.K.onfliktz vs REDZONE
 

Battle Rules:

10-16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
K you spit first

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-11-05 at 11:36 PM

Must drop verse in 4000 minutes after check in.

REDZONE has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-11-05 11:26 PM.

.K.onfliktz has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-11-05 11:27 PM.

Listen....

Breakin Necks..with the gauge and techs..embrace ya text..
Take ya cheque....which equals a Can of Pop and a neopet..
he's 0-1...winnin'? like sex..you dont know what it feels like..
Leave this faggot with sun burn...fuck rippin..He peels nice..
New to the site? shame? ill make sure you dont come back..
'cause the only juice you cummin with..is the on in your sack..
Like aftermath...Redzone Can't "drop a rhymes" Give up herb..
......Or imma head ova too ya mothers house and "bust Her"..
But if Redzone beats me....you know he copied tupac lyrics..
you aint so so def? your hearin sucks......like cock ears-kid..
peep where he from..its like his elevation...he got Tar heels..
Spittin a couple lines and leave this herb with Bar Meals..

Blah

if rap was a game I guess I'd be an EA SPORTS fiend...
you can call me R.Kelly tha way mah rhymes'll rape a nigga thas only 14...
May 1st a lame was born, you gotta come betta than that...
I heard ya pussy wet, tha tec'll leave ya wetter than that...
you sickness? fa real well Red prescriptin ya remedy...
Imma nightmare on elm st. freddy assigned ya dreams ta me...
attackin this bitch, matter of fact I'm clappin ya shit...
ya win streak can't wit stand mah HEAT, mah Shaq flow guranteed fa smackin ya shit...
RedZone? that boy hot. why tha fuck ya hoes fannin em'?...
damn even ya home town embarrassed cauz ya reppin Hamilton...
you weak homie, silly rabbit still runnin fa TRIX...
don't get .K.O'd by tha magnificient flow Red NFLIKTZ...
I'm sick wit thez fuckin nit wits thinkin they spit shit...
don't get bit by thez big pits, ready ta split FLIKTZ...
I'm too big... fa ya bullshit, you still atcha mom's shit...
you can call tha niggaz ya sit wit, mah mechanics is on that bomb shit...

uppin fa vote
 

let's get it poppin uuuuuuppppppiiiiiinnnnnn fa votes

votes
 

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This was feedback posted for .K.onfliktz
 

Voted For: .K.onfliktz

only cuz kon had sum ill metaz in da beginning...he kinda fell off lata in da verse...but uhhh red ya verse was good...it was consistant...didnt get betta or worse...but it couldnt touch kon's metaz...

votes
 

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uppin this battle already famz.....1-0 me................

ha, funny...
 

uppin mah niggaz, me and KO uuuuuuuuuuuppppppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnn nnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

Voted For: .K.onfliktz

Flow: Blah
Punches: KON
Personals: Kon
Wordplay: KON
Metas: KON
Multis: Eh Tie
Enjoyment: Blah

Vote: KON

Explanation: He had the better verse more rounded had everything down to win .... red u rhymed the same things twice thats a no no anr really turned me off on ur verse so yea .. both you return the favor plz and vote honestly

Voted For: .K.onfliktz

this verse came out on top because the punchlines were better den the other verse i was feeling the structure and your flow you also had a few decent personals in this Redzone came pretty close aswell i thought ur verse was decent too butkonflictz won this battle return the favour please in my battle

aiight yo uppin this battle 3-0.......................

uppin this battle...you know ill return the favour

Voted For: .K.onfliktz

easily kon gets this

redzone, you had way too much selfglorifying, and not enough dissing of your oppenent, i dont think you had two consecutive lines that dissed kon, shit, and thats what you have to do...you need to elevate alot, learn the basics of a punch, and get some real personals. word

kon....meh, seemed like you rushed it....nothing special, not really any vocab, but the fact is you actually were dissin redzone constantly, haha, which gets you my vote....2nd bar made me laugh though, haha, aight, well you can do better, word....rtf in my sig if you could, pz

v/konflictz

alright will do......im bout to vote on ur battle now....

uppin for the KO

Voted For: .K.onfliktz

Breakin Necks..with the gauge and techs..embrace ya text..
Take ya cheque....which equals a Can of Pop and a neopet..
7...decent opener, funny 2nd line!!
he's 0-1...winnin'? like sex..you dont know what it feels like..
Leave this faggot with sun burn...fuck rippin..He peels nice..
7...nice meta!!! gud bar!!
New to the site? shame? ill make sure you dont come back..
'cause the only juice you cummin with..is the on in your sack..
6...not feelin it, kind of a new twist to a played concept!!
Like aftermath...Redzone Can't "drop a rhymes" Give up herb..
......Or imma head ova too ya mothers house and "bust Her"..
6...rhymin was off here!!
But if Redzone beats me....you know he copied tupac lyrics..
you aint so so def? your hearin sucks......like cock ears-kid..
7...lmao!!! comedy line!!
peep where he from..its like his elevation...he got Tar heels..
Spittin a couple lines and leave this herb with Bar Meals..
6...average closer, not ure best!!

OVERALL: 39/60 (65%)

if rap was a game I guess I'd be an EA SPORTS fiend...
you can call me R.Kelly tha way mah rhymes'll rape a nigga thas only 14...
6...structure was weak, r kelly shit is played!!
May 1st a lame was born, you gotta come betta than that...
I heard ya pussy wet, tha tec'll leave ya wetter than that...
5...weaker, that shit where u put there birthdate is gay and played!!
you sickness? fa real well Red prescriptin ya remedy...
Imma nightmare on elm st. freddy assigned ya dreams ta me...
6...ok but the freddy shit is also PLAYED!!
attackin this bitch, matter of fact I'm clappin ya shit...
ya win streak can't wit stand mah HEAT, mah Shaq flow guranteed fa smackin ya shit...
6...ok, aight bar with a nice multi!!
RedZone? that boy hot. why tha fuck ya hoes fannin em'?...
damn even ya home town embarrassed cauz ya reppin Hamilton...
7...gud line, nice personal!!
you weak homie, silly rabbit still runnin fa TRIX...
don't get .K.O'd by tha magnificient flow Red NFLIKTZ...
6...nice play off his name!!
I'm sick wit thez fuckin nit wits thinkin they spit shit...
don't get bit by thez big pits, ready ta split FLIKTZ...
6...not feelin this much!!
I'm too big... fa ya bullshit, you still atcha mom's shit...
you can call tha niggaz ya sit wit, mah mechanics is on that bomb shit...
5...blah!!! weak ass closer!!

OVERALL: 47/80 (58.75%)

Kon takes this battle for an overall better drop, he had better vocab and wordplay, more creative shit and his punches were all hitting harder. Red i think u got talent and u wud have had a gud chance of winning this if u didnt use so many played concepts!!!!