warrior vs acuity
 

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Check in by: 04-11-05 at 02:15 PM

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Acuity has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-11-05 01:58 PM.

warrior has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-11-05 02:09 PM.

throw a punch im throwin~three, his verse is shit and so~is~he/
but its pretty bad im hotter than u, even when "A/C's" blowin~me/

im pressin up against this pussy like tight bikinies~in, breezy~wind/
but i dont know if i should talk shit or thank him for the easy~win/

i cant believe the nerve~of~herbs acuity dont deserve~a~verse/
my words'll~hurt ur words~get~burnt, u come wit sweet bars like u serve~dessert/

Voted For: Acuity

wow dis was a good ass battle..

[font=tahoma]acuity came harder tho n flowed bettar...i dunno i was feelin warrior thgo real good shyt homie best battle i've seen by far...yea good shyt but i think A took it i already explained why...good battle tho

v/acuity

o n warrior if u need a sig holla at me

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Voted For: Acuity

very close battle you both battles were really good but i think Acuity won this cuz of this better punchlines and his better structure I enjoyed reading this battle it was really good but Acuity won this T dot keep on practicing you had a nice verse 2 vote Acuity return the vote please

Voted For: Acuity

this wuz kinda close i guess but it goes to acuity

acuity had nice punches and thats why he gets my vote...he also had good vocab and werdplay...the structure WAS off though...sick closer though

warrior did good with the multies and structure but the punches just werent as hard as acuities neither was the werdplay

v/acuity

rtf...
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...19&page=1&pp=15

Voted For: warrior

acuity:
You a warrior nigga like shaka Zulu, fighting sum1 more powerful than the sun
Like his dumbass, u runnin at me with a spear, im laughin in the cut wid ma gattling gun
^^^KIND OF A GOOD PERSONL HERE..BUT YA RYHME SCHEME WAS WACK
You get no responses afta requesting a sig, why shud GFX heads bother
Cos they know, battling me..uve dug ur grave kid, and ull be deleted from RV's roster
^^^^LOL HOW CAN U MAKE A PERSONAL OUT OF HIM GETTIN NO RESPONSES 4 A SIG...WASN'T FEELIN IT
U and wackness have a chemical attraction,ur in love, i can see it in ur lyrical interactions
So I'll throw an axe at you face and head, so u got a slit to match the one between legs
^^^^DIS DIDN'T RYHME AT ALL FAM

warrior:
throw a punch im throwin~three, his verse is shit and so~is~he/
but its pretty bad im hotter than u, even when "A/C's" blowin~me/
^^^^^^GOOD RYHME SCHEME BUT I AINT REALLY LIKE DA PUNCH

im pressin up against this pussy like tight bikinies~in, breezy~wind/
but i dont know if i should talk shit or thank him for the easy~win/
^^^^UUHH OKAY..
i cant believe the nerve~of~herbs acuity dont deserve~a~verse/
my words'll~hurt ur words~get~burnt, u come wit sweet bars like u serve~dessert/
^^^FEELIN DA MULTIS IN DIS SHIT AND DA PUNCH WAS KIND OF HOTT...

V/warrior...and why cuzz acuity's ryhme scheme was like a noobie and i thought it was wack,last bar didn't ryhme and he forced a personal....warrior u didn't have any personals which u need in a battle but u won dis cuzz of multis and u had a good ryhme scheme need da step up ya punchlines tho

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Voted For: warrior



throw a punch im throwin~three, his verse is shit and so~is~he/
but its pretty bad im hotter than u, even when "A/C's" blowin~me/
^^ac.acuity....i bet no1 got that, it took me a minute
im pressin up against this pussy like tight bikinies~in, breezy~wind/
but i dont know if i should talk shit or thank him for the easy~win/
^^lol,...........kinda've a filler
i cant believe the nerve~of~herbs acuity dont deserve~a~verse/
my words'll~hurt ur words~get~burnt, u come wit sweet bars like u serve~dessert/
^^this was decent...not very hard hitting though
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damn...this flowed perdy well,lose the //(its noobish)lol
overall your punches were decent but dont mention I
in ya verses....it comes off as self glorification.....

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You a warrior nigga like shaka Zulu, fighting sum1 more powerful than the sun
Like his dumbass, u runnin at me with a spear, im laughin in the cut wid ma gattling gun
^^weak opener....what was the point??
You get no responses afta requesting a sig, why shud GFX heads bother
Cos they know, battling me..uve dug ur grave kid, and ull be deleted from RV's roster
^^ok,.not really a punch though
U and wackness have a chemical attraction,ur in love, i can see it in ur lyrical interactions
So I'll throw an axe at you face and head, so u got a slit to match the one between ur legs
^^this did not flow at all(i thought you were an audio head)?
how can all these bars not flow????
if your gonna stretch ya shit out you need an inner ryhme scheme acuity....
overall i dont even think you had one punch in this

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Voted For: warrior

Warrior took this shit easily...Punches were way better, structure and flow were both on point throughout...Nice multies...Acuity, you didnt throw any good punches man...they were all ass to me...Elevate...

thnx for the vote,

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Voted For: warrior

throw a punch im throwin~three, his verse is shit and so~is~he/
but its pretty bad im hotter than u, even when "A/C's" blowin~me/
Hmm...ok...

im pressin up against this pussy like tight bikinies~in, breezy~wind/
but i dont know if i should talk shit or thank him for the easy~win/
ha...nice...

i cant believe the nerve~of~herbs acuity dont deserve~a~verse/
my words'll~hurt ur words~get~burnt, u come wit sweet bars like u serve~dessert/
nice...

You a warrior nigga like shaka Zulu, fighting sum1 more powerful than the sun
Like his dumbass, u runnin at me with a spear, im laughin in the cut wid ma gattling gun
eh.....
You get no responses afta requesting a sig, why shud GFX heads bother
Cos they know, battling me..uve dug ur grave kid, and ull be deleted from RV's roster
nice...
U and wackness have a chemical attraction,ur in love, i can see it in ur lyrical interactions
So I'll throw an axe at you face and head, so u got a slit to match the one between ur legs
wording really fucked this up..


I think warrior took it, Acuity had some wording problems, and I wasn't really feeling the opening...good punches on both ends though..

Oh yeah, and RTF...........whenever................

Voted For: Acuity

Hmm, prety alright battles here.... Good punches from both, and structure. I feel that Acuity had a little bit more of a hook though.... his shit was just a little bit more complex. I think that warrior lost this one just cause he was more concentrated on himself(self-g), and didnt really have any personals wse.

No hate but....

V = Acuity.