Escolayde vs SUPERVILLAIN
 

Battle Rules:

10 - 16 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

...goodluck.


s.v. the tyrant



Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 04-13-05 at 10:53 AM

Must drop verse in 25 minutes after check in.

SUPERVILLAIN has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-13-05 10:24 AM.

Escolayde has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-13-05 10:36 AM.

esco...

your verse is sooo weak..................your alias will vote for mine
s.v.'s sneezin' cokehead rhymes blow away your dopest lines
none of your keys work for us.......you must use faulty locksmiths
you seem dedicated to 'wrappin', amid talk of measurin' cock width

no need to throw a personal...........your record speaks for itself
"R.V. PUT ME OUT OF MY MISERY.......PLEASE PITY ME..........HELP!!!"
casual vet???.........your loss record looks like our national debt
factual text!!!.........this pussy gets fucked more than vaginal sex

saigon is a shithole................you signed up for a 'tour of doody'
send you to hell, so when you elevate.........its to a sewer with dookie
crhyme calls your type 'liquor ears', 'cuz all y'all hear is 'BOOOZE!!!'
you bore rappers to death daily......maybe we should fear ya crew

you deny any dickridin'..........yet you squeel when you saddle sacks
buckshot as escalade??? *swipe* you took the 'ill' out of 'cadillac'
bet i change this fuck...........i have common cents to break this buck
dont blame da punk, he was sonned like a bitch 'cuz he was raised as such


...the supervillain of crhyme...

how this kid gonna claim the godafther of Cryhme?
not one arrest, he prolly shittin bricks if he had ta do time
check his rhyme, fat bitch so hungry he literally ''bites the paper''
only time this bum ''servin'' is gettin a job as a 'Waitor'
i aint a hater, but ya whole crew is Overrated
fake thug, only time you ''see shots'' is all over the paper
...........................................when celebrities dated!!!
look what fate-did, we was always gonna collide an do This..
outcomes inevitable, u get more ''kicks'' from chicks than K-Swiss!
this like MTV Dismissed, an you 1st ta be Evicted
Dude loves RV n its ''lines'' like a dope fiend Addicted
spends so much time here, his IP is a Known Number
his crew died months ago, he still trynna run things...
.....that makes syndicut dumb, an this dude dumber!
ya raps stand out like hummers, an for all the wrong Reasons..
i'ma leave u ''rite where u stand''....
...like college kids not gettin ''drafted'' in the off-season!!

^^^UPPIN' FOR SOME LEGIT/EXPLAINED VOTES!!!^^^

esco...
nice drop mayne. *shakes hands.* i guess now our little beef is over, lol. hold it down.


...the super...

Voted For: Escolayde

Esco had ad wordplay in this and his punchlines just beat supervillain this battle was pretty close and think both verses were pretty hot but esco had alot better punchlines and he won this so im'a vote Esco return the favour please for my battle

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

^^^your a clown.

UPPIN' FOR LEGIT VOTES!!!


s.v.

Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

meh, i liked supers more

super villain, haha, i laughed out loud at some of your lines, which is good, thought you had more clever disses, more creative....and thats why your getting my vote, because in the end, they hit harder...and you kept it consistent, and didnt see really any played shit, cept the first line kinda was

quotables
crhyme calls your type 'liquor ears', 'cuz all y'all hear is 'BOOOZE!!!'
you bore rappers to death daily......maybe we should fear ya crew
you deny any dickridin'..........yet you squeel when you saddle sacks
buckshot as escalade??? *swipe* you took the 'ill' out of 'cadillac'
bet i change this fuck...........i have common cents to break this buck
dont blame da punk, he was sonned like a bitch 'cuz he was raised as such

esco...meh, your verse was just too basic, had good structure and e-thing, but nothing really stood out ya know....couple played lines, like the waiter line and the addicted one....but everything else was just average, and sv came out with some clever stuff........the line that had me laughing was....

quotables
spends so much time here, his IP is a Known Number
his crew died months ago, he still trynna run things...
.....that makes syndicut dumb, an this dude dumber!
^ little stretched, but i thought it was good..haha

meh, thought sv took this one with harder punhces/personals, more creative and clever ones....word

v/sv...rtf in the sig if you get a chance

This was feedback posted for Escolayde
 

Checking in on the score so far 2 see whos winning.

Yo SV, Nice drop man, not had much chance ta upp this

an i am sorry for the ''Effect'' vote, he a clown ass nigga voting for me in every battle, i asked strobe ta remove his vote from uhmmm...EVERY BATTLE LMAO...

Anyway, good luck dawg, this was never beef between us, i just wanted ta direct some rhymes at u cause your known an it made people take note an read some O.M's.....should be a real close battle, uppin this yall..

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...the supe duper wun

lol ....thinks he won

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Voted For: Escolayde

Checkin the poll's U got him esco .....LS....Chea Chea famz....

Removed

lol damn my bad i voted it was suppose to be feed back lol i 'll get it removed...

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my verse was flame fucker...........so dont even try it. :thumbup:


s.v. amused

LOL
You think i did that?...i asked him ta vote???????LOL, Get the hell on wit that...

i dont play like that, i am NO cheater

who the fuck said you cheated??? lol. paranoid??? j/p.

my response was to that other cat (the l.s. guy). i just didnt like how he jumped in here wolfin' shit. dont get me wrong........you got down.......but all dude was trying to do was sway votes by saying "esco, you got this one easy", lol. all i said back was that i know that i spit flame, period. its no biggy though.......im not trippin'. lets get these muthafuckin' votes in already.

^^^UUUPPPPPPIIINNN'''!!!^^^


...the supe duper wun......c.s....

Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

Esco:

how this kid gonna claim the godafther of Cryhme?
not one arrest, he prolly shittin bricks if he had ta do time
^^no 2/10
check his rhyme, fat bitch so hungry he literally ''bites the paper''
only time this bum ''servin'' is gettin a job as a 'Waitor'
^^decent meta 4/10
i aint a hater, but ya whole crew is Overrated
fake thug, only time you ''see shots'' is all over the paper
...........................................when celebrities dated!!!
^^stretched as fuck 2/10
look what fate-did, we was always gonna collide an do This..
outcomes inevitable, u get more ''kicks'' from chicks than K-Swiss!
^^good bar 6/10
this like MTV Dismissed, an you 1st ta be Evicted
Dude loves RV n its ''lines'' like a dope fiend Addicted
^^ehh 3/10
spends so much time here, his IP is a Known Number
his crew died months ago, he still trynna run things...
.....that makes syndicut dumb, an this dude dumber!
^^stretched 0/10
ya raps stand out like hummers, an for all the wrong Reasons..
i'ma leave u ''rite where u stand''....
...like college kids not gettin ''drafted'' in the off-season!!
^^stretched but decent 4/10

Overall: 21/70 (30%)

Supervillian:

your verse is sooo weak..................your alias will vote for mine
s.v.'s sneezin' cokehead rhymes blow away your dopest lines
^^decent set up wack punch 3/10
none of your keys work for us.......you must use faulty locksmiths
you seem dedicated to 'wrappin', amid talk of measurin' cock width
^^ehh 4/10
no need to throw a personal...........your record speaks for itself
"R.V. PUT ME OUT OF MY MISERY.......PLEASE PITY ME..........HELP!!!"
^^no 2/10
casual vet???.........your loss record looks like our national debt
factual text!!!.........this pussy gets fucked more than vaginal sex
^^dope bar 9/10
saigon is a shithole................you signed up for a 'tour of doody'
send you to hell, so when you elevate.........its to a sewer with dookie
^^lol 5/10
crhyme calls your type 'liquor ears', 'cuz all y'all hear is 'BOOOZE!!!'
you bore rappers to death daily......maybe we should fear ya crew
^^good bar 7/10
you deny any dickridin'..........yet you squeel when you saddle sacks
buckshot as escalade??? *swipe* you took the 'ill' out of 'cadillac'
^^decent 4/10
bet i change this fuck...........i have common cents to break this buck
dont blame da punk, he was sonned like a bitch 'cuz he was raised as such
^^decent 5/10

Overall: 39/80 (49&)

Vote: SV

blah ^
tired ah this dude LOL..

zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz, 2 ta SV, Expected it ta be closer, but whatever, still uppin this..

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Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

daaaaaaaaaaaayum son lol calm down. that verse was fire , i usually don't ever say that but ya shit was on point nah mean.u took thi sbattle fa sho. your punches were killin especially that bar wit his record bein like our national debt, that shit was hard, my fav bar of the battle. u had some decent multies and flow alos. Those punches are what killed i. wasn't feelin thatpersonal too much it seemed kinda forced but erething else was straight.
i wasn't feelin tephlons verse as much it didnt seem very fluid. alot of stuff in there wasn't really hittin hard n it was a couple chunks of filler.no multies or real creative wordplay from tephlon this time. so Supervillain gets my vote
RETURN THE FAVOR links are in the SIG holla at me...1..

This was feedback posted for SUPERVILLAIN
 

your verse is sooo weak..................your alias will vote for mine
s.v.'s sneezin' cokehead rhymes blow away your dopest lines
none of your keys work for us.......you must use faulty locksmiths
you seem dedicated to 'wrappin', amid talk of measurin' cock width
NICE MAYNE

no need to throw a personal...........your record speaks for itself
"R.V. PUT ME OUT OF MY MISERY.......PLEASE PITY ME..........HELP!!!"
casual vet???.........your loss record looks like our national debt
factual text!!!.........this pussy gets fucked more than vaginal sex
NICE

saigon is a shithole................you signed up for a 'tour of doody'
send you to hell, so when you elevate.........its to a sewer with dookie
crhyme calls your type 'liquor ears', 'cuz all y'all hear is 'BOOOZE!!!'
you bore rappers to death daily......maybe we should fear ya crew
DIDNT CATCH MY EYES

you deny any dickridin'..........yet you squeel when you saddle sacks
buckshot as escalade??? *swipe* you took the 'ill' out of 'cadillac'
bet i change this fuck...........i have common cents to break this buck
dont blame da punk, he was sonned like a bitch 'cuz he was raised as such
NICE

how this kid gonna claim the godafther of Cryhme?
not one arrest, he prolly shittin bricks if he had ta do time
NICE
check his rhyme, fat bitch so hungry he literally ''bites the paper''
only time this bum ''servin'' is gettin a job as a 'Waitor'
NO
i aint a hater, but ya whole crew is Overrated
fake thug, only time you ''see shots'' is all over the paper
...........................................when celebrities dated!!!
NONO
look what fate-did, we was always gonna collide an do This..
outcomes inevitable, u get more ''kicks'' from chicks than K-Swiss!
NICE
this like MTV Dismissed, an you 1st ta be Evicted
Dude loves RV n its ''lines'' like a dope fiend Addicted
NO
spends so much time here, his IP is a Known Number
his crew died months ago, he still trynna run things...
.....that makes syndicut dumb, an this dude dumber!
IIGHT
ya raps stand out like hummers, an for all the wrong Reasons..
i'ma leave u ''rite where u stand''....
...like college kids not gettin ''drafted'' in the off-season!!
IIGHT

NICE MAN KEEP IT TRILL MAN

BUT MY VOTE IS GOING TO HAVE TO GO TO SUPER BECAUSE HE WAS ON TOP

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=187638
Hey sense i hit yo shit up do u think u can return tha favor and explain yo vote

uppin............................................. ..

^^^UUUPPPPPPIIINNN'''!!!!!!!!!^^^


...the super duper......c.s.

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s.v. exhausted

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This was feedback posted for SUPERVILLAIN
 

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^^^UUUPPPPPPIIINNN'''!!!^^^


s.v............c.s.

Voted For: SUPERVILLAIN

SUPERVILLAINS verse

your verse is sooo weak..................your alias will vote for mine
s.v.'s sneezin' cokehead rhymes blow away your dopest lines
^ drug punch it was aight opener could be better

none of your keys work for us.......you must use faulty locksmiths
you seem dedicated to 'wrappin', amid talk of measurin' cock width
^ good bar i liked the punch

no need to throw a personal...........your record speaks for itself
"R.V. PUT ME OUT OF MY MISERY.......PLEASE PITY ME..........HELP!!!"
^ lol good bar personal used

casual vet???.........your loss record looks like our national debt
factual text!!!.........this pussy gets fucked more than vaginal sex
^ dayum good rhyming personal punch good good


saigon is a shithole................you signed up for a 'tour of doody'
send you to hell, so when you elevate.........its to a sewer with dookie
^ good punch

crhyme calls your type 'liquor ears', 'cuz all y'all hear is 'BOOOZE!!!'
you bore rappers to death daily......maybe we should fear ya crew
^ lol good punch/peronal

you deny any dickridin'..........yet you squeel when you saddle sacks
buckshot as escalade??? *swipe* you took the 'ill' out of 'cadillac'
^ lol decent bar this was perhaps my fav in this verse

bet i change this fuck...........i have common cents to break this buck
dont blame da punk, he was sonned like a bitch 'cuz he was raised as such
^ dayum...good closer

Escolaydes verse

how this kid gonna claim the godafther of Cryhme?
not one arrest, he prolly shittin bricks if he had ta do time
^ meh good attempt at punch but not as effective

check his rhyme, fat bitch so hungry he literally ''bites the paper''
only time this bum ''servin'' is gettin a job as a 'Waitor'
^ good bar i liked this one

i aint a hater, but ya whole crew is Overrated
fake thug, only time you ''see shots'' is all over the paper
...........................................when celebrities dated!!!
^ 3 line bar = hiding stretched line...punch ok

look what fate-did, we was always gonna collide an do This..
outcomes inevitable, u get more ''kicks'' from chicks than K-Swiss!
^ nice punch

this like MTV Dismissed, an you 1st ta be Evicted
Dude loves RV n its ''lines'' like a dope fiend Addicted
^ meh not as good as previous bar

spends so much time here, his IP is a Known Number
his crew died months ago, he still trynna run things...
.....that makes syndicut dumb, an this dude dumber!
3 line bar stretched and punch/personal not hard hitting

ya raps stand out like hummers, an for all the wrong Reasons..
i'ma leave u ''rite where u stand''....
...like college kids not gettin ''drafted'' in the off-season!!
^ again 3 liners stretched closer...good closer though

Overall
I think that SUPERVILLAIN got this battle because i feel that SUPERVILLAIN came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt SUPERVILLAIN got it was effective and was on point Tephlon you should of been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to SUPERVILLAIN good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to SUPERVILLAIN and flow and structure i'll give to SUPERVILLAIN.

V/SUPERVILLAIN RTF In My Sig 3 days or vote removed

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