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CA$per vs the kid 523
Battle Rules:
3 votes=tko 6 - 10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 04-03-05 at 10:21 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. Win by 3-0 KO |
the kid 523 has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-03-05 09:52 PM.
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CA$per has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-03-05 09:52 PM.
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Im sorry but your rapping career ends here, watch how i make the "ghost" dissapear
My rhymes are severe, im so sincere, I'll merk you then take your ass back as a souvenier Your name is Casper because your not hard, your just friendly He's 2-0 and thinks he's already HAUNTING THA STREET Fuck this battle, im done with this gay herb, thinkin he tough I wont be surprised this verse spilt blood |
so we in tha same crew,imma still grill you hard....
you lines are out of this world,like captain picard.... you keep battling people from your own crew..... your just lucky this battle aint a literary review.... your tha snitch in this family,i dont trust you one bit..... so go re write your verse,come back and re-submit..... u better re-think your plan,to come out victorious.... your rymes are not there,there very notorious... |
i fucked up the last line.. its supposed to read " fuck this battle, im done with this gay herb, thinkin he tough
but the bitch better stop talkin b4 i staple stitch his mouth shut" |
uppin this shit for some votes
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Uppin For Votes Yall...................................
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This was feedback posted for CA$per
checkin pollz upinnnn thiz 4 mah fam.............................
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uppin this shit
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Voted For: CA$per
kid 523: Im sorry but your rapping career ends here, watch how i make the "ghost" dissapear My rhymes are severe, im so sincere, I'll merk you then take your ass back as a souvenier ^^GOOD OPEENR..SHIT WAS KIND OF LONG..BUT U HAD A COUPLE MULTI'S IN IT AND A PERSONAL Your name is Casper because your not hard, your just friendly He's 2-0 and thinks he's already HAUNTING THA STREET ^^^FRIENDLY & STREET..DONT RYHME Fuck this battle, im done with this gay herb, thinkin he tough I wont be surprised this verse spilt blood ^^^HORRIBLE CLOSER DOGG..... casper: so we in tha same crew,imma still grill you hard.... you lines are out of this world,like captain picard.... ^^^WACK OPENER..I DIDN'T GET IT you keep battling people from your own crew..... your just lucky this battle aint a literary review.... ^^WEAK your tha snitch in this family,i dont trust you one bit..... so go re write your verse,come back and re-submit..... ^^^DECENT..YA BEST LINE u better re-think your plan,to come out victorious.... your rymes are not there,there very notorious... ^^WACK i gotta go with casper tho even tho his verse was real wack..cuzz he made his words ryhme and kid u forced ya shit.. RETURN DA FAVOR LINKS IN MY SIG...AND EXPLAIN YA VOTE 2 LIKE I DID 4 YA'LL BATTLE |
Captain Picard From Star Trek Werd Uppin This Yall
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Uppin............................................. ..
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uppin this yall com on..............drop votes favourz will be returned
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Voted For: CA$per
A'ight...this was a weak ass battle... Casper...I've seen better from you...seems like you went half-assed big time on this one...punches was a'ight...flow was pretty good...overall, just get more hard hitting punches...no hate, just elevate... The Kid...get ya structure fixed. Your second bar doesnt rhyme either...your closer was a'ight...but fix ya structure and ya flow...punches were weak here other thank your closer. Close, but weak battle. No hate. Elevate. Both of you. |
Voted For: CA$per
okay, sorry, one sided. kid, first bar didn't make too much sense, 2nd bar didn't rhyme, third bar was poor structure and not really a punch, so im giving my vote to casper, for keeping consistency and throwing direct punches....but you both can elevate alot. v/casper, RTF in my battle against judicial |
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ay limited.. .w a record almost 50/50.. you have no need to say elevate
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Voted For: the kid 523
Oh ShIt hOmIe dIs wAs STR8 FIRE!! u had da best verse cuz u actually dissed casper, da gay ghost n u used metaphors!!ur structure was tight i wish i cud be u ur better than 2pac! casper wot can i say u liek cocks so its true ur gay. the kid 523 leave mob n come to lyrical larrys or gangstars 4 life we da best on rv. |
^^^^too bad i won read tha rules dumbass 3 votes=tko and since i had 3-0 i win
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word, RTF cupfaggot...............................
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Yeah, 3 votes because your a fucking pussy. So fuck you homosexual fuckface.
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This was feedback posted for CA$per
just checking the poles
aight dont mind little old me |
Voted For: the kid 523
Flow: Blah Personals: Blah Punches: Kid Wordplay: neither Metas: Cas Multis: Neither Enjoyment: Neither Vote: Kid Explanation: Ok kids middle bar didnt rhyme .. then casper said his opponent is notorious roflamo .. iono which one is worse .. i went with the kid cuz his first bar was actually semi ok ... and he didnt give props to his opponent |
^^^^^^^^^battles already won kid 3votes=tko i had 3 votes first day i won sooo stop voting
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