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Nynth Degree 04-04-05 03:49 PM

hotshh! (1-0) vs. L.I. (0-0)
 
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Good luck to both.

L.I.3 04-04-05 06:26 PM

Haha and I got predicted to lose...okay check 8 lines

N.Tavarez 04-04-05 08:48 PM

dont matter who get picked to win
8 lines is short but ok
check

N.Tavarez 04-08-05 01:44 PM

ill drop when i get outaa work, but i dont think he will show up anyway

L.I.3 04-08-05 03:27 PM

Oh I'm showing. So dont post a bull shit no show verse :)

N.Tavarez 04-08-05 11:04 PM

If U want your name in 'Headlines' I'll provide the Tombstone
You'll "never last" son......Like EBT* cards in Group Homes
U only elevate in ya sig, U should practice to Rhyme Silent
Cause L.I career will never "take off"..... like Blind Pilots
Its like U lack the health insurance cuz U cant take 'da Medicine'
Used to "hold weight" but now you "all bones" like Pun Skeleton!
L.I. drop a record and break the CD to say he Murder Songs
You claim to be ILL but in but in your name its Worded Wrong

*for those who aint poor, ebt cards are foodstamps on a swipe card
*dickriders need not vote

L.I.3 04-08-05 11:57 PM

i key books with text, dissin emcess left n right, all them folks
i wrote a whole story on shh! but they still didnt column dope
fatass net nerd, your just a waste of life but you still try
the only kid you size up with is sdizzle but that aint skill wise!
fuckin with the kid, ill put a ring around yah neck like tyson
cause shit man, your out of numbers just like the bison
raps cartoon man, so many fakes are soon to be made sir
cause if shh! is man of character, im the one with an eraser

MaRVJay 04-09-05 12:24 AM

If U want your name in 'Headlines' I'll provide the Tombstone
You'll "never last" son......Like EBT* cards in Group Homes
^^^DECENT OPENER...
U only elevate in ya sig, U should practice to Rhyme Silent
Cause L.I career will never "take off"..... like Blind Pilots
^^LOL I WAS FEELIN DIS PUNCH
Its like U lack the health insurance cuz U cant take 'da Medicine'
Used to "hold weight" but now you "all bones" like Pun Skeleton!
^^WHOOO DAT BAR WAS CRAZEE
L.I. drop a record and break the CD to say he Murder Songs
You claim to be ILL but in but in your name its Worded Wrong
^^LOL GOOD PERSONAL/CLOSER

i key books with text, dissin emcess left n right, all them folks
i wrote a whole story on shh! but they still didnt column dope
^^^WACK..LOL
fatass net nerd, your just a waste of life but you still try
the only kid you size up with is sdizzle but that aint skill wise!
^^^??? R U BATTLIN SDIZZLE FAM
fuckin with the kid, ill put a ring around yah neck like tyson
cause shit man, your out of numbers just like the bison
^^^WACK
raps cartoon man, so many fakes are soon to be made sir
cause if shh! is man of character, im the one with an eraser
^^LMAOOO...DAT WAS A NOOB BAR FAM...

V/HOTT SHH!.....dis battle was wun sided 4real...li i dont know fam if u was high or u just slept on him but ya verse was wack...i didn't see a punchline verse was kind of noobish...and hot i felt ya whole verse and nahmean

.Ike. 04-09-05 12:31 AM

hotshh......
If U want your name in 'Headlines' I'll provide the Tombstone
You'll "never last" son......Like EBT* cards in Group Homes
decent opener....
U only elevate in ya sig, U should practice to Rhyme Silent
Cause L.I career will never "take off"..... like Blind Pilots
lol...nice...
Its like U lack the health insurance cuz U cant take 'da Medicine'
Used to "hold weight" but now you "all bones" like Pun Skeleton!
dope...was definitely feelin this...
L.I. drop a record and break the CD to say he Murder Songs
You claim to be ILL but in but in your name its Worded Wrong
ahh nice play off name to close it out....


LI........
key books with text, dissin emcess left n right, all them folks
i wrote a whole story on shh! but they still didnt column dope
nicest bar of your verse...dope....
fatass net nerd, your just a waste of life but you still try
the only kid you size up with is sdizzle but that aint skill wise!
ehh decent...fat dizzle lines are played...
fuckin with the kid, ill put a ring around yah neck like tyson
cause shit man, your out of numbers just like the bison
ok.....
raps cartoon man, so many fakes are soon to be made sir
cause if shh! is man of character, im the one with an eraser
decent closer.....


both had good verses in my opinion...but hotshh definitely had the more consistent verse...and his punches were more witty....they just hit harder.....

Vote - Hotshh

L.I.3 04-09-05 12:33 AM

Lol at him gettin wittiness...worrrrrrrd i am so wack....true my sdizzle line sucked and the bison line was herb...but im sure the two i hit with killed his verse....

.Ike. 04-09-05 12:36 AM

^^^actually...no they didnt...but if you wanna think that.....feel free...you have the right to be wrong

L.I.3 04-09-05 12:39 AM

dont let your record full of herb wins get to your head...your not in the palce to judge who's good and who's not...you arent talented at all.

.Ike. 04-09-05 12:44 AM

herb wins huh?...lol.....

.Ike. 04-09-05 12:46 AM

Quote:
Originally Posted by I.L.
dont let your record full of herb wins get to your head...your not in the palce to judge who's good and who's not...you arent talented at all.



I believe im in a perfectly good place to judge....i voted didnt i???????

L.I.3 04-09-05 12:46 AM

Yes if you didnt read correctly i said herb wins.

.Ike. 04-09-05 12:49 AM

well....whatever you choose to believe.....

MaRVJay 04-09-05 12:51 AM

lol...shut da fukk up u dickhead...

L.I.3 04-09-05 12:52 AM

Yeah like Marv said stfu Invektive

.Ike. 04-09-05 12:53 AM

hey guess what....you still lost.....

MaRVJay 04-09-05 12:58 AM

i aint say nothin 2 invektive.....li ur da 1 cryin n shit....ya verse was wack try again lol

.Ike. 04-09-05 12:59 AM

lol....i have to agree with Marv.....

L.I.3 04-09-05 01:02 AM

Lmao...upping...coo battle hotshh!
Sorry for this burst of free posting :)

Magic5 04-09-05 01:13 AM

L.I. > Invektive
L.I. > MarvJay
L.I. > hotshh!

That is all.. faggots.

TeamOne 04-09-05 02:21 AM

If U want your name in 'Headlines' I'll provide the Tombstone
You'll "never last" son......Like EBT* cards in Group Homes
ehhhhh.... metas ok
U only elevate in ya sig, U should practice to Rhyme Silent
Cause L.I career will never "take off"..... like Blind Pilots
this was alot better.....
Its like U lack the health insurance cuz U cant take 'da Medicine'
Used to "hold weight" but now you "all bones" like Pun Skeleton!
not avery good bar.... but decent
L.I. drop a record and break the CD to say he Murder Songs
You claim to be ILL but in but in your name its Worded Wrong
haha nice close, ur setup i actually liked better than the 2nd line

i key books with text, dissin emcess left n right, all them folks
i wrote a whole story on shh! but they still didnt column dope
blah opener..... kinda stupid
fatass net nerd, your just a waste of life but you still try
the only kid you size up with is sdizzle but that aint skill wise!
haha.... but i unno if this is a fake personal, but kinda funny
fuckin with the kid, ill put a ring around yah neck like tyson
cause shit man, your out of numbers just like the bison
weak....... 7 days weak
raps cartoon man, so many fakes are soon to be made sir
cause if shh! is man of character, im the one with an eraser
kinda funny, hit harder than most

kinda close battle...... Li only had two good bars, while Hotshh had ALL decent bars pretty much..... so i gotta give this to consistencey.....

V/Hotshh!

Vango 04-09-05 11:13 AM

L.I. seriously your verse was hella noobish, i dont know if your rusty or what.. but hotshh shitted on your verse this week..


vote-hotshh

K.ontroverz.Y 04-09-05 11:42 AM

this was an aiight battle...seen better from both

hotshh

If U want your name in 'Headlines' I'll provide the Tombstone
You'll "never last" son......Like EBT* cards in Group Homes
jea this shit was pretty dope...good opener....7.5/10
U only elevate in ya sig, U should practice to Rhyme Silent
Cause L.I career will never "take off"..... like Blind Pilots
[/b]second line heard before...but you played it off creative 7/10[/b]
Its like U lack the health insurance cuz U cant take 'da Medicine'
Used to "hold weight" but now you "all bones" like Pun Skeleton!
this was the hottest line in the battle...i was feelin this 8.5/10
L.I. drop a record and break the CD to say he Murder Songs
You claim to be ILL but in but in your name its Worded Wrong
jea this was an aiight closer...decent 7/10

Hotshh
good shit hotshh your hottest bar was of course the

Its like U lack the health insurance cuz U cant take 'da Medicine'
Used to "hold weight" but now you "all bones" like Pun Skeleton!


line. shit was bangin. your structure was good...personals was there..but none of em really hit hard. but you alwayz come with the nice wordplay and punches...overall you scored 30/40

shit was real nice


L.I


i key books with text, dissin emcess left n right, all them folks
i wrote a whole story on shh! but they still didnt column dope
[b] no..self glorification..followed by a weak punch 5/10

fatass net nerd, your just a waste of life but you still try
the only kid you size up with is sdizzle but that aint skill wise!
first line..filler..second line was nice..had me laughin 7/10
fuckin with the kid, ill put a ring around yah neck like tyson
cause shit man, your out of numbers just like the bison
blah, decent 6/10
raps cartoon man, so many fakes are soon to be made sir
cause if shh! is man of character, im the one with an eraser
yes this was hot! dope closer 9/10

L.I

your shit was pretty hot too...you fell off with a few weak lines...but your shit was pretty hot...i was feelin it......but i honestly think you could do better then this.....you scored... 27/40

v/ Hotshh!

Germ 04-09-05 12:50 PM

yes, i am giving this to hotshh....just because he stayed consistent with decent lines throughout his verse, while I.L., your opener and closer were fire man, but the core of your verse was kinda depressing, word....good battle though, woulda been different if L.I. had some stronger lines in the middle, i think

v/hotshh

Ambient 04-09-05 01:15 PM

i key books with text, dissin emcess left n right, all them folks
i wrote a whole story on shh! but they still didnt column dope
fatass net nerd, your just a waste of life but you still try
the only kid you size up with is sdizzle but that aint skill wise!
raps cartoon man, so many fakes are soon to be made sir
cause if shh! is man of character, im the one with an eraser

vs.

nothing.

you must all be reading a different battle. serious.

v/ L.I.

N.Tavarez 04-09-05 02:20 PM

6-1
uppin

no ambient. i think u voted for him, cuz your the only one who predictd he'd win/
its cool though, me and LI can both do better

New Meth0d 04-09-05 02:21 PM

Its like U lack the health insurance cuz U cant take 'da Medicine'
Used to "hold weight" but now you "all bones" like Pun Skeleton!

vs.

i key books with text, dissin emcess left n right, all them folks
i wrote a whole story on shh! but they still didnt column dope
fatass net nerd, your just a waste of life but you still try
the only kid you size up with is sdizzle but that aint skill wise!
raps cartoon man, so many fakes are soon to be made sir
cause if shh! is man of character, im the one with an eraser

lol even though L.I did vote against me i gotta give him my vote, he was more creative and witty.......his punches hit harder......and he had some decent wordplay.....v/L.I

Typical 04-09-05 02:30 PM

raps cartoon man, so many fakes are soon to be made sir
cause if shh! is man of character, im the one with an eraser
LI'S BEST LINE
Its like U lack the health insurance cuz U cant take 'da Medicine'
Used to "hold weight" but now you "all bones" like Pun Skeleton!
L.I. drop a record and break the CD to say he Murder Songs
You claim to be ILL but in but in your name its Worded WroNG
HOTSHH BEST LINE.

one sided battle, hotshh took it, LI came back rusty, maybe next time
V/hotshh!

Typical 04-09-05 06:44 PM

v/hotshh!

this was fucking hilariouse! how can u talk so much shit and still lose with such a fucked up verse...damn
il had a really bad choice of wording on most da lines
a perfect example is tha bison line...dat was fucked!
tha sdizzle line was coo, i didnt like da opener but i dont know all these inside jokes on da site so i didnt falt u for the opener.
ladies and gentlemen....tha return has begun!

hotshh!

L.I. drop a record and break the CD to say he Murder Songs
You claim to be ILL but in but in your name its Worded Wrong
deffinitly my favorite line, great wordplay but not just cuz u used tha word word...word.
tha rest of it had me rollin lmao from beggining till the end
hot shit. i mean shh!

Blackmage 04-10-05 12:59 AM

Are we all serious in here!?!?
o.k.

i key books with text, dissin emcess left n right, all them folks
i wrote a whole story on shh! but they still didnt column dope
WHAT?...NO
fatass net nerd, your just a waste of life but you still try
the only kid you size up with is sdizzle but that aint skill wise!
I DON'T KNOW SDIZZ BUT EVEN IF HE IS FAT THE PUNCH IS STILL JUST O.K.
fuckin with the kid, ill put a ring around yah neck like tyson
cause shit man, your out of numbers just like the bison
WHAT?...NO...AGAIN
raps cartoon man, so many fakes are soon to be made sir
cause if shh! is man of character, im the one with an eraser
.....ANYWAY

If U want your name in 'Headlines' I'll provide the Tombstone
You'll "never last" son......Like EBT* cards in Group Homes
SHIT HE'S RIGHT...THEY DON'T LAST VERY LONG GOOD LINE
U only elevate in ya sig, U should practice to Rhyme Silent
Cause L.I career will never "take off"..... like Blind Pilots
I GET WHAT YOUR SAYIN BUT BLIND PILOTS CAN STILL TAKE OFF...
Its like U lack the health insurance cuz U cant take 'da Medicine'
Used to "hold weight" but now you "all bones" like Pun Skeleton!
FIRST LINE WAS AN ALRIGHT WPLAY PUNCH WAS FUNNY GOOD LINE
L.I. drop a record and break the CD to say he Murder Songs
You claim to be ILL but in but in your name its Worded Wrong
FIRST LINE I WASN'T FEELIN BUT THE NAME PLAY WAS NICE

Sorry guy i know you voted for me and all (i kinda feel bad now) but he smoked you on this battle.

v/ hotshh

Master Minded 04-10-05 04:19 PM

rofl @ this... L.I. won this easily...

Nynth Degree 04-10-05 06:05 PM

hotshh!:
If U want your name in 'Headlines' I'll provide the Tombstone
You'll "never last" son......Like EBT* cards in Group Homes
Decent opener
U only elevate in ya sig, U should practice to Rhyme Silent
Cause L.I career will never "take off"..... like Blind Pilots
Decent personal off his avy
Its like U lack the health insurance cuz U cant take 'da Medicine'
Used to "hold weight" but now you "all bones" like Pun Skeleton!
Weak punch, didn't hit very hard
L.I. drop a record and break the CD to say he Murder Songs
You claim to be ILL but in but in your name its Worded Wrong
Good closer, liked the personal

L.I.:
i key books with text, dissin emcess left n right, all them folks
i wrote a whole story on shh! but they still didnt column dope
Lol good meta in this bar, punch was dope
fatass net nerd, your just a waste of life but you still try
the only kid you size up with is sdizzle but that aint skill wise!
meh, could've been worded better
fuckin with the kid, ill put a ring around yah neck like tyson
cause shit man, your out of numbers just like the bison
Not that great here...
raps cartoon man, so many fakes are soon to be made sir
cause if shh! is man of character, im the one with an eraser
Was feeling the closer, good punch

Guess I was wrong this week. L.I.'s opener won this for him.
V//L.I.

N.Tavarez 04-10-05 09:25 PM

8-3 me
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if any noobie ever said LI's verse, they would get laughed at
but he got DR's so hard, that he can leave for 4 months and come back
with some pure absolute no punch having garbage and still get votes
normal heads on this site know whats up and didnt dig ya shit LI oh well.
8-3 me.

J. Luth 04-10-05 09:26 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by ~Genius~
rofl @ this... L.I. won this easily...

yea fashos. But shit happens on RV. lol

L.I.3 04-10-05 09:29 PM

no u just dont understand witty punches. or wordplay without quotes. if you want i can edit it and add quotations so u can call it ill if you want fag

N.Tavarez 04-10-05 09:31 PM

so its coincedence ya names all in his sig?

all course you gonna say that. if you aint in the league
it dont matter anyway, that opener was trash,
wtf with all this weak text terms, look i know this is a text
site but the lyrics still gotta have rap punches right?
that sdizzle line only works against sdizzle. im not even fat
i weight like 170..comon
man with eraser? r u sure you aint read that line b4?
dont let LI sperm blind you...damn.....and im the net geek?

N.Tavarez 04-10-05 09:32 PM

u underestimated me
u lucky 5 wasnt KO nigga
by the way
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