Pandemonium vs MuRcInAl
 

4 bars
no crew, hate, d/r, unexplained votes
no recycling, or biting
you can feed off the other persons verse if you wish too

g'luck

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Check in by: 04-09-05 at 04:35 PM

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Pandemonium has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-06-05 04:38 PM.

MuRcInAl has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-06-05 04:38 PM.

Upping.
 

Av verse Murc, it aint over lol....upping..upping..

Average?...........whats that make yours.................

Voted For: MuRcInAl

murc:
Call Him The Burnt Face Guy??? Well, What More Can I Say,
Except For Muh Ass Looks Betta Den Ur Face....On A Bad Day,*
^^^LOL FUNNY SHIT
Murc'll Kill U In This Thread, And Tear Out Pandemoniums Particles,
U Scared? O Bitch U Worry/Obituary More Den Newspaper Articles,
^^^WELL THOUGHT OUT...I WAS FEELIN DIS LINE
Dese Punches Hit U Internally,So Watch As Pand's Soul Decreases,
And Then I Play With Pand's "Life", Like Scatterin Monopoly Pieces,
^^^^NAH FAM..LIFE IS A BOARD U GOT IT MIXED UP
Oh Lord, Pand's Gettin Chopped To Pieces With Punches, Less Den He Deserve,
So Watch As I Find "Pand" "A"/Panda A Better Place, Like Switchin Wildlife Reserves,
^^^DOPE CLOSER...I LIKE DA NAME PLAY


pand:
Murcinal chances of winning is minimal, ya justa clown.
If you think your going pound for pound, I'll knock ya game down an ounce.
^^^WEAK OPENER FAM
He toggles more knobs, than a locksmith, so he's mastered the craft.
Cuz' the only way you'd be stiff competition, is if I left you in a body cast.
^^^^UUHH KIND OF ALRITE
An' like couch potatoes, your chances of winnings remote.
I just ripped out the fucking batteries, I'm nowhere near yo scope.
^^^^WEAK
After this merking, you'll have to configure yet another name.
Well at least your'e hot...
Cuz' you got shot down in flame's!
^^^WEAK CLOSER....

PAND U CAME U REAl weak fam...no pesonals from both of u but murc's verse had a lil bit more creativity

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Voted For: MuRcInAl

Murcinal chances of winning is minimal, ya justa clown.
If you think your going pound for pound, I'll knock ya game down an ounce.
^^weak opener
He toggles more knobs, than a locksmith, so he's mastered the craft.
Cuz' the only way you'd be stiff competition, is if I left you in a body cast.
^^nice
An' like couch potatoes, your chances of winnings remote.
I just ripped out the fucking batteries, I'm nowhere near yo scope.
^^wording was a bit off on the 2nd line, not feelin it
After this merking, you'll have to configure yet another name.
Well at least your'e hot...
Cuz' you got shot down in flame's!
^^decent closer
.
overall ya had 2 nice bars, pretty good..didnt like the large text but thats besides the point.i didnt see any personals but the body cast line was ya hardest punch..


Call Him The Burnt Face Guy??? Well, What More Can I Say,
Except For Muh Ass Looks Betta Den Ur Face....On A Bad Day,*
^^eh, better then the other verses opener
Murc'll Kill U In This Thread, And Tear Out Pandemoniums Particles,
U Scared? O Bitch U Worry/Obituary More Den Newspaper Articles,
^^wasnt feeling this bar
Dese Punches Hit U Internally,So Watch As Pand's Soul Decreases,
And Then I Play With Pand's "Life", Like Scatterin Monopoly Pieces,
^^punch is played, not very effective
Oh Lord, Pand's Gettin Chopped To Pieces With Punches, Less Den He Deserve,
So Watch As I Find "Pand" "A"/Panda A Better Place, Like Switchin Wildlife Reserves,
^^nice closer..best concept in the battle, wording a bit off
.
overall ya were more consistent with punches n personals
ya closer was nice....prolly couldve been worded better to hit harder but bar 4 bar in my opinion you came harder inthis battle...

murc:
Call Him The Burnt Face Guy??? Well, What More Can I Say,
Except For Muh Ass Looks Betta Den Ur Face....On A Bad Day,*
^^^LOL
Murc'll Kill U In This Thread, And Tear Out Pandemoniums Particles,
U Scared? O Bitch U Worry/Obituary More Den Newspaper Articles,
Nice Shit

Dese Punches Hit U Internally,So Watch As Pand's Soul Decreases,
And Then I Play With Pand's "Life", Like Scatterin Monopoly Pieces,
Ummmmmmmm Ok
Oh Lord, Pand's Gettin Chopped To Pieces With Punches, Less Den He Deserve,
So Watch As I Find "Pand" "A"/Panda A Better Place, Like Switchin Wildlife Reserves,
Nice


pand:
Murcinal chances of winning is minimal, ya justa clown.
If you think your going pound for pound, I'll knock ya game down an ounce.
^^^Decent
He toggles more knobs, than a locksmith, so he's mastered the craft.
Cuz' the only way you'd be stiff competition, is if I left you in a body cast.
Decent....
An' like couch potatoes, your chances of winnings remote.
I just ripped out the fucking batteries, I'm nowhere near yo scope.
Naw.........
After this merking, you'll have to configure yet another name.
Well at least your'e hot...
Cuz' you got shot down in flame's!
Naw.............

Vote-MurCinAL

He Had A Better Verse He Also Stayed Consistant.......

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Voted For: Pandemonium

Pandemonium must be an alias of a vet I suppose, just if he is he didnt really try in this, but he still won, roflmfao at 20 posts to vote, prolly all herb votes in here... pandemonium dropped better, witty punch over crappy personels and a wack attempt at wordplay...

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^^^terrbily explained.............2-0 still..............

Voted For: Pandemonium

Aight..

Murcinal: 3/10
Wow...That Was A Bad Verse Man. I Didn't Enjoy It Much At All and The Punches Just Weren't Hitting In My Eyes. I Can't Say Anything Positive Bout Your Verse Except Your Structure.

Pandemonium: 5/10
You Started Off With Two Nice Bars, but Fell off Towards The End. Doesn't Matter Though Those Two Bars Killed His Entire Verse. Even THe Shitty Ones Beat His Verse.

Overall Vote: Pandemonium For Actual Punches and Better Verse.

~R~

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Voted For: MuRcInAl

Pand..:

Murcinal chances of winning is minimal, ya justa clown.
If you think your going pound for pound, I'll knock ya game down an ounce.
^^good punch 5/10
He toggles more knobs, than a locksmith, so he's mastered the craft.
Cuz' the only way you'd be stiff competition, is if I left you in a body cast.
^decent meta 5/10
An' like couch potatoes, your chances of winnings remote.
I just ripped out the fucking batteries, I'm nowhere near yo scope.
^^nice metas 6/10
After this merking, you'll have to configure yet another name.
Well at least your'e hot...
Cuz' you got shot down in flame's!
^^no 3/10

overall: 19/40 (48%)

Murcinal:

Call Him The Burnt Face Guy??? Well, What More Can I Say,
Except For Muh Ass Looks Betta Den Ur Face....On A Bad Day,*
^^decent personal 4/10
Murc'll Kill U In This Thread, And Tear Out Pandemoniums Particles,
U Scared? O Bitch U Worry/Obituary More Den Newspaper Articles,
^^nice bar 7/10
Dese Punches Hit U Internally,So Watch As Pand's Soul Decreases,
And Then I Play With Pand's "Life", Like Scatterin Monopoly Pieces,
^^decent 5/10
Oh Lord, Pand's Gettin Chopped To Pieces With Punches, Less Den He Deserve,
So Watch As I Find "Pand" "A"/Panda A Better Place, Like Switchin Wildlife Reserves,
^^good closer 6/10

Overall: 22/40 (55%)

Vote: Murcinal

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Voted For: Pandemonium

murcinal...
Call Him The Burnt Face Guy??? Well, What More Can I Say,
Except For Muh Ass Looks Betta Den Ur Face....On A Bad Day,*
...i get what u tryin to say but wasnt feelin this

Murc'll Kill U In This Thread, And Tear Out Pandemoniums Particles,
U Scared? O Bitch U Worry/Obituary More Den Newspaper Articles,
...that obituary shit been played to da ground...damn

Dese Punches Hit U Internally,So Watch As Pand's Soul Decreases,
And Then I Play With Pand's "Life", Like Scatterin Monopoly Pieces,
this was whack...it started off coo but dat monopoly shit wasnt interesting

Oh Lord, Pand's Gettin Chopped To Pieces With Punches, Less Den He Deserve,
So Watch As I Find "Pand" "A"/Panda A Better Place, Like Switchin Wildlife Reserves,
good word play play but it didnt have da punch i think u were going for


pandemonium...
Murcinal chances of winning is minimal, ya justa clown.
If you think your going pound for pound, I'll knock ya game down an ounce.
like the idea but it couldve used some shortining

He toggles more knobs, than a locksmith, so he's mastered the craft.
Cuz' the only way you'd be stiff competition, is if I left you in a body cast.
hot idea again but seriously think bout ur wording

An' like couch potatoes, your chances of winnings remote.
I just ripped out the fucking batteries, I'm nowhere near yo scope.
...i see what u wanted but this sucks

After this merking, you'll have to configure yet another name.
Well at least your'e hot...
Cuz' you got shot down in flame's!
i thought thi bar sucked untill u said shot down in flames...
its really not that special but it caught me by surprize

vote goes to pandemonium...

unlike some people i dont dick ride

hit dis up honestly please
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=187048
i always return honest votes

that hate vote will be removed.................................

uppin

allright ur not a dick ryder
i apologize
forgive me
but dont call me a lyer
i dont hate vote i just put some hate in da vote at da end
but i dont need to sabatage u dog seriousely...

i dont care wut u say.......

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Voted For: MuRcInAl

Murcinal chances of winning is minimal, ya justa clown.
If you think your going pound for pound, I'll knock ya game down an ounce.
5...weak man. 1st line was filler and 2nd was stretched to fuck!!
He toggles more knobs, than a locksmith, so he's mastered the craft.
Cuz' the only way you'd be stiff competition, is if I left you in a body cast.
6...nice metas..aight line!!
An' like couch potatoes, your chances of winnings remote.
I just ripped out the fucking batteries, I'm nowhere near yo scope.
6...first line was dope, 2nd was kinda wack!!
After this merking, you'll have to configure yet another name.
Well at least your'e hot...
Cuz' you got shot down in flame's!
5...weak closer!!

OVERALL: 22/40


Call Him The Burnt Face Guy??? Well, What More Can I Say,
Except For Muh Ass Looks Betta Den Ur Face....On A Bad Day,*
6...aight personal but cud've been better!!
Murc'll Kill U In This Thread, And Tear Out Pandemoniums Particles,
U Scared? O Bitch U Worry/Obituary More Den Newspaper Articles,
7...dope line, obituary shit was clever!!
Dese Punches Hit U Internally,So Watch As Pand's Soul Decreases,
And Then I Play With Pand's "Life", Like Scatterin Monopoly Pieces,
5...not feelin it!!
Oh Lord, Pand's Gettin Chopped To Pieces With Punches, Less Den He Deserve,
So Watch As I Find "Pand" "A"/Panda A Better Place, Like Switchin Wildlife Reserves,
7...nice meta and shit, dope closer!!

OVERALL:25/40

aight pretty average battle here, both didnt really drop anythin real hot!!! i think murcinal came better cuz some of pandemoniums shit was just filler and stretched.......murcinal had a couple of dope personals in there and that "obituary" line was fuckin clever and hot!!!!

V/ - Murcinal

RTF!!!!! links in siggy.....although don't hit the Daz battle cuz he aint dropped yet!!!!! thnx!!!!

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last upper on 4-28-05 at 1:07 pm

last vote..............00:00

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Voted For: Pandemonium

Call Him The Burnt Face Guy??? Well, What More Can I Say,
Except For Muh Ass Looks Betta Den Ur Face....On A Bad Day,*
weak opener
Murc'll Kill U In This Thread, And Tear Out Pandemoniums Particles,
U Scared? O Bitch U Worry/Obituary More Den Newspaper Articles,
ok, decent
Dese Punches Hit U Internally,So Watch As Pand's Soul Decreases,
And Then I Play With Pand's "Life", Like Scatterin Monopoly Pieces,
nope
Oh Lord, Pand's Gettin Chopped To Pieces With Punches, Less Den He Deserve,
So Watch As I Find "Pand" "A"/Panda A Better Place, Like Switchin Wildlife Reserves,
nope

overall u had a weak drop, those punches weren’t all that hard
hittin, I’ve seen better from u Murc, but overall you need to come
more harder than that next time though.. 5/10

Murcinal chances of winning is minimal, ya justa clown.
If you think your going pound for pound, I'll knock ya game down an ounce.
wack opener
He toggles more knobs, than a locksmith, so he's mastered the craft.
Cuz' the only way you'd be stiff competition, is if I left you in a body cast.
decent
An' like couch potatoes, your chances of winnings remote.
I just ripped out the fucking batteries, I'm nowhere near yo scope.
avg punch here
After this merking, you'll have to configure yet another name.
Well at least your'e hot...
Cuz' you got shot down in flame's!
ur best line yet

overall u had an aight drop, ur punches were pretty decent
but could’ve been better though.. ur structure was decent &
ur flow was average.. but overall ur closer took this one for you
6/10

RTF ON ONE OF MY BATTLES PANDEMONIUM

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Voted For: Pandemonium

Pandemonium- you had a very strong verse i just didn't like your structure. but besides that everything else was on key you had a average opener and a sorta weak closer but you had alot of really good metaphors with some mediocre wordplay but overall i just thought your verse had a better flow and went over smooth when saying out loud.

murcinal i- i liked your verse as well but i don't think it was as hard as pands you had some good wordplay and all but besides that i just thought it was a little to basic and lacked creativity . your rhyme scheme was't bad ... but then again it wasnt amazing .. either way i liked your verse because it had a few nice lines...

props to both of you

Vote//Pand

RTF LINK IS IN THE SIG

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