9th Degree vs J DOT
 

Battle Rules:
10-25 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Biting
No D/R
3-0 = KO

1 DAY CHECK 1 DAY DROP

Minimum posts to vote: 250

Check in by: 04-12-05 at 08:09 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-12-05 07:44 PM.

9th Degree has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-12-05 07:51 PM.

10-25? Lol I'm doing 12 at the most, but I'll key it up in a little bit since you're not on right now.

GL. Finally.


I read ya other battle, tha herbs you face stay old
They compare 9th Degree to being hot(burnt), when 9 degrees is cold
Even if I had tha wackest lines, I would get merits still
Cause 9th degree riding my dick like a Ferris wheel
I scare and kill, You don’t elevate cause yo thread gets replies
Cause only side ya record will escalade, is on the right side
You could “B COMING” for me, and still wouldn’t “ROCK” me “FELLA”*
I’ma wait til tha end of my sentence’, before I ‘DOT’ ya fella
Go acapella….Fuck a limelight, ya bulb ran out
1,000 gay dudes in a crowd, and 9th would still stand out
I don’t wana cope wit ya skills… I scope and kill
I could be robbed for my “drugs” and be tha 'dope'st still


*"B Coming" -Beanie Sigel Album 'Rock'a'Fella' Records


Vote honest plz. I'll return, just leave a link....

I could go on and on about who you're worse than
But you're ahead of 9th...'cuz you always talk in the 3rd person
So you're the only one who says "J's hot", but thug shit is played, Dot
Runnin' up your bar tab is the only time you take shots
Get breaked off, acceptin' this battle you shoulda been cautious
'Cuz the best checks you get are at the welfare office
Deny you're a Shawn Carter d/r, but it's plain to see
That while you wanna be Jay your verses make us all Z...


Wow, talk about being slept on, but I'll tell you what you need to shine
Nah, matter of fact, just learn to read between the lines

They're probably all about battles, losing makes him a teary kid
Watch him get mad, 'cuz even his name tell us he's on the period

Uppin' already, let's get some votes people...word.

Voted For: 9th Degree

damn...nice battle both of you...liked both of ya'lls

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Voted For: 9th Degree

9th degree took this battle his verse had better punchlines and structure both of your verses were pretty good but 9th degree came out on top jay dot did good aswell but this battle was pretty weak im'a have to vote for 9th degree return the favour please

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Blah, upping for some explained votes, none of this dumpy crap.

Word...Uppin for explained votes....

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Fuck....uppin this shit........................this is sad.

Voted For: J DOT

J DOT - dope shit, ya structure was a bit fucked wit them stretched lines, but ya flow was still on point!!! vocab was nice shit, u had some funny lines, personals were on form....i liked the opener, that shit was clever and funny!!! the ferris wheel line was gay....not feelin it...but i think that it was the only downer to ure verse.....nice wordplay n shit in there, just get more creative and try not to drop them gay ass lines!!! overall...7.5/10

9th Degree - ure flow was on point but like J DOT ya had a fucked structure. u had some gud hard hittin punches with some nice personals but like J Dot ya had times when ya came weak. ya opener wasn't all that gud and ure closer was just weak to, it was a nice attempt with the quote but i think ya cud've worked the punch better...ure wordplay was aight, the best part of ya verse was the read between the lines bar even tho that has been done before. u to need to get more creative with ya punches to but both dropped nice shit!!!

V/ - J Dot

This was feedback posted for J DOT
 

nice battle, checking polls.........................

This was feedback posted for 9th Degree
 

meh, dont really feel like voting, sorry, lol....prett good battle, both came with some decent lines.....i dont understand your (jdot) escalade line though

Voted For: J DOT

This was pretty much j dot, cuz he had much more creative lines, and more punches...
9th degree was way to basic in my opinion, jdot was kinda basic but betta than 9th.
i liked the last few lines of J's thats what won it for me

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checkn polls...can't vote..............................

Voted For: J DOT

j dot

I read ya other battle, tha herbs you face stay old
They compare 9th Degree to being hot(burnt), when 9 degrees is cold
^^^PRETTY GOOD
Even if I had tha wackest lines, I would get merits still
Cause 9th degree riding my dick like a Ferris wheel
^^^HA HA IIGHT LINE
I scare and kill, You don’t elevate cause yo thread gets replies
Cause only side ya record will escalade, is on the right side
^^^O.K
You could “B COMING” for me, and still wouldn’t “ROCK” me “FELLA”*
I’ma wait til tha end of my sentence’, before I ‘DOT’ ya fella
^^^NICE CREATIVE LINE
Go acapella….Fuck a limelight, ya bulb ran out
1,000 gay dudes in a crowd, and 9th would still stand out
^^^HA GOOD 1
I don’t wana cope wit ya skills… I scope and kill
I could be robbed for my “drugs” and be tha 'dope'st still
^^^NICE CLOSURE

J DOT- I LIKED UR VERSE IT WUZ VERY CREATIVE AND THE PUNCHES HIT HARD. I LIKED UR STRUCTURE AND GOOD WORD CHOICE. UR PERSONALS WERE HITTIN WHICH WUZ ALSO GOOD. I LIKED HOW U ELEVATED IN THIS BATTLE TO REALLY TRY N MURK UR OPPONENT.
8.5/10

9TH DEGREE

I could go on and on about who you're worse than
But you're ahead of 9th...'cuz you always talk in the 3rd person
^^O.K
So you're the only one who says "J's hot", but thug shit is played, Dot
Runnin' up your bar tab is the only time you take shots
^^ HA HA REAL NICE LINE
Get breaked off, acceptin' this battle you shoulda been cautious
'Cuz the best checks you get are at the welfare office
^^^ NICE 1
Deny you're a Shawn Carter d/r, but it's plain to see
That while you wanna be Jay your verses make us all Z...
^^^ IIGHT


*snore* ...huh, what? oh, sorry bout that.

Wow, talk about being slept on, but I'll tell you what you need to shine

you're wack
Nah, matter of fact, just learn to read between the lines
^^^WEAK CLOSURE

9TH DEGREE- THIS WUZ A REAL CLOSE BATTLE. I LIKED UR VERSE ALOT 9TH. THERE WERE MANY PUNCHES AND PERSONALS. UR STRUCTURE WUZ STR8 SO I CUD READ IT EASY. OVERALL U JUS NEED 2 ELEVATE A LITTLE BIT MO DATZ ALL 8/10

REAL CLOSE BATTLE
NO HATE 2 NO1

V/J DOT

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WTF? Why does J Dot even have 1 vote? "9 degree is cold" lines are played as fuck, been used against me in damn near every battle. Gay lines...don't even get me started on the gay lines. And self-glory is crap also.

That wasn't even my closer, dumbshit.

^ lyrical mastermind does not know how to vote, thats why..........

Voted For: 9th Degree

I read ya other battle, tha herbs you face stay old
They compare 9th Degree to being hot(burnt), when 9 degrees is cold
nah...really weak sorry
Even if I had tha wackest lines, I would get merits still
Cause 9th degree riding my dick like a Ferris wheel
weak simile cuz it doesnt really make sense, the line is like sayin ferris wheels ride dicks which idk
I scare and kill, You don’t elevate cause yo thread gets replies
Cause only side ya record will escalade, is on the right side
same...weak
You could “B COMING” for me, and still wouldn’t “ROCK” me “FELLA”*
I’ma wait til tha end of my sentence’, before I ‘DOT’ ya fella
better then the others
Go acapella….Fuck a limelight, ya bulb ran out
1,000 gay dudes in a crowd, and 9th would still stand out
...
I don’t wana cope wit ya skills… I scope and kill
I could be robbed for my “drugs” and be tha 'dope'st still
weak but better then last line


I could go on and on about who you're worse than
But you're ahead of 9th...'cuz you always talk in the 3rd person
descent opener
So you're the only one who says "J's hot", but thug shit is played, Dot
Runnin' up your bar tab is the only time you take shots
lol...good better
Get breaked off, acceptin' this battle you shoulda been cautious
'Cuz the best checks you get are at the welfare office
another good one
Deny you're a Shawn Carter d/r, but it's plain to see
That while you wanna be Jay your verses make us all Z...
great personal i liked this punch a lot...
Wow, talk about being slept on, but I'll tell you what you need to shine

you're wack

Nah, matter of fact, just learn to read between the lines
lol good...creative
(last line to the quote)
They're probably all about battles, losing makes him a teary kid
Watch him get mad, 'cuz even his name tell us he's on the period
good closer

overall i think 9th won for sheer harder punches and personals, they were way more creative and all of Jdots lines just felt weak, no hate good luck to both

peace

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wow...the voting on this is pure horrible, anybody who knows good punches and wordplay or has half a brain knows 9th won this easy...amazing...

Shut up hoecup and get off his dick. I already won this anyway. 3-0=KO...So your vote doesnt matter.

lol...im not on his dick, the sad thing is you know he won deep in your head...compare your "wordplay" to his...really deeply compare your personals and punches to his and tell me he didnt win so i could understand how much you lie

Voted For: 9th Degree

I read ya other battle, tha herbs you face stay old
They compare 9th Degree to being hot(burnt), when 9 degrees is cold
Blah...didn't flow good...6/10
Even if I had tha wackest lines, I would get merits still
Cause 9th degree riding my dick like a Ferris wheel
Self Glory = gay....4/10
I scare and kill, You don’t elevate cause yo thread gets replies
Cause only side ya record will escalade, is on the right side
Played...nice attempt though...6/10
You could “B COMING” for me, and still wouldn’t “ROCK” me “FELLA”*
I’ma wait til tha end of my sentence’, before I ‘DOT’ ya fella
Fella...fella...?....no.....3/10
Go acapella….Fuck a limelight, ya bulb ran out
1,000 gay dudes in a crowd, and 9th would still stand out
Would that make him straight then? Worded wrong...4/10
I don’t wana cope wit ya skills… I scope and kill
I could be robbed for my “drugs” and be tha 'dope'st still
Self glory again....4/10

27/60




I could go on and on about who you're worse than
But you're ahead of 9th...'cuz you always talk in the 3rd person
good peronal, pretty funny...6/10
So you're the only one who says "J's hot", but thug shit is played, Dot
Runnin' up your bar tab is the only time you take shots
good punch...nice meta...8/10
Get breaked off, acceptin' this battle you shoulda been cautious
'Cuz the best checks you get are at the welfare office
Eh...5/10
Deny you're a Shawn Carter d/r, but it's plain to see
That while you wanna be Jay your verses make us all Z...


*snore* ...huh, what? oh, sorry bout that.

This was fuckin' hilarious....9/10

Wow, talk about being slept on, but I'll tell you what you need to shine

you're wack
Nah, matter of fact, just learn to read between the lines
Now...that's original...good punch...8/10

Quote:
Originally Posted by J Dot, in reference to strobe
I send him about 3-4 PM's a week.


They're probably all about battles, losing makes him a teary kid
Watch him get mad, 'cuz even his name tell us he's on the period
Good name play....6/10

42/60


One sided battle...9th took it with better thought out punches. J Dot your verse had to much Self Glory and the one punch was pretty played. Seen way better out of you...no hate..

9th your verse was fuckin' hilarious...nice drop..

v/9th Degree

I give it 30 seconds before Dot complains about that. But he has good reasons...

1. Red Bull kicked him out of TE
2. J Dot's just wack like that

LyricalMa$tamind missed a line in his breakdown on 9th's verse too..

Voted For: J DOT

This battle was mad wack but I think JDOT took it. No hate to you 9th Degree, I just felt your structure was way too stretched for me, and I felt your flow was way off in this one. JDOT, not all your punches were good, they couldve been a lot better, but I'ma say you took this one because of consistency and good wordplay. 9th Degree, your rhyming was a lil off in this one. You should work on that, but other than that, I felt your drop was pretty descent, but I'ma have to stick with JDOT in this one. I think he took it.

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I feel u, wen my name was Woody i always got refered to tha toy from tha movie, it got annoying and played quick, but it seemd that everyone was likin them...i guess if it sounds good or makes sense, d/rs and newbs feed of that shit...

so basically, i feel where ur coming from[/COLOR]

Voted For: 9th Degree

I read ya other battle, tha herbs you face stay old
They compare 9th Degree to being hot(burnt), when 9 degrees is cold
weak rhymin..... second line stretched..... arent we feelin alil newbish today
Even if I had tha wackest lines, I would get merits still
Cause 9th degree riding my dick like a Ferris wheel
he rides ur dick in a circular motion? lol, huh???? bar was ok, but if all u meant was that people ride dicks and ferris wheels, than it was kinda wack...
I scare and kill, You don’t elevate cause yo thread gets replies
Cause only side ya record will escalade, is on the right side
hah, this was decent...... u gotta lay off the one syllable rhymin tho
You could “B COMING” for me, and still wouldn’t “ROCK” me “FELLA”*
I’ma wait til tha end of my sentence’, before I ‘DOT’ ya fella
haha, prolly ur best bar, but it wasnt that good
Go acapella….Fuck a limelight, ya bulb ran out
1,000 gay dudes in a crowd, and 9th would still stand out
yea..... hmmmmmmm...... i dont know wat to say about this line
I don’t wana cope wit ya skills… I scope and kill
I could be robbed for my “drugs” and be tha 'dope'st still
ok multies..... but 50 cent can come up with this type of line... not a good closer at all in my eye.... would be ok in the middle of the verse, but not here

9th Degree:

I could go on and on about who you're worse than
But you're ahead of 9th...'cuz you always talk in the 3rd person
haha.... this was kinda funny, but almost glorifyin him.... u should sed "ONLY cuz u talk"
So you're the only one who says "J's hot", but thug shit is played, Dot
Runnin' up your bar tab is the only time you take shots
good multies, but not a very good punch
Get breaked off, acceptin' this battle you shoulda been cautious
'Cuz the best checks you get are at the welfare office
hah.... ok line, alteast made more sense than alotta J's line
Deny you're a Shawn Carter d/r, but it's plain to see
That while you wanna be Jay your verses make us all Z...
OMGOMGOMGOMG..... killed the battle right there!!! lol, this won u it hands down to me
Wow, talk about being slept on, but I'll tell you what you need to shine
you're wack
Nah, matter of fact, just learn to read between the lines
haha, this was really creative and funny, lol
They're probably all about battles, losing makes him a teary kid
Watch him get mad, 'cuz even his name tell us he's on the period
hahah..... alot better closer, HAH

in alll i think this was a onesided battle...... J came really elementary and PLAYed in alotta aspects...... 9th had one or two bad lines, but besides that KIlled J on his last 3 bars.....

v/9th Degree

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Polls...

9th Degree had the better verse in this..

9th Degree got the biggest supply of D/R this site has ever seen. And yo bitch ass cant say you don't. Look how quickly this slept battle got so many votes all for you. Red, you can't vote in this one. Fux, that's a hate vote, and I meant to blacklist you a while back you homo slut. But, I ain't even trippin off this shit.

Voted For: 9th Degree

one sided..but i guess i'll break it down anyways......

J-Dot:

I read ya other battle, tha herbs you face stay old
They compare 9th Degree to being hot(burnt), when 9 degrees is cold
lol..good opener..good play off his name..bad structure tho...8/10
Even if I had tha wackest lines, I would get merits still
Cause 9th degree riding my dick like a Ferris wheel
blah..want feelin that to much...4/10
I scare and kill, You don’t elevate cause yo thread gets replies
Cause only side ya record will escalade, is on the right side
decent...6/10
You could “B COMING” for me, and still wouldn’t “ROCK” me “FELLA”*
I’ma wait til tha end of my sentence’, before I ‘DOT’ ya fella
that was str8..........7.5/10
Go acapella….Fuck a limelight, ya bulb ran out
1,000 gay dudes in a crowd, and 9th would still stand out
decent..heard punches like that before..5/10
I don’t wana cope wit ya skills… I scope and kill
I could be robbed for my “drugs” and be tha 'dope'st still
good closer...8/10

overall-38.5/60

9th Degree:

I could go on and on about who you're worse than
But you're ahead of 9th...'cuz you always talk in the 3rd person
lol....good opener...9/10...very creative
So you're the only one who says "J's hot", but thug shit is played, Dot
Runnin' up your bar tab is the only time you take shots
Decent...6/10
Get breaked off, acceptin' this battle you shoulda been cautious
'Cuz the best checks you get are at the welfare office
lol...that was crazy...9/10
Deny you're a Shawn Carter d/r, but it's plain to see
That while you wanna be Jay your verses make us all Z...
nice personal....8/10
Wow, talk about being slept on, but I'll tell you what you need to shine
you're wack
Nah, matter of fact, just learn to read between the lines
decent...7/10
They're probably all about battles, losing makes him a teary kid
Watch him get mad, 'cuz even his name tell us he's on the period
Average closer..heard bars like this before..6/10

Overall-45/60

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Lol guess this shit got re-opened. Uppin' for votes.

Sad how you turned everyone against me on a internet site. I thought we were coo. uppin this shit.

Voted For: J DOT

V/J Dot.......this was a good battle by both.....9th came wit some good lines the jay....z one was hot but u came to lightly in ur openin sentences u had sum played punchs that weren't that creative in the beggin but at the end u came wit some fire but it was enough to me for the win....J dot came wit strong punchs that consistently hit an he had good personals an vocab wit structure that was on point....NO HATE......RETURN THE FAVOR......
Opener=J
Closer=9th
Structure=TIe
Punchs=J
Vocab=J
Personals=J
Multi's=Tie(Not many)
Overall=J DOT

Voted For: 9th Degree

I like this battle...good battle good battle...

9 had the "Oh" factor with the sleepin line...that was nice...

jdot came hard but Im not voting just giving some feed...

keep it up both...im so bored I dont even think i'll vote...lol

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