warrior vs Kin*Ethic™
 

Battle Rules:

3-5 bars
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-03-05 at 06:46 PM

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Kin*Ethic™ has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-03-05 06:24 PM.

warrior has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-03-05 06:42 PM.

Leave this warrior |Deceased-Swiftly| after he sees my verse hell |Delete-Quickly| .. I |Cease-Pity| Cuz my punches 'Quickly Put An End To WAR' like a |Peace-Treaty!|
I |Attack-Wit| |Graphic-Spits| |Packed-Wit| |Acidic-Fists| .. We all know this 'Warriors A Pussy' like Thunder |Kat Kids!| .. Warriors just a |Wack-Bitch| Who |Lacks-Wits| So u can say I 'Killed Warrior' like 'Deleting Lloyd Banks' |Track-List!|
Wat this 'Dick Turn Into A Pussy' & no one |Stop-Yer-Sex-Switch| .. Im |OnTop-Of-Text-Lists| So watch as I 'Put An End To ARR' like pirates with |Proper-English!|

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Idiot Disclaimor:
1. WARrior peace treatys end war
2. Thunder cats was a show wit warriors .. lloyd banks made a song warrior
3. wARRior, pirates say ARRRR get it?

aight im rusty but fuck it,

u lame~as~shit, gonna force me to change~my~sig and put ur name~in~it/
cause he the type to reword verses, rewrite em and then claim~they~his/
but the thing is, u knew u couldn't rearrange~the~words~forever/
so he switches sites that way he can just copy and paste~a~verse~together/
battlein me? u the first herb to want to start there record wit a lost~i~guess/
and just cause im scorchin ya work dont mean u ready to be hells architect/
ill give u a heart attack and 8 lines is all~i~need/
cause only way my name'll be in ya sig is if "ED ME" was right after the R.I.P./(warior RIPED ME)

good battle son, ya verse was crack. good luck wit the votes

Voted For: Kin*Ethic™

not a bad battle, both people came out decent.

warrior. not bad, thought you had some decent lines...opener was kind of stupid, then the 3rd could have been worded better because it was a nice punch, i thought. i think your 3rd bar was what changed my mind, you really fell off on that one, and if it was better, i think you would have taken this one, because your finisher was hot, even though the structure was off and you spelt 'ripped' wrong :thumbup: but keep at it, you seem like you have a handle on battling.

kin*ethic*, hot verse man. you really know how to use multies and that added alot of effectiveness to your verse, but dont get caught up with always using multies because they can dry up pretty quickly and they dont win you battles. i thought you had good metas, great creativity, good wordplay. i was laughing after every punch. some criticism though, dont put all those lines and crap in there, its very distracting to the eyes, and it is just stupid, but overall, you won this

v/kin*ethic*

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Voted For: Kin*Ethic™

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Enjoyed-Kin

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Voted For: Kin*Ethic™


kin:
Leave this warrior |Deceased-Swiftly| after he sees my verse hell |Delete-Quickly| .. I |Cease-Pity| Cuz my punches 'Quickly Put An End To WAR' like a |Peace-Treaty!|
^^^WHOOO...DOPE OPENER GOOD NAME PLAY
I |Attack-Wit| |Graphic-Spits| |Packed-Wit| |Acidic-Fists| .. We all know this 'Warriors A Pussy' like Thunder |Kat Kids!| ..
^^^^I GET IT BUT WASN'T REALLY FEELIN IT
Warriors just a |Wack-Bitch| Who |Lacks-Wits| So u can say I 'Killed Warrior' like 'Deleting Lloyd Banks' |Track-List!|
^^^^CREATIVE SHIT...GOOD NAME PLAY AGAIN
Wat this 'Dick Turn Into A Pussy' & no one |Stop-Yer-Sex-Switch| .. Im |OnTop-Of-Text-Lists| So watch as I 'Put An End To ARR' like pirates with |Proper-English!|
^^^DECENT CLOSER...

WARRIOR:
u lame~as~shit, gonna force me to change~my~sig and put ur name~in~it/
cause he the type to reword verses, rewrite em and then claim~they~his/
^^^GOOD OPENER
but the thing is, u knew u couldn't rearrange~the~words~forever/
so he switches sites that way he can just copy and paste~a~verse~together/
^^^SOUN LIKE DA FIRST BAR U SAID
battlein me? u the first herb to want to start there record wit a lost~i~guess/
and just cause im scorchin ya work dont mean u ready to be hells architect/
^^^DECENT PERSONAL
ill give u a heart attack and 8 lines is all~i~need/
cause only way my name'll be in ya sig is if "ED ME" was right after the R.I.P./(warior RIPED ME)
^^LOL I WAS FEELIN DIS...REAL CLEVA

i gotta with da first dude tho he just played off warrior's name..da multis were hittin but i seen 2 many dudues with dat text style...warrior u had a solid verse ya first 4 lines were like da same thing so dat kind of fukked u up....

v/kin

RETURN DA FAVOR LINSK IN MY SIG & EXPLAIN YA VOTE JUST LIKE I DID 4 YA'LL

damn, good votin people lol im gettin more credit then i thought i would wit this verse. anyways this was a good battle kin and dont worry, when i get back on my grind ill give u anotha run, aight?

aight and yo ya niggaz need a return votes

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Voted For: warrior

warrior took this battle in my opinion.....they both came decent but warriors structure was better and easier to read....he also added more creativity to his verse...kin ur verse it was like good but like didnt do it for me..its like ur words barely rhymed at sum points......just get ur structure better and re-word ur verse a lil bit and u be straight.....yall should do a re-match when you get ur shit fixed up

v/ warrior

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Voted For: Kin*Ethic™

This was an okay battle seen alot better both structure's were horrible but okay..

Kin:
Leave this warrior |Deceased-Swiftly| after he sees my verse hell |Delete-Quickly| .. I |Cease-Pity| Cuz my punches 'Quickly Put An End To WAR' like a |Peace-Treaty!|
Okay opener, could have been better
I |Attack-Wit| |Graphic-Spits| |Packed-Wit| |Acidic-Fists| .. We all know this 'Warriors A Pussy' like Thunder |Kat Kids!| .. Warriors just a |Wack-Bitch| Who |Lacks-Wits| So u can say I 'Killed Warrior' like 'Deleting Lloyd Banks' |Track-List!|
Okay, decent
Wat this 'Dick Turn Into A Pussy' & no one |Stop-Yer-Sex-Switch| .. Im |OnTop-Of-Text-Lists| So watch as I 'Put An End To ARR' like pirates with |Proper-English!|
Nice closer ,

Overall this was a decent drop , seen you do alot better around , but it was enough to win this battle, elevate on using bette punchlines and try not to stretch your lines..

warrior
u lame~as~shit, gonna force me to change~my~sig and put ur name~in~it/
cause he the type to reword verses, rewrite em and then claim~they~his/
Not feeling this
but the thing is, u knew u couldn't rearrange~the~words~forever/
so he switches sites that way he can just copy and paste~a~verse~together/
Not feeling that
battlein me? u the first herb to want to start there record wit a lost~i~guess/
and just cause im scorchin ya work dont mean u ready to be hells architect/
Okay
ill give u a heart attack and 8 lines is all~i~need/
cause only way my name'll be in ya sig is if "ED ME" was right after the R.I.p[/b]
Prety weak closer

Overall it was a pretty weak verse, and kin took this one hands down , elevate more and keep at it

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Voted For: Kin*Ethic™

you u wasted the other kid..........................