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Blackmage vs Kin*Ethic™
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3-5 Bars No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 04-07-05 at 03:44 PM Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in. |
Blackmage has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-06-05 03:52 PM.
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Nobody knows you like sparks from the roc your lame
and you don't wanna "trade marks" cause i'm not your name you've got no game like sega lyrically you out of business i Kill Ignorant Niggas Erase This Homo I'm Cataclysmic (spells name) you pacafistic just like christmas my ass is gifted They caught the "Kin etics" of my punches ya ass just missed it you idolize me you've got a blackmage in your avatar you're like a special Ed lawyer your never "pass the bar" i'll son you dog like you my next of "Kin" dude try me and i'll burn ya ass like i'm mexican food Good Luck big homie |
Sorry i didn't know i had a day to think i thought this was just a Keystyle type verse. Whatever just post whenever i gotta go to work good luck peace
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Kin*Ethic™ has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-07-05 05:37 AM.
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Paste-Yer-Shit ill Erase-Yer-Fists like 'Cascious Clay Artists who Hate-Their-Wrists! .. Its not to Late-To-Crit so 'Black Mage Is A Bitch' like Dogs Staged-To-Do-Tricks!!
I Spit-To-Hurt & make u 'Shake A Spear' like english Literature! fuck this kid ill send a Hit-At-Her plus i already 'Knocked Black Mage Out' like i deleted my Signature!! (KO?) Punches Pave-&-Chalk-Him plus have mage 'Dream Of Death' like the Graves-Haunt-Him!! (LOL!) i Aim-Tauntin but Save-Talkin .. But i 'Own This Kid!' so ill 'Sell Black Back To RV' like a Slave-Auction!! His avy is Animated so ill put '3 Knives To His Dick' like Wolverine Masterbated! Punchs blow Past-Yer-Anus & Mass-To-Flame-Shit .. Plus ill 'Beat Black So Bad' RV will think im Racist!! (RIP) ---------- Idiot Disclaimer: 1. Mages Do Magic. Dog/Bitch Tricks U get It 2. The Guy In My Sig Is A Black Mage 3. Blacks/Slaves U Get It 4. His Avy Is Of Wolverine. Beat Blacks/Racists u get it |
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Voted For: Kin*Ethic™
jea mayn...kin ethic got this...due too hard punches...and good multi's.....you need to work on your structure...but your flow was good...coulda been better if the structure was correct...u have potential to be a vet if u can get ur structure right .....overall this shit was aiight blackmage: your shit was aiight...punches were decent...structure wasnt good..but it was better then kin's...your wordplay was nasic..and you worded shit wrong...flow wasnt good...overall your shit was decent vote: kin |
Voted For: Kin*Ethic™
I gotta give it to kin because his punches landed better plus his was more complex. I think you used to many multies which proved most of da time you werent saying fuck all about him just trying to look flash, ya mage punch was weak n so were da reset of ya punches n concepts, just you had good multies n vocab. Try n imporve on ya concepts n punches and dont use all them fillers that u kep using, other than that ya verse was ok. keep it up peace mage man ya verse was wack sorry to say but if you came with harder punches then i woulda given it 2 ya coz kins werent that hard. my advce that i gave 2 kin goes to you apart from the filler part. peace |
ok first of all yea i came weak only cause that was a keystyle and i thought i only had a short time to write cause i didn't bother to check the time i just wrote. Now i'm just gonna disregard da "illest" sayin my verse was wack cause he ain't even give a reason but how the hell did i word my verse wrong and how was my word play basic are you fu**ing serious come on and it did flow cause i make sure all my verses can be done audio before i drop em keystyle, whatever up this for some real votes good verse kin ethics
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lol@ these naggers talking bout structure .. structure doesnt mean anything lmao but i guess i can expect that from rv .. andlol@da illest .. kid set up a battle and ill murk you
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Voted For: Kin*Ethic™
this battle was fucking close but kenetic came out on top cuz he had alot of decent bars punchlines and wordplay that just won this battle but blackmage really did well in this battle and think it was a really good battle but my vote has to go to kenetic for having the better verse and structure. |
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Voted For: Kin*Ethic™
Nobody knows you like sparks from the roc your lame and you don't wanna "trade marks" cause i'm not your name Umm... Ok nameplay... you've got no game like sega lyrically you out of business i Kill Ignorant Niggas Erase This Homo I'm Cataclysmic (spells name) It's ok... you pacafistic just like christmas my ass is gifted They caught the "Kin etics" of my punches ya ass just missed it Umm... Not really good nameplay... you idolize me you've got a blackmage in your avatar you're like a special Ed lawyer your never "pass the bar" Umm... Kinda played... i'll son you dog like you my next of "Kin" dude try me and i'll burn ya ass like i'm mexican food Decent closer Overall - It was ok. You had some nameplay, but your punches were pretty weak. Nice try though. Paste-Yer-Shit ill Erase-Yer-Fists like 'Cascious Clay Artists who Hate-Their-Wrists! .. Its not to Late-To-Crit so 'Black Mage Is A Bitch' like Dogs Staged-To-Do-Tricks!! Decent nameplay. Kinda creative. I Spit-To-Hurt & make u 'Shake A Spear' like english Literature! fuck this kid ill send a Hit-At-Her plus i already 'Knocked Black Mage Out' like i deleted my Signature!! (KO?) Lmao. That's dope. Nice nameplay. Punches Pave-&-Chalk-Him plus have mage 'Dream Of Death' like the Graves-Haunt-Him!! (LOL!) i Aim-Tauntin but Save-Talkin .. But i 'Own This Kid!' so ill 'Sell Black Back To RV' like a Slave-Auction!! Lol. Kinda played concept, but nice nameplay. His avy is Animated so ill put '3 Knives To His Dick' like Wolverine Masterbated! Punchs blow Past-Yer-Anus & Mass-To-Flame-Shit .. Plus ill 'Beat Black So Bad' RV will think im Racist!! (RIP) Lol. Same shit as above cept punch is a little weaker, but it's decent. Overall - Your shit was pretty decent. You had some funny shit and your nameplay was cool. Punches - Kin*Ethic™ - His nameplays were more clever which gave him better punches. Personals - Tie - They both used nameplay so there wasn't really anything personal besides that. Wordplay - Kin*Ethic™ - His first bar won it for him. Creativity - Kin*Ethic™ - Blackmage had that one played punch that lost this for him. Complexity - Kin*Ethic™ - He had lots more just as far as his rhyme scheme goes. Multies - Kin*Ethic™ - Obviously. Structure - Blackmage - Obviously. Vote - Kin*Ethic™ - He beat Mage in all the important cats including punches so my vote just has to go to him. Good battle though, Nice try Blackmage.[/b] |
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Voted For: Kin*Ethic™
voted for KIN ight battle from both but kin jus took the cake so to speak ight K Punches- very creative n hard hittin I was like whaoh readin ur punches fam nice strucutre- nice complete structure easy to keep wit wordplay- nice wordplay creative as well flow was tight very nice wit ya flow fam did see any multies or personals so get some of those in there fav line: I Spit-To-Hurt & make u 'Shake A Spear' like english Literature! fuck this kid ill send a Hit-At-Her plus i already 'Knocked Black Mage Out' like i deleted my Signature!! (KO?) (nice n very creative) nice verse overall Black punches- some were hot others where a little off flow was ight u had that down pact perosnals- good but a little basic but creative strucutre was nice in on the mark multies- didnt see any put some in ya verse fam wordplay- lil basic but was pretty good everything was tight cept ya punches homie get a lil stronger wit the punches good battle fams be sure to RTF link under sig holla |
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