' i've never seen people use ''the system'' before an the lfunk flex shit was good too nice wordplay an creativity, ya killed it with your verse, real good stuff Wicked: aight verse too, had me like ''oooh'' with your openeer, but ya verse lacked consistancy throughout...i wasnt feelin the line: about ''teeth hurt''...asn a few lines was stretched too, try n get too the point quicker no hate wicked...vote goes ta Shellz RTF http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=186647 ^^^ heres the link |
Voted For: Wicked One
Ha this bitch is a no show, dont know why i spend this 10 lines... I could give a shit...cuz iam drop anyways...prolly out gettin food for a dime... Eh.... I Rip you to bits and pieces, like paper Mache creatures I rape ya thesis... Just call me the prodical child but my name aint Jesus... Alright.... You claim your little words are weapons, mine are beckons... but to me, all it is, is indigestion, sharpen the blades before you step in... Nice.... Do some reading and research while I make your teeth hurt... or shove you back in your mothers womb to repeat birth, but first... Ill.... Blood out your ears and eyes, your intelligence is getting low on supplies... I arise one last time to stick my blade to this pint size' spine...Goodbye... Sick closer... U only "underrated" coz everybody already heard wat u spitten ill call u "Jason" coz u winning u gotta be "KIdd"ing No.................. my army's full of generals even the wicked one know that i drop more bombs than the funkmaster flex show No..................no....................no...... ...............no..............played.........as.. ..............fuck........... fake "Beanie Sigel" tha only gats u pop are bootleg uzi's after readin my personals u gonna scream louder than a porno movie No............ To see the look on ya face it makes me sad Wicked is to win as woman is without her maxi pads No............ I should get like mimisis and add u to my "LIST" of victims why battle u? i'd get a better battle from SYSTEM Eh....played but ok... Wicked, hands down...more originality and better punches, Shellz was played as fuck... |
uppin uppin dis battle c'mon i need two more votes and den we done
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Voted For: Wicked One
U only "underrated" coz everybody already heard wat u spitten ill call u "Jason" coz u winning u gotta be "KIdd"ing 6...nice opener!! my army's full of generals even the wicked one know that i drop more bombs than the funkmaster flex show 5...nah!!! nice try but i aint feelin this!! fake "Beanie Sigel" tha only gats u pop are bootleg uzi's after readin my personals u gonna scream louder than a porno movie 3...wack!!! porno movie lines are fuckin shit!!! To see the look on ya face it makes me sad Wicked is to win as woman is without her maxi pads 5...looks funny, but when ya read it it aint!! I should get like mimisis and add u to my "LIST" of victims why battle u? i'd get a better battle from SYSTEM 7...OOOOHHHHH!!!! dope closer!!! OVERALL: 26/50 Ha this bitch is a no show, dont know why i spend this 10 lines... I could give a shit...cuz iam drop anyways...prolly out gettin food for a dime... 5...GAY!!! another wack opener!! I Rip you to bits and pieces, like paper Mache creatures I rape ya thesis... Just call me the prodical child but my name aint Jesus... 5...not feelin it!!! You claim your little words are weapons, mine are beckons... but to me, all it is, is indigestion, sharpen the blades before you step in... 5...just a lot of shit talkin really!! Do some reading and research while I make your teeth hurt... or shove you back in your mothers womb to repeat birth, but first... 6...better but ya still lackin!! Blood out your ears and eyes, your intelligence is getting low on supplies... I arise one last time to stick my blade to this pint size' spine...Goodbye... 6...an aight closer!! OVERALL: 27/50 a pretty weak battle.......golden shellz had too many really wack lines and some played shit....the only plus was the closer, that shit was dope as hell!!! wicked one was consistent throughout, his punches were all average which just edges him ahead. V/ - Wicked One RTF!!!! links in my siggy!!!! if ya haven't yet!!!(If not my vote will be removed!!) |
ayyo uppin this battle for 2 more votes iight yall
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Voted For: Wicked One
this was an ok battle, nothin too hot but pretty good. im gonna have say Wicked one def took this one, even though his verse wasn' tall that hot. but he had better punches, even tho most of his verse was multies. Golden shellz= ya verse was kinda weak dog,i've seen much better from you. you had some ok punches and no real multies in there. no personals, structure and flow was decent but overall nothin really hot in there. *golden shellz* best bar= U only "underrated" coz everybody already heard wat u spitten ill call u "Jason" coz u winning u gotta be "KIdd"ing ^^ good bar here, nice creativity n good delivery, but i've used this before wicked one= not a very hot verse from you either, but u had some good flow and nice multies, but u aint really have too many punches in ya verse. some were ok but nothin real creative in there. coulda came alot harder than that *wicked one's best bar*= You claim your little words are weapons, mine are beckons... but to me, all it is, is indigestion, sharpen the blades before you step in... ^^decent punch, but nice multies in here n good flow overall= both of yall came kinda lazy in this battle but im gonna go wit wicked one cuz he had better flow and better multies in this battle. |
3 goddamn pages and this battle still not closed damn yall spazzed out
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Voted For: Golden shellz
GS- your flow struggles.... very few multis tho structure is aiiite... a few punches worth noticin... the funkmaster flex thing I liked even tho it was hype... first bar was aiiiite... system thing I saw a punch almost just like it in your other battle so no...find new material, ya feel? your... wicked is to win as woman is without her maxi pads was a weak relation at best... WO- your flow pisses all over shelz... but you throw absolutely no punches... just random rambling with cool structure and decent multiing...but not battle material, imo... Vote Golden Shellz RTF.......links in sig |
Voted For: Golden shellz
The opening for both perty much stinked but they couldve been worse. Golden sellz had it in this category though because it was a harder hit. Golden shellz best hit in my opinion was .....To see the look on ya face it makes me sad Wicked is to win as woman is without her maxi pads...... very good multi there Blood out your ears and eyes, your intelligence is getting low on supplies... I arise one last time to stick my blade to this pint size' spine...Goodbye... this was Wickeds best, it wasnt as hard as it couldve been and it seemed a lil forced. overall my vote goes to Golden |
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