X-cell N Speats......(u Dissed My Fam)
 

nice way to come back to rv.These kids are no were near our level.

as for your drop,its what we allways come to expect from you.
nice drop fam..come back home!
~F-D~TC~

uppin for feed..........i return all feedback...lol...good or bad....

I'm gonna break this down

YES IM BORED...LOL.....
x-cell n speats...im sure your shit dont mix well with beats......
i aint hearing ya fans.. even if you's were propelling ya speech...
^wasnt the best opener...not bad though
Ha…you call that sick,. Let me pull ya scalp back like the Indians did,
Crack ya craniums lid..! cuz you don’t walk with heat like Arabians kid,
good multi's and flow...
Ya burials made.. Blistering rays,O-M's now known as ya territorial grave,
Memorials get slayed, ya couldn’t stop da bleedin if u was Humanitarian aid,
nice word play
Did you get that metaphorical stage.. NO..? well ignore ya perpetual rage
Let these bars fracture ya cerebral cortex so your left Mentally splayed
hahha...that was strong, nice
Rivalries engage with page after page of bullshit pre-writtens displayed..
Pull strings n tags…hags with harry legs the only way you kids gettin laid…
nice punch...that was hard
.Look, you aint spewing sickness like Linda Blair in the exorcist,
And yous'll never be able to step next to this, like legless contortionists,
good word play again
You’ll die quick in this game like cheep laser tag batteries,
……….“attack n battle TC..”!!!
N lose ya life quicker then hemophiliacs in razor blade factories,.
good word play...i dunno whats this beef aboutbut ur killin em
if you think you got wit,…your twisted like trombones in BRASS
just blame ya father-less past..FI-DEL aint fag…So why bother his ASS..!
i liked the 1st line betta then the 2nd but still good
X...your "out of your element" like beaches in SNOW-SHOWS
i throw blows in doe-joes with "phatter lines" than adidas LOGOS..!
those bars werent a good diss but still good multis
go spit on a mic..and it’ll spit back cuz… its SKILL YOU LACK
DISS TC. how can ya be this nuts, but still not have enough to fill ya sack
LOOK, your a twelve pack of Heineken and im just SNAPPIN-OFF-CAPS(lock)
while your raps are like your love life, always CUMMIN OFF WACK…….
those bars had good multi's but werent hard punches

over all good piece...cant coment on if u was winnin or not coz i havent read any of their disses (if they've made some)
some good multi's and nice flow but the punches werent GREAT but still worked

return fava with the links in my sig

PEACE

eeee i dunno why you dissed me lol but iight,this was betetr than legend

^^^^werd and this was better then legends shitty diss ill give u props on this but yeah why did u diss us no one mentioned u

cuz legend cant by himself

i was bored...seen you dissing tc fam...
and i CAN'T have that...legend aint a strong battler but he is still a decent artist
soo thats the reason for this drop...case.. open and shut...

iiight cuz i didnt aim your crew ,just legend,cuz im catholic and sayin fuck the pope really pissed me off

ohhh,..haha...this is a relgious befief beef....lol,.....
man......you ever hear the expression...PICK YOUR BATTLES.....LOL
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speats legend im pretty sure is american...so in otherwards
he makes use of the right ....which is freedom of speech....

uppin for bones n fiya................-_-........link
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werd thanx...deph....um,..i was just imn the midst of postin it...lol

Word Daz this was a dope peice..
i was really feeling it , you had some dope punchlines
some nice personals... your structure was good ..
everything was going well for you on this key..
I felt you could have used alittle more personals ... maybe slay'd xcell alittle more
but it was good , overall i liked it alot , seen alot better from you but it was just an free verse , so i cant really judge it that much .
so..overall ...Nice job daz , hope to see another drop from you later on ,

Keep it up

ps: Drop a link please

aiyo i cant stop laughin at tha punches long enough to leave feed mayne

i hope they come back wit some shit at least half as good as this cuz i think that would be a pretty good tag-team battle......


"go spit on a mic..and it’ll spit back cuz… its SKILL YOU LACK
DISS TC. how can ya be this nuts, but still not have enough to fill ya sack
LOOK, your a twelve pack of Heineken and im just SNAPPIN-OFF-CAPS(lock)
while your raps are like your love life, always CUMMIN OFF WACK……."

^^ best part of tha whole piece. stay up...1.

THANX HOMIE......appreciate the feed....
i find it interesting you think those are the best parts...but each peep has
their own opinion right....glad it made ya laugh....stay up.....pz

cause you mention one member of the council you mention us all.

meh it was tight. But whatever. I'm a strong battler just not the best. I hope you check my battles. Well the good ones. I'm a good poet. Lets have a poetry battle man. I haven't tried it out yet and I think I'll have my first win or loss with you. Holla back.

^^.............i pm'd you the situation fam........uppin 4 feed

Word your opener was nice...i was feeling that...i enjoyed your last few bars...you came hard in them...the middle was just blah for me...didnt hit that great....but you def got potential and some skill showing...just lose the quotations and caps and you'll be straight....oh yeah....your flow got off by alot in some pl;aces....work on that....cool piece tho

yea this was a nice piece for a diss OM....neither one of these guys are lyrically on your level...some of the lines were a lot fresher than others...but overall it was a pretty consistent verse...flowed well also....nice drop

nice drop, i really enjoyed lookin in the dictionary lol, naw but this was a good diss and it was definently a good reason to make this lol u cant fuck wit someones family and expect them not to reply. overall good drop keep em comin

yo DAZ ima keep my thoughts too myself rite now knowin u left some decent feed on my open mic but YOU just DISSED MY FAM now

lmao.go figure eh...lol.......... :thumbup:

lmao^^^

oOoOoOo

lmao...
OoOoOoO..
hood dawg when can i get hold a one of those open mic Lp's your selling..lmao

is that supposed ta be a diss???..it was just ta get people ta pay more attention ta my open mics at the time but didnt really get noticed..and yo im not startin shit rite now im just sayin dont diss my fam

A yo say what yall wanna bout them other niggaz but Speats is officially out the beef don't mention his name n e more!

you all have yet to learn that was the reason for MY post..
was to end the beef.....stop postin in here talkin bout nothin
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if ya'll aint gonna leave feedback on the key then dont post
its simple......its called mutual respect....quit freeposting
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ya'll dont see me going into your threads poppin off my lip..do you??
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i was bored i wrote a diss...get over it....its over....!!

u squashed the beef and went redissing them just cuz u was bored?????

omg.no i didnt....i havent typed shit concerning you's...
if your not gonna leave feed .dont post......jesus christ
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(fuckin hard headed people on this site now or what)... :banghead:

Rofl... left these bitches sonned and done... nice drop Daz... but ya it looks like you were bored.. lol, I might come back to T.C. iunno, till then, get at me, nice drop by the way, multi's hot as usual, coo meta's... 8/10

RTF in the sig

i would but your not on msn hoe.....get ya ass online..lol
n ya i know it was meh..average...but it was the 1st key back..
so...forgive me...lol.....at least im battlin again....get on msn..!

rhyming is good


vocab is good

i think ur lackin an adept use of metas with ur message


up dat

otherwise


solid


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liked this shit pretty funny did the kats respond at all...i give ya props on this good word play and multis...nice drop fam

Pretty good diss...Not your best shit, but extremely good for a keystyle...Punches were pretty creative and hard-hitting, and the wordplay was pretty decent...Good shit man...Please return the favor by leaving me some feed on my new open mic...

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2102144

this was a nice piece but yo, y waste your time on X-CELL and SPEATS...coem on now, those cats are pretty wack, n e way, nice drop man

nice drop shit had a good flow to it

lol wow this shits mad old does anybody even check the open mic forum anymore? let alone this site?