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Devine Visionary Vs. Lil D'
aight here we go, 10-16 lines
no bitin, explained votes, no feedin, now since we battled, can you remove the dqs? verse Devine Visionary seein some Devine black/ cuz you been straight bitch slapped/ across the room, open the gat and spit at you/ leave you n ya whack rhymes, red, black, and blue/ Fuck some rap shit, fuck yo damn sig, fuck them DQ's/ it's gone be bone crushin, heat packed action, comin through/ you and ya boys head/ pullin ya out ya boys bed, to find yo body limped up, dead/ you ain't on this level/ fucken around wit the wrong nigga, jigga wigga, you bigga but gettin hit wit the shovel/ as the watch go tick tock/ you rockin round suckin cocks, on the spot/ got it locked, you on the phone cheatin on nigga at home gettin caught/ but it ain't yo fault you saw Mr.Kelly and just got too hott/ pussy heated bitch, suckin dick and luvin it, rubbin it, grubbin it/ in this battle, I'm bussin and he guzzlin it/ |
this is gonna be edited but just to take shit out the title
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One more rule if you don't have or 100 posts then don't vote. The majority of newbies don't know shit about a flow.
Okay youngster this is the last time regardless of if you win or lose those 2 DQ's are staying. my drastic tactics, will leave this wack-kid in baskets, like ramadong i swing fast-hits when i blast-shits// sinful faggot get left in a casket, even as a toilet seat u still wont get that ass-kid, cuz ur flow bendable like plastic// sayin ull beat me is a stretch, hope u elastic, this aint an ugly contest take off that mask-quick, we all know that u a scared-shit// my punishment comes in many forms like stone cold to kane's chair-hit, u the type to wear a grizzly suit just to bear-it// hazardous styles I'm straight unsafe like holes in trojans// this niggas foldin, I "cant see you winnin" like Ray Charles coachin// my level you'll never be approachin now grownup-ya rhymes are Makeup compared to my scriptured true dreams// They Drag fuckin’ constantly-maybe it's you…or maybe it's Mabeline// D'vine’s been known to rhyme exegetic till makin’ ya ass call a Medic// Doctors find so much Sugar in Faggots like you that they label you a Diabetic// Lettered alloys written in a Graduated ill Degree// Adding Hollow tips in ya by the Mathematics of my Trigga-nometry// My lyricism is Bullet formed requisitions// Guns pointed to both of ya Ears to hear both sides of the Conversations// Ya fuckin’ with grammar -acquisition mentals-parental discretion advised essentials// Literature calibrated linguistics making ya spit with two absent genitals// |
uppin
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my man that is surely more than 16 lines, that shit is just bunched up inside lines, but whateva' uppin
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next time specify that you want 1 bar=1 line other wise i could write 1 bar=5 lines
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uppin
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lol, I have to specify now that 1 bar = 1 line?! But does that mean that a rematch will go down?
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up
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damn dallas was wakk on this flow was shitty vocab was shitty yeah shitty lol......
flow=tie both fell me off alot vocab=d'vine meta=d'vine multi=d'vin punches=d'vine overal verse=DEVINE VISIONARY sinful faggot get left in a casket, even as a toilet seat u still wont get that ass-kid, cuz ur flow bendable like plastic// LINE WAS ILL vote=devine visionary 1 |
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^^^sure 1-0 me |
rising
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what does rising mean?
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it means uppin |
why u uppin this?
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ummmmmmmmmmmm!!!! 4 votes,riggghhhhttt.
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damn I thought you had won this already, lol, my bad
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no the count is 1-0
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