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lyrical clarity 04-08-05 07:01 PM

.K.onfliktz vs lyrical clarity
 
Battle Rules:
6 bars kidd

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-11-05 at 07:01 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 04-08-05 07:29 PM

lyrical clarity has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-08-05 07:29 PM.

lyrical clarity 04-08-05 08:25 PM

bostons in the buildin

watch as i

smack you like d-bo did tyrone for talking to much
fucked up like history if jordan would of missed that shot in da clutch.........

you aint shit ,like a kid wit an empty diaper
stupid ass, started dising god under the diss the person above you cypher..........

been confused all your life now you have breast cancer..
so at your party before you get married you will have guy and girl strippa dancers.........

weakest on the site clearly seen by a man wit no vision..
your done like a hostage wit aids, but his family will die if he dies .....life decision......

im too the point only ,like post it notes written 4 test time....
im on top like words on paper your line level is always undermine.....

my verses is sicker than the pope before he croaked...
only time your flow would put any weight on mine is if they was soaked.....

System 04-08-05 08:25 PM

.K.onfliktz has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-08-05 08:25 PM.

K.ontroverz.Y 04-09-05 09:47 PM

im Creative..there aint no comparin me, lyrical clarity?
donated this fagget..and he was too cheap for charity!
.......fuck it imma cum at ya..sorta like guys often do
but if im cummin..then its too make a mini You (say hi to mom)
spittin' brains..grippin grains..set ya ass on a farm duke
You'd be dead already..but nobody got time to harm you
0-1? surprised u didnt back down wen u seen my posts
n' i got overpowered strength.............he's my glass,
.........................................and im proposing a toast
destined to win..so win i must........Clarity.....must go
stick my dick up ur naessal passage and "bust nose"
spittin 6 bars..like prison yards.....your shit is rusty kid
your simp.son..and ur bout to get clowned like crusty did

NewKid 04-09-05 09:57 PM

Voted For: .K.onfliktz

aight kon took dis he had sum ok punches n da first bar he had sum aight multies good nameplay nigga did have sum ok personals strait up he verse was on n off keep dat shit hot threw da whole verse so u can ko him dont do dem ....... 2 make ya verse fit each otha but u took dis 1

lyrical clarity ya shit was basic da bars was stretched out it was wakk yo u aint have no personals and ya shit wasnt hot at all fell off da beginning and da same shit happend n da end so u lost dis battle 4 dat

v-konfliktz

Sik Wit It 04-09-05 10:05 PM

Voted For: .K.onfliktz

im Creative..there aint no comparin me, lyrical clarity?
donated this fagget..and he was too cheap for charity!
spittin 6 bars..like prison yards.....your shit is rusty kid
your simp.son..and ur bout to get clowned like crusty did

vs

nothing

kon - you had aight punches, some were kinda weak though...
...structure was in place, vocab needs a little work, personas
were aight there, but overall you had a decent drop, at least
enuff to win though

lyrical - ...work on your punches, cuz your shits were really
hittin in your drop, your structure needs improvement, & your
vocab needs a little work too, but overall elevate more, no
hate though

RTF Konfliktz

K.ontroverz.Y 04-09-05 10:35 PM

2-0 me.............uppin.............................

¤ÐÅž¤ 04-09-05 11:32 PM

Voted For: .K.onfliktz

lyrical clarity...ya closer was decent the rest was ok...some of your bars were rather week...pretty stretched too, try not to split your verse up ..it hurts the overall presentation of it...all in all you didnt do to bad but i doont think your quite on kon's level.................
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kon....punch after punch...nice wordplay n set ups were pretty good for the most part...a couple connected well...(opener)...(toast line)pretty original in my opinion....i wasnt feeling the bust nose bar but thas bout it......
overall it was one sided..............
.
RTF.......in my sig....

K.ontroverz.Y 04-10-05 05:01 AM

uppin this battle famz..............................

K.ontroverz.Y 04-10-05 07:36 AM

yes im uppin this batle aswell....3-0 me.....lets get it crackin

K.ontroverz.Y 04-10-05 01:21 PM

uppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn n

K.ontroverz.Y 04-11-05 02:49 AM

uppin this......can someone please...........vote on this ill return the fav

K.ontroverz.Y 04-11-05 08:22 AM

3-0 me...............but im still uppin this......

K.ontroverz.Y 04-11-05 09:45 PM

yes once again im uppin this got damn battle........

King Solo 04-11-05 09:54 PM

Voted For: .K.onfliktz

Konfliktz - nice drop playa....flow and structure on point as always....the vocab was pretty decent, wordplay in there and the punches were hittin pretty hard. personals were on with some funny ass lines...the opener was hot as hell, played off his name and dropped a funny ass 2nd line to it. creativity was aight, although u cud still up that shit sum. the metas were in there, always good, overall a nice drop from ya..............7/10

lyrical clarity - not a bad drop but u didnt do nearly enough to win this...ure flow was choppy due to ure fucked structure, major stretched lines, need to keep that shit the same length........ure opener was kinda weak, that d-bo shit is played like fuck, and u didn't word shit rite either......not much for creativity, need to work on that shit, the punches were there but consistently weak....no disrespect but u need to beef that shit up.....personals - were there any??? i suppose that one about dissin god was one but shit was weak as hell, not really a punch even. u need to elevate your whole game before steppin to a vet again...4/10

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