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Fucka Ghost Writers, J.T.R Claps Back... Rofl ya why not?
Bored, Drunk... a quick key, why not? lol Alright look: L.I's back, holy shit, everybody pull out your fucking saddle Nah wait, he's fallen off ........................... Just look at his loss in the hotshh! battle! Ah shit, wait, you got cheated out of that win, i'll admit, hell The fallen off line was a joke.... WAIT! Don't get any ideas S.P.L Now forget T.E. wanna battle me? You get merked the same I'll start you off with an L... Like the begining of your name You hesitated the come back to RV, it's ok you took your time It's just that I expected a bigger return .................................... Then merking an herb in Frontlines Now come on kid, I thought you were better then this, right? Buety is in the eye of the beholder, and you got flow in your sight N' his dick in your hand, front?, you get sonned and parented Don't blame me, ask your dad, your Loss was Inherited Your an herbish character, but this aint weed comics, and it's a shame that... ......The only time L.I would blow up........ is if SPuL was in that plane And Your sig kid, Dawg I gotta tell you something Even wireless phones have connections dumbshit! And DeadlyVision, your text is a deadlyvision, don't front stupid whore Called t.e. out, it's why you don't run Authentick Intelligence anymore The reason we don't battle you... I don't wanna put ya'll in bad health Cuz I would seriously say i'm Ghost Writerz enygma .................................................. .... But i'd be degrading myself flow inteligent? Ya flow makes me sick, and that's not a play off your alias Cuz the only thing hot about you dog, is your girls nice ass and tits N' yes it's a compliment, Janessa is hot! but believe I tapped it all Cuz I aint just banging your girl ..................................... I'm banging your head through a wall And it's a calamity<... that your not liked, i'll deliver multiple bashes Fuck fighting fire with fire, i'll slice your body into pieces .................................... So this phoenix can't rise from the ahes I'm pissed, regardless, your on a merk list, you lose, n' you know this Phenom, TripleN, SevenThird??? You should be in Ghost Writerz .................................................. . Cuz your text is never noticed So now you know it kids, t.e. is better, but you really knew it all along So untill we ever battle, i'll put you on ignore... like S.P.L's song! Don't Fucking Step To The Establishment |
L.I's back, holy shit, everybody pull out your fucking saddle Nah wait, he's fallen off ........................... Just look at his loss in the hotshh! battle! ^^lol,....decent opener......... Ah shit, wait, you got cheated out of that win, i'll admit, hell The fallen off line was a joke.... WAIT! Don't get any ideas S.P.L ^^filler.....but it flows well....lol Now forget T.E. wanna battle me? You get merked the same I'll start you off with an L... Like the begining of your name ^^eh....... You hesitated the come back to RV, it's ok you took your time It's just that I expected a bigger return .................................... Then merking an herb in Frontlines ^^lmfao.... :thumbup: Now come on kid, I thought you were better then this, right? Buety is in the eye of the beholder, and you got flow in your sight ^^rofl.......oh diggity damn N' his dick in your hand, front?, you get sonned and parented Don't blame me, ask your dad, your Loss was Inherited ^^decent....... Your an herbish character, but this aint weed comics, and it's a shame that... ......The only time L.I would blow up........ is if SPuL was in that plane ^^ahahahahahah.......best line ....damn thats funny(srryspul) lmfao And Your sig kid, Dawg I gotta tell you something Even wireless phones have connections dumbshit! ^^lol,.........he walked into that one with that sig And DeadlyVision, your text is a deadlyvision, don't front stupid whore Called t.e. out, it's why you don't run Authentick Intelligence anymore ^^meh,...wasnt feeling the punch though The reason we don't battle you... I don't wanna put ya'll in bad health Cuz I would seriously say i'm Ghost Writerz enygma .................................................. .... But i'd be degrading myself ^^lol,.......nice flippin the concept flow inteligent? Ya flow makes me sick, and that's not a play off your alias Cuz the only thing hot about you dog, is your girls nice ass and tits ^^fillarama...but its koo N' yes it's a compliment, Janessa is hot! but believe I tapped it all Cuz I aint just banging your girl ..................................... I'm banging your head through a wall ^^lol,.large setup but weak punch And it's a calamity<... that your not liked, i'll deliver multiple bashes Fuck fighting fire with fire, i'll slice your body into pieces .................................... So this phoenix can't rise from the ahes ^^this was nice....feeling the wordplay I'm pissed, regardless, your on a merk list, you lose, n' you know this Phenom, TripleN, SevenThird??? You should be in Ghost Writerz .................................................. . Cuz your text is never noticed ^^^ohh hot diggity damn........i liked that closer.. . overall some funny shit, need more wordplay but i know its just an om that spul line i thought ws dope-ness...rofl...c;loser was ill...... the rest of the verse wass pretty consistent......nicely done.."_________"..lol it was way more personal then their verse against TE was.... for that reason alone i liked it a bit more.....straight verse....JTR . imma drop something soon, RTF on my next OM..... :thumbup: |
thank you thank you... it was just a drunking key anyways ;), upping
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[i]Lol, this is some a nice drop..
I was really feeling it , not the best work... You could have used maybe alittle better structure.. maybe less fillers... you had some nice punchlines.. Some funny personals... Overall it was a funny verse.. i liked it ... The best parts in your verse are the opener and closer , died alittle in between try to keep pretty decent punche's Ps: Dont forget to drop a link! |
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Whoa.............................................h otness............................
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haha, so far it's liked, except for enygma he hated it :'(
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um ya I threw in one last line for the closer, last time i'll edit the verse... I had to do it while I was still drunk or it wouldn't be the same you know? lol :cool: ah fuck I got school tomorow... I hate hangover tuesdays...
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Yo i was feelin dis shit nice everything dawg i liked dis shit a lot....i give it a 8.5/10......good come backs 2......~1~ RTF in my OM called "FUCK E.F. (hot ass diss)"
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And DeadlyVision, your text is a deadlyvision, don't front stupid whore
Called t.e. out, it's why you don't run Authentick Intelligence anymore ^^^Make Commen Sense TC got killed by A.I Vince was a witness..ahhahaha the weird shit is we diss ya'll on Audio and Text ya'll come back wit 1 kid..on text hahaha |
nice shit but not sayin to much cus im coo wit peps n Ghost Writerz its actually a hot crew
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It does make sense man, I wasn't saying the council, I said T.E. = The Establishment, now think really hard... get it now? lol chill deadly, I never heard the audio track, and I can't listen to shit off soundclick cuz it fucks up anyways, but it wasn't T.E. who desided to send me to make a comeback, I took that desision upon myself |
Yo jack...coo diss....some of yah shit was nice other shit was okay....u still love my sig quote tho :D...but on the real, yah had sum nice shit and sum ok shit...the plane shit had me rolling....word.
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lol, haha, ya all str8 with me, I wasn't trying to beef with this though, it just seemed apropriate for someone from T.E. to make a come back, I think enygma got pissed from this though lol... wt/v...
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Bored, Drunk... a quick key, why not? lol
Alright look: L.I's back, holy shit, everybody pull out your fucking saddle Nah wait, he's fallen off ........................... Just look at his loss in the hotshh! battle! Pretty good opener^^ Ah shit, wait, you got cheated out of that win, i'll admit, hell The fallen off line was a joke.... WAIT! Don't get any ideas S.P.L Damn.. not bad^^ Now forget T.E. wanna battle me? You get merked the same I'll start you off with an L... Like the begining of your name Played with the L relation to the name..^^ You hesitated the come back to RV, it's ok you took your time It's just that I expected a bigger return .................................... Then merking an herb in Frontlines ROFL HAAAA OMG nice punch *Dies Laughing* 9.9/10 Now come on kid, I thought you were better then this, right? Buety is in the eye of the beholder, and you got flow in your sight Lmfao damn, ha... N' his dick in your hand, front?, you get sonned and parented Don't blame me, ask your dad, your Loss was Inherited nice nameplay, and metaphors... lol Your an herbish character, but this aint weed comics, and it's a shame that... ......The only time L.I would blow up........ is if SPuL was in that plane omg SPuL you still cool, but man... ^^hottest bar^^ And Your sig kid, Dawg I gotta tell you something Even wireless phones have connections dumbshit! lol nice personal And DeadlyVision, your text is a deadlyvision, don't front stupid whore Called t.e. out, it's why you don't run Authentick Intelligence anymore it was a nice attempt.. eh.. The reason we don't battle you... I don't wanna put ya'll in bad health Cuz I would seriously say i'm Ghost Writerz enygma .................................................. .... But i'd be degrading myself ROFL haa paaa HAAAA ROFL flow inteligent? Ya flow makes me sick, and that's not a play off your alias Cuz the only thing hot about you dog, is your girls nice ass and tits this was aight.. N' yes it's a compliment, Janessa is hot! but believe I tapped it all Cuz I aint just banging your girl ..................................... I'm banging your head through a wall lol not a hard punch And it's a calamity<... that your not liked, i'll deliver multiple bashes Fuck fighting fire with fire, i'll slice your body into pieces .................................... So this phoenix can't rise from the ahes wordplay then a mothafukka, nice punch LMAO.. I'm pissed, regardless, your on a merk list, you lose, n' you know this Phenom, TripleN, SevenThird??? You should be in Ghost Writerz .................................................. . Cuz your text is never noticed damn... damn... damn... So now you know it kids, t.e. is better, but you really knew it all along So untill we ever battle, i'll put you on ignore... like S.P.L's song! You fuckin bogus for that, Spul we still cool, nice closer tho... *falls out the chair laughing* omg you were drunk doing this and shit was still hot.. damn, stay up fam.. |
word... you should see when I drop sober ;)...
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haaa aight i will peep your stuff :) Hit up my links... :thumbup:
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fo sho, keep your eyes open for me in korv 2, lol, i'll peep your ish tomorow...
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upping this ish ya'll....
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Ya your sig is sexy :thumbup: |
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holy shit. hot drop. this was very nice :thumbup: keep dropping hotness fam. holla.
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yo man nice drop....really liked this diss.......lol of cousre its full of multis.......and it was pretty sick........good wordplay man..........great personals........shit was funny as hell...........way to rep it man.........show em how it is :thumbup:
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rofl rep my hood... ROFL... upping
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up your mother, and out came you, upping this hotness :cool:
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^lol
anyways, yea, this shit was nice. boo @ the closer bein' tru :( lol but yea, had some ill shit here. good especially for bein' drunk. lol but yea, nice diss. We'll be comin' back soon. :shoot: but yo RTF yo. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=186365 weerd :cool: :hump: |
Fo sho' .......... still upping kiddies
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still upping kiddies!!!
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dope drop kid all around came damn hard at um and made it funny at the same time...everything was clutch...i think it gets 9.5-10 in my book keep droping fire
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damn straight, upping this dopeness...
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booooo, this isn't old yet
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so keep giving feedback hoes and hoe cakes
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