Golden shellz vs DoContinue
 

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No Recycling
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none of this :cussing: hahah cursing is allowed...

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Check in by: 04-06-05 at 01:44 AM

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Expired battle close - win

DoContinue has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-05-05 10:15 PM.

Golden shellz has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-05-05 10:22 PM.

<center>I thought about battlin a herb but who better to choose
no sense in wastin 5 credits if u know that you'll lose
Ya rhymes is preschool all patty-cakes and rattles
thimk u gangsta? just coz KIN-Ethic declined ur battle
losing to this nigga is like losing to a "SUBTLE" fag
i'll treat like gym clothes carried in a duffle bag
u supposed to be a flyweight? ha ur just new to da game
why view poll results there aint gonna be 100% by ya name
my personals are like "dunks" ill posterize this guy
call me "IMAGETITAN" coz u beneath me like a posted reply
Ludacris? nah but my lyrics make u say "oh" like a Ciara music video
after the poll is closed ill still be here "continuing" on this "hoe"

if u check out some of his battles kin-ethic declined one
he's battlin subtle tee
u carry gym clothes in a duffle bag
wen u dunk on someone it's called posterizing
Imagetitan is above everything else on yours screen apart from the banner

This kid needs help, i told him his vocab need "raisin"
so he got fruity, wrote a verse, and then threw grapes in
yo ass get layed out, wit gats you sprayed out
like every house party punch, ya shit's kid n' played out
golden shellz's a punk coward, know that he aint beatin me
he like the simpsons, yellow bellied and erased easily...
ya style's as dusted as the front lines in IRAQ
like warren sapp, you'll be retired wit two nines to ya back
besides the fact that you 'dumb', you cant speak clearly
battles in text but got tha nerve to holla "nobody's hearin me"
but feel renewal, you could shine wit a pound of a jewel....
but rappin wit LIL JOHN wouldn't issue you the sound of approval
(YEAAAAAH!)
im livin tha truth, hittin you goofs, my sound heavy like thunder
assemble ya troops? but like you suspended from math class.... you already "out-numbered"



man, im sure all tha punches on his name is played...wahteva... vote

upppppppppin......................................

Voted For: DoContinue

DACONTINUE ....I WAS FEELING YA VERSE MUCH MORE, it was definately more refined., got a good technique man.
this battle was really one sided.....good wordplay n similies..
a couple played concepts but they were still koo......
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shells-man i wasnt feeling one bar from ya entire verse...
try to get wittier with ya spits n ya flow fell off a couple tymes to...sa'll good.....you'll get better with tyme..
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RTF in the sig

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uh huh uppin these votes yall~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

This was feedback posted for DoContinue
 

u won....... omg, u won......

of course i won... uppin this.....................

why does no1 return votes....we all need battles closed..
.
right...?

i was returnin urs rite now homie... i promise i was
i bbeen votin on battles and shyt, my stuff neva gets returned... but whateva, i got you homie

upppin this shyt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

::Caution:: there are dickriders in this thread ::Caution::
faggots discussin hoos votin for hoo. LIke i care!! Uppin

all that is great and whatnot so uppin this battle

what are you talkin aabout??? aye... go vote on some battles so we can get this closed...i voted on like 5 already and didnt get any returned votes...

get these votes poppin yall this battle needs to get closed

this needs to hurry up and get closed so uppin----

uppin this for my man.........

upp this battle up lets get some votes************

goodamn vote on this shit yall noe damn well at the top off front lines yall see dis..;.so click on it damn

get votes in here so we can close this yall--------

uppinnnnnnnnnn like a bitch..
go vote muhfucka^^^

This was feedback posted for DoContinue
 

I thought about battlin a herb but who better to choose
no sense in wastin 5 credits if u know that you'll lose
OK.....
Ya rhymes is preschool all patty-cakes and rattles
thimk u gangsta? just coz KIN-Ethic declined ur battle
Set-up was more of a punch then the second line..
losing to this nigga is like losing to a "SUBTLE" fag
i'll treat like gym clothes carried in a duffle bag
eh........
u supposed to be a flyweight? ha ur just new to da game
why view poll results there aint gonna be 100% by ya name
ok...........
my personals are like "dunks" ill posterize this guy
call me "IMAGETITAN" coz u beneath me like a posted reply
post/post, but still ok...
Ludacris? nah but my lyrics make u say "oh" like a Ciara music video
after the poll is closed ill still be here "continuing" on this "hoe"
nah..............


This kid needs help, i told him his vocab need "raisin"
so he got fruity, wrote a verse, and then threw grapes in
ha.........word...
yo ass get layed out, wit gats you sprayed out
like every house party punch, ya shit's kid n' played out
ok.......
golden shellz's a punk coward, know that he aint beatin me
he like the simpsons, yellow bellied and erased easily...
nice........
ya style's as dusted as the front lines in IRAQ
like warren sapp, you'll be retired wit two nines to ya back
nice.........
besides the fact that you 'dumb', you cant speak clearly
battles in text but got tha nerve to holla "nobody's hearin me"
ok....
but feel renewal, you could shine wit a pound of a jewel....
but rappin wit LIL JOHN wouldn't issue you the sound of approval
ok.......
(YEAAAAAH!)
im livin tha truth, hittin you goofs, my sound heavy like thunder
assemble ya troops? but like you suspended from math class.... you already "out-numbered"
ok closer...

Basically docontinue had some nice spins on some potentially stale subject matter...the simpsons and grapes verses i thought had a good flow and were original....

get some votes in here only 1 head voted so get some more in here

yo uppin this battle for more votes yall..........

Voted For: Golden shellz

haha golden took this


DC your verse was to forced while GS was very smooth in its delievery . overall i thought the punches were witty with gs and had alot of punch . this is really a no brainer i'ma have to say you really put this guy away by your utter disregard for his pride .... lol my favorite line
"Ya rhymes is preschool all patty-cakes and rattles
thimk u gangsta? just coz KIN-Ethic declined ur battle"

that had me chuckl'n ha but yea Gs takes this easy
Vote// GS RTF link is in the sig

cmon yall uppin this battle for more votes they are greatly appreaciated

ayyo uppin this battle for more votes now`````````

Voted For: DoContinue

losing to this nigga is like losing to a "SUBTLE" fag
i'll treat like gym clothes carried in a duffle bag
^&^^
only line i liked in ya verse
....
do continue, ya opener and closer were the only bars of your i "didn't like" so there ya goes.
best shitVVV
yo ass get layed out, wit gats you sprayed out
like every house party punch, ya shit's kid n' played out
golden shellz's a punk coward, know that he aint beatin me
he like the simpsons, yellow bellied and erased easily...
ya style's as dusted as the front lines in IRAQ
like warren sapp, you'll be retired wit two nines to ya back

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Voted For: Golden shellz

aight golden shellz took dis

golden shellz- yo ya shit was aight kind of basic but u had more creative punches n ya verse dey was hard hittin and dey was rite on point u aint have no personals but u did have sum wordplay and creativity ya verse was kind of stretched but u still managed 2 pull dis 1 off ya verse started off good threw it da verse was kool and it ended cool 2 so u get da win n mah opinion

DoContinue-aight ya verse was plain 2 cuz u aint have no punches dat i realli liked but u did have a personal or 2 ya verse was mad stretched cuz fix dat u aint have no multies n ya verse it started off kool and ended wakk as hell cuz keep it hot da whole way and cum harder next time den u gon get da win everi time

vote- golden shellz

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This was feedback posted for DoContinue
 

you get the win in this battle....but, i cant vote...

goddamn 3 pages and only 1 good vote so uppin for more

This was feedback posted for DoContinue
 

this guy won it easily..................................

----------Uppin this battle for more votes----------

uppin this shit... judging by the votes put on this battle, it seems like you been askin for votes...

cmon lets get them votes popin we returing the votes and stuff and yall cats not votin

This was feedback posted for Golden shellz
 

both of you need to advance to the grades and work on sentence structuring cause both of those rap verses are wack you wouldn't get payed if you payed me!

ayyo ayyo lets up this battle here pz