Chowie Chow vs Elementality
 

Battle Rules:

6-12 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate votes

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 04-13-05 at 01:13 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Chowie Chow has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-10-05 01:13 AM.

Elementality has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-10-05 03:33 AM.

Elementality has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-10-05 03:40 AM.

I'll start this off by adressing this guys talent at be'in whack
Rhymes are so dull and boring it give readers anxiety attacks
His style is so bad that he ruins himself by even tryin to flow
Devotes his whole life nurchering something that'll never grow
You couldn't throw down if you bit all the lines off of The Game
Oh wait you did, you lost now you just hide your head in shame
Heres a lesson just for y'all,never act like this fool Chowie chow
Battle people, loose respect, and end up lookin like Captain wow.

Cmoon
 

Hey mang....whats takin you soo long to drop your shit? I dropped mine 12 hours ago :shoot:

You droppin out or what ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?

gear down big wig.............................i worked all weekend.....

G went first, just waitin for my drop, elementality just posting nothing, trying to act tough.
Like a prisonmate's head shop, praying for fresh meat, to beat off and pound their ass rough.

So typical, I bet if he was in jail, niggas would eat him up like a piece of angel food cake.
Give him bleedin noses and cumed in his face, just so he can taste a strawberry milkshake.

He has no loses, but its cause the newbies only need twenty post to vote.
They don't know the difference between a paper canoe and a motorized boat.

I decilined you fo a rezen, to let you rehearse........ I bet you really low on ink.
Playa is gettin fustrated, all he does is curse, Its like he'll never find the pink.

I'm more than just orange juice made from concentrate.. I'll leave ya crappen.
Just can't stare at the can, and chew gum, thinking something is goin to happen.

Hope you learned something, you dumb 2 dollar whore.
Just ripped you like 3 dicks in an anus, leaving ya sore.

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In case you don't get it...
line 6 - Pink = Pussy
everything else should be easy.....
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If you don't get any of it don't vote

This was feedback posted for Chowie Chow
 

holy SHIT!, this was a hilarious battle!!! i will not vote thou

Voted For: Chowie Chow

Wiggidy, wiggidy, wiggidy....WACK.................

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

^ It's being fixed, don't cry over something on the internet... :laugh:

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2078710

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Lol red bull
 

red bull you're an idiot man, you think i'm crying? hardly, I just cant stand compulsive liars, nothing against you as a person..... while we're on the topic...didnt you retire???? If so why are you still battling? I see you've been battling on other alias' and tranfering your loses over to red bull. lol. you're the epitome of pathetic.

^ I haven't lost on an alias....:)

/ Liar? Hahaha it's called a joke man...

+ The alias was to elevate in topical, and I haven't battled on this site for over a month...it's wack....RB is more elevated...

Ohh a joke..... ok .... I think i've heard of one of those before...but arent those supposed to be funny? And or make people laugh? Cause thats just beyond stupid....Stupid isnt the right word but its the first word that comes to mind when you think of this -> "I got an idea for a joke, ok check this out check this out, alright I go under my alias...which is blue of course, then I vote against elementality and then ask him to battle me!!!!!!! Then once he wants to battle me, I just dont!!!! itll be sooo funny hahahaha.....HAHAHAHAHAH...... hee heee heeeeee hee heeeee hee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I just crack my self up so much. Alright enough of rap verse, I'm ready to go curl up to my Grishams. Tootle loo"

Well you are obviously a little angry over something as small as this...

/ I was just saving you a loss man, don't be an ass..

The truth hurts dont it

a little hyprocritical....or maybe elemen is joking...........so much needless bitching, just battle already and both make some peace.......and aliases can be fun, if you keep them secret :)

The truth as in you're mad about something on the internet? Because that's what that post above it said...

Whatever man...for somebody who laughed at me and kesse for using this, then when I told him it was dope and you tried it and stayed up...you take shit way too serious... For somebody who stated: "It's not just poker, I just don't even like Randy at all." It's nice to see you are hanging out with him again..

WHattt!! hahahahaahahahah!!!! your a fucking ignorant moron man, thats the exact same fable you told about kesse, so dont even try and pull that shit. Why dont you just do us a favor and pull your head outta your ass, mabe then you'll come back to reality. By the way...I love how you announce to everyone how you're retired then just go battle on a diffent aka..............wow.
Thats like a basket ball player retiring from the NBA, then just changing his name and playing on another team..... Juwanna mann style

hahahahahah........ mind as well drop me out of the battle and replace me with red bull

you guys should just set up a battle.............................

I'm not going to even argue with you because you make no sense of the situation at hand. I love how you are getting way more into this internet stuff then all of us by the way..."Looks good on you."

I love how you relate internet to real life... If you knew anything about the retired/alias thing...I do it to piss people off... ask Spektikul... who also thinks you are blowing this shit way out of the water..

Chowie...tell Angie allready, or get Logan too... :thumbup:

blowing it way outta proportion hey... well played, I guess thats why you keep postin' this shit.... I guess you you figure this is all its about huh? well anyone can make themselves believe anything if they really want to. So keep telling yourself what you need to. Anyways if you figure that i make no sense thats just your opinion, and your intitled to it, but from now on if i want your opinion i'll dial your asshole. p.s. its conclusive.. you are a dick.

Ditto...

Hahaha okay..

yeah man, just laugh it off. laugh it off like you laugh everything else off

Yes, I laugh everything off...

I'll quote somebody else...

"Okay, lets all act like Gr.3's...isn't he like 20 now...I remember he was always immature about everything back then too.."

or what Fuzzy said...

"He hold grudges against everybody for stupid things...like he freaked on Chantel for nothing the other day, kid needs to simmer down.."

:love:

uppin this shit for you guys..........................

Dont you just love when people bring other people into this kinda shit....and how ppl only hear one side of a story which is always that "I didnt do anything at all" story. Then they think they just assume everything before getting the actual facts from both parties... well actually all 3, cause it was me chantel, and luby. So you can tell fuzzy I not to be so quick to judge when he only knows one side of a one-sided story. But I guess ignorance is bliss. By the way im not twenty years old, but thanks for calling me immature anyways.As for grudges....nah, you might call it a grudge.. But I call it not really wanting to put myself around the types of people who dont really want to treat me like a friend/act like one...but only a mere aquiantance. Its not like I just hold shit over your head, I just dont want to be your friend.... Cause you went over the edge. You may justify that everythings alright because "its only internet" But it is still technically a form of communication like it or not, so is talking on the phone, so is mailing, and so is talking face to face. So lets just quit beating a dead horse here cause its fruitless...you got what you wished for lets leave it at that.

It seems like theres been alot of people just looking at this shit and not puttin... anyone wanna shoe some love?

vote now please...................................

Voted For: Elementality

Elementality took this one...he came with better structure and better punches...his verse flowed better and his link was pretty funny...Chowie Chow your punches and lines were streched as fuck...and they didn't really hit to hard...some quotables in there though I guess....

Elementality - 7/10

Chowie Chow - 6/10

Vote: Elementality

Hey man, apparently Neniska went to the skatepark to try and fight you....thats what Mikey Wells just told me..

werd to big bird... the thing about that was....apparently his gfs house is overlooking the place where it was sposed to be at and he arrived 10 minutes later is what wayne said,,,,,coinkadink? I think not. I think he saw me leave, then called up his buddy's to try and recindle what reputation he has left.

UP UP and AWAY!!!!!

That is wack...

But I think his girlfriend is Lacey...doesn't she live near you? Less she moved...I dunno...she used to be like your neighbour...

It lo0ks like someones already popped the cherry on this battle....whos gonna take it out on a date now?

Voted For: Elementality

Elementality

I'll start this off by adressing this guys talent at be'in whack
Rhymes are so dull and boring it give readers anxiety attacks
not bad opener...
His style is so bad that he ruins himself by even tryin to flow
Devotes his whole life nurchering something that'll never grow
ok...
You couldn't throw down if you bit all the lines off of The Game
Oh wait you did, you lost now you just hide your head in shame
not hittin hard, but true...
Heres a lesson just for y'all,never act like this fool Chowie chow
Battle people, loose respect, and end up lookin like Captain wow.
hahaha! fucking funny...

Chowie Chow

G went first, just waitin for my drop, elementality just posting nothing, trying to act tough.
Like a prisonmate's head shop, praying for fresh meat, to beat off and pound their ass rough.
ok opener...
So typical, I bet if he was in jail, niggas would eat him up like a piece of angel food cake.
Give him bleedin noses and cumed in his face, just so he can taste a strawberry milkshake.
not bad...
He has no loses, but its cause the newbies only need twenty post to vote.
They don't know the difference between a paper canoe and a motorized boat.
punch wasnt directed at opponent...
I decilined you fo a rezen, to let you rehearse........ I bet you really low on ink.
Playa is gettin fustrated, all he does is curse, Its like he'll never find the pink.
ok, coulda been worded better...
I'm more than just orange juice made from concentrate.. I'll leave ya crappen.
Just can't stare at the can, and chew gum, thinking something is goin to happen.
weak punch...
Hope you learned something, you dumb 2 dollar whore.
Just ripped you like 3 dicks in an anus, leaving ya sore.
good closer...

This was a close battle, both verses definatly had their pros and cons, lemme break this shit down tho...

Elementality:

Your verse had awsome vocab, great structure and a few pretty good punches. However, there are a few things that would have made its overall effectiveness stand out more. Such as, personals, metaphors and multies. A few of your punches coulda been worded a bit better, but all in all I felt it was a pretty strong verse.

Chowie Chow:

I enjoyed a couple of your punches and vocab was mediocre. However, I felt you werent expressing yourself to the fullest of your abilities. All that talk about prision was a little weird, but its your thinkg so I just looked at it a few times. A few lines did actually sound like The Game tho, haha. Anyways, you also could have used some metaphors, multies, personals and harder punches. One last thing I didnt really like was your structuring. Your lines are way to extended and nearing the end they got way shorter. If your structuring would have been a bit better it would have gave you a bit more of a chance of winning. But I dont judge on stricly structuring as it is only one component to my critiquing.

All in all, I feel Elementality has the harder verse from what you have read with my feedback. Good battle tho. I wanna see both of you elevate in the areas stated. Get back at me if you ever need more honest votes. :thumbup:

V/Elementality.................................

Thanks for the feed man, preciated. up.