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High-Dro 04-04-05 01:08 AM

Chowie Chow vs ~High-Dro~
 
Battle Rules:

6 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-07-05 at 01:08 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 04-04-05 01:13 AM

Chowie Chow has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-04-05 01:13 AM.

System 04-04-05 01:49 AM

~High-Dro~ has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-04-05 01:49 AM.

Chowie Chow 04-04-05 03:06 AM

You betta pull up yo panties and grab ya purse, DIVE into hell becuse your going to be drivin back home, first class in a new hearse.

I'll have you runnin faster then diarrhea, shooting out of my ass somewhere DOWN in SOUTH Korea.

Your just like a little school boy, just waitin to get fucked by Micheal Jackson, FALL into your deep dreams man, keep on hopin...its going to happen...

.................................................. .................................
DIVE
DOWN
SOUTH
FALL

You all know where this guy is going !!!!!!

Chowie Chow 04-05-05 03:27 PM

come on man, drop your verse........i already know your going to talk about biting

High-Dro 04-05-05 11:22 PM

your family will celebrate this date of your death like it's a ceremonial occassion
ashamed cuz they don't know if you're a brand of dog food or an immigrated asian
your lack of creativity leaves homies despondent, thinkin "chowsa"
my textual precision will burn ya like fire from the jaws of bowser
you steal more from aftermath than that homie who snatched buck's chain
ya future career will consist only of "squeeks" like donald duck's fame


LINE 1 - they're happy about it obviously
LINE 2 - just look at his name lol
LINE 3 - he steals lines from commercial artists and his sig says "chowsa"
LINE 4 - bowser was that boss in super mario bros...i hope you knew that
LINE 5 - he bit lines from 50, obie and lloyd banks in his other battles
LINE 6 - he will be homeless and wash windshields...donald duck squeeks..lol


haha fuck i'm tired...good luck homie

High-Dro 04-05-05 11:24 PM

haha......jus read urs...and jus for the record.. michael jackson is prolly about the size of my leg...haha...but, good luck homie

Germ 04-05-05 11:25 PM

This was feedback posted for ~High-Dro~
 
tsk tsk high-dro, why you pickin on chowie.....haha, well, its good to see you elevated chow, keep up dude, and nice verse HD, made me laugh

Kin*Ethicâ„¢ 04-05-05 11:28 PM

Voted For: ~High-Dro~

Flow: Blah
Punches: Dro
Personals: Dro
Wordplay: Dro
Metas: Dro
Multis: Dro
Enjoyment: Dro

Vote High Dro

Explanation: Dro killed him plain and simple .. came wit some good nameplays lmao ..and kept it personal .. good shit highdro .. stay elevating .. stay up ..1

Chowie Chow 04-06-05 12:03 AM

hahahaha, the funny part about this is i am asian........

High-Dro 04-06-05 12:09 AM

haha...seriously? i didnt mean to be racist if it seemed that way lol...sorry if i offended you

Chowie Chow 04-06-05 12:34 AM

its cool yo, i've heard worse.....................

DQ 04-06-05 07:06 AM

Voted For: ~High-Dro~

Chowie Chow

You betta pull up yo panties and grab ya purse, DIVE into hell becuse your going to be drivin back home, first class in a new hearse.
^good opener

I'll have you runnin faster then diarrhea, shooting out of my ass somewhere DOWN in SOUTH Korea.
^hmmm, not really feeling it but was decent

Your just like a little school boy, just waitin to get fucked by Micheal Jackson, FALL into your deep dreams man, keep on hopin...its going to happen...
^okay closer

Okay verse here, had some good punches, not always that creative though but they were aight. Try to get some personals in there next time though and fix your structure a bit. Flow was good though as well as your vocab...no hate...

~High-Dro~

your family will celebrate this date of your death like it's a ceremonial occassion
ashamed cuz they don't know if you're a brand of dog food or an immigrated asian
^haha, funny opener

your lack of creativity leaves homies despondent, thinkin "chowsa"
my textual precision will burn ya like fire from the jaws of bowser
^bit self-glorification in second line but first one was nice

you steal more from aftermath than that homie who snatched buck's chain
ya future career will consist only of "squeeks" like donald duck's fame
^lmao...nice...

Nice verse right here! Stayed consistent with the punches but those personals is what did it for me! Damn, had some good creativity in there, nice wordplay. Flow was dope, found a good balance with your vocab and structure was just fine

Critic 04-06-05 08:43 AM

Voted For: ~High-Dro~

Hight-Dro killed it,...

Chowsa come with,...
I'll have you runnin faster then diarrhea, shooting out of my ass somewhere DOWN in SOUTH Korea.

But your verse didn't really have any openers apart from
then fact his name is High and u keep going on about the
south. I didn't really feel that shit to be fair if it was...

Uping *Complexity* *Harder hitting punches* (Didn't have
any. *Better flow* just work on everything man elevate
no hate but you need to know.

High-Dro come nice,...
your family will celebrate this date of your death like it's a ceremonial occassion
ashamed cuz they don't know if you're a brand of dog food or an immigrated asian
^Nice punch with a personal, *Chowsa* sounding Asian.
this bar won it nuff said,...

Nice alround verse high,.. Uping more complex rhyming
scheme coz that shit could save u when u stop battlings
newbz,.. Also don't explain the punches,.. Votes should
know was up!!!

Stay up both

1~

Ryan Hughes 04-06-05 11:58 AM

Voted For: ~High-Dro~

V/High Dro....he came wit hard hitting punchs that were consistent an good personals good structure.....chow ur verse was a little weak u came to lightly u didnt have that much vocab or punchs work on that ....No Hate....RETURN THE FAVOR
opner=h
closer=h
structure=h
punchs=h
vocab=h
personals=h
overall=High-Dro

KOOL COL-B 04-06-05 03:16 PM

This was feedback posted for ~High-Dro~
 
checkin tha polls, werd
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J-Money 04-06-05 03:19 PM

This was feedback posted for ~High-Dro~
 
checkin polls............................................. ...

High-Dro 04-06-05 04:35 PM

uppin the shit outta this.........................

Armada Da 187 04-06-05 04:35 PM

Voted For: ~High-Dro~

Votin for High

pretty good battle but hig gets the vote

High came with alot more heavy punches n a overall more creative verse

flow high ya flow was tight n really was easy to stay with
Structure ya strucutre was good fam
Punches ya punches wernt that hard but got the job done
Personals- ya had sum personals which where pretty nice

chowie ya overall verse was to out of control ya gotta settle n get sum elevatin

punches were weak most of ya verse
strucutre it was horrible elevate on that
personals- i didnt see any fam get personals in ya verse
multies I didnt see any get thosein ya verse to
ya flow was on in off man elevate on that

ight battle was good but High gets the vote

overall" punches- high
strucutre- high
Personals- high
flow- High
Multies- None

good battle

rtf in my battles
below my sig


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