lyrical mage vs Effect
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lyrical mage has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-12-05 05:58 PM.
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Effect has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-12-05 05:58 PM.
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mutha fucker my deadly verse will smash your ass to little peices
everyone knows im sick kid you should really start praying for jesus you fuckin penis steppin up to me i can say you def have the ballz but when ya got into this battle you know dat u bitch is gonna fall! ya must think ya biggy smalls your to damn played a bitch ass made ya to soft to beat me better start digging a grave wid ur mummas spade this fat bitch is bigger den sunamie tidal waves shit your just deprived why the hell are you alive if you were dieing nobody would av ya revived cuz you are damn wirthless what the hell is your fucking perpous if you were famous dumass I think you would turn hip hop into a circous ha kiss the crack on my ass and I burn through your fuckin ass can't wait till your burned ur family will be disturbed when im chuckin ash i'll give your ass fear you must think your as good as shakespear i'll lodge spears in ya back and when you scream im'a rip of your ears why don't ya end yourself cuz im already destroying ya health don't ever judge me cuz my flow will lyrically strangle ya self see you in hell bitch you can't rhyme fuck you and snort glue sticks I take pleasure it slappin dip sticks n stabbin my dick into his gfs clit don't even spit I bet your prob gonna prewrite your not gettin anywhere you can't get back on track when i snap ya back no one would care im leaving you in dispair my multies got ya ass cimbing trees your skill has been killed so will you go hang ur self please this fuckin fake ass prevokin bitch ass i'll leave you chokin ive had enough of makin ya shakin im leavin ya blood sokin |
yo this man probably sweatin cause i gave him half an hour.
hes sweatin like a dansel in distress in a fucking tower i dont to use a spell just blast you with my tech this man doesnt have tyme fo his skills to come in full effect. i levitate him up them i drop him down. 123 hes done and its not even the final round. you already done or are you ready for more cause theres no way in hell youll stop this god of war. |
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Voted For: Effect
Effects Verse mutha fucker my deadly verse will smash your ass to little peices everyone knows im sick kid you should really start praying for jesus ^ Everyone knows your sick?...u gotta prove it...this opener = Self-G NO you fuckin penis steppin up to me i can say you def have the ballz but when ya got into this battle you know dat u bitch is gonna fall! ^ Meh...no punch 1st line a lil SG too basic not hard hittng ya must think ya biggy smalls your to damn played a bitch ass made ya to soft to beat me better start digging a grave wid ur mummas spade ^ rhyming aight...punch meh Biggie reference hmm...meh better then the 1st 2 this fat bitch is bigger den sunamie tidal waves shit your just deprived why the hell are you alive if you were dieing nobody would av ya revived ^ better punch this time Tsunami shit though i thinks too soon cuz you are damn wirthless what the hell is your fucking perpous if you were famous dumass I think you would turn hip hop into a circous ^ Aight again rhymin aight this prolly best so far ha kiss the crack on my ass and I burn through your fuckin ass can't wait till your burned ur family will be disturbed when im chuckin ash ^ Diss aight but boo @ the kiss the crack of ya ass reference...sounds homo i'll give your ass fear you must think your as good as shakespear i'll lodge spears in ya back and when you scream im'a rip of your ears ^ Rhyming aight but connection was flawed...ears ref woulda been suited better for Van Gough why don't ya end yourself cuz im already destroying ya health don't ever judge me cuz my flow will lyrically strangle ya self ^ SG...NO see you in hell bitch you can't rhyme fuck you and snort glue sticks I take pleasure it slappin dip sticks n stabbin my dick into his gfs clit ^ Flow messed up here diss meh...not feelin this one don't even spit I bet your prob gonna prewrite your not gettin anywhere you can't get back on track when i snap ya back no one would care ^ Flow fell off here too this bar sounds like this one Quote:
IMO anyway seems repetative im leaving you in dispair my multies got ya ass cimbing trees your skill has been killed so will you go hang ur self please ^ No diss jus sayin u dope he's not meh this fuckin fake ass prevokin bitch ass i'll leave you chokin ive had enough of makin ya shakin im leavin ya blood sokin ^Closer...2nd line no diss more concentrated on rhyming um...no diss really it's jus what you claim to have done Overall Good in few parts Effects verse had aight flow which fell off in parts not many strong disses 0% personals...still need improving dawg but ya showing it now at least a lil Lyrical Mages' Verse yo this man probably sweatin cause i gave him half an hour. hes sweatin like a dansel in distress in a fucking tower ^ No...you need to come fresher than that dawg i dont to use a spell just blast you with my tech this man doesnt have tyme fo his skills to come in full effect. ^ Name flip but bar was meh... i levitate him up them i drop him down. 123 hes done and its not even the final round. ^ LOL played man no no no you already done or are you ready for more cause theres no way in hell youll stop this god of war. ^ No diss no punch...meh closer Overall Still got a lot to learn...battles ain't gangsta rap...learn off the readings off some more known people up in here to get an understanding how text battles work V/Effect...but this wasn't a winning verse...jus took advantage of a newb...get better. |
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Voted For: Effect
Alright Effect won this battle with ease, the other kid didn't have anything on him. Thats all I'm going to say on this battle delete this if you think its not explained but the other kid needs to elevate like mad. Sinner ~ u need to up your game up again your verse really wasn't all that your lucky u battled a newb thats all I'm gonna say. Vote ~ Effect |
Voted For: Effect
i think effect won because he had good vocab really hard hittin punches good structure good multis and a great opener lyrical mage u had good structure u need a lil work on ur vocab u had a pretty good opener u had some good punches overall both battles were alright effect favorite lines: this fat bitch is bigger den sunamie tidal waves shit your just deprived why the hell are you alive if you were dieing nobody would av ya revived cuz you are damn wirthless what the hell is your fucking perpous if you were famous dumass I think you would turn hip hop into a circous ha kiss the crack on my ass and I burn through your fuckin ass can't wait till your burned ur family will be disturbed when im chuckin ash i'll give your ass fear you must think your as good as shakespear i'll lodge spears in ya back and when you scream im'a rip of your ears why don't ya end yourself cuz im already destroying ya health don't ever judge me cuz my flow will lyrically strangle ya self lyrical mage favorite lines: i dont to use a spell just blast you with my tech this man doesnt have tyme fo his skills to come in full effect. i levitate him up them i drop him down. 123 hes done and its not even the final round. |
alrite lets get this battle closed thanks for the votes so far...
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Voted For: Effect
dude no hate but these 2 verses are so basic you could tell this was noob battle from ya first line. Reason im voting for you is becasue you have a longer verse which gave you more disses eventhough they werent hard hitting.......dawg both of ya'll need to learn more n structure ya punches better, I mean get some decent concepts going and youll be off k. peace! |
ok..... upping for 1 more vote and lmao at you ive got more skill den you'll ever have in a life time.
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Voted For: Effect
lol dis kid spit a million lines...aneway dis was a wun sided battle...lyrical u came with nothin in ya verse...but a decent structure...and effect i seen a couple of played punches u still pulled dis wun out with a win.... opener-eff structure-lyrical punchlines-eff creativity-nun personals-lyrical finisher-eff enjoyed-eff nuff said |
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