the kid 523 vs speatsbeats
 

Battle Rules:

10-12 lines
no d/r


Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 04-11-05 at 10:33 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

the kid 523 has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-08-05 10:34 PM.

SpeatsBeats has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-08-05 10:39 PM.

Your so wack, you should PM your whole verse to me to avoid embarrassment
Because you know my words will "Massacre" you just like 50 Cent
Your the type of emcee who has to bold his lines for people to see your rhymes
You probally need dentures from always bitin them lines
Stop rappin, your loose lines you need to tighten
This rookie first posted his verse in ImageTitan
He must be confused, thinkin he gona win when he always gonna lose
Because just like Mr.T, "I pitty this fool"
So fuck this battle 10 lines and i fuckin merked you
After this battle is over, ill sell this verse to you

How does it feel to have a dick in ur ass and sitting down
Is that the reason ur always screemin ur dumb lyrics out loud?/
How wack can you be when your gettin cut for M.O.B*
Damn its a shame,id kill myself....oops sorry the kid 523/
Im helpin him elevating,teacher VS Student**
My bad,stupid question,i won,it was to evident/
He think hes dope,hes gettin votes from newbys
People who knows nothing,people whos still lost in RV/
I didnt use tecniks,,i was tired so fell asleep on the keyboard
My respiration touched the buttoms,even my nose was bored/

* hes maybe gettin cut from MOB
** he was to wack so i pmed him to help him,maybe hes better now

Voted For: SpeatsBeats

the kid lost fair and square lmao mr T lines are wack outta this world lmao.....anywaysspeats structure was way better speats had an overall better verse.....kid needs to work on structure and better wordplay nuff sed vote goes to speats

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Voted For: the kid 523

wow this battle was pretty wakc.......but the kid earns my vote.............speats personals were so wack...his first one wasnt even confirmed so thats gay..and ur second one..if he pm'ed u for heelp it wouldve been better but he didnt...anyways..the kid had more punches than speats.....

vote-the kid 523

This was feedback posted for SpeatsBeats
 

Checkin The Polls On This Battle..Speats Won Though

This was feedback posted for the kid 523
 

checkin dem polls....... tight verse 523!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

checkin polls....i won............................

fuckk u speats.. u sayin u won its tied.. n we both got the same exact feedback

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Voted For: SpeatsBeats

Aii this iS what I Think

Kid 523
Your so wack, you should PM your whole verse to me to avoid embarrassment
Because you know my words will "Massacre" you just like 50 Cent
>...Not That Good of ryming and Def Not that good of a Bar[/b
Your the type of emcee who has to bold his lines for people to see your rhymes
You probally need dentures from always bitin them lines
[b]Didnt you already say somethin about lines in Yo Last Line
Stop rappin, your loose lines you need to tighten
This rookie first posted his verse in ImageTitan
....nawl Mayne you not cuttin it
He must be confused, thinkin he gona win when he always gonna lose
Because just like Mr.T, "I pitty this fool"
....Im not gonna say that line is Played Ima jus say its used
So fuck this battle 10 lines and i fuckin merked you
After this battle is over, ill sell this verse to you
The Best Bar outta Your Whole verse ...and still not That good

No hate its jus that you didnt come hard enough for me to say Oh man You did good .....bcuz i can not tell a lie

Speatsbeats
How does it feel to have a dick in ur ass and sitting down
Is that the reason ur always screemin ur dumb lyrics out loud?/
Not a very good opener
How wack can you be when your gettin cut for M.O.B*
Damn its a shame,id kill myself....oops sorry the kid 523
WTF was the second line about?....... The first One made me laugh
Im helpin him elevating,teacher VS Student**
My bad,stupid question,i won,it was to evident
Bad ryming But Still ....Aii bar
He think hes dope,hes gettin votes from newbys
People who knows nothing,people whos still lost in RV
Bad Ryming And a Bad Bar
I didnt use tecniks,,i was tired so fell asleep on the keyboard
My respiration touched the buttoms,even my nose was bored
:huh: man Yall cats jus dint try did you

OVERALL

Both of your need to seriuosly elevate bcuz your verses lacked punchez But Speats came wit some personals But kid I dont know what tHe fuck you was sayin or typin bout bcuz ya structure was sloppy ...... so if i had to give this vote to anybody id give it to Speats

RTF in either battle in my sig Thanx

Voted For: SpeatsBeats

speats took this. Structure was fucked up in this battle, esp. from the kid. I was feelin speats drop more. I think he more skilled and he showed it in this. Kinda funny how you tried to rhyme student and evident...lmao. close tho. I didnt really see any big punches in this one. I saw some eh personals, thats why I gave you tha vote.
the kid-do you honestly think your structure looks descent. Look at yo verse before you post it. I know you vote on other battles, so you should know what structure should look like. This is pathetic. But, yo verse wasnt all that. Not that good to me. Made me laugh, but not at yo lines, at you. No hate, I just wasnt feeling it. My vote goes to speats...


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Voted For: SpeatsBeats

ight not a very good battle both of you could do with bad elevation...

speats... your verse had some good personals in there, some decent hard punches but some of your lines couldav been worded better...

thekid... your lines were ight it didnt rlly flow your structure was messed if u get your structure sorted out you will be alot better just work on your punches a bit...


overall speats had a harder hitting verse, both of you need to elevate on your punches and work your lines better...

pz

thx upppiinnn.....................................

Voted For: SpeatsBeats

speats . personally i thought speats took this one because he had better flow . both of your vocab could use a lil more work but i can tell that the kid has been working on his stuff. punches went to speats but only slightly because he has the line about him getting cut from mob. both of you need to work on your concepts and how you develop them otherwise it was a sorta weak battle.. both of you have upped your game alot though props on that

Vote//Speats cuz he had better vocab punches and personals


note*the kid 523 i see you have been working hard on your stuff and you have me impressed if you need any help feel free to pm me and i'll help ya out with ya structure and what not