MaRVJay1009 vs Cinema
 

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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-03-05 at 09:33 PM

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Cinema has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-03-05 09:04 PM.

girlz a freak seen my family tree swalled me/my grand-son
no heat,beat ya meat cock back only time u bust hand-guns
when i blast you & ya clic the past is where imma leave yall-bodies
he play hard won't get da big picture till he get a autop-sy
don't mean great adventures when i say this nigga rep six-flags
Maury loves him came to da show lookin for 1 out of his six-dads
you a fiene prick neva seen shit the toast'll leave you & ya team-split
how you expectin niggas to back you up when you live on a Queenz-Bridge
the pumps started a chump hardly when they dumping he darted
make you think backwards so when im finished leave gump in the forest
fuck a cookie i"Roll-Up"put you in the"Oven"then"Bake-Him"
see how much of a pussy he is when the 8'z make this nigga strip naked

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-03-05 09:28 PM.

look....

u mad cuzz i speak fire,u not gon have a "good year" fam "RE-tire"..
dont PRE-voke me cuzz you wont PRE-veal u PRE-school PRE-writer..
my slugz remove spines,so who got ya back when 2 nine's hitt'n ya..
you sickest? huh? no if u was u would cum up wit "new lines","cinema"
dis lame is hype,fam u aint neva flame da mic..me i remain just nice.
kids from "PENnslyvania" but he couldn't "Write" a hot bar da save his life
couple sick guy's on rv...marvjay home's da latest dis hoe's da fakest
i dont think u ill..its like u "live on top of RESTRiCTED" cuzz "OVER-RaTED"
we all know u KORDOZaR..cinema is not a disquise,i'll pop at ya eyes
he "survived a fire" now he goin around think he da "hottest alive"
u had verse read 4 me..on aim cryin fam i dont need da bitchin
got punches 4 days only time i'll be "OUT OF Bars" is "leavin prison"

nuff said...

if u eva been 2 da movie's u heard of newline cinema
his alias is KORDOZAR
he's from..PA


1...

uppin this shit good verse my nigga no beef just that battling shit

yeah u already know fam

uppppinnnnn again damm its 20 post da vote

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

alright, marv got this one.

cinema, your stuff was way too basic, nothing special really, try to spice up your lines with some humour or something, be witty about it, you just come straight to the point, elevate vocab, get creative with wordplay, also, you say nigga too much, get that outta there, dulls your verse and makes you look bad

marv, had some nice stuff, creative, complex, yet effective, some lines were played, like the closer, but you still had enough to beat him, you're a decent textee on this site, keep up man

v/marvjay....RTF on the link in my sig please.

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Flow: Blah
Punches: MaRVJay1009
Personals: Eh MaRVJay1009
Wordplay: MaRVJay1009
Metas: Blah
Multis: Blah
Enjoyment: Both I Guess Lol

Vote: MaRVJay1009

Explanation: MaRVJay1009 got this he came with a better verse consisting of more punches and came on a more complex level that hit harder .. stay elevating .. stay up .. 1

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

girlz a freak seen my family tree swalled me/my grand-son
no heat,beat ya meat cock back only time u bust hand-guns
when i blast you & ya clic the past is where imma leave yall-bodies
he play hard won't get da big picture till he get a autop-sy
don't mean great adventures when i say this nigga rep six-flags
Maury loves him came to da show lookin for 1 out of his six-dads
you a fiene prick neva seen shit the toast'll leave you & ya team-split
how you expectin niggas to back you up when you live on a Queenz-Bridge
the pumps started a chump hardly when they dumping he darted
make you think backwards so when im finished leave gump in the forest
fuck a cookie i"Roll-Up"put you in the"Oven"then"Bake-Him"
see how much of a pussy he is when the 8'z make this nigga strip naked

overall ya verse was alright nothin too special i liked ya flow in it tho it had a few punches but they just werent hittin hard enough

u mad cuzz i speak fire,u not gon have a "good year" fam "RE-tire"..
dont PRE-voke me cuzz you wont PRE-veal u PRE-school PRE-writer..
my slugz remove spines,so who got ya back when 2 nine's hitt'n ya..
you sickest? huh? no if u was u would cum up wit "new lines","cinema"
dis lame is hype,fam u aint neva flame da mic..me i remain just nice.
kids from "PENnslyvania" but he couldn't "Write" a hot bar da save his life
couple sick guy's on rv...marvjay home's da latest dis hoe's da fakest
i dont think u ill..its like u "live on top of RESTRiCTED" cuzz "OVER-RaTED"
we all know u KORDOZaR..cinema is not a disquise,i'll pop at ya eyes
he "survived a fire" now he goin around think he da "hottest alive"
u had verse read 4 me..on aim cryin fam i dont need da bitchin
got punches 4 days only time i'll be "OUT OF Bars" is "leavin prison"

this verse was hot i liked the multis and the word play off the PRE shit it had some decent punches i really enjoyed readin this verse.

so my vote goes to MJ

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

MARV JAY

u mad cuzz i speak fire,u not gon have a "good year" fam "RE-tire"..
dont PRE-voke me cuzz you wont PRE-veal u PRE-school PRE-writer..
^^THIS WAS A BIT FORCED..NOT FEELIN IT.
my slugz remove spines,so who got ya back when 2 nine's hitt'n ya..
you sickest? huh? no if u was u would cum up wit "new lines","cinema"
^^DECENT WORDPLAY...OK PUNCH
dis lame is hype,fam u aint neva flame da mic..me i remain just nice.
kids from "PENnslyvania" but he couldn't "Write" a hot bar da save his life.
^^DNT GET THE WORDPLAY HERE?.
couple sick guy's on rv...marvjay home's da latest dis hoe's da fakest
i dont think u ill..its like u "live on top of RESTRiCTED" cuzz "OVER-RaTED"
^^YEH..THIS WAS AIIGHT..I GET IT
we all know u KORDOZaR..cinema is not a disquise,i'll pop at ya eyes
he "survived a fire" now he goin around think he da "hottest alive"
^^..BEST BAR SO FAR..GUD WORDPLAY
u had verse read 4 me..on aim cryin fam i dont need da bitchin
got punches 4 days only time i'll be "OUT OF Bars" is "leavin prison"
^^AGAIN GUD WORDPLAY...OK PUNCH

CINEMA

girlz a freak seen my family tree swalled me/my grand-son
no heat,beat ya meat cock back only time u bust hand-guns
^^DOESNT MAKE SENSE AT ALL
when i blast you & ya clic the past is where imma leave yall-bodies
he play hard won't get da big picture till he get a autop-sy
^^?????EH...
don't mean great adventures when i say this nigga rep six-flags
Maury loves him came to da show lookin for 1 out of his six-dads
^^^HA.HA...THIS MADE ME LAUGH..IN A BAD WAY.
you a fiene prick neva seen shit the toast'll leave you & ya team-split
how you expectin niggas to back you up when you live on a Queenz-Bridge
^^WAS THIS GUD?..I DNT GET IT
the pumps started a chump hardly when they dumping he darted
make you think backwards so when im finished leave gump in the forest
^^^OK IDEA..DIN REALLY WORK
fuck a cookie i"Roll-Up"put you in the"Oven"then"Bake-Him"
see how much of a pussy he is when the 8'z make this nigga strip naked
^^GAY & WACK..

OVERALL MARV..U had an ok verse noin great, but you were consistent with the wordplay & punches, structure was tight it all flowed ok, a fairly straightforward win.

CINEMA.well i din spot no punches here, u tried a lot of wordplay which didnt come off, most of ya bars ya set up line was beta than the actuall punch, ya struc wasnt too bad, flow decent too, but u really need to work on them punches, and rappin about gay or mum/dad,guns..is played to fuck and looks real wack.dnt do it

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

i think marvjay took this battle with more punches and personals, i think the finisher was real good and he used nice wordplay........ cinema's verse lacked any real decent punches.........