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Da King vs Mahatma Ghand
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10- Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 04-16-05 at 05:47 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Da King has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-13-05 05:48 PM.
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Mahatma Ghand has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-13-05 05:50 PM.
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right about now i'm tired of mahatma ghand
i'll put yo face through the fire like chaka khan kill you will lyrics dat wrap tighta den braids wit that verse i bet ali turning around in his grave evn if you walked with mandymoore u wouldn't be saved cuz my Krispy flo's get me Kreme so u might get glazed so please stop thinking that you downing me cause i'm the king you was just holding the crown for me |
You is whack you posted your introduction 4 months eariler no-ones replies still*
Meaning your not ill, couldn't made yourself funny by hurting yourself like knoxville Man your about to face a lyrical defeat,cause your weak, you could never "bring heat"* Your punches are not made of concrete, I'm coming on top, even though i'm posting below your feet* The king of whack must've inheritance the crown to you, you could've never write dope verse If he wins this battle it only means he riding horsebacks, sticking his dick in backbaggs on purpose Da king is so "laid-back" he even brought back "techno" beats to reality* Not only that, you brought a whole new meaning of shitty rhymes... "literally" See lil kiddies he's so dope, right? He's so Hip-Hop, but damn he still can't beat me I've dethrone this kid, tooked away his "lid" couldnt spit nice if he touched a pussy (cat) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=176569 ^^ He makes techno beats http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=169892 ^^ His "introduction verse" (still no one replies for 4 months later) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=183244 ^^ His Open Mic, Bring The heat. He posted his verse 1st, then i posted mines 2nd (below my feet) |
You is whack you posted your introduction 4 months eariler no-ones replies still*
Meaning your not ill, couldn't made yourself funny by hurting yourself like knoxville Man your about to face a lyrical defeat,cause your weak, you could never "bring heat"* Your punches are not made of concrete, I'm coming on top, even though i'm posting below your feet* The king of whack must've inheritance the crown to you, you could've never write dope verse If he wins this battle it only means he riding horsebacks, sticking his dick in backbaggs on purpose Da king is so "laid-back" he even brought back "techno" beats to reality* Not only that, you brought a whole new meaning of shitty rhymes... "literally" See lil kiddies he's so dope, right? He's so Hip-Hop, but damn he still can't beat me I've dethrone this kid, tooked away his "lid" couldnt spit nice if he touched a pussy (cat) *He makes techno beats *He got open mic called "bring the heat" *He made an introduction verse, but it never been replied in 4 months *I'm posting my verse 2nd............(Below his feet) |
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right about now i'm tired of mahatma ghand
i'll put yo face through the fire like chaka khan kill you will lyrics dat wrap tighta den braids wit that verse i bet *ali turning around in his grave evn if you walked with *mandymoore u wouldn't be *saved cuz my *Krispy flo's get me *Kreme so u might get *glazed so please stop thinking that you downing me cause i'm the king you was just holding the crown for me Mahatma Ghand is islamic and ali is who they pray to. Mandy Moore was in a Walk to Remember. Krispy Kreme sells glazed doughnuts. |
right about now i'm tired of mahatma ghand
i'll put yo face through the fire like chaka khan kill you will lyrics dat wrap tighta den braids wit that verse i bet *ali turning around in his grave evn if you walked with *mandymoore u wouldn't be *saved cuz my *Krispy flo's get me *Kreme so u might get *glazed so please stop thinking that you downing me cause i'm the king you was just holding the crown for me Mahatma Ghand is islamic and ali is who they pray to. Mandy Moore was in a Walk to Remember and this movie called Saved. Krispy Kreme sells glazed doughnuts. |
^^ Why you did that?...................Anyway Bump this up. |
Voted For: Da King
checkin pollz...by the way...King won without question... |
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This was feedback posted for Da King
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Voted For: Mahatma Ghand
im giving this to you, mainly because you came with harder punches and your shit wasn't basic, however, your lines are hella stretched and really looks like you're a topical writer....word, other dude, come up with more complex/creative punches, up the wordplay/vocab, just elevate everything and you should be cool v/muhatmaghand....for harder punches |
^^ Alright thanx.............................................
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This was feedback posted for Da King
Da king-He got this just by using words that rhyme an understandable punchez(seem sorta used before?).
This battle didnt really have any good personals,but Ghand did have a lil personals...but..lacked any structure or Shit!!!...Didnt rhyme doggz..Hah!! Best line-*so please stop thinking that you downing me cause i'm the king you was just holding the crown for me* (only cuz Playa Fly said somethan real close to it!?!) Hah!!! Fuck a vote!!!!..this is FeedBack!! Keep elevatin..both of yallz...cuz this battle couldve been better!!! |
Voted For: Mahatma Ghand
Wow Im Enjtoying this one sided battle thing going on rii hurr King You came very short and very basic i think you need to reconsider what you do or How you do it bcuz that verse jus wasnt kickin to me I think you are jus tryin to Make it ryme instead of makin it have a good effect on your oppenent and if you cant do both then i think you need to reconsider your career Ghand Well mayn you Did very well Infatc i dont see why you wasted such a good verse on such an easy battle ?....... N e ways i feel all and/or most of your punchez connected with ease and flourishness........ RTF In the link in my sig PLEASE IM BEGGING YOU |
Voted For: Mahatma Ghand
holy shit........ mahatma ghand had this shit.. his verse owns... vocab=8/10 structure=7/10 punches=10/10 good battle next time be better.. |
uppin........................................come on mutha fuckaz vote
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This was feedback posted for Mahatma Ghand
chekcing in to see how the voting is going so far.
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Voted For: Mahatma Ghand
easy battle............ mahs punches wer funny and actually hit, structure was ok, overall good flow....The personals won him this battle. king your punches didnt realy make sense so didnt hit, i suggest you hit up a tutorial.. no hate rtf in sig. |
aight what eva. i read yo battles and they wasn't that damn hot either. fuck a tutorial. since u so good why don't you school me. oops u probably aint got time since you on mahs dick. uppin........................vote mutha fuckaz. and think about yo vote. o yea my punches did make sense. u niggas just not advanced.
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Voted For: Mahatma Ghand
Diz Wuz An EZ Battle 2 Judge On, Mahatma Ghand Came Strong An Itz Evidental In Da Verses, Just Look At Dem An You'll C I Dont Need 2 Explain Why He Won, But HE HAD PUNCHEZ, HE HAD PERSONALZ AN HIS SHIT RHYMED, So He Gets Mah Vote. Pleaze Return Da Vote In My Signature |
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