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D523 vs OneStepBeyond
Battle Rules:
10 - 20 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 04-14-05 at 10:31 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
OneStepBeyond has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-11-05 10:50 PM.
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plan on doin somethin with your life, but you'll fail college,
thats why this 'bitch blows' like he was dryin his nail polish, doctors scope the situation, but fail to give you enough stitches, got the premature flow, cause if i get 'touched' i 'BUST' BITCHES, your open mic is washed up, its not somethin they wana try to see, cause after 5 hours of droppin the shit, the only reply was me, your wholes crews hypocrites, casper thinks he the Capitain Thug, and you said i talk shit and i do, but atleast i can back it up, wanna be an internet gangsta, well the semi opens sluts souls, M.O.B. is a bunch of faggots... With Many Open Buttholes, i fucked with you and Ca$per, but i think im givin up in two sec.'s, cause if i fuck with 1 i fuck with all, and i ain't fond of group sex... yeah, im not gonna write anymore cause i don't have the time... personal problems... later |
D523 has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-13-05 08:32 PM.
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Hi guys, Im One Step Beyond, I think imma good emcee and a hardcore thug
I see my rhymes as dope, but then again i overdose on hallucinogenic drugs Your teeth are cracked from bitin those lines, this kids a rookie i got a hunch Because all of his lines are like the old Batman movies-- "Wack" "Punch" Im sure you can envision how my words hit with precision My shit will effect you like glaucoma, you'll loose your vision You can call me a bookie, the way i took bets for me to win against this rookie Ill have you dismembered, crumbling apart like a soggy cookie We all look at your lines, and we cant help but laugh humorously Stupid bitch, you are right, you are One Step Beyond.. stupidity Ten lines and i merked you, I know you like the shit i spit So after this battle if you want my verse, ill give you it |
Voted For: OneStepBeyond
this was a pretty close battle but i think OSB took this his punchlines were connecting more and felt he had alot better structure and it was nicer to read also good flow both verses were really good but there is only one winner so im'a vote for onestepbeyong return the favour please... |
Voted For: OneStepBeyond
meh, thought onestep had the harder punches.....D523, if you are who i think you are, you kinda bit the first two bars....and then the next one you self-glorified....and that took alot away from your verse....and the last part, you werent really aiming disses at your opponent, you were kinda just stating thingss....haha, but, onestep, not that bad, closer was kinda weak, haha, but still, you had the better punches/personals...first bar i lol'd ,haha, so, you get this easily, keep up man, can you rtf in my sig, whenever, its hurting for some votes right now.....word v/onestepbeyond |
Voted For: OneStepBeyond
pretty good battle, was feelin lines on both sides... onestep, you had good flow, decent meta's n punchz.. really liked tha first 4 lines, tha last 4 lines were alright.. but tha middle 4 were average at best d523, overall i didn't think yer lines flowed as well and punchz didn't hit as hard...although i did like tha "onestepbeyond..stupidity" line.. overall, i'm gonna go with onestep as i was feelin more of his lines and his verse flowed better imo Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
oh...forgot to link in mah battle which is still open after 4 years and 32 days...
vote!! http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=181485 |
This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
lol damn checkin this shit out...no vote cuz of the rules...only feed lol
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favor will be returned soon.. but i swear i've seen those lines before somewhere
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Voted For: D523
dis nigga got it he came harder even tho hiz shit was stretched he had sum aight punches not da best but dey was aight he did have like 1 or 2 personals dat was aight not all dat hot tho he came harder n he put more effort n 2 hiz verse so he gets mah vote 4 dat n he used bigger wordz osb da fuk u on cuz?ya shit wasnt hot da punches was soft dem personalz was tired as hell ya verse was sloppy get sum sik as punches n fix ya verse den cum holla at him again vote goes 2 d523 Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
Voted For: D523
ayo u got it.......rhymes where better and better punches.......simple.......and guess homie didnt have his mind and heart into it like he said Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
thanks for votin! uppin for some more votes
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Voted For: D523
Votin for D ight this battle was close on all accounts of the battle but i favored D's verse due to his creativity ight D Punches were creativen hard hittin strucutre was nice flow was good and easy to keep wit wordplay was creative multies- didnt see any elevate on those Personals- Creative n hard hittin ur bes line: Your teeth are cracked from bitin those lines, this kids a rookie i got a hunch Because all of his lines are like the old Batman movies-- "Wack" "Punch" (lol made me cuckle nice n creative) One ight ya had hard punches but some were a lil basic try to get a lil more creative on them structure was nice n easy to stay wit flow was nice n easy as well multies- I didnt see any elevate on those personals didnt see any man elevate on them both elevate on multies D had hard punches n a few hard hittin personals one ya didnt throw any personals so it made me turn away from your verse damn good battle from the both of you but the votes goes to D for creative punches and personals BE SURE TO RTF!! link below sig holla |
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Voted For: OneStepBeyond
ey yo man i had to give it to ONESTEP juss cause his whole verse flowed betta and he had betta shit all da way dawg..... wanna be an internet gangsta, well the semi opens sluts souls, M.O.B. is a bunch of faggots... With Many Open Buttholes, i fucked with you and Ca$per, but i think im givin up in two sec.'s, cause if i fuck with 1 i fuck with all, and i ain't fond of group sex... ey dawg dat shit was funny as hell....haha.....D....u had some nice punches but ya structa was weak dawg..no hate....and check yo p.m's boy i been tryin to battle yo ass.....no hate ....holla Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
i know kid lol i said set it up
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This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
i wanna know one thing...
your open mic is washed up, its not somethin they wana try to see, cause after 5 hours of droppin the shit, the only reply was me, is that true? you were the only one to reply to his open mic? |
oh sorry...i thought i could vote after i left feedback
well i was going to vote for: OneStepBeyond |
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:: bump :: :) cmon vote on this shit
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<-Tired of gettin robbed out of wins. Just fucking vote.
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Voted For: D523
Pretty weak battle but i think d523 got this one...osb just came wack ... nothing much to say about this could have been alot better D523 Hi guys, Im One Step Beyond, I think imma good emcee and a hardcore thug I see my rhymes as dope, but then again i overdose on hallucinogenic drugs Decent Opener Your teeth are cracked from bitin those lines, this kids a rookie i got a hunch Because all of his lines are like the old Batman movies-- "Wack" "Punch" Could have been alot better Im sure you can envision how my words hit with precision My shit will effect you like glaucoma, you'll loose your vision Nice punch good multies You can call me a bookie, the way i took bets for me to win against this rookie Ill have you dismembered, crumbling apart like a soggy cookie pretty cool , nice meta We all look at your lines, and we cant help but laugh humorously Stupid bitch, you are right, you are One Step Beyond.. stupidity LOL Ten lines and i merked you, I know you like the shit i spit So after this battle if you want my verse, ill give you it Nice closer , but alittle self glorious OSB plan on doin somethin with your life, but you'll fail college, thats why this 'bitch blows' like he was dryin his nail polish, Weak Opener doctors scope the situation, but fail to give you enough stitches, got the premature flow, cause if i get 'touched' i 'BUST' BITCHES, WHat?! your open mic is washed up, its not somethin they wana try to see, cause after 5 hours of droppin the shit, the only reply was me, okay personal your wholes crews hypocrites, casper thinks he the Capitain Thug, and you said i talk shit and i do, but atleast i can back it up, NO, wack wanna be an internet gangsta, well the semi opens sluts souls, M.O.B. is a bunch of faggots... With Many Open Buttholes, Nice , best line in your verse i fucked with you and Ca$per, but i think im givin up in two sec.'s, cause if i fuck with 1 i fuck with all, and i ain't fond of group sex... decent closer Overall D523 got this he came with harder punchlines , Osb just came played and weak , if osb came harder, he would have one this battle , but ima have to to hand this one to d523 ... keep it up and elevate both |
Voted For: OneStepBeyond
I think OSB's punches were more affective. I think his hit harder. I liked the diss's in this battle, and the structure is on point for OSB. D523, your flow was wayy off. Esp, at the bigging. But, I was feelin OSB's punches and concepts more, adding his wordplay to that list, so I felt he took this one. Not really a close battle to me, i think OSB took it. D523 didnt really have too many hard hitting punches, and is personals were kinda off. Well, I tried my best to explain this. Pretty much nothing more to say except OSB's concepts, consistency, and punches took my vote. ~1~ |
Voted For: OneStepBeyond
Ya verse is crazy funny yo. Creative,flowed good...what more can i say. Opener-OSB..."plan on doin somethin with your life, but you'll fail college, thats why this 'bitch blows' like he was dryin his nail polish,"....U GOT RIGHT DOWN TO DISSIN THE OTHA EMCEE Punches-OBS...u had some creative and funny ass punches...thats what i like ta see,and basickally u came off better Vocab-Tie...both emcee's vocab was basic,so u both tied in this category Multis-OSB...had this category down packed on each bar.Hint tho try seperatin ya multis wit a dash afta each word so peeps can spot em better. Closer-OSB...this is obvious,but i give this ta u because u put more effort in it................. overall 7/10 good job to both emcees,but OSB gets my vote due to more creativity and time put into it from what i see |
This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
checkin polls for my boy OSB, lets get some votes in here
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This was feedback posted for OneStepBeyond
checkin polls............................
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Voted For: OneStepBeyond
plan on doin somethin with your life, but you'll fail college, thats why this 'bitch blows' like he was dryin his nail polish, 7/10...nice punch but the 1st line was wack doctors scope the situation, but fail to give you enough stitches, got the premature flow, cause if i get 'touched' i 'BUST' BITCHES, 8/10...nice both punches were very good and had nice werdplay your open mic is washed up, its not somethin they wana try to see, cause after 5 hours of droppin the shit, the only reply was me, 6/10...eehh, okay personal i guess your wholes crews hypocrites, casper thinks he the Capitain Thug, and you said i talk shit and i do, but atleast i can back it up, 6/10...eeehhh wanna be an internet gangsta, well the semi opens sluts souls, M.O.B. is a bunch of faggots... With Many Open Buttholes, 6/10...lmao, thats all i gotta say i fucked with you and Ca$per, but i think im givin up in two sec.'s, cause if i fuck with 1 i fuck with all, and i ain't fond of group sex... 6/10...decent closer 39/60 Hi guys, Im One Step Beyond, I think imma good emcee and a hardcore thug I see my rhymes as dope, but then again i overdose on hallucinogenic drugs 6/10...2nd line was okay, 1st was wack Your teeth are cracked from bitin those lines, this kids a rookie i got a hunch Because all of his lines are like the old Batman movies-- "Wack" "Punch" 6/10...kinda played but you did it originally, sort of Im sure you can envision how my words hit with precision My shit will effect you like glaucoma, you'll loose your vision 4/10...eehh You can call me a bookie, the way i took bets for me to win against this rookie Ill have you dismembered, crumbling apart like a soggy cookie 6/10..lol, but not that great We all look at your lines, and we cant help but laugh humorously Stupid bitch, you are right, you are One Step Beyond.. stupidity 6/10...didnt rhyme well Ten lines and i merked you, I know you like the shit i spit So after this battle if you want my verse, ill give you it 4/10..eeehhh 32/10 onestep took this withotu a doubt...better verse in about every category... RTF |
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