lyrical mage vs +Tommy Gunz+
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-11-05 at 06:43 PM

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lyrical mage has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-11-05 06:13 PM.

+Tommy Gunz+ has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-11-05 06:15 PM.

what sage U tricked me How tha hell youa lyrical mage/
Man You like a dummy in class not on the same page/
*olympic flows* even if u did elevate u'll git *high
jumped* wit tha torch/
no *bullshit* u a practical joke gittin put in a flaming bag n gittin stomped on a porch/
Call mah verse jail tyme kid git ready to serve a life sentence/
mage tha only way u wuz hott in u wuz fired on the apprentice/
mah nigga tha type that lose by a vote in a battle and wont be uppin shit/
after u git bitchslapped ya face will be in mah hand like tha Arby's oven mitt/
fuck you Imma techer and I got a sick felling you did'nt learn nothing/
you would'nt win this shit if you looked at mah verse and use tha qoute button/
sorry this did'nt last long and i had to fuck u up quick/
where u from they all about Seriously Sucking Dick/



that last line he says he's from the ssd seriously sucking dick thats what it stands for

ignore the first verse

yo

look at this dumb nigga,always trying to run nigga
if i ever see you im pulling the damn trigga
in my book of spells, i be raising hell
you think yo tommies are loaded but you givin me empty shells
i can make a potion,greasy cause you like that lotion
once you rub it on yo crabs can go back to the ocean
you try to catch a case, here my knife across yo face
and now you can die just like that nigga scarface
so dont finish what you just started, or ill knock you retarted
try to show off with yo girl and you'll be faithfully departed
im done with this verse, so i can do a curse
so are you ready nigga? come on do yo worse

Voted For: +Tommy Gunz+

checkin polls good drop tommy u got dis in my mind

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shiut thas was suppose to be feedback get it removed

This was feedback posted for +Tommy Gunz+
 

checking tha polls for tha fam..........good drop...........

i was about to say because yall niggas in the same crew

lets get this shit done yo vote on this tight shit

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letz git that vote deleted and upin this......................

yo somebody delete the vote and niggas vote so i can get done wit this

yo vote on this uppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.......................... .

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just fo a little FB
Lyrical Mage shit was tite
Tommy yo shit was as good

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Voted For: +Tommy Gunz+

If I did'nt read the qouted version I would have to say u suck ass but naw U took this easily Gunz you acually had some hard punches in there somewhere

Mage: You had okay stuff too and by tha way tommy work on you stucture its fucked almost beyond fixing both Mc's stay up

thats one vote letz go............................

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!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

what the fuck does that mean good or bad funny lil nigga

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Voted For: +Tommy Gunz+

what sage U tricked me How tha hell youa lyrical mage/
Man You like a dummy in class not on the same page/
Weak opening..
*olympic flows* even if u did elevate u'll git *high
jumped* wit tha torch/
no *bullshit* u a practical joke gittin put in a flaming bag n gittin stomped on a porch/
Alright...
Call mah verse jail tyme kid git ready to serve a life sentence/
mage tha only way u wuz hott in u wuz fired on the apprentice/
Nah...
mah nigga tha type that lose by a vote in a battle and wont be uppin shit/
after u git bitchslapped ya face will be in mah hand like tha Arby's oven mitt/
Ha, I actually laughed on that one..
fuck you Imma techer and I got a sick felling you did'nt learn nothing/
you would'nt win this shit if you looked at mah verse and use tha qoute button/
Good...
sorry this did'nt last long and i had to fuck u up quick/
where u from they all about Seriously Sucking Dick/
OK, since it was a personal..

I'm not even going to quote lyrical mage's shit...way too simplistic to be taken seriously, no depth, basic rhymes, pre-K shit...

nigga/trigga hell/shells lotion/ocean face/face....you get the picture...

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Nice drop Mayne ...........Jus Sloppy ... and im jus checkin the polls

This was feedback posted for +Tommy Gunz+
 

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This was feedback posted for +Tommy Gunz+
 

checkin polls ......