Kesse vs mizz fyre
 

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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 04-14-05 at 02:46 PM

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Kesse has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-13-05 02:47 PM.

mizz fyre has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-13-05 02:47 PM.

only chick not to post pics...but like your rhymes, wouldnt be worth a peep
think your shit is interestin, ya right!...... your own names fallin asleep
a womans touch on RV? just too much, coming at me with punches covered in silk
wanna stand out as a femcee, how bout i shit in your tits you can make chocolate milk
ya poorly built, pound ya with silt, my flow breaks right through dividing this dike
somethin smells fishy, fyre concealin weapons b/n her legs like shes hiding a pike
hold your tongue, leave you hung, like braless titties, you're lyrically saggon
i wouldnt be braggin, name says fyre, yah only because your on the ground dragon
bash this slut, slash her gut, she'll be needin someone to de'liver' stitchin
the only time you should be stirrin up raps is when you cooking in the kitchen
this dame aint playing no one, 4 wins but your still just a rook at tha game
cause youve already told RV aint winning this, just take a look at your name
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7th - 8th lines, played off crew name if you didn't get it.....if you dont get anything else, dont vote :)....word....no offense to ya m.fyre...gl

Open battle?, you came quick, but your click just can’t pick
Clear from your rhymes, unlike your avatar you can’t “be sick”
Family links? wackness got me thinking you and Red Bulls related
Coz both seem to be backward just like the place that your located
To “picture” a “perfect” win is impossible like your next front line
Established? A crew based on quantity, coz half this board easily got signed
My talent you can’t find, in your name kesse “seeks” to acquire my skill
But it ain’t contagious and so battling me would never make you “ill”
Fill your lines, face it your less than me, you can’t run “solo K”
Coz today I’m taken this battle, make you wanna hide your record away

lol aight vote it up ya'll.........................

not a bad drop m.f.............upppin.....VOTE hoes

^^^lol you came sick wit it......anyways up..............

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Voted For: Kesse

Open battle?, you came quick, but your click just can’t pick
Clear from your rhymes, unlike your avatar you can’t “be sick”
-Meh ok punch w/ a personal.


Family links? wackness got me thinking you and Red Bulls related
Coz both seem to be backward just like the place that your located
-Weak punch, non effective.


To “picture” a “perfect” win is impossible like your next front line
Established? A crew based on quantity, coz half this board easily got signed
-Personal and a decent punch.


My talent you can’t find, in your name kesse “seeks” to acquire my skill
But it ain’t contagious and so battling me would never make you “ill”
-Good punch.


Fill your lines, face it your less than me, you can’t run “solo K”
Coz today I’m taken this battle, make you wanna hide your record away
-Meh weak closer

Mizz fyre, somthing tells me you do more than topicals battles than text. Your punches were weak, the personals you had was good, but the punches were weak. You started off weak, then 2 bars of your verse had some decent punches, but then you fell throughout to the closer.




only chick not to post pics...but like your rhymes, wouldnt be worth a peep
think your shit is interestin, ya right!...... your own names fallin asleep
-Lol nice personal with a good punch


a womans touch on RV? just too much, coming at me with punches covered in silk
wanna stand out as a femcee, how bout i shit in your tits you can make chocolate milk
-Ok punch


ya poorly built, pound ya with silt, my flow breaks right through dividing this dike
somethin smells fishy, fyre concealin weapons b/n her legs like shes hiding a pike
-Lol nice punch w/ a wordplay


hold your tongue, leave you hung, like braless titties, you're lyrically saggon
i wouldnt be braggin, name says fyre, yah only because your on the ground dragon
- Meh dont get the 2nd line


bash this slut, slash her gut, she'll be needin someone to de'liver' stitchin
the only time you should be stirrin up raps is when you cooking in the kitchen
- Nice wordplay w/ a punch


this dame aint playing no one, 4 wins but your still just a rook at tha game
cause youve already told RV aint winning this, just take a look at your name
-Good personal with a punch

Kesse, nice punches with wordplays. Personal and turning them into punches were good. Flowed nicly.


Overall=Ok this battle was one-sided, mizz fyre your punches were weak, effective but weak. Flowed nicly though. You had personals but you couldn't "flip" them into good punches. Kesse i felt your punches came harder, you had some personals on 1 line then you flip them into punches, it wasn't weak, shit was effective.

I'm voting for kesse because of harder punches pz

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Voted For: mizz fyre

Kesse flow was straight,some parts coulda been betta though... nice multis and metas, good personals that got you tha vote...

Mizz Fyre I was lookin forward ta seein you come betta than that I seen some of ya battles it's like ya went downhill a bit, elevate...I like tha vocab, much betta than Kesse, but ya flow didn't kill em' off, you have great talent jus pick it up a notch, don't allow ya self ta fall backwards

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I fucked up somehow vote fa Kesse, mah bad fa all tha bullshit that happened, but overall Kesse took that battle hands down

Voted For: Kesse

nice battle here. mizz i liked your seek line,was very creative, but some of your shit has been played out (pic perfect) so this gonna make me go for kesse here. kesses punches hit harder and was good personals, was feelin most of the punches here, no hat

rtf.

This was feedback posted for Kesse
 

Open battle?, you came quick, but your click just can’t pick
Clear from your rhymes, unlike your avatar you can’t “be sick”
Not that good...one word multies are wack too...6/10
Family links? wackness got me thinking you and Red Bulls related
Coz both seem to be backward just like the place that your located
More of a diss to me...but props on the last line...7/10
To “picture” a “perfect” win is impossible like your next front line
Established? A crew based on quantity, coz half this board easily got signed
He isn't in Establishment anymore...so it seems like you prewrote this in my mind.../not dissing him anyways...5/10
My talent you can’t find, in your name kesse “seeks” to acquire my skill
But it ain’t contagious and so battling me would never make you “ill”
Play.../self glory....4/10
Fill your lines, face it your less than me, you can’t run “solo K”
Coz today I’m taken this battle, make you wanna hide your record away
[B]Self glory again....3/10

25/50


eh..........i got lazy and didn't want to break down kesses...i allready told him it was good....just feedback though cause you'll be like that dickriding blah blah ima baby wah wah...shut up now..

Voted For: Kesse

DAt battle is all kesse....

Both flows were pretty koo.....It was like a tie there
Kesse had da personals locked
And kessee held it down with da punches
And plus kesse had more multis
Sick battle....keep it hot ya'll...1

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This was feedback posted for mizz fyre
 

i get it picture perfect. lol...you funny ma 4real...

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Voted For: Kesse

OK KEESE HERE HAD BETTER PUNCHS AND DISSES AND THAT WINAS BATTLES HE KILLED FYRE WITH THE PERSONALS AND PUNCHES HIS SHIT WAS A LIL STRECHED AND FYRE BEAT HIM WITH FLOW WISE BUT PUNCHES AND CREATIVE PERSONALS WIN BATTLES AND KESSE HAD THAT SO VOTE KESSE
RTF ON LINK IN MY SIG BOTH OF YOU

thanks, uppin........i'll try to get to it........

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Voted For: mizz fyre

AWWW Mayne this was the hottest battle ive read in like 4 weeks

Kesse

You Started off nice especailly with that opener but then near the end man it was like you was Jus Enforcing what you said in the begining and i thought that you was gonna siuppky some mad punchez and you let me down that time man ...... But you had some nice personals Def worth reading this battle Dont get mad bcuz I could never beat you or Mizz fyre So thats why I didnt wanna check this battle out from the start.......But yeah you dont need to elevate jus work with what you got until you learn how to use it corretly if you know what i mean ....No Hate man Jus being Honest

Mizz Fyre

Aii Now you Barely edge this battle Out bcuz kesse came with some fire bars near the beging but then he sort of messed himself up near the end but far as your verse goes you came with alot of personals which is a good thang bcuz they was dope ass hell...BUT sometimes I like to see some punchez that make me laugh or jus make me be like .....aw wman I know she didnt jsu say that or he didnt jus say that so .......Yeah maybe you can work on Mixing your personals with your punchez .....Then You would be Better Than You already Are.........Plain And Simple

Hit Up Either battle In The Linx in my sig

Vote switched

Damn I Voted for the wrong Person ......... Hit strobe up And jus tell em to switch it
My bad :help:

Voted For: Kesse

Open battle?, you came quick, but your click just can’t pick
Clear from your rhymes, unlike your avatar you can’t “be sick”
^umm... his avatar is a fish... 1/10.. would be zero but you put a comma after a question mark.. haha
Family links? wackness got me thinking you and Red Bulls related
Coz both seem to be backward just like the place that your located
^Redbull punches are played and so are Canada punches... i mean i guess thats what you were talking about.. but whatever 3/10
To “picture” a “perfect” win is impossible like your next front line
Established? A crew based on quantity, coz half this board easily got signed
^The Establishment punches about how they have a huge roster are played as fuck, i swear i seen 10 of them.. 4/10
My talent you can’t find, in your name kesse “seeks” to acquire my skill
But it ain’t contagious and so battling me would never make you “ill”
^Meh... decent.. 4/10
Fill your lines, face it your less than me, you can’t run “solo K”
Coz today I’m taken this battle, make you wanna hide your record away
^not a very good ender... 4/10

Overall your punches weren't very effective and made little or no sense.. well they made sense but they were played as fuck.. actually they made barely any sense or they were stupid.. work on them punches.. 16/50



only chick not to post pics...but like your rhymes, wouldnt be worth a peep
think your shit is interestin, ya right!...... your own names fallin asleep
^first line was funny, second could have been better, but a decent opener, 6/10
a womans touch on RV? just too much, coming at me with punches covered in silk
wanna stand out as a femcee, how bout i shit in your tits you can make chocolate milk
^hahahahahaha that was by far the funniest thing ever... 9/10 idc what anyone says, that was FUNNY
ya poorly built, pound ya with silt, my flow breaks right through dividing this dike
somethin smells fishy, fyre concealin weapons b/n her legs like shes hiding a pike
^funny too, but a little less effective... 6/10
hold your tongue, leave you hung, like braless titties, you're lyrically saggon
i wouldnt be braggin, name says fyre, yah only because your on the ground dragon
^im pretty sure you already have enough to beat her, but this was alright, 5/10
bash this slut, slash her gut, she'll be needin someone to de'liver' stitchin
the only time you should be stirrin up raps is when you cooking in the kitchen
^meh... i like the whole bash this slut, slash her gut part but the punch wasn't all that effective.. 5/10
this dame aint playing no one, 4 wins but your still just a rook at tha game
cause youve already told RV aint winning this, just take a look at your name
^haha, thats funny too, 6/10

overall it was good, and im givin you some low numbers on there because i've seen better from you... 37/50 i believe nice shit Kesse