MaD_KnighT vs Julius Revees
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-12-05 at 03:42 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

MaD_KnighT has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-09-05 03:42 PM.

Cumin into da ring wi me is like takin a lethal dose…
Cuz u shudn’t hav even cum 2 battle with onli 25 posts…..
To cum 2 RV n try battle,u must b 1 real darin-bitch….
Wat a shame, wen u started u wer doomed lik P.Charles marriages*..
Ur da type of bitch dat see’s a verse den runs away…….
Why put shit about wer u from,peeps don’t care anyway…
Answer this?RV Legend* ha bitch ur just self-proclaimed….
My verse is nearly over,u’ve just been named n shamed…
Ur da next bitch on –bODy CoUnT’s- list,tlkin about da 9/11 tragedy*…..
Cuz wen u spit shit like dat,u goin 2 jus get killed like John F. Kennedy….
__________________________________________________ __

*Prince Charles got married 2day
*Calls himself RV Legend
*In his battle against –bODy CoUnT- he sed about da 9/11 :mad:
All da rest r easy known!!!!!
Hope u liked it!!!:)

R u goin 2 check in or wot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Julius Revees has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-09-05 05:32 PM.

...It Doesn't Take Much For Me To Get My Point Across...Cuz ''Heads Will Roll''... Like A Bad Coin Toss...

Truth Never Played A Part Of U....U Dumb & U's A Lier...So Watch Me Put A End ''Mad Knight''... (M.C. Knight)...Like Bombin Tupac's Driver...

Don't Play With Me...Sene ''It's Not A Game''...U'll Think N.O.R.E.'s Here...& I'm Known For Dropppin More ''Knights'' Than Accient Warriors

Voted For: Julius Revees

reeves.......ya opener was koo,...but couldve been written better..you were more creative in ya punches n worked well with nameplay(personally i aint get ya 2nd bar)no a 2pac fan..closer was decent...but kinda've forced ryhme...
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mad_night..your structure n flow was koo...well down but ya punches were just to light...nothin that stood out n connected...try not being so simple in ya verses...
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you'll get better...stay up...
v/reeves

RTF in my sig....if you want.......................

Voted For: Julius Revees

ehhh... not really much to this battle...
i was kinda bored with it...both you guys must be relatively new...


anyways... mad knight..
ya whole style is kinda elementary... had some good ideas but ya style and the way ya expressed ya ideas were kinda blah... with the right mentor you could actually end up being pretty good... opener was pretty weak and basic...best line?... didn't really see one...they were all on the same level... no real punch to any of them... i can say that you were consistant, though...

JR... ya verse was definitely better and ya punches were a lot more effective... even with ya verse being a lot shorter...sometimes less is more... iwoulda liked to have seen more though to check for ya consistancy...best line was ya opener... kinda basic but it connected to ya opponent well... you also can be a very good lyricist with the right help... you are definitely on the right track...

keep writing and learning.... gotta go with JR on this

This was feedback posted for MaD_KnighT
 

flow was nice...alright punches and vocab...needed some multi's though.... still room for improvement

i would vote for u soon as i got enoguh votes

julius had some tight pucnhes and word play but it wasnt long enough to take this

sorry for postin so much but i forgot to say...

i didnt get this line
Don't Play With Me...Sene ''It's Not A Game''...U'll Think N.O.R.E.'s Here...& I'm Known For Dropppin More ''Knights'' Than Accient Warriors

Voted For: MaD_KnighT

this was really 1 sided.........
mad got good punches.........good flow......and you really got that sounds like battling...............
Julius........short verse..no hard punches...flow was good......
stucture goes to mad knight

VOTE:MAD

Voted For: MaD_KnighT

MadKnight have some good punches.....
Julius Reeves rhymes are not really good....
Julius drop is pretty short.......
And MadKnight is pretty good rapper....
I think that Mad Knight was better than Julius Reeves....
MY VOTE:MaD_KnighT

Voted For: MaD_KnighT

i think mad knight won because he had good vocab
really hard hittin punches good structure
good multis and a great opener
julius reeves u had good structure
u need a lil work on ur vocab
u had a pretty good opener
u had some good punches
overall both battles were alright

favorite mad knight lines:
Answer this?RV Legend* ha bitch ur just self-proclaimed….
My verse is nearly over,u’ve just been named n shamed…
Ur da next bitch on –bODy CoUnT’s- list,tlkin about da 9/11 tragedy*…..
Cuz wen u spit shit like dat,u goin 2 jus get killed like John F. Kennedy….

favorite julius reeves lines:
Don't Play With Me...Sene ''It's Not A Game''...U'll Think N.O.R.E.'s Here...& I'm Known For Dropppin More ''Knights'' Than Accient Warriors

return the favor
link in sig

Voted For: MaD_KnighT

MaD_KnighT

Cumin into da ring wi me is like takin a lethal dose…
Cuz u shudn’t hav even cum 2 battle with onli 25 posts…..
^okay opener

To cum 2 RV n try battle,u must b 1 real darin-bitch….
Wat a shame, wen u started u wer doomed lik P.Charles marriages*..
^hehe, coo coo

Ur da type of bitch dat see’s a verse den runs away…….
Why put shit about wer u from,peeps don’t care anyway…
^good one

Answer this?RV Legend* ha bitch ur just self-proclaimed….
My verse is nearly over,u’ve just been named n shamed…
^decent bar

Ur da next bitch on –bODy CoUnT’s- list,tlkin about da 9/11 tragedy*…..
Cuz wen u spit shit like dat,u goin 2 jus get killed like John F. Kennedy….
^nice closer

Overall good battle, found good balance in your vocab: not too complex and not too basic either.Had some nice punches in there, good wordplay and such. The last bar was cool personal, your flow was good as well as your structure


Julius Revees


...It Doesn't Take Much For Me To Get My Point Across...Cuz ''Heads Will Roll''... Like A Bad Coin Toss...
^nice wordplay, no real punch though

Truth Never Played A Part Of U....U Dumb & U's A Lier...So Watch Me Put A End ''Mad Knight''... (M.C. Knight)...Like Bombin Tupac's Driver...
^hehe, coo coo

Don't Play With Me...Sene ''It's Not A Game''...U'll Think N.O.R.E.'s Here...& I'm Known For Dropppin More ''Knights'' Than Accient Warriors
^good closer

Okay battle, first bar wasn't really a punch but the wordplay was nice though.The rest were some cool punches, attempted personals with playing his name and such. Vocab was dope as well as your flow but fix your structure because it's harder to read.

In the end my vote goes to MaD_KnighT because I feel he stayed more consistent with the punches, Julius Reeves had some nice stuff in there too but the structure was kinda off for me.

Voted For: Julius Revees

V/Julius Revees....this was a good battle but jul got this his was short but hot his punchs were on an good vocab an personals...Mad u had a good verse but ur punchs were played to basic an vocab was ight.....NO HATE>>>RETURN THE FAVOR....
opner=j
closer=j
Punchs=J
Structure=m
vocab=j
personals=j
overall=Julius Revees

Voted For: MaD_KnighT

votin for Mad

Mad got this cuz he came with alot more punches n had a creative approach to his verse

flow was good mad
strucutre was good as well
personals- they was ight
multies - didnt see any
punches- hot hot hot

Julius ya verse didnt consit of many hard punches
strucutre- was off fam elevate on that
flow- descent flow
multies- didnt see any
personals- didnt see any
punches- weak fam elevate on harder punches

i like mad punches they were hard hittin in to the point he also had some perosnals tht i liked as well

good battle fams

holla