Armada Da 187 vs MaRVJay1009
 

Battle Rules:

dis is UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
20 posts to vote( let everyone get a chance to vote)

not a hate battle jus standin up for myself

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-05-05 at 04:22 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Armada Da 187 has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-04-05 04:22 PM.

W/E

Given You more Insults then even you can handle bitch!
Spit lyrcis like viruses, damage nerves, make ya body twitch

MaRVJay? Lets leave at that, Armada callin you a phoney
Ya gonna have pay cats 1009 times,not to drop a vote for me
Dont Hate on me, ya faggit callin me a newb. I challenge Vets
You got 30 wins off newbs who dont even have 50 posts yet!
Plain n Simp?well ya life is plain,plus all ya lyrics Simple, ya set
You Simply fuckin the gutter sluts,dollar hoes to hard to get
In the RV damn Ima drop ya props you rollin wit the high class
But les get back to reality, in the real world Ide crush ya ass
Cuz im the RV soldja, Ya king, Do best to get on your knees
Where you from is what you are guess that make u a QUEEN
Im movin to Kings, Cuz thats what I be, King to all ya bitches!
Rumor in the rap game is that the Queens thugs r snitches
Black Child Stabbed 50 cent, n 50 hurried n called the Pigs
N get got the balls to rep queen plus he marvs ideal, Ya Dig?
I like how you rap about them Blue Jays n them Red Bulls!
guess yooza "Naturalist" faggit n need of some energy foo!
Ya spit the queens shit, gay n bent, shit dont make no since
Ya couldnt drop a tight ass verse even if C.A.L.I gave u hints
You dropin firecrackers n ya verse,im droppin Baltimore bombs
N im so interested bout ya profile sayin ya" fuckkin ya moms"
You sure you from Queens?, maybe theres a queens in WV
If not,NY reppin faggits, got 50 now marv, Get the pictura?
you was wit the Establishment for the beginnin now ya pout?
Found Out Marv was gay wit Militaryminds,threw ya ass out
dont care how big ya think you are, they make caskets big to
Ya u Amerikas Nightmare,It dont wanna be run by gays fool!
Talk a big game sayin " you shit on the RV?ha ha ha Whatever
Ya shit wouldnt touch any of us even if we was toilet paper!
Gonna make this battle a stolen one, lika theif im n in out
Quit usin ma name to throw a punch, keep it out ya mouth!
What kinda Name is MarvJay1009? Armada would like to know
Marv short for Marvin? Jay short for jaylebitch? uza homo?
You as Phoney as Escolayde, sayin he only got one alias
Couldnt be dangerous,ya like a nuclear bomb,impact 1in radius
All ya wins, should be a veteran, but u battle newbs ya joke!
So ima senda million dollars of RV Money, go in buy ya votes!


explanation

WV- when you read it say "west Virginia" nex like rhymes wit Virginia
a Naturalist is a person who fantasises bout nature (marv raps about blue Jays Red Bull is a energy drink marv raps nout red bulls as well

he gots like 30 wins n battles "noobs wit no wins or losses)
1in. === i inch ( yep)


I dont win, dont care jus lettin him no i drop heat as well

lol nigga i got 5 battles open....u gota wait

MaRVJay1009 has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-05-05 12:25 PM.

dis kids 4-7 ppl....datz y he's hidin his record..lol

if marv suck y stress da bro?,fam learn 2 not stretch ya flow
u win once in da blue oh u "gassed" now cuzz u beat "texaco"*
u mad cuzz ppl notice I,stop watchin homo close ya eye's.....
cuzz end dis battle gon b how u started ya rv career "0-5"**
ya mother gon be my next freak,quit it nigga ya text week!...
dis like when "j.kidd & vince fight" all he want is "NET beef"...
u said queens is pussy rite,i'll put da berreta 2 ya brain.....
u aint gon b able WRiTE afta i break da 1st "3 letter's in ya name"
ARM...im gifted with mine,all da shit u dont live in ya ryhmes
ya skillz UN-developed,u UN-der me u aint worth battlin UN-limited lines
its rare when dis hoe spittin fire,on rv he known as a lier.....
since u from B-MORE ima leave ya face lookin like "O from da wire"
kesse merked u in ya last rap...aint tired of gettin laughed at?
u dont blast gats,pass crack..fukin me u'll get ya ass claped!..
pause!..so you betta invest,"iN-VEST" like da "NaS DaQ".....
4 wins lmaooooo on my first day on RV nigga i pass dat......

nuff said

*he beat texaco which also da name of a gass station,u'll get it
**his first 5 battles on dis site he lose...u'll dat punch 2

lmaooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oh wow i thought u was battlin me why u talkin about 50 so much...nigga spit a double album

upppppiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnn this he tryin to throw dirt on me 50 is from queens n is a sniotch marv is from queens ya should get it? n plus i start my rv career 0-3 so his personals are wack

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lol when did 50 snitch fam???...stop readin cnn news....and i merked u with like 10 lines...how u start off 0-5 lmaoooooooooooo

This was feedback posted for Armada Da 187
 

just checkin the polls
because rules say no crew
votes aigh

damn no one post on this shit or
voted up this shit

This was feedback posted for MaRVJay1009
 

lol come on fams drop a vote this fool verse was wack n mamde no since i came wit the hard shit lol marv blackchild stabbed 50 n 50 called the cops look it up bitch how u think i got word of it??????

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upppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnn this he spit 10 lines of shit. did anyone even see a heavy punch LMFAO!



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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Flow: Blah
Punches: Marv
Personals: Marv
Wordplay: Marv
Metas: BLah
Multis: Blah
Enjoyment: Blah

Vote: Marv

Explanation: Marv Got This Other guy was just to basic .. and didnt throw anything hard really .. need to get more personal armada .. stay elevating tho .. stay up 1

lmaoo look u spit a 100 lines n nuff of em were hott datz sad....y would 50 call a cops on black child....i saw a dvd called beef u probly was watchin dat but ya dumb ass didn't understand it and i wanna see u cum da queens niggaz a break ya fukkin face u lil pussy...dis between u n me u rappin bout 50 like u know da nigga lol

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

V/Marvjay1009.....this was a good battle by both but marv gets my vote he came wit good personals an punchs wit vocab.....Armada u had a good verse wit sum good punchs but u werent consistent wit them some were real basic an played.........No Hate....RETURN THE FAVOR
opner=M
closer=m
structure=m
punchs=m
vocab=m
personals=m
overall=Marvjay1009

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. Also a crew vote.

blah.... didnt see how his punches were better then mine....cuz they wernt, hardest thing i seen him say was i started 0-5 which I didnt n referred to me beatin texaco hmm but o well thx for votin atleast its gettin voted on

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Voted For: MaRVJay1009

yall niggas was writing stories. i didnt finish armada's, i aint gon lie. i had about 6 more lines to go tho. i was leaning towards marv anyway, thats why. his was more structured and better worded. (wordplaY). i think he came harder on punches. i wouldnt be suprised if he was the punchline king of RV. armada-u had some ok lines, but a lot of em was unneccessary. u started off ok, but then near the middle and the end, it started to get boring. i wasnt feelin it at all. structure and flow was a lil off.
i gave my vote to marv because i felt he came harder and had some better disses and punches in there, and his verse didnt put me to sleep. one sided battle..


v/marv

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

I'll break this down.
Marv: You had a nice consistent verse, hard hitting punches 7/10. Flow was av. So 5/10 fir flow. Best line I think was..
pause!..so you betta invest,"iN-VEST" like da "NaS DaQ".....
4 wins lmaooooo on my first day ob RV nigga i pass dat......
Overall 7.5/10.
Armada: You didn't come hard at all, you had a nicer flow, but your ounches weren't connecting. Some lines seemed forced, and your punches werent consistent enough to get the win. I think your best line was...
MaRVJay? Lets leave at that, Armada callin you a phoney
Ya gonna have to pay cats 1009 times,not to drop a vote for me
Overall 4/10.
V/Marv.

Voted For: Armada Da 187

voting for Armada Da 187

ight Armada Da 187 got this due to way beta punches

Punches- Armada Da 187 had them,and dey wer hard hittin punches
Flow- dunno both good
Structure- both quite good
Personals- Armada Da 187 got the perosnals.
Multies- i cant rememba who got dis :S


good battle form the both of you but Armada Da 187 gets the vote due to perosnals n harder punches

GOOD BATTLE FROM BOTH, KEEP IT UP !!!!!!!

lol u didn't say anything about my verse fam.....

upppppppppiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnn well least i didnt get ko'ed :( lol upppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnnnnn

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yo y everything is ya sig has my name on it lol..u luvin me now fam

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

no hate marv took this one. better punches, and better structure to his verse. i was feelin urs better. i think tha first coupld barz took his whole verse, but w/e. closin bars was kinda wack and didnt flow too well, but i think you took this one. hands down...

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(and I returned that, even tho u voted against me, so dont say i didnt)

Voted For: MaRVJay1009

my vote goes to marv his punches hit harder i liked the personals he was using it was a well put together verse, armada ur verse was alright some of ur punches were kinda pointless because they didnt hit hard at all and just made ur verse long and dragged out but there were a few lines that were alright. but overall marv had this because of the fact that he kept comin wit more creative punches/personals

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