Newkid vs Bonecollector
 

Battle Rules:

10 -
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
blind spit like u asked 4

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 04-10-05 at 12:11 AM

Must drop verse in 35 minutes after check in.

Newkid has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-09-05 11:48 PM.

yo......................

da heat iz a dome selector....'look @ u n wak' dats ya 'own reflector'
no bodies...c a 'skeleton' den he 'grab' it dats how he a 'BoNe-CoLlector'
'stabbin da head of ya coat' fake thug onli time u did a 'HoOd-CrImEz'
'jay jay' shit aint hot lost ya 'DYNOMITE!' since da last season of 'GoOd-TiMeZ'
act tough.....................den imma inflate da shellz 2 ya grill now ya 'FaCe Iz FuLl
me n mah niggaz went up to 'CHI' seen ya girl she blew me down n 'AtE dA bUlLz'
'bashful' wen i say he wont 'live' nurr sum pussi....no wunda he live n a 'ChI-tOwN
imma crakk da bakk ya head eyez closed sein dark like i 'DiMmEd Da LiGhTz DoWn'
you trash family.............cuzo dont even like 2 c hiz own verse dats y he asked 4 a 'BLInD-SPit'
u lyin bitch...............dont cum 2 rapverse talkin bout u a 'crip' wen all u iz iz a 'blue' 'Ty-PiSt'


hiz name bonecollector
good timez was n chicago he live durr jay jay said 'DYNOMITE!'
n philly we call each otha 'bullz' he liv n chicago n da chicago bball team iz da bullz
chicago nikk name iz chi-town
he asked 4 da battle 2 b a blind spit
he a crip durr colorz iz blue n he type on da comp

dam i fukked up da last part o well im not gettin paid 4 it dis how it should of been

da heat iz a dome selector....'look @ u n wak' dats ya 'own reflector'
no bodies...c a 'skeleton' den he 'grab' it dats how he a 'BoNe-CoLlector'
'stabbin da head of ya coat' fake thug onli time u did a 'HoOd-CrImEz'
'jay jay' shit aint hot lost ya 'DYNOMITE!' since da last season of 'GoOd-TiMeZ'
act tough.....................den imma inflate da shellz 2 ya grill now ya 'FaCe Iz FuLl
me n mah niggaz went up to 'CHI' seen ya girl she blew me down n 'AtE dA bUlLz'
'bashful' wen i say he wont 'live' nurr sum pussi....no wunda he live n a 'ChI-tOwN
imma crakk da bakk ya head eyez closed sein dark like i 'DiMmEd Da LiGhTz DoWn'
you trash family......cuzo dont even like 2 c hiz own verse dats y he asked 4 a 'BLInD-SPit'
u lyin bitch.......dont cum 2 rapverse talkin bout u a 'crip' wen all u iz iz a 'blue' 'Ty-PiSt'


hiz name bonecollector
good timez was n chicago he live durr jay jay said 'DYNOMITE!'
n philly we call each otha 'bullz' he liv n chicago n da chicago bball team iz da bullz
chicago nikk name iz chi-town
he asked 4 da battle 2 b a blind spit
he a crip durr colorz iz blue n he type on da comp

Bonecollector has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-10-05 12:09 AM.

Voted For: Bonecollector

Aight Check It..

BoneCollector: 6/10
You Had Some Nice Punches..but Not Too Many Personals. The Structure Was A Little off, but The Reading Content Wasn't Bad. The Vocab Wasn't Too Bad, Originality Was There In Some Bars.

NewKid: 4/10
I Wasn't Feeling The Structure First Off, but You Had A Decent Punch or Two. You Lacked A Lot of Originality and Personals Throughout Ya Verse. The One You Tried Was A Weak Ass Bar..Bout Him Grabbin His Own Skeleton...Not Feeling It.

Vote: Bonecollector: For Better Punches and Overall Battle Verse.

~R~

This was feedback posted for Newkid
 

this was a real weak battle......
newkid..........those periods fucked ya verse...
.
bones....man..stop starting sentences with CUZ...
.
pz

^LOL :( , why cant i use Cus its my word

Voted For: Bonecollector

da heat iz a dome selector....'look @ u n wak' dats ya 'own reflector'
no bodies...c a 'skeleton' den he 'grab' it dats how he a 'BoNe-CoLlector'
weak punch here
'stabbin da head of ya coat' fake thug onli time u did a 'HoOd-CrImEz'
'jay jay' shit aint hot lost ya 'DYNOMITE!' since da last season of 'GoOd-TiMeZ'
eh, kinda played here
act tough.....................den imma inflate da shellz 2 ya grill now ya 'FaCe Iz FuLl
me n mah niggaz went up to 'CHI' seen ya girl she blew me down n 'AtE dA bUlLz'
almost decent
'bashful' wen i say he wont 'live' nurr sum pussi....no wunda he live n a 'ChI-tOwN
imma crakk da bakk ya head eyez closed sein dark like i 'DiMmEd Da LiGhTz DoWn'
okay, could’ve made the punch harder
you trash family.............cuzo dont even like 2 c hiz own verse dats y he asked 4 a 'BLInD-SPit'
u lyin bitch...............dont cum 2 rapverse talkin bout u a 'crip' wen all u iz iz a 'blue' 'Ty-PiSt'
nope, weak punch here



When it comes to beatin the best Bonez punches'll capsize Ya Chest..
Cus i'll punch New kid in his abdoman , and give him cardiac arrest..
nah, punch wasn’t hard here
This new kid's from philly? guess you think you got it rough?
cus u aint tuff,but you can drop ya best and that still wont be enough...
decent
Kido i Think its past ya bed time , time to put you to rest...
might i suggest ?that you quit now cuz me to you aint no contest..
seems like I seen this line somewhere, but it was aight
I Could kill u Wid Rite Jabz..But Ill Go Easy and Chose Left..
Cuz Like Stevie Wonder ill Damage ya Ears N Leeve Yu Mos Def..
nope
Cus You think you'll live but you aint gonna survive...
Cuz aint jesus christ so there aint no way you gonna come back alive
Eh, decent here


Nk - …punches were okay, most of them could’ve been harder
Flow lacked here, seemed u kept stretching it all the way till the
End, vocab needs help, but overall, ur drop was okay

Bc - …punches were decent here, ur flow was aight, the structure
Was decent & not stretched like nk’s…vocab was aight, basically
You came harder in this battle here though, no hate
Rtf though

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Voted For: Bonecollector

Bonecollector takes this shit easily...

Newkid- Man stop bringin the E-Thug shit.. cuz it dont work on computers.. i couldn't understand half of ya verse, cuz u typin like you would talk, and i can't understand what u sayin.. Decent opener from you tho, prolly ya best line.. After that u went downhill.. the Hoodz Crime line was aiite, but again, this aint the real world so bringin gansta online shit wont work, stop talkin about bein thuggish online..Most of ya bars was like that, and it brought ya verse down.. You need to bring more punches, and come wit some persoanals cuz u had none in ya whole verse.. and definately bring some wordplay and complexity next time, and you'l be aiite..No hate dawg jus elevate..

Bonecollector-Decent verse here, obvious you came half assed... Opener was kinda played, and so was the next bar... The bed time line was nice, enough to win u the battle rite there... And the stevie wonder line was a lil played, but it was a Stevie line i never heard tho so it was pretty nice.. Closer was good too.. again, kinda played wit the Jesus line, but a decent bar still.. Good wordplay in ya verse, and nice punches.. coulda had some personals, and a lil more wordplay, but u still won it off punches...

Overall, Collector easily takes this with harder punches and complexity to his verse.. Newkid you jus need to bring some worldplay and better punches/personals to your verses...

V/Bonecollector

Voted For: Newkid

newkid:
da heat iz a dome selector....'look @ u n wak' dats ya 'own reflector'
no bodies...c a 'skeleton' den he 'grab' it dats how he a 'BoNe-CoLlector'
^^^^GOOD OPENER N PLAY OFF HIS NAME
'stabbin da head of ya coat' fake thug onli time u did a 'HoOd-CrImEz'
'jay jay' shit aint hot lost ya 'DYNOMITE!' since da last season of 'GoOd-TiMeZ'
^^^^LOL I GOT IT BUT U WORDED DIS WRONG
act tough.....................den imma inflate da shellz 2 ya grill now ya 'FaCe Iz FuLl
me n mah niggaz went up to 'CHI' seen ya girl she blew me down n 'AtE dA bUlLz'
^^^WHOO I LIKE DIS...I KNWO HOW PHILLY NIGGAZ CALL EACH OTEHR BULLS SO DAT WAS CLEVA
'bashful' wen i say he wont 'live' nurr sum pussi....no wunda he live n a 'ChI-tOwN
imma crakk da bakk ya head eyez closed sein dark like i 'DiMmEd Da LiGhTz DoWn'
^^^NAH
you trash family.............cuzo dont even like 2 c hiz own verse dats y he asked 4 a 'BLInD-SPit'
u lyin bitch...............dont cum 2 rapverse talkin bout u a 'crip' wen all u iz iz a 'blue' 'Ty-PiSt'
^^^WEAK CLOSER FAM

bone:
When it comes to beatin the best Bonez punches'll capsize Ya Chest..
Cus i'll punch New kid in his abdoman , and give him cardiac arrest..
^^^^WEAK OPENER
This new kid's from philly? guess you think you got it rough?
cus u aint tuff,but you can drop ya best and that still wont be enough...
^^^ANOTHER WEAK 1 FAM WHUTS GOOD??
Kido i Think its past ya bed time , time to put you to rest...
might i suggest ?that you quit now cuz me to you aint no contest..
^^^LOL DAT WAS NOOBISH
I Could kill u Wid Rite Jabz..But Ill Go Easy and Chose Left..
Cuz Like Stevie Wonder ill Damage ya Ears N Leeve Yu Mos Def..
^^^^STEVIE WONDER IS BLIND DOGG NOT DEAF
Cus You think you'll live but you aint gonna survive...
Cuz aint jesus christ so there aint no way you gonna come back alive
^^^WEAK CLOSER.....

bone dissapointed me 4real...no creativity at all i mean u came real basic step ya shit up afat dis battle fam....n newkid da beginin of ya verse was good but da end got a lil weak but u had da betta verse

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Voted For: Newkid

V/newkid.....this was a good battle but neww gets my vote he came wit good punchs that had good vocab an personals structure needs a little work ....bone u had a good drop but the some played lines the first bar played it seemed u came too lightly.....NO HATE RETURN THE FAVOR
opener=n
closer=tie
structure=B
punchs=n
personals=n
vocab=tie
overall=Newkid.....

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Voted For: Bonecollector

Hmm...Feelin Bone Collector more in this one...Liked his punches...New Kid, You had some iight shit, but nothing really stood out to me...Good multies however, but B.C. Gets my vote...

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Voted For: Bonecollector

NewKid- Your verse was pretty good...yo punches were aight at times but some were played or they were weak...Your structure was Blah, because it was kinda hard to read your verse n all...but overall 6.1/10.....

Bonecollector- Your verse was pretty good also...your punches were better i thought...some were played kinda but overall it felt like they were just plain better...your structure was good ...easy to read n all..overall 7.8/10.....Because you had better punches....

Voted For: Bonecollector

Blah...weak verses from both...

Bone collector came wit stronger punches...but a lot of it was played. You had some self glorification in there too...but yeah it was a stronger verse than Newkids'...flow was decent, structure was decent...overall, elevate...

Newkid...not bad...way too many fuckin symbols...some okay punches, some okay personals...but they werent hittin as hard as BC's. No hate...elevate.

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Voted For: Bonecollector

aight
Boncecollector gets the win hands down (well in my opinnon anyway)
much more harder personals, an punches, creativity an rhyme scheme on awhole was evidently more complex, flow an structure was right on point, where as NewKidz structure was fucked the hell up which took the sting out of the flow...


Quotables:
Bone Collector:
''I Could kill u Wid Rite Jabz..But Ill Go Easy and Chose Left..
Cuz Like Stevie Wonder ill Damage ya Ears N Leeve Yu Mos Def..''
^^
sick wordplay...

highlight of the battle

sorry newkid, i aint quoting your verse, i really didnt enjoy reading your verse, it seemed boring, uncreative, an the structure ruined the whole verse, because it is so stretched an messed up
....thass my vote....

RTYF Y'all, preferably in my battle with J-Dot...if u see it around on frontlines that is

thanks, peace out