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efecx vs REDZONE
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 04-11-05 at 02:36 PM Must drop verse in 200 minutes after check in. |
REDZONE has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-11-05 02:10 PM.
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efecx has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-11-05 02:34 PM.
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efecx outta respect I'll get cha merked wit tha tec...
threadin tha text, thez punches bring thunda at tha point of connect... leavin you wet, head ejectin like tha jack in tha box... strapped wit tha glocks, ya volunteered fa ya head ta be rocked... checkmate, ya style lame I've done peaked at cha flow... some1 speak fa this hoe, RV should ban you fa how weak that cha flow... but don't worry I'll be ya hero if ya mom's and pop's leave... RedZone holdin tha keys and still you gotta ' ask Jeeves'... answer ta me, takin no questions til ya betta ya lines... I don't kno how you live fa ya respect, but YOU will die fa mines... naw I didn't copy T.I. in tha last rhyme, I switched it up |
Voted For: efecx
Fecx had this shit... Redzone ur verse is aight..But not good to impress me.. Fecx=Structure Wordplay Punches Redzone=Structure GG GO AGAIN NEXT TIME ! |
Voted For: REDZONE
this was a pretty weak battle...........efeckx punches werent connectin...his vocab was weak...he had no mulits...and his wordplay was horrendous...work on that Redzones verse was garbage to....none of his bars were good and none of them connected...the only thing that seemed DECENT to me was the ask jeeves bar...it wasnt that good but iwas better than any other punvh in efecx verse....... vote-RedZone |
Voted For: efecx
Flow: Blah Punches: Neither Personals: Neither Wordplay: Neither Metas: Neither Multis: Neither ENjoyment: Blah Vote: efexc explanation: Eh both were eh no real punchlines here iono ef just edged it out and just wasnt completely bad iono http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=185205 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=184957 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=185213 return the favor plz and vote on my battles |
This was feedback posted for efecx
i like efecx'z verse becuz i luv da image he paintz in my mind...
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Voted For: REDZONE
dat askjeezes shit iz mad played yo, u didnt foicus on yo oppenent in da battle red so da personals wuz not der an neither wuz dem hot punches dat win u battles u stayed talkin bout gunz an what ur gonna do ta him, u have ta make him look like ay fool an uu didnt yo so effect gets da win fo stayin focasing on red wit da disses an havin better punchlineeez Vote switched |
hey wull if u want 2 get mih vote changd cuz i wuz meant 22 vote fo effect den do dat
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Voted For: efecx
efecx.............ya structure was off man, ya shit needs to be like a box with all lines kept the same length, lucky for you though it didnt fuck up ya flow, but ya need to watch that in the future. ya opener was kinda weak, the 2nd line was a failed attempt at a decent meta. the closer also was pointless, just a filler line, ya shud have just stopped at thirteen........in between you was better, ya had sum decent punches in places, some weaker in places. the vocab was not that bad, cud be better so ya mite wanna work on that....try droppin in some more metas and a few multies and work on hotter wordplay........overall this was a pretty average verse...........6/10 REDZONE..............like efecx, ya structure was off, and ya structure was off more than efecx. ya flow wasn't that bad although it was kinda choppy to begin with but got better. ya opener was pretty much filler and shit talkin, no real punch in it.........closer was better but it was still along the same lines as the opener. ya verse wasn't as long and in between i think ya was pretty weak.........no real punches that stood out!!! ya had like one real punch and no real personals in there.....vocab was pretty much all basic, no decent wordplay and metas and multies were lacking to.........elevate on all of that........overall 4.5/10 V/ - efecx Return the favour on one of my battles!!!! Links are in my siggy!!! And no hate or nuthin, but if ya don't return the favour i'll have my vote removed!!! likewise if ya leave no feed and ya vote gets removed from my battle then i will get my vote removed!!!! nuthin personal its just i'm tired of ppl sleepin on my battles!!! or droppin no feed so the vote gets removed anyway!!!! thnx pz!!!! |
Voted For: efecx
V/Efecx....this was an ight battle but E took this easily cause of his punchs an creative use of them wit personals an werdplay an structure was good....red ur verse had a couple of ight lines but u had alot of played ones an less creative ones ...jus werk on that....No Hate....... RETURN THE FAVOR...... Opener=E Closer=E Structure=E Personals=E Punchs=E Wordplay=E multi's=Tie Vocab=E Overall=Efecx |
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