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Stanza vs Mahatma Ghand
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10-lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 60 minutes after check in to drop G-luck :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 04-13-05 at 11:37 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. |
Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-13-05 11:08 PM.
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Mahatma Ghand has ACCEPTED this battle on 04-13-05 11:09 PM.
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Ayo
Ghand think cuz he MaddCow his flow is sick I seen betta combo'z & controls comin from my PS2 joystick Watch This Old Time Preacher Get Murked with Soul he's The Only kid In Pre-K tryna get the Triangle in the Hole This Guy Thought he was a DJ bcuz he wasDick Jumping Well We Know Now what You Would Do for a Klondike bar Only Three bars Completed And U Already Starting To Sweat Ghand get to far in Debt Now Its His Life he wants to bet? Wait Lemme stop B4 I have to Drop and roll This wack Punk Bcuz this nigga can Do 5 bars[b]-& I Still cant Get [b]drunk[b/] [b]~Finsher~
Well I was gonan stop at five but damn This merkin Shit is fun Lemme know when U Want me to Stop The bullets in da Gun ..:: Stanza ::.. *cough* Merked*cough* |
Damn I Think i did Pretty Well condiering That I was under pressure .......
Uppin !!!!!!!!! Damn I Think i did Pretty Well condiering That I was under pressure ....... Uppin !!!!!!!!! |
Man your punches ain't effecting me, there too light weight* My hot punches will literally take ove your flow'z having you dehydrate This kat really think he's hot?, kid posted "suicide", he should've done it to himself* No one post an reply in 2 months, should've put them whack rhymes on the bookshelf Man how you got in the dopest crew around? And you havent established sikness?* Look at this kid sig, He busting caps, but i'm standing wondering where the bullets went.* You no where near elevation, cause kid you more weaker than them abortion kids ................If you and me had the same culture, still you wouldnt win this race bitch like in your sig. This is far from over, your hotness is fading like a sunset* You should never gamble with me, cause you just lost your Win like roulette *Custom title says "light weight" * Made an om called suicide, never been replied in 2 months http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=183148 * He's in the crew with the establishment * His sig that's saying "the force" He got a man with a gun, but the bullets ain't showing *Another sig with "The establishment" it has a sunset in the background. |
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Nice drop mayne Ill be back on Tomorow to see what happens UPIIN |
This was feedback posted for Mahatma Ghand
damn amn you gettin better at punchlines, i love this shit your flow is getting better your stucture is getting better and you just got that creativty each damn line. word. ya gettin dope as fuck man beyond my skill. fuckin basketball gets in the way of my raps, but i lvoe basketball
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Voted For: Mahatma Ghand
Weak Battle: Mahatma Ghand- Whack Ass Name By The Way..No Hate..Lol..But your verse was straight man..nice flow, i enjoyed reading it and your structure was consistent...i saw that u had a nice personal in there and flipped it into a punch..that was a good one..you still have to work on your wordplay and punches..i thought your punches were weak..your closer was weak man..no punch there wats-so-ever.. Stanza- good verse man..really enjoyed reading this piece as well..punches were stronger than MG's but your personals were blah..no hate..that preacher line was not that good man..your closer was also weak man..intro was aite..and the debt line was aite..flow was a little choppy at times..good structure though.. vote- Mahatma Ghand..i liked his personal..to me personals won it..everything else was kind of a tie to me..other than dat it came down to personals..and stanza your personal attempt was failed..MG your personal was weak but still hit.. |
Uppin for some REAL votes LOL .............................
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This was feedback posted for Mahatma Ghand
nice drop man......................................
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haha we tied up ............ This is gonna be a close battle I can tell
Nice drop mayne |
Voted For: Stanza
Mahatma Ghand: Man your punches ain't effecting me, there too light weight* My hot punches will literally take ove your flow'z having you dehydrate ^ weak...4/10 This kat really think he's hot?, kid posted "suicide", he should've done it to himself* No one post an reply in 2 months, should've put them whack rhymes on the bookshelf ^No...3/10 Man how you got in the dopest crew around? And you havent established sikness?* Look at this kid sig, He busting caps, but i'm standing wondering where the bullets went.* ^ Sickness and went don't rhyme dumbass...2/10 You no where near elevation, cause kid you more weaker than them abortion kids ................If you and me had the same culture, still you wouldnt win this race bitch ^ Weak set-up and weak punch...4/10 like in your sig. This is far from over, your hotness is fading like a sunset* You should never gamble with me, cause you just lost your Win like roulette ^Nope...not workin...4/10 Overall, 17/50...terrible verse man...punches were garbage, personals suck...you really need elevation bad... Stanza: Ghand think cuz he MaddCow his flow is sick I seen betta combo'z & controls comin from my PS2 joystick ^Decent opener, coulda been better...6/10 Watch This Old Time Preacher Get Murked with Soul he's The Only kid In Pre-K tryna get the Triangle in the Hole ^Hmm...decent punch I guess...kinda played...5/10 This Guy Thought he was a DJ bcuz he wasDick Jumping Well We Know Now what You Would Do for a Klondike bar ^LMAO...funny shit, but didn't rhyme...6/10 because I laughed Only Three bars Completed And U Already Starting To Sweat Ghand get to far in Debt Now Its His Life he wants to bet? ^Nope...weak...4/10 Wait Lemme stop B4 I have to Drop and roll This wack Punk Bcuz this nigga can Do 5 bars[b]-& I Still cant Get [b]drunk[b/] ^Best line of your verse...nice closer...7/10 28/50 Both verses could use work, but Stanza came harder in his verse than that other kid...v/ stanza |
Thanx for Voting
and droppin some suggestion on how i could elevate Thanx Uppin |
Uppin for some REAL votes LOL .............................
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Voted For: Stanza
Stanza Ghand think cuz he MaddCow his flow is sick I seen betta combo'z & controls comin from my PS2 joystick Eh....not really feeling it.. Watch This Old Time Preacher Get Murked with Soul he's The Only kid In Pre-K tryna get the Triangle in the Hole Ha, decent punch... This Guy Thought he was a DJ bcuz he wasDick Jumping Well We Know Now what You Would Do for a Klondike bar Only time intentional misrhyming is OK is if there's a massive punch getting set up on the second line...not this one.. Only Three bars Completed And U Already Starting To Sweat Ghand get to far in Debt Now Its His Life he wants to bet? Alright... Wait Lemme stop B4 I have to Drop and roll This wack Punk Bcuz this nigga can Do 5 bars[b]-& I Still cant Get [b]drunk[b/] Alright, this was a pre-defensive punchback... Well I was gonan stop at five but damn This merkin Shit is fun Lemme know when U Want me to Stop The bullets in da Gun Good finish... Ghand Man your punches ain't effecting me, there too light weight* My hot punches will literally take ove your flow'z having you dehydrate Played, but OK rhyme... This kat really think he's hot?, kid posted "suicide", he should've done it to himself* No one post an reply in 2 months, should've put them whack rhymes on the bookshelf OK personal.. Man how you got in the dopest crew around? And you havent established sikness?* Look at this kid sig, He busting caps, but i'm standing wondering where the bullets went.* Good.. You no where near elevation, cause kid you more weaker than them abortion kids ................If you and me had the same culture, still you wouldnt win this race bitch Filler was awful, punch was forced.. like in your sig. This is far from over, your hotness is fading like a sunset* You should never gamble with me, cause you just lost your Win like roulette Terrible closer...played as fuck.. Stanza- You kind of alternated with lines that were hot and lines that were stale, but you had a solid enough finish and more consistency. You didn't really murk Ghand, but you did take this one. Ghand- Some good personals...lines 4-8 were alright, but I really wasn't feeling the rest of your verses. Just my opinion. Personals were working fine for you, you should have strictly stuck with those, but work on the closer... |
Voted For: Stanza
nice battle winner- stanza Ghand think cuz he MaddCow his flow is sick I seen betta combo'z & controls comin from my PS2 joystick nice wordplay, Watch This Old Time Preacher Get Murked with Soul he's The Only kid In Pre-K tryna get the Triangle in the Hole lol funny, good shit This Guy Thought he was a DJ bcuz he wasDick Jumping Well We Know Now what You Would Do for a Klondike bar lol strong punch Only Three bars Completed And U Already Starting To Sweat Ghand get to far in Debt Now Its His Life he wants to bet? decent punch, wasnt to strong, no multies Wait Lemme stop B4 I have to Drop and roll This wack Punk Bcuz this nigga can Do 5 bars[b]-& I Still cant Get [b]drunk[b/] [b]~Finsher~ Well I was gonan stop at five but damn This merkin Shit is fun Lemme know when U Want me to Stop The bullets in da Gun finisher was ok, not great Man your punches ain't effecting me, there too light weight* My hot punches will literally take ove your flow'z having you dehydrate ur not dissin him, ur making urself look good This kat really think he's hot?, kid posted "suicide", he should've done it to himself* No one post an reply in 2 months, should've put them whack rhymes on the bookshelf this is a good punch Man how you got in the dopest crew around? And you havent established sikness?* Look at this kid sig, He busting caps, but i'm standing wondering where the bullets went. why u gon bring up that he in da best crew? dat is a compliment You no where near elevation, cause kid you more weaker than them abortion kids ................If you and me had the same culture, still you wouldnt win this race bitch decent punch like in your sig. This is far from over, your hotness is fading like a sunset* You should never gamble with me, cause you just lost your Win like roulette finisher was aight, could have been stronger |
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Voted For: Stanza
Stanza- Your verse was pretty good....your punches were good also...some were a little weak ...but mostly good...your structure could be a little bit better n all....had some aight personals...but overall- 7.9/10..... Mahatma Ghand- Your verse was good too overall, but your punches were weak at some spots...flow was off too at times...your structure was good...had some nice personals...but punches are pretty much what wins...and yours were just either weak or played....overall- 6.1/10.... |
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