DAZZLE vs jmsbnd07655
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
No D/R
No Bullshit

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-15-05 at 04:54 PM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

jmsbnd07655 has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-12-05 04:54 PM.

yo, whats up witcha name, 'dazzle'?
you put no thought in it like you was writin while havin an orgasm, i'll leave your brain rattled
yo, the next time you'll hear this guy laugh,
they'll be dreamin, probly anxious to reminisce bout the past,
but why would they do that, you wack, so please, jus MOVE BACK,
unlike you, everythin i say is TRUE FACTS,
infact you could even be the next Jim Carrey,
hopefully, i wont have to repeat that line, you baffled by these styles that vary,
this aint no joke obviously i was jus BORN TO WIN,
this guys so dumb, he'll post his verse, then say i shoulda, THOUGHT FOR THIS, i'll slaughter your shit,
next time jus stop and think who you choose,
cuz now you're isolated like colin farrell in 'Phonebooth'

peace. .............uppin.........................

DAZZLE has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-13-05 09:55 AM.

yer gl. .........................uppin.............

word gl, ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ .

Voted For: DAZZLE

this battle sucked....dazzle, take more time writing your verses....word...other dude, learn how to throw a punch....word....that is all

v/dazzle

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This was feedback posted for DAZZLE
 

yeh uppin fo my alias..................................

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Voted For: jmsbnd07655

this gettin my vote...

better punches and play on the words.

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Voted For: jmsbnd07655

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wtf! lol! uppin...................................

Voted For: DAZZLE

ok....
this battle wuz a lil strange cuz Dazzle had a better structure n flow cuz jmsbond shit didn't even flowed... LOL
but jmsbnd verse wuz bigger so had mo punches, but realy you made that hard to read fix up your struture man
and Dazzle... you had aight punches but remember that with newbies shit can happen.. this time you won but my advice is everytime keep them punches hard hittin..

Dazzle - 5/10
jmsbnd - 3/10

Voted For: DAZZLE

Couldnt think of your own name, or u jus on james bonds dick?
I betta not mess with you, coz you be hooked up with gadgets!!
^^OK
The newbie style of ya name make me gonna get this shit easy!!
Shit it dont even look like words...........More like an I.P!!
^^weak
The crew you reppin in ya sig...Tha fucks a Violent Tupe??
Couldnt get in one at RV,.......so ya made one up anyway!!
^^mediocre

Well you said it was keyed and it showed.Best line was the 1st one because t was a personal.2nd bar was weak and too basic.Flow was ight.


yo, whats up witcha name, 'dazzle'?
you put no thought in it like you was writin while havin an orgasm, i'll leave your brain rattled
^^stretched out...and whack
yo, the next time you'll hear this guy laugh,
they'll be dreamin, probly anxious to reminisce bout the past,
^^stretched out and whack
but why would they do that, you wack, so please, jus MOVE BACK,
unlike you, everythin i say is TRUE FACTS,
^^1st line stretched...u glorified urself
infact you could even be the next Jim Carrey,
hopefully, i wont have to repeat that line, you baffled by these styles that vary,
^^stretched out
this aint no joke obviously i was jus BORN TO WIN,
this guys so dumb, he'll post his verse, then say i shoulda, THOUGHT FOR THIS, i'll slaughter your shit,
next time jus stop and think who you choose,
cuz now you're isolated like colin farrell in 'Phonebooth'
^^whole thing whack

Ur lines were stretched.In case u don't know....ya gotta keep all ur lines around the same # a syllables.Not to mention u had no punches.A lot of self glorifying bull shit.Just learn how to flow and then try to make punches.Don't battle for about a month.Just practice then come back.

Vote-Dazzle(vote in link below please)
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196531

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Voted For: jmsbnd07655

^^^^^^^^^^ ohhhh my god............ wdf is worng wit u child...... arent u da same one i owned in a topikal..... ahahhaahah u silly child ur a .... disgrace ...... james i thought u wuz better at this shyt....

^^^^^^^^^^^^ aww fuck.... didnt mean too vote fo him take my vote of k,,,,,, it wuz foo feedback.... thnkx.....
peace..

lol, yer this definetely aint my best, by far.

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Voted For: jmsbnd07655

Dazzle was wack lol..... you took this hands down. Good punches an wordplay. Keep it up

Feel free to battle me ^ :shoot:........................

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