Jon Shells vs warrior
 

Battle Rules:

10-12 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-09-05 at 02:40 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Jon Shells has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-08-05 08:51 PM.

warrior has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-08-05 10:52 PM.

Let’s get straight to the point don’t got time to water ya./
Just exposing fake thugs, in his case a fake Warrior./ (1)

Hard on the outside, inside soft like and Oreo./
He tried out for The Top Model show, he showed me his Portfolio./ (2)

And who ever gased him, over charged him./
Now he’s hungry for a win, Shells gon over starve him./ (3)

Ya secret is you wanna be a singer, but you settle for rapping./
You wanna tell ya crew but don’t know what would happen./ (4)

I’m hot dog, you still trying to Catch up./
Shells Hot Dog leave ya shirt red like Ketchup./ (5)

Shells Backed up by Steel Heaters./
I’ma turn ya “Warriors” to my personal Cheerleader’s./ (6)

The New Guy of the Mafia, the Kid Next./
Selling Weed the same color of a Piss Test./ (7)

Shot you in the leg, make ya bitch drink my piss test./
Throw ya bitch on you so ya’ll can get a little kiss test./ (8)

check it,

i tend~to~win~fights, take a stab im bendin~ya~knife/
u like a fallin soldier, the way "war's" endin~ya~life/

u either brave or stupid, most herbs would refuse~to~respond/
im shittin on shell's, i guess u could say im usin~the~'jon'/

RV's losin a pawn, yall eggin him on, im X'ing~him~out/
cause im the type to waste shell's like im eggin~ya~house/

more wordplay on ya name then u got in ya whole~weak~verse/
im gon be the winner(winter) so im endin ya career like u sold~T-shirts/

i take it easy on herbs to give em hope/
leavin "jon" dead like this kids the pope/
bitch im dope, u better pray to God u get a vote/

good luck

Voted For: warrior

vote goes to warrior because jon shells went over the line limit

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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I didn't go over my limit I Onlt spit 8 bars, what kind of vote is that....Shit is lame (Line Limits)

That's the only way niggas beat me any way is by DQ (Over line limits this suppose to be a battle I never even heard of a line limit...)

lmao yo its all good son i can ask strobe to remove that vote cause i aint like it either.

uppin for some mutha fuckin explained votes come on people get to votin

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This was feedback posted for Jon Shells
 

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Voted For: Jon Shells

Lol i vote for jone coz His verse hit harder wit da punches, their werent much between em but he just took it. I liked da concept of da ketchup line but dont like it when lil internet rappers start talking bout guns, it dun work homie same goes for warrior who's verse was practically all about how his gunna shoot you n shit, tiss all talk so next time get some better concepts. Jon i liked that cheerleader line also lol made me laugh, so this was a ite battle just keep it up. peace

1-0 good explanation...

I'm still stuck on the lines issue, rappers spit bars...actors recite lines...get it together M.C. so if this says battle i'm spitting bars...2 lines together (That's a Bar) I been spitting for long enough to know the differnece...

Uppin....

wow good vote homie but next time know wut ur talkin about lol i aint say one thing about shootin him wit a gun lmao but hey maybe u was readin something else. aight that 1-0 ur way lets get some more votes

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Voted For: Jon Shells

yo this battle was real good vote for shells tho

lyrics and metas was both of yall

both of yall had ounches and i enjoyed them both

wordplay goes to warrior
structure goes to both
personals goes to shells

good job both of you this was hard to judge...i dnt know nether of you so this is not a dick ride vote...

Voted For: warrior

shells: sorry man..don't think any of yer lines hit very hard...a couple were kinda bearable, but overall wasn't feelin yer verse. good you used played on his name though...but what was with tha piss test obsession at tha end??

warrior: you had better multis (some a lil forced, but fuck it) and that helped yer flow..right up to the last 3 lines which were wack as fuck and completely out of place. otherwise, you're verse was alright...

both verses fairly equal in name-flips, and both had equally wack endings, but overall i'd have to go with warrior as he edged it on flow and was feelin a few more of his lines (especially tha first 4).

Voted For: warrior

Vote= Warrior
Reason being... his punches were harder and more creative. his nameplays were nice. although i've heard them b4 on other sites. Shells came with generic punches and a lot of filler. and the very few punches he had were weak. not that creative at all. both need work but this was aiight

Voted For: warrior

warrior

i tend~to~win~fights, take a stab im bendin~ya~knife/
u like a fallin soldier, the way "war's" endin~ya~life/
^^^DECENT OPENER
u either brave or stupid, most herbs would refuse~to~respond/
im shittin on shell's, i guess u could say im usin~the~'jon'/
^^^HAHAHAHA IM LOVIN DAT LINE VERY TYTE LINE
RV's losin a pawn, yall eggin him on, im X'ing~him~out/
cause im the type to waste shell's like im eggin~ya~house/
^^^IIGHT
more wordplay on ya name then u got in ya whole~weak~verse/
im gon be the winner(winter) so im endin ya career like u sold~T-shirts/
^^^PRETTY NICE LINE
i take it easy on herbs to give em hope/
leavin "jon" dead like this kids the pope/
bitch im dope, u better pray to God u get a vote/
^^^AVERAGE CLOSURE

warrior- i liked ur verse, there were lotz of punches and personals, the closure with three lines wasnt that great, u shud've stuck to the two lines to close it, i can tell u elevated

BEST LINE- u either brave or stupid, most herbs would refuse~to~respond/
im shittin on shell's, i guess u could say im usin~the~'jon'/
HA HA HA HA HA MY FAVORITE LINE OF UR VERSE
9/10


jon shellls

Let’s get straight to the point don’t got time to water ya./
Just exposing fake thugs, in his case a fake Warrior./ (1)
^^^MEH... IIGHT
Hard on the outside, inside soft like and Oreo./
He tried out for The Top Model show, he showed me his Portfolio./ (2)
^^^ANOTHA....MEH
And who ever gased him, over charged him./
Now he’s hungry for a win, Shells gon over starve him./ (3)
^^^O.K
Ya secret is you wanna be a singer, but you settle for rapping./
You wanna tell ya crew but don’t know what would happen./
^^^NOT REALLY FEELIN IT

I’m hot dog, you still trying to Catch up./
Shells Hot Dog leave ya shirt red like Ketchup./ (5)
^^^ATTEMPTED PUNCH PRETTY GOOD
Shells Backed up by Steel Heaters./
I’ma turn ya “Warriors” to my personal Cheerleader’s./ (6)
^^^PRETTY GOOD
The New Guy of the Mafia, the Kid Next./
Selling Weed the same color of a Piss Test./ (7)
^^^IIGHT
Shot you in the leg, make ya bitch drink my piss test./
Throw ya bitch on you so ya’ll can get a little kiss test./ (8)
^^^MEH CLOSURE


jon shells- not really feelin ur vers homie. since we fam ima tell u like dis, elevate sum more, come up wit more lyrical word choice, work on ur diction. ur punches were weak so work on those and u b str8
6.5/10

cant vote b/c we crew

if i cud vote
MY V/WARRIOR

cud u please rtf on mah battle vs. Showtime(link in sig)
itz been open 4eva n ppl aint votin
please holla back wit good feedback and a vote 4 da betta battler
HOLLA!

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ay change dat vote 2 feedback
i cant vote b.c jon iz in mah crew
i accidentaly pressed vote 4 warrior insteead of feedback
my bad yall!

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Voted For: warrior

Nicer style better punches and nice structure.......Homie uptop had it good too but the Warrior took it home swingin dat battle axe. Both of yall keep doing yall thang

Need More Votes....

Come On People...

Let's Get These Votes

Uppin....

Yo need more votes where is everyone....

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Voted For: Jon Shells

shells gets the win on this..the end of yours was a little repeated...but still better

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Voted For: warrior

I think Jon Shells is next to make your merk list, I like the Im the type to waste shells like im egging ya house, peace