J DOT vs ::..:$lobK::..:
 

Battle Rules:

10-20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/R
No alias votes



You wanted it, you got it.

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 04-06-05 at 07:34 PM

Must drop verse in 1441 minutes after check in.

::..:$lobK::..: has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-05-05 11:54 PM.

J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-06-05 10:06 AM.

Merking #2 in progress....

hmmm. I didnt get kicked outta NOK hoe. but, decent drop i guess. uppin

Voted For: J DOT

I think JDOT took this. I think he had some harder hitting mettas and a few better punches. I think slob had the personals category, alot of good personals, but irrelevant i think. this was a close battle, but i think dot just came out stronger, and took the win. no hate. j came a lil bit harder wit better rhyming and shit also. better structure from j too. slob, u had some stretched lines, and it took away from your flow. my overall verse goes to j in this one.
v/j dot

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Voted For: J DOT

u had better more funnier punchlines and more creativity and better disses and easier ta read since blue makes the shit hard ta read. gotz my vote

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Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

whoooooooo....slob really brung it dis battle

j dot:
You can shoot me in tha legs so we can even it out
Cause you talking out ya ass like you aint needin yo mouth
^^^UMM CASSIDY SAID SOMTHIN VERY SIMILIAR 2 DIS INSTEAD OD NEEDIN HE SAID NEED...IT WAS A WEAK OPENER THO
Ya spit hot shit? Then dot’ll give ya top lip fever blisters
Don’t make sudden moves, show me ur hands like Jesus pictures
^^^GOOD PUNCH
Fuck wit me, you’ll be using RV money for protection
But dot’s a beast; you’ll be drawing blood like erections
^^^WASN'T FEELIN DIS
I stake down houses, take down spouses, and stab wit pickets
You don’t spit ‘sick’; you just ‘sun-burned’ like pounding ‘ricket’s
^^^NAH
You aint a killa from blue city…I remove shitty verses
Ya cursing…like a drunk and passing out on purpose
^^^NO...FAM STEP YA GAME UP
I merk kids, im tha baddest, fucka legendary status
My verse is good for 5 votes, so when I’m done u can have this
^^^WEAK CLOSER...

BASICALLY YA VERSE WAS WACK FAM REAL TALK...IMA HONEST DUDE NUN OF YA LINES STOOD OUT...NO PERSONALS OR NOTHIN

slobk:
Engulfed With The Faith..U Da Best?..Think Again..Im Reluctant To Say..
That Dot Is Gay..And This "Lonely" Fag..Has To Nominate "Friends Of Da Day" *
^^^COOL PERSONAL...GOOD WAY 2 START IT OFF
Clone Dis Hatian..Put Ur "Moms In My Brain"..So See Could See "Zone Relations"..
And U Must Know U A Herb..When U Get Kicked Out From Your Own Creation..(NOK)
^^LMAOOOO..ANOTHER GOOD PERSONAL FAM
U A Raged Chick..Think U Hood Just Could U Supposedly Raised Clicks?..
And Imma Tell U Wat I Tol N.O.K Members..Get Off Of "J's" Dick..
^^^DECENT LINE
J Dot On Men's Dick..Always Show Em' Love..Man Up Cus..
And U Thinkin We Swingin Forearms In Your Direction..The Way TE Duckin Us..
^^^^COULD OF WORDED DIS BETTA
Pop Shit?..And Get Away Wit It..Put The "Master" On Ur Mouth..To "Lock" Ur Lips..
U Mis-Guided Like Five Star Crips..Cave Ur Chest In..To Sho U A Real Flat Top Bitch..
^^^NAH
He Branched Off From His Crew Like Kanye..Dot Is Honestly Beyond Gay..
And May I Say..U On "Jay-Z" Nuts So Much Homie..It's Beyond Say (Beyonce)
^^^WHOOOOOOOOO DIS DIS PUNCHLINE WAS CRAZEE
RV Members..This Is The Guy U Should Try And Avoid..He's A Bad Choice..
And When NOK Went Audio..He Quit..Cuz He Aint Want No1 To Hear His Fag Voice..
^^LMAOOOOOO...GOOD PERSONAL DATZ TRUE THO HE DID LEAVE AFTA THEY WENT AUDIO
I'll Spaz On U..Homie U A Crew-Hopper..Now He In TE Aka "The Established" Crew..
And The Crew He Founded..Is Now Fightin..Just To Be Recognized As An "Established Crew"..
^^^GOOD WORDPLAY
Have Respect..Gangsta Homie?..U Just Known For Bein A Hood-Wreck..
And RV Niggaz Wouldnt Mind..If U Followed In Your Role Model's Footsteps..(Retirement)
^^^^U MEANT JAY-Z RITE?...IF SO DAT WAS A GOOD CLOSER..

GET IT RITE THO...IM NOT IN L.S AND I WAS IN DA ESTABLISHMENT SO DIS IS NOT A HATE OR CREW VOTE...I VOTED LINE 4 LINE DOT SLEEPED ON SLOBK N GOT MERKED..

RETURN DAT FAVOR YA'LL LINKS IN MY SIG

This was feedback posted for J DOT
 

heh I can't vote on this battle mayn. I'm not blocked its just it won't let me. dayum. hey lemme break it down anyways.
Nice structure J Dot. heh. Slobk omg I can't see ya verse. please fix it. its nice and colorful but too isdnvisdn. BRIGHT.
Do NOT I REPEAT DO NOT USE GODS NAME INVIEN.

return dat fukkin favor muthafukkaz

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word.... not bad, slobk = lines are stretched and you rhymed the established crew with established crew....i dont have enough posts to vote, but jdot got this.

^^LMAO..Anyway Uppin On This Battle Yo..................

uppin this bullshitting battle. DOT DOT DOT DOT DOT DOT bitchnigga

Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

da fuk dis nigga bit dat 2nd n 3rd off cass he said U TALKIN OUT YA ASS LIKE U DONT NEED YA MOUF den I SPIT HOT MAH TOP LIP GOT FEVER BLISTERS fukn biter i dont even have 2 vote slobk got dis cuz da otha nigga a biter fukn queer lol

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da fuck this nigga.....stfu. i aint bite off nuthin queer lady. oh, yea. good drop slobk, i looked up and noticed i aint said that. uppin this. 2-0 sllobk

Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:


You can shoot me in tha legs so we can even it out
Cause you talking out ya ass like you aint needin yo mouth
^^decent, but simple
Ya spit hot shit? Then dot’ll give ya top lip fever blisters
Don’t make sudden moves, show me ur hands like Jesus pictures
^^eh, not really feeling it
Fuck wit me, you’ll be using RV money for protection
But dot’s a beast; you’ll be drawing blood like erections
^^eww...lol....no idea how you come up with that..its iffy
I stake down houses, take down spouses, and stab wit pickets
You don’t spit ‘sick’; you just ‘sun-burned’ like pounding ‘ricket’s
^^decent
You aint a killa from blue city…I remove shitty verses
Ya cursing…like a drunk and passing out on purpose
^^wasnt feeling it
I merk kids, im tha baddest, fucka legendary status
My verse is good for 5 votes, so when I’m done u can have this
^^wasnt feeling the first line,..needed a stronger closer j...
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ya verse was aight, nothin outstanding but a couple bars was koo..i really didnt notice any personals.....decent verse j.....
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Engulfed With The Faith..U Da Best?..Think Again..Im Reluctant To Say..
That Dot Is Gay..And This "Lonely" Fag..Has To Nominate "Friends Of Da Day" *
^^ok opener,.......couldve been better
Clone Dis Hatian..Put Ur "Moms In My Brain"..So See Could See "Zone Relations"..
And U Must Know U A Herb..When U Get Kicked Out From Your Own Creation..(NOK)
^^1st line was wack...2nd was aight.....ok punch
U A Raged Chick..Think U Hood Just Could U Supposedly Raised Clicks?..
And Imma Tell U Wat I Tol N.O.K Members..Get Off Of "J's" Dick..
^^blah....wasnt feeling it
J Dot On Men's Dick..Always Show Em' Love..Man Up Cus..
And U Thinkin We Swingin Forearms In Your Direction..The Way TE Duckin Us..
^^nah,..your battlin him not his crew homie
Pop Shit?..And Get Away Wit It..Put The "Master" On Ur Mouth..To "Lock" Ur Lips..
U Mis-Guided Like Five Star Crips..Cave Ur Chest In..To Sho U A Real Flat Top Bitch..
^^ok.........
He Branched Off From His Crew Like Kanye..Dot Is Honestly Beyond Gay..
And May I Say..U On "Jay-Z" Nuts So Much Homie..It's Beyond Say (Beyonce)
^^this was koo.....worded weird..but i amagine it was difficult to make it flow right
RV Members..This Is The Guy U Should Try And Avoid..He's A Bad Choice..
And When NOK Went Audio..He Quit..Cuz He Aint Want No1 To Hear His Fag Voice..
^^nice punch.......
I'll Spaz On U..Homie U A Crew-Hopper..Now He In TE Aka "The Established" Crew..
And The Crew He Founded..Is Now Fightin..Just To Be Recognized As An "Established Crew"..
^^very wack
Have Respect..Gangsta Homie?..U Just Known For Bein A Hood-Wreck..
And RV Niggaz Wouldnt Mind..If U Followed In Your Role Model's Footsteps..(Retirement)
^^nice punch n closer
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hmm, overall you have skill but the amount of not relating fillers n multi's really ruined ya verse in my opinion...dont use multi's if you can';t make sense of them..your punches were hit n miss...
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readin this the first tyme i thought slob merk j..but the 2nd read...he just barely won this battle in my opinion....j was more consistent but slob's punches were more personal..
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close battle.no hate........pz

Coo..Im Up 3-0..And WTF Dot..Im Hearin U Bit..WTF..
I Might Have To Report Ya Ass Yo..Lol..Uppin

he already tried. I didnt even bite..........you won. 3-0 KO, is that coo?

This was feedback posted for ::..:$lobK::..:
 

Checking polls ...good battle props to both.....

Yea Dats Coo..KO..Now U Could Stop Talkin Ya Shit..

appreciate it if ya return the favour slob...........

This was feedback posted for J DOT
 

A J think you got this one you merked this kid good job!

This was feedback posted for ::..:$lobK::..:
 

You merked him, good punches personals, and multi's great!

Coo..But Let's Get Some Votes In..Not No Feedback..

Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

Goin wit Slobk on this... even bar level, Slob jus had more of em..

J Dot- Not a bad verse from you.. honestly, not good either.. Excluding ya first 4 lines.. now i dont care if its classified as "bitin" but u did take them lines from the mixtape (forgot the rapper) but i heard it.. and its identical.. i doubt he stole the lines from u.. But aside from those lines, decent verse.. The erection line was aiite, nothin great.. the Sun burn line didn't make no sense, and was wack anyway.. The Drunk line was prolly ya best line.. but still was just decent... First line in ya closer was self glorification, and was decent but not a good line.. Last line was a good line, but still nothin special.. overall, a mediocre verse at best.. coulda come wit somethin better.. and next time dont take lines..

Slob- Long ass verse, some nice lines throughout...Opener was funny, nice personal.. and the next line was nice too..lol... The Raged chick line was wack, and the Get off j's dick line was nice.. nice wordplay in there.. The TE duckin line was wack too, to was the next line... Flat top lin was gay, didn't make sense.. the Beyond gay/ Beyonce line was nice, and the Audio diss line was decent... THe "established crew" shit was wack.. wack concept, used the same word to ryme.. Last line in ya closer was ya best line, again, dissin him D/R Jay..nice verse here, more than enough to take the win..

Overall- Slobk takes this with better personals and hard punches, and had more content in his verse.. also he had a longer verse, and more nice lines.. better wordplay from slobk, and he didn't BITE... Dot i expected better from you.. not a good drop from you

V/Slobk

Lol..Coo Man..Uppin For More Votes..Or Is This KO?..Dot Get At Me Yo...

Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

shit good battle

j dot: your shit was decent famz...i was feelin the jesus picture line. your punches hit hard. i was feelin them' you had a few fillers and some weak lines but most of them were hittin hard. personals. yeah you had some personals in there. they was aiight none of them really hit hard. multi's yeah i saw some multis there aswell. they were ok. structure your structure was nice. flow. your flow was decent. it was koo. overall i give you 7/10

slobk: your punches merked him right up the ass...personals were dangerous. that NOK line merked him alone. lol shit was sick famz. your flow was good. but your structure was off. shit was everywhere. dont stretch ya shit like that. it looks ugly. your multi's a few were there. but really i gave you this vote because of the personals. and thats it

7.5/10

vote: slobk

This was feedback posted for J DOT
 

J Dot...U bit ur first line from cassidy...dont deny it

This was feedback posted for J DOT
 

check check checkin the pollzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

This was feedback posted for J DOT
 

Checkin polls...good shit J :thumbup:

Uppin This Battle..Been Open For Too Long..............

Voted For: ::..:$lobK::..:

open: slobk his was better
close: j his was nicer
personals: slobk his were more personal
metas: slobk they sounded better
punches: slobk they hit harder
multis: n//a

win: slobk



this was a good battle .